技巧10 如何使用语气-高一英语读后续写基础技巧与整体演练

高一英语读后续写基础技巧与整体演练

技巧10 如何使用语气

类具有现实思维和虚拟思维的认知能力，这些认知能力通过语言表达式反映出来，而时和体是反映思维的语言形式之一。换言之，时和体的多义性是表达现实思维和虚拟思维的需要，而思维在现实和虚拟之间的转换又是凸显不同主观性的需要。例如，叙事作品中用现在时描述假想的、虚幻的事件，思维发生在想象的空间，与思维时间发生分离，动词失去时态功能，即任何读者在任意时间阅读，阅读时间和作品中的事件时间没有任何关系。这里现在时的虚拟性优势在于，可以使任何读者在任意时间阅读时都可以产生“身临其境”的效果。

虚拟语气是英语中常用的表达方式，以其表达的委婉性和语用功能的丰富性在交际活动中发挥了非常重要的作用。恰当地使用它，可以起到较好的修辞效果。无论语法著作还是英语教学都应将其语用功能放在重要的位置，英语学习者在学习时也必须重视其语用功能的学习和掌握。现代社会人们追求自我，越来越重视个人隐私和权利，也会尊重别人的隐私和权利。虚拟语气是通过语法手段来表达出对别人的尊敬或尽量使自己的语气委婉、客气的效果。人们使用虚拟语气，多数情况是因为表达者的语用目的，而不是简单表达一个相反的事实。说话者一般都是借助这个“虚拟情况”委婉表达一个言外之意，达到一个特定的交流目的，在很大程度上避免出现尴尬处境。例如：

If I had enough money, I would help you. (如果我有足够的钱，我就会帮助你。)

这句话的真正含义是 I will not help you. 通过使用 If 条件句，help的行为便成了一种假设的虚拟行为。听话者从该条件可以自己推断出这样的结论：我可能不帮你。说话者采取的这种积极态度，尽管隐含了一种拒绝帮助的意义，但听话者在心理上更容易接受。由此我们可以看出，虚拟语气能够表达其他任何语气所无法取代的丰富的感情色彩。在英语教学中，教师不能只给学生讲解和罗列哪些句型需要使用虚拟语气，而应该结合不同的语法表达形式分析其语用特点。特别是在阅读与写作中，英语学习者在学习过程中除了要很好地理解和掌握他的语法形式以外，更要了解它丰富灵活的语用功能。只有这样，才能体会虚拟语气所隐含的感情，也才能使用虚拟语气表达自己丰富多彩的内心世界。

虚拟语气的形式多种多样，在写作特别是读后续写所提供的语境中，虚拟语气能够表达其他任何语气所无法取代的丰富的感情色彩，学生可以根据人物不同的心理需求，在不同的语境中恰当地运用虚拟语气可以更好地表达出不同的感情色彩，发挥其缩小心理文化差异的语用功能。心理文化差异的大小直接决定交流双方对语言的理解意愿和交流方式，学习虚拟语气不仅要掌握其基本的语法形式，还要理解其强大的语用功能。因此，在读后续写学习中，学生要注意分析、体会虚拟语气所隐含的情感内容，才能巧妙地运用虚拟语气表达故事中人物丰富多彩的内心世界，从而能够较好地缩小交际双方的心理文化差异，推动作者、语篇与学生等互动交际活动得以有效开展。

在读后续写的心理描写中，恰当运用虚拟语气，可以委婉地表达主人公的某种情感，使人物形象更生动，增强文章 的可读性 。

（一）“if sb..., sb... ”表达纠结的心情

例如：2021 河北张家口第一次质检题

If I shouldn’t go back on time, the king would kill my friend. If I hadn’t fallen from the horse and got hurt, I would have got to the destination on time. 要是我不准时回去，国王会杀了我的朋 友 。如果我没有从马上摔下来并受了伤，我也早就按时到达 目 的地了 。

【分析】主人公向国王承诺准时回去，若违背诺言，国 王 会杀死主人公的朋友 。但因为主人公从马上摔下来，受伤了，这一路就耽搁了时间。这时就需要虚拟语气来做出非真实的 假设了，表达了主人公矛盾的情感纠结。以上两个虚拟条件句，前者表示与将来情况相反的假设，后者表示与过去情况相反的假设 。

（二）“ Without/But for...”表示感激之情

例如：2021 广州七校联考题

Without /But for mom’s encouragement, I wouldn’t have be- come a successful narrator in the competition. 如果没有妈妈的鼓励，在比赛中我不可能成为一个成功的讲解员 。

  【分析】经过学校的故事大赛，我意识到什么角色都有其优点和重要性。后来，我一直继续做好讲解员的角色，层层突破，在地区小有名气。这时用虚拟语气来表达对妈妈的感 激之情 。

（三）“ If only...”表示强列的愿望

例如：2021 届浙江慈溪中学模拟题

If only I had been the 3rd runner who had got to the finish line.要是我是第3位到达终点线的跑步者该多好啊！

  【分析】我摔倒后继续往前跑，到达终点线，发现自己与第三名擦肩而过，不能获得我心仪的奖品。这时用虚拟语气 来表达与过去事实相反的情况，强调愿望 。

（四）固定句型表示后悔或遗憾

1. 可用 How sb wished that ... had (not) done sth

例如：2021 山东泰安期中试题

How Timmy wished that he hadn’t been so rude to his coach. Timmy 多么希望之前没有那么粗鲁的对待教练啊！

  【分析】Timmy 一直是球队的主力，不愿把球传给别人。 他不仅不听教练的劝导，而且由于态度恶劣， 被取消参加区里比赛的资格。他同妈妈交流后，意识到以前自己的错误。 这时就需要虚拟语气来表达他后悔的情感 。

2. 可用 sb.+谓语, wishing that...

例如：2021 广州七校联考题

I was rooted on the ground due to being frightened, wishing that I had refused my mother’s advice yesterday. 我由于恐惧愣在那里，真希望我昨天拒绝妈妈的建议 。

  【分析】我一直不接受 自 己做故事的讲解员这个角色，但在妈妈的劝导下，我还是参加了学校的故事大赛。中途出现了情感的纠结，后悔参加了比赛。这时需要用虚拟语气来表 达后悔。

（五）“as if...”表达形象生动

例如： 2020 年浙江模拟题

The glasses dropped into the river, as if the water had swallowed them. 眼镜掉到河里，好像水已经吞噬了它 。

  【分析】主人公兄弟俩跟爸爸在深林里的一条河边走着，突然爸爸摔了一跤，眼镜掉到河里，兄弟俩赶紧去找， 但由于河水汹涌，找不到 。这时就需要用虚拟语气来描述河中水流的凶猛 。此句型也是比喻的写作手法 。

1．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

It was a dark night in Texas when Luke Armstrong drove into town. He had a lot of things on his mind, and he was driving slowly, thinking of solutions to his problems. He had a sick daughter named Anne, and he was worried she would give in to her illness before he could gather enough money to pay for the surgery (外科手术).

Suddenly, he noticed a flashy sports car parked by the side of the road. It looked like it had a broken tire, but Luke couldn’t be too sure. He passed it without giving it a second thought and continued down the road.

He was so lost in thought that he almost missed the prone (俯卧的) figure of a human lying just by the side of the road. “What is it?” he said to himself and his truck stopped beside the figure.

It was a woman, and she was weak. Luke immediately knew he had to help her as soon as possible. He noticed her expensive outfit as he lifted her. “Perhaps she owns the fancy car I saw a few minutes ago,” Luke said to himself as he moved her to his truck and turned on the heater.

He noticed that she seemed to be having trouble breathing, so he called 911 and reported his exact location as well as the predicament (困境) he found the woman in.

Soon the ambulance came, and the woman was carried away.

After checking on his daughter the next day, Luke decided to see how the woman he rescued was feeling. He had been told she was getting treated in the same hospital. It turned out that she was no longer in danger. She was very grateful for his kindness. After learning about his daughter, she expressed great sympathy (同情).

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

A week passed with Luke trying his best to work something out for his child.

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Who might be kind enough to pay for the surgery?

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2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

It was the 9th of January, a day I will remember for a long time. It was a normal Sunday morning around 8:30 am, right on time for Sammy’s morning walk. I didn’t walk because of my lameness, so I rode in my power wheelchair. We got out the door and made our way toward a property near my apartment complex. We got to the gate and out of the complex, and we went left onto the extra wide sidewalk. It was about a mile’s walk one way , passing a firehouse on the right side of the road, before we turned around and started back.

Along the path we took was a large plate over the sidewalk. I passed over it the first time without any problems. My wheelchair could reach up to 8 miles per hour, but we went a little slower on our walks, around 2 miles per hour,  so Sammy could keep up. Even so, this speed was pretty fast for a 15-year-old dog.

As we turned around and made our way back, I went over the sidewalk plate again except that this time it was moved without me realizing it, putting my wheelchair in the grass on the embankment (路堤). The next thing I knew, my wheelchair started to tip over, throwing me out of the chair and rolling down the embankment into the muddy water below.

My right leg was hurt, and I was unable to pull myself upright. I was too weak to gather my strength to call for help. The muddy water was cold and I felt it hard to breathe with my body folded and twisted in a strange position. Meanwhile, Sammy was sitting up on the sidewalk with his leash (牵狗皮带) caught under the tipped over wheelchair. I heard him barking louder than ever heard. He knew I was hurt and was in danger.

By the way my wheelchair tipped over, a passerby on the street would not be able to see it from the road. All anyone could see was a dog barking on the sidewalk almost night across the street from the firehouse.

注意：1．续写词数应为150左右;

2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

I could tell Sammy was trying to help me.

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Three firemen came to my dog’s aid finally.

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3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

As we pulled out of the garage, my mind went blank when I saw the gun pointing against the car window. This can’t be happening to me. Then I felt the gun, cold, against my head, and I heard my friend Jeremy saying, “What do you want? Take my wallet.” but at the time I thought of nothing.

I remember being a little annoyed when the gunman pulled me from the car by the hair. I remember the walk to the house --- Jeremy, me, the two men with two guns. I remember the fear and anger in the gunmen’s voices because Jeremy was being slow, and I remember wondering why he was being slow. I did not realize that Jeremy had thrown the keys into the bush. But I remember that sound of the gun hitting Jeremy’s head and the feeling as the man who had hold of my hair released me. And I remember the split second when I realized he was looking at Jeremy, and I remember wondering how far I could run before he pulled the trigger. But I was already running, and upon reaching the car across the street, I didn’t crouch(蹲伏) behind it but screamed instead.

I remember thinking there was something ridiculous and illogical about screaming “Help! Help!” at eight o’clock on a Tuesday evening in December and changing my plea(恳求) to the more specific “Help! Let me in. Please let me in!” But the houses were cold, closed, unfriendly, and I ran on until I heard Jeremy’s screams behind me announcing that our attackers had run away.

The neighbors who had not opened their doors to us came out with baseball bats and helped Jeremy find his glasses and keys. In a group they were very brave. We waited for the police to come until someone said to someone else that the noodles were getting cold, and I said politely, “Please go and eat. We’re OK.”

I was happy to see them go. They had been talking of stricter sentences for criminals, of bringing back the death penalty(处罚) and how the President is going to clean up the country. I was thinking they could be saying all of this over my dead body, and I still feel that stiffer sentences wouldn’t change a thing. In a rush all the anger I should have felt for my attackers was directed against these contented people standing in front of their warm, comfortable homes talking about all the guns they were going to buy. What good would guns have been to Jeremy and me?

People all over the neighborhood had called to report our screams, and the police turned out in force twenty minutes later. They were ill-tempered about what was, to them, much trouble about nothing. After all, Jeremy was hardly hurt, and we were hopeless when it came to describing the gunmen. “Typical,” said one policeman when we couldn’t even agree on how tall the men were. Both of us were able to describe the guns in horrifying detail, but the two policemen who stayed to make the report didn’t think that would be of much help.

The policemen were matter-of-fact about the whole thing. The thin one said, “That was a stupid thing to do, throwing away the keys. When a man has a gun against your head, you do what you’re told.” Jeremy looked properly embarrassed.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Then the fat policeman came up and the thin one went to look around the outside of the house.

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All that sleepless night I replayed the moment those black gloves came up to the car window.

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4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

As I walked along the sidewalk in front of Surplus Unlimited, a car that was about to change my life had just turned onto Route 82 from the CVS parking lot. I looked up and noticed the elderly couple in the car heading toward me. As the car rolled past, the driver suddenly collapsed against the steering wheel (方向盘) right in front of my eyes. His wife stared blankly out of the passenger side window. She was unaware that her car was now rolling—without a conscious driver—down the center of a busy road.

I began to jog alongside the moving car. My mind assessed the situation. Somebody needed to stop that car!

I reached forward, but there was nothing to grab. I pounded on her window. She looked confused. “Roll down the window!” I yelled, gesturing wildly. With the window down, I was able to grab the doorframe. I pulled hard against the force of the moving vehicle. On the far side of the car, the traffic streamed by in the opposite direction. Cars passed one after another. Nobody slowed down. Nobody seemed to notice.

Thankfully, the driver’s foot must have slipped off the gas pedal (踏板) when he lost consciousness. I kept pulling, and the car began to slow.

Just then, a woman appeared from behind me. She ran alongside the driver side door. She opened the door and as the car was slowing, she managed to shift it out of “Drive”. A joyful “We did it!” feeling swept over me.

But the car was now stopped in the center lane (车道) with traffic still moving in both directions around us and we need to help this man. Quickly! The woman called 911 while I checked his vital signs. He was not breathing. He had no pulse. He had about five minutes until he was dead. CPR was needed in to time.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Thoughts started running through my mind.

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In an instant, the man from the black SUV was standing beside me and said, “I am a doctor.”

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5．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事，

Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus(马戏团). Finally, there was only one family between us and the ticket counter.

This family made a big impression on me. There were eight children, all probably under the age of 12. You could tell they didn’t have a lot of money. Their clothes were not expensive, but they were clean. The children were well-behaved, all of them standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, holding hands. They were excitedly jabbering about the clowns, elephants, and other acts they would see that night.

One could sense they had never been to the circus before. It promised to be a highlight of their

young lives. The father and mother were at the head of the pack, standing proud as could be. The mother was holding her husband’s hand, looking up at him as if to say, ”You’re my knight(骑士) in shining armor(盔甲).” He was smiling, looking back at her as if to reply, “You got that right.”

The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted. He proudly responded. “Please let me buy eight children’s tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus.” The ticket lady quoted the price. The man’s wife let go of his hand, her head dropped, and his lip began to shake. The father leaned a little closer and asked, “How much did you say?” The ticket lady again quoted the price. The man didn’t have enough money.

How was he supposed to turn and tell his eight children that he didn’t have enough money to take them to the circus? Actually we were not wealthy in any sense. So I understand how the kids would feel. I feel sorry for them.

注意：

1. 所续写的短文词数应为80词左右;

2. 段落开头句已经为你写好，不计入总词数。

Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground.

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参考答案

1．【参考范文】

A week passed with Luke trying his best to work something out for his child. He had taken on a part-time job in hopes that things would help out, but he knew it would be several months before his savings could cover the surgery. He was trying to find more solutions when he received a call from an unknown number. It was the head physician of a very expensive hospital, and he had great news. “I’m calling to arrange a suitable date for your daughter’s surgery. Someone has generously offered to pay for its cost,” the man said.

Who might be kind enough to pay for the surgery? Luke thought to himself, wandering outside of the operating room. Fortunately, the surgery was successful. Luke was very happy but also very confused as he did not know who to thank. He asked his friends and relatives if they had donated the money, but in vain. When he went to pick up his daughter for her journey home, he caught sight of a beautiful woman smiling gracefully at him, and he got it in a flash. It was her, the woman he rescued on the highway.(169w)

【写作解析】本文以人物为线索展开，描述了主人公卢克在开车途中，救助了一个倒在路边的女人的故事。

1.段落续写：

由第一段首句内容“一个星期过去了，卢克尽最大努力为他的孩子想办法。”可知，第一段可描述卢克为自己女儿想办法所作的努力。

有第二段首句内容“谁会这么好心为手术买单呢？”可知，第二段可描述卢克知道有人为女儿付了手术费后的心理想法。

2.续写线索：想办法——赚钱——有人付手术费——动手术——查手术费来源

3.词汇激活

行为类

试图找到解决办法：try to find solutions / attempt to find solutions

接到电话：received a call / get a phone call

支付费用：pay for the cost / afford the cost

情绪类

幸运地：fortunately / luckily

困惑的：confused / perplexed

【典型句式】

【高分句型1】He had taken on a part-time job in hopes that things would help out, but he knew it would be several months before his savings could cover the surgery.(运用了that引导的同位语从句、but连接的并列句和before引导的时间状语从句)

【高分句型2】He asked his friends and relatives if they had donated the money, but in vain.(运用了if引导的宾语从句)

2．【参考范文】

I could tell Sammy was trying to help me . Seeing I couldn’t move and what a bad situation I was in, Sammy could sense I was hurt seriously and badly in need of help. Sammy couldn’t run to others for help because his leash was tied under the wheelchair. What he could do was to bark to ask for help. Therefore, he barked violently, hoping to let others notice him. Luckily, it worked. The fireman heard the sound and came over to help.

Three firemen came to my dog’s aid finally. After untying the dog’s leash, Sammy quickly ran to me to me. Because of Sammy, the fireman noticed me, and they called the emergency. I was taken into hospital immediately. After a week in the hospital, I was good enough to leave. I appreciated my dogs too much. It was my dog that saved my life.

【写作解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者坐轮椅和自己的狗出去散步，在回来的途中突发事故，作者的轮椅翻倒并滚下了路堤，掉进了下面的泥水里。

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“我能看出来萨米是想帮我”可知，第一段可描写萨米想尽办法寻求帮助。

②由第二段首句内容“三个消防员终于来救我的狗了”可知，第二段可描写自己和狗被救的过程。

2.续写线索：狗叫——寻求帮助——被消防人员发现——被救——感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

①一起走路：walk together/accompany him/keep him company

②寻求帮助：ask for help /cry for help

③注意：notice /spot

情绪类

①感谢：appreciate /showing his appreciation/show his gratitude/be grateful

②担忧： bark violently/be worried about

【典型句式】

[高分句型1]What he could do was to bark to ask for help. (运用了由连接词what引导的主语从句)

[高分句型2]Sammy couldn’t run to others for help because his leash was tied under the wheelchair.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)

3.【参考范文】

Then the fat policeman came up and the thin one went to look around the outside of the house.“That was the best thing you could have done, throwing away the keys,” he said. “If you had gone into the house with them…” His voice became weaker. “They would have hurt her” — he twisted his head toward me —“and killed you both.” Jeremy looked happier. “Look,” said the fat policeman kindly, “there’s no right or wrong in the situation. There’s just luck.”

All that sleepless night I replayed the moment those black gloves came up to the car window. How long did the whole thing last? Three minutes, five, eight? No matter how many hours of my life I may spend reliving it, I know there is no way to prepare for the next time — no intelligent response to a gun. The fat cop was right. There’s only luck. The next time I might end up dead.And I’m sure there will be a next time. Guns make some people feel safe and some people feel strong, but they’re fooling themselves.

【写作解析】这是一篇记叙文。文章记录了作者和Jeremy被持枪罪犯袭击的过程，同时也记录了邻居们和警察在这次袭击后的反应。作者因此感叹安全只是幻觉，不管是铁索还是枪支都不会带来安全。枪支使一些人感觉安全，而且有些人感觉强大，但是他们只是欺骗自己。

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“然后那个胖警察走了过来，那个瘦警察到房子外面四处看了看”可知，第一段可描写警察和他们之间关于这次事件的对话的场景。

②由第二段首句内容“那个不眠之夜，我回想起那双黑手套临近车窗前的那一刻。”可知，第二段可描写作者回忆的一些细节，掺杂着一些感悟。

2.续写线索：警察到现场查案——对话——回忆起被袭击的细节——感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

①扔掉：throw away/toss out

②.进入：go into/come into /enter

③.伤害：hurt /wound

情绪类

①.看起来更高兴：looked happier/looked more pleased

②.友善地：kindly/neighborly

【典型句式】

[高分句型1]. No matter how many hours of my life I may spend reliving it, I know there is no way to prepare for the next time — no intelligent response to a gun.（运用了No matter how引导的让步状语从句）

[高分句型2].And I’m sure there will be a next time.（运用了宾语从句）

4 【参考范文】

     Thoughts started running through my mind. I needed to start CPR. But I couldn’t do CPR on a person who was sitting in a car. Did I remember how to do CPR? There was no way for us two women to lift this guy and carry him through this traffic to the side of the road. By the time an ambulance arrived, he would be dead. Just then, over my shoulder, I noticed a black SUV had pulled up behind us.

In an instant, the man from the black SUV was standing beside me and said. “I am a doctor” I stepped back. He confirmed that the man indeed had no pulse. He quickly carried the unconscious driver to the sidewalk with the help of the woman. I walked around to the passenger window to check on the elderly lady. Her hands were shaking wildly, tears in her eyes. She could only manage to whisper, “Will he be OK?” “I hope so,” I told her softly, as the doctor began CPR. And his breath recovered!

【写作解析】本文由人物线索展开，讲述了作者注意到一辆朝他驶来的小汽车，司机已经失去了意识，情况十分危急，后来，他与路人齐心协力把车子停了下来，可是车主没有呼吸脉搏，情况危急之时，一辆黑色越野车停了下来，出来了一位医生，最终救下了这位老人。

1.段落续写：   

①由第一段首句内容“各种想法开始在我脑海里闪过。”可知，接下来要描述作者关于如何救这位司机的各种各样的想法，以及对于下文黑色越野车的提及。

②由第二段首句内容“刹那间，黑色越野车里的人站在我身边说。“我是医生。””可知，接下来可描写这位医生是如何操作，并最终救下这位司机的，以及众人的反应和情绪。

2.续写线索：我脑海中想到各种方法——无力实施救援——注意到了一辆黑色越野车——下来一位医生——司机的老婆焦急的情绪——最终救下了司机。

3.词汇激活

行为类

①.举起：lift / raise / hold up

②.退后：step back / keep back/ draw back

③.检查：check / examine/ inspect

情绪类

①.悲伤：tears in her eyes/ sad/ sorrowful

②.柔和：softly/ gently

【典型句式】

[高分句型1]. He confirmed that the man indeed had no pulse.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2].  I walked around to the passenger window to check on the elderly lady. （运用了不定式作目的状语）

5．【参考范文】

Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground. Then he picked it up, tapping the man on the shoulder, “Excuse me, sir, this fell out of your pocket.” The man turned around and saw the money. Knowing what was going on, he looked straight into my dad’s eyes, took my dad’s hand and squeezed tightly. With his lip shaking and a tear running down his cheek, he replied, “Thank you, thank you, sir. This really means a lot to me and my family.” At the same time, his children bowed to us with eyes shining with delight and gratitude. Giving a helping hand to the one in need was really great, which had a profound effect on my life forever.

【写作解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和父亲排队买马戏表演的票，看到一个家庭有八个孩子，父母带孩子准备看马戏表演，但是没有带足够的钱买票，作者的父亲看到这种情况，伸出援手帮助了这一家人，他们非常感激父亲，这件事对作者的生活产生了深远的影响。

1.段落续写：

由段首句内容“看到这一切，我爸爸把手伸进口袋，掏出一张20美元的钞票，扔在了地上。”可知，本段可描写作者的父亲帮助了这家人，这家人非常感激父亲，这件事对作者的生活产生了深远的影响。

2.续写线索：作者父亲捡起钱——假装询问——那个父亲了解实情——感激作者父亲——作者感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

①拿起：pick up/take up

②.转身：turn around/ turn about

③.帮助：give a helping hand / give a hand/ do sb a favor

情绪类

①.感激：with gratitude/ show his gratitude/be grateful

②.显著的，伟大的：great/distinct/outstanding

【典型句式】

[高分句型1]. Knowing what was going on, he looked straight into my dad’s eyes, took my dad’s hand and squeezed tightly. （由连接词what引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2]. Giving a helping hand to the one in need was really great, which had a profound effect on my life forever.（由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）