2023高考英语满分作文万能模板（4）开放作文

2023高考英语满分作文万能模板（四）

                             开放作文

【题型分析与写作方法】

题型分析：

开放作文一般是要求考生在题目设置的特定情景下按照特定的要求，自由地发表评论、抒发情感，让考生有最大限度的发挥空间，同时也对考生的语言组织能力和创新能力提出了更高的要求。

开放作文通常会给出简短的提示，要求考生根据题干要求表达自己的感想。同时，这种命题方式也给考生提供了较大的个性展示空间，使得考生的创新思维能力和发散思维能力得到充分的发挥。此类作文的答案并不限定，只要考生言之有理，不出现偏题。遗漏要点等问题，所写内容符合题目要求即可。

写作方法：

相对于提纲作文而言，开放作文限制较少，留给考生自由发挥的空间更大。

开放作文的写作步骤：

1. 认真审题，提炼主题

开放作文主要分为图画型、标题型和材料型三种，不同类型的开放作文写作时的第一步是相同的，即分析图画、标题或材料所提供的信息，进而确定主题。需要注意的是图画型中所给出的图画的寓意可能不止一个，考生按自己的理解阐述一个即可。

2. 联系生活，确定要点

以自己确定的主题为纲，进一步思考其内涵和外延，联系自己的学习、生活实际，确定写作的要点。近几年高考英语书面表达试题凸显时代性，考生应多关注社会生活实际，培养辩证思维能力，多角度展开思考，力求出新。

3. 细化要点，布局谋篇

将要点进一步细化，使要点更丰满。对于开放作文，通常我们可 以采用三段式的写作模式来行文，这一行文模式使文章脉络清晰，在一定程度上降低了行文难度。下笔前，最好拟个提纲，以明确主次，切忌心中无数、边想边写。写作攻略

斟词酌句，组句成篇选择适当的词语或结构将要点表达出来，选择适当的句型和适当的过渡语组句成文。切忌一边用汉语思考，一边“翻译”。要尽可能运用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式来表达相关内容，但也要避免过多地使用同一种表达方式，尽量使用不同的单词、短语和语法结构，使表达多样化。适当使用连接词，使句子间的衔接自然、流畅。

【万能模板之谚语警句】

       As the old saying/proverb goes, 名言或谚语. It reminds us that 释义. Indeed, we can learn a lot from it.

First of all, 理由一. For example, 举例说明. Secondly, 理由二, Another case is that 举例说明. Furthermore, 理由三.

In my opinion, 自己/“我”的观点. In short, whatever you do, please remember the saying 名言或谚语. If you understand it and apply it to your study/work/life, you'll surely benefit a lot from it.

【模板范文】

       请根据自己的理解，以谚语“We are what we eat."为中心，完成写作。

      As the saying goes, “We are what we eat." It reminds us that forming healthy eating habits is very important. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students, which will surely do harm to our health.

To keep fit, first of all, we should have healthy diets. For example, we should eat more vegetables and fruits instead of too much rich food. Secondly, we'd better have meals regularly.

In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. In short, whatever you do, please remember the saying “We are what we eat. " If you understand it and apply it to your life, you' Il surely benefit a lot from it.

【万能模板之 观点论证  】

From the picture we can see 描述图画的内容. Obviously表面情况分析,which means相关结论. But actually 深层分析,because 提出理由. For example, 提供例证 and it shows另一种结论.  In my opinion, it may be right that观点一,but 观点二. In this way, 建议与期待.

【模板范文】

From the picture we can see a tree which is not that straight. It grows into a big one, though. The tree bends in the middle because two tall buildings block its way to grow and it has to try its best to get more sunshine. (图画内容介绍）

Obviously, one may face such a situation just as the tree, which means on the way to success, we may meet a lot of obstacles, but if we are brave enough and keep the faith, we are sure to succeed. Just as the saying goes, "Where there is a will, there is a way. ”（深层分析；观点介绍）

【万能模板之 漫画寓意】

It seems to me that the picture is sending a message about漫画的内容概括成主题，which is. . . The picture describes that 漫画内容的细节描写. In my opinion, 自己\“我”的理解.

This simple picture gives us a wake-up call for 某一现象／问题. Therefore, it is high time for us to take immediate measures to put an end to. . . On the one hand, we must 解决问题的办法\措施. It is clear that the picture is urging to. . . On the other hand, 解决问题的办法\措施. Only in this way can we. . .

【模板范文】

In the picture, there are two pencils. One is long, while the other is short. The longer one that looks very proud is laughing at the shorter one by saying, "You are nearing the end! ” However, the shorter one stays calm and doesn't care about what he said. This simple picture gives us a wake-up call for the phenomenon that people who laugh at those in trouble don't realize that they are likely to suffer the same trouble one day. (图画内容；现象）

In my opinion, we shouldn't laugh at others, especially those in trouble. Instead, we should give them a hand. Only in this way can we live in harmony with each other and make our society brighter and warmer. (看法；措施）

【万能模板之高分素材】

【高分素材之单词和短语】

1.表示递进：

what's more, besides, moreover, additionally

2.表示转折：

however, in spite of that, whereas, after all

3.表示因果：

for this reason, now that, in that, inasmuch as4.表示总结：

in brief, in summary, to conclude, to speak frankly, to sum up, to summarize, Frankly speakinig

5.表示个人观点：

to my way of thinking, I recommend. . . , it seems to me

【高分素材之句式】

★首段模板句式

1. ...has both advantages and disadvantages.

2. . . .play (s) an important role/part in. . .

3. With the development of. . .

4. When it comes to. . . , some people believe that. . . ,while others claim that the opposite is true. There is probably some truth in both statements, but. . .

5. As is shown in the picture...

6. In the picture we can see that...

7. From the picture we can see. . .

★篇中模板句式

1. It is one thing to...; it is quite another to...

2. . . .is frequently quoted/cited as an illustration of. . .

3. Many examples could serve as proofs of the serious problem.

4. Obviously, if we want to. . . ,it is essential that. . .

5. Only after we have taken all aspects of the problem into consideration can we make the right decision/sound judgement.

6. That's why. . .are getting more and more popular nowadays.

7. There are some possible reasons for this common social phenomenon. For one thing. . ; for

another. . .

★结尾段模板句式

1. Based on the above discussions, we can easily forecast that more and more people will. .

2. From the above discussions, we have reason to predict what will happen in the near future.

3. Therefore, in the course of pursuing our dreams, we should make the best of our own strengths rather than stumble behind others embarrassingly ignoring our own strongpoints.

4. In my opinion, we should make it clear that...