高考英语写作分类训练：图表作文

图表作文

1．假定你是李华，学校英文报以“Voluntary Work Really Counts”为主题于上周末在学校展开了一次问卷调查。请你根据下列饼状图的调查结果用英文写一份报告投稿，内容包括：

1．调查的目的；

2．调查的结果；

3．你的看法。

注意：

1．写作词数应为80左右；

2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Voluntary Work Really Counts

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2．假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Mike给你发了一封邮件，表达了他对中国端午节的浓厚兴趣。请根据下面的信息，写一封邮件，向他介绍端午节的有关情况。

注意：1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mike,

I’m happy you would like to learn about the Dragon Boat Festival as it is one of my favorite festivals.

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Best wishes.

Yours

Li Hua

3．学校英语广播站正在开展以“About Using Mobile Phones”为题的征稿。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1.手机使用状况描述；

2.简单评论；

3.你的建议。

注意：1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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4．假定你是李华，你所在班级举行了How to Develop Good Habits英语主题班会， 班会前进行了不良习惯的调查，结果如下图。班会中针对这些情况进行了讨论并提出了建议。请根据以下提示向英语校报投稿介绍本次英语主题班会。

不良习惯调查结果

1.班会的目的;

2.不良习惯调查结果;

3.建议。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右;

2.首句已为你写好。

Dear Editor,

Recently, our class has conducted a class-meeting on how to develop good habits.

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5．你校英文报正在针对高中生开展以After-school Activities为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1.状况描述;

2.简单评论;

3.你的建议。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右;

2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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6．最近你校对学生的书写情况进行了一项问卷调查，调查结果显示，有85％的学生认为自己的字迹不好看，并且没有改善的打算，理由如下图，请就此写一篇英文短文向你校英文报投稿。

内容包括：

1．描述数据；

2．你的看法。

注意：1．词数100左右;2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

中学生不改善书写的原因

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7．学校英文报正在进行以“Senior High Students’ Consumption”为主题的高中生零用钱使用情况调查。请结合图表中的调查结果写一篇英文短文投稿，内容包括：

1．零用钱的使用; 2．简单评论; 3．你的建议。

Senior High Students’ Consumption

注意：

1．词数100左右;

2．可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

Senior High Students’ Consumption

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8．最近。你班进行了一个参与家务劳动的调查，请你根据调查结果在你的博客上用英语写一篇博文。

要点包括：1.调查结果，2. 你的感受。

注意：1.词数80左右，2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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9．学校英文报正在开展以“Popular Books Among Students”为题的讨论。请依据图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1.读书状况描述；

2.简单评论；

3.你的建议。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Popular Books Among Students

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10．你校英文报纸正在开展“Why High School Students Don’t Like Uniform?”为题的讨论。请使用表格中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，介绍校服不受欢迎的原因和你个人的看法或建议。

注意：1.词数100字左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Why High School Students Don’t Like Uniform?

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参考答案：

1．                                              Voluntary Work Really Counts

      Last weekend our school carried out a questionnaire survey. Its purpose is to know whether students often do volunteer work and what kind of volunteer work they prefer.

The results show that only 16 percent of students do volunteer work regularly. Among all kinds of volunteer work, community welfare work is the most popular, accounting for 47 percent. Fundraising accounts for 32 percent. Tutoring and training accounts for 11 percent. Environmental work accounts for 10 percent, which is the least popular.

In my opinion, all volunteer work should be developed in a balanced way. Schools should guide students in the choice of volunteer work.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生根据学校开展的一次问卷调查的调查结果用英文写一份报告投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

调查：survey→investigation

目的：purpose→aim

结果： result→consequence

在我看来：in my opinion→as far as I am concerned

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Among all kinds of volunteer work, community welfare work is the most popular, accounting for 47 percent.

拓展句：Among all kinds of volunteer work, community welfare work is the most popular, which accounts for 47 percent.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Its purpose is to know whether students often do volunteer work and what kind of volunteer work they prefer.(运用了whether引导的宾语从句和what引导的的宾语从句)

【高分句型2】Environmental work accounts for 10 percent, which is the least popular.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

2．Dear Mike,

I’m happy you would like to learn about the Dragon Boat Festival as it is one of my favorite festivals.

The festival is an important cultural event and national public holiday which takes place on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month. The festival originates from the tragic story of the famous poet Qu Yuan, who drowned himself in the Miluo River. The people raced in their boats to try and save him but failed. In honour of him, they dropped rice balls, known as zongzi, into the river to feed the fish so that they would not devour his body.

During the festival, dragon boat races are held across China to symbolize the boat race of the people who tried to rescue Qu Yuan. People also eat zongzi to remember Qu Yuan and the sacrifice he made. The holiday is a great time for family reunions and enjoying the festivities.

I hope this has given you a better understanding of the fascinating history and traditions of the Dragon Boat Festival.

Best wishes.

Yours

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Mike给你发了一封邮件，表达了他对中国端午节的浓厚兴趣。请根据下面的信息，写一封邮件，向他介绍端午节的有关情况。

【详解】1.词汇积累

被称为：be known as→be referred to as

纪念：in honour of→in memory of

高兴的：happy→pleased

重要的：important→vital

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：In honour of him, they dropped rice balls, known as zongzi, into the river to feed the fish so that they would not devour his body.

拓展句：In honour of him, they dropped rice balls, ,which are known as zongzi, into the river to feed the fish so that they would not devour his body.

【点睛】[高分句型1] The festival is an important cultural event and national public holiday which takes place on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month. (运用了which引导定语从句)

[高分句型2] In honour of him, they dropped rice balls, known as zongzi, into the river to feed the fish so that they would not devour his body. (运用了目的状语从句)

3．范文

About Using Mobile Phones

With the society developing rapidly, more and more students have their own phone. All that they can do with it is far beyond making a call.

As the survey chart shows, 65% of the students often choose to chat via a phone, 55% enjoy checking the social media, and 48% choose to play games on the phone. However, the students learning by checking phones account for only 26%.

When it comes to smartphones, some people believe that they provide great convenience for our lives. On the contrary, others argue they get people addicted to them. I think the students should spend more time in learning by checking phones, by which we can gain more knowledge.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。学校英语广播站正在开展以“About Using Mobile Phones”为题的征稿。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿

【详解】1.词汇积累

快速：rapidly→quickly

拥有：have→possess

获得：gain→obtain

提供：provide→offer

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：However, the students learning by checking phones account for only 26%.

拓展句：However, it is only 26% that the students learning by checking phones account for.

【点睛】[高分句型1] With the society developing rapidly, more and more students have their own phone. (运用了with的复合结构)

[高分句型2] I think the students should spend more time in learning by checking phones, by which we can gain more knowledge. (运用了“介词+关系代词”结构非限制性定语从句)

4．One possible version:

Dear Editor,

Recently, our class has conducted a class meeting on how to develop good habits. As is shown in the chart, the bad habits among students include staying up late (65%), computer game addiction (45%), lacking physical exercise (28%) and unhealthy eating (12%).

To deal with the above problems, we had better turn off our phones before bed. Besides, it makes sense to take regular exercise. Finally, having a balanced diet is beneficial to our health.

Hope the class meeting will be of benefit to you all.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。假定你是李华，你所在班级举行了How to Develop Good Habits英语主题班会， 班会前进行了不良习惯的调查，结果如下图。班会中针对这些情况进行了讨论并提出了建议。请根据以下提示向英语校报投稿介绍本次英语主题班会。

【详解】1.词汇积累

关闭：turn off→switch off

处理：deal with→cope with

此外：besides→in addition

有益的：beneficial→rewarding

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Recently, our class has conducted a class meeting on how to develop good habits.

拓展句：Recently, our class has conducted a class meeting, whose theme is how to develop good habits.

【点睛】[高分句型1] As is shown in the chart, the bad habits among students include staying up late (65%), computer game addiction (45%), lacking physical exercise (28%) and unhealthy eating (12%). (运用了as引导非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Finally, having a balanced diet is beneficial to our health. (运用了动名词作主语)

5．    A recent survey regarding After-school Activities was conducted in our school.

    As can be seen from the pie chart, the majority of the students surveyed, about 56%, tended to do homework after school. By contrast, playing computer games, doing sports and reading books proved to be less popular, accounting for 22%, 13% and 9% respectively.

    In my view, the trend mentioned above is basically due to the mounting pressure. To help students get fully developed, it’s sensible to balance study and relaxation---workout and book-reading should be given priority while less time should be spent on screens. Plus, more diverse extracurricular activities should be provided to cater to different interests and talents.

【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生针对图表中的反映的“After-school Activities”的调查结果写一篇短文投稿。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

关于：regarding → related to

实施：conduct → carry out

在我看来：in my view → from my point of view

压力：pressure → stress

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：A recent survey regarding After-school Activities was conducted in our school.

拓展句：A recent survey which is in regard to After-school Activities was conducted in our school.

【点睛】【高分句型1】

By contrast, playing computer games, doing sports and reading books proved to be less popular, accounting for 22%, 13% and 9% respectively.（运用了动名词作主语）

【高分句型2】

 In my view, the trend mentioned above is basically due to the mounting pressure. （运用了过去分词作后置定语）

6．One possible version:

Time has witnessed great changes in my hometown, which makes me exactly proud.

In the past, there were very few tall buildings and cars in the streets. However, not only are new facilities such as shopping malls, restaurants and places of entertainment springing up everywhere now, but more people are living and working in peace and contentment. With the improvement of basic education as well as the government’s strong guarantee for economic development, people are better educated and build their careers. As a consequence, the opportunities for young people to develop their talents and contribute to society have also increased rapidly.

In brief, I firmly believe that under the leadership of the socialist modernization of our motherland, my hometown will move towards a better future.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。最近你校对学生的书写情况进行了一项问卷调查，调查结果显示，有85％的学生认为自己的字迹不好看，并且没有改善的打算，理由如下图，请就此写一篇英文短文向你校英文报投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

快速：rapidly→quickly

满足：contentment→satisfaction

因此：as a consequence→as a result

总之：in brief→in short

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：With the improvement of basic education as well as the government’s strong guarantee for economic development, people are better educated and build their careers.

拓展句：As the basic education as well as the government’s guarantee for economic development are improved, people are better educated and build their careers.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Time has witnessed great changes in my hometown, which makes me exactly proud. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] In brief, I firmly believe that under the leadership of the socialist modernization of our motherland, my hometown will move towards a better future. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

7．One possible version:

Senior High Students’ Consumption

As can be seen in the chart, students’ consumption is largely based on their own likes and interests. They spend more on food, clothes, and entertainment, while they spend relatively little on books.

The vast majority of students spend a half of their pocket money on food, most of which is junk food; 30% on clothes and shoes, especially of famous brands; 15% on entertainment, such as watching films or buying sports goods; but only 5% on books and learning materials.

It’s apparent that many senior high students haven’t yet formed a correct concept of consumption. Firstly, we should make a consumption plan and spend more on the things useful for us. Besides, we should still keep the traditional Chinese virtue of saving and develop good consumption habits.

【导语】该书面表达属于图表作文。要求针对高中生零用钱使用的调查情况提出自己的看法和建议，并写篇短文投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

主要地：largely→chiefly

娱乐：entertainment→amusement

有用的：useful→valuable

此外：besides → what’s more

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：We should still keep the traditional Chinese virtue of saving and develop good consumption habits.

拓展句：There is no doubt that we should still keep the traditional Chinese virtue of saving and develop good consumption habits.

【点睛】【高分句型1】The vast majority of students spend a half of their pocket money on food, most of which is junk food（运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】It’s apparent that many senior high students haven’t yet formed a correct concept of consumption.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导的主语从句）

8．Recently, a survey, which is about students’ housework engagement, has been carried out in my class.

According to the survey, a large proportion of the students (70%) do the housework, among whom 5% work over an hour per week and 65% for less than an hour. Much to my surprise, 30% of them never share housework with their parents.

Some students think doing housework waste their time, which otherwise can be engaged in studying. As far as I’m concerned, however, it’s really necessary to raise students’ labor consciousness and involve them in housework. After all, helping with the housework, they can develop a sense of responsibility and gain important life skills.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生根据调查结果用英语写一篇博文。

【详解】1.词汇积累

开展，进行：carried out →conducted

从事，致力于：be engaged in →be devoted to

就我而言：As far as I’m concerned →For my part

提升：raise→ improve

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：After all, helping with the housework, they can develop a sense of responsibility and gain important life skills.

拓展句：After all, if they can help with the housework, they can develop a sense of responsibility and gain important life skills.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently, a survey, which is about students’ housework engagement, has been carried out in my class.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】After all, helping with the housework, they can develop a sense of responsibility and gain important life skills.（运用了现在分词helping充当条件状语）

9．Popular Books Among Students

As can be seen from the chart, diverse sorts of books hold different proportions. Science, accounting for 43% enjoys the greatest popularity among students, while the classics, ranking the fourth place, wins the hearts of 13% students. The proportions of comics and Sports & Music occupy 26% and 18% respectively.

The phenomenon above may result from the following factors. First of all, not only does Science have tight bonds with Physics and Biology, but it also is equipped with adequate imagination, inspiring our passionate desire to explore the world. Additionally, interesting illustrations are added to the comics, which provides a fabulous feast for eyes.

Personally, I suggest students should read more classics, which accumulates the wisdom and spirits from ancestors, thus having a deeper insight into the pearl of literature.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文是一篇图表作文。要求考生写一篇投稿短文，根据最受学生欢迎的书的调查结果饼图，进行调查状况描述，做出简单评论以及提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

不同的：diverse → different

占：occupy → account for

此外：Additionally → Moreover

依我之见：Personally→ In my opinion

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：The phenomenon above may result from the following factors.

拓展句：The phenomenon which is mentioned above may result from the following factors.

【点睛】【高分句型1】As can be seen from the chart, diverse sorts of books hold different proportions.（运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Personally, I suggest students should read more classics, which accumulates the wisdom and spirits from ancestors, thus having a deeper insight into the pearl of literature.（运用了宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

10．One possible version:

Why High School Students Don’t Like Uniforms?

Although the regulation that middle school students shall wear school uniforms is of great benefit to students, many students do not like school uniforms for various reasons.

Most of the students, about 60%, think the styles of the school uniform are out of fashion, while 20% of the students think uniforms are priced too high, increasing the financial burden on their families, and in addition, about 10% of the students think the material of the uniform is of poor quality and will not last long.

To sum up, I think the material, design and production of school uniforms should keep pace with the times, and the designers should actively introduce fashion elements to make school uniforms beautiful and practical, keeping in line with the characters of the youths. Of course, school uniforms should be priced affordably.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生就校英文报纸正在开展的 Why High School Students Don’t Like Uniform?为题的讨论，根据表格内容写一篇短文投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

有好处：be of great benefit→be very beneficial

各种的：various → diverse

此外：in addition → what’s more/besides

总之：to sum up→in short

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Of course, school uniforms should be priced affordably.

拓展句：Of course, school uniforms should be priced affordably, which will not increasing the financial burden on parents.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Although the regulation that middle school students shall wear school uniforms is of great benefit to students, many students do not like school uniforms for various reasons.（运用了although引导的状语从句以及that引导的同位语从句）

【高分句型2】To sum up, I think the material, design and production of school uniforms should keep pace with the times, and the designers should actively introduce fashion elements to make school uniforms beautiful and practical, keeping in line with the characters of the youths.（运用了动词不定式作定语以及非谓语动词作状语）