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10 2020-2022年读后续写三年高考真题
满分作文+备考2023年高考名校最新模拟题

一 2022年高考真题
1. (2022年全国高考新高考I卷读后续写)
It was the day of the big cross-country run. Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route（路线）through thick evergreen forest.
I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. He was small for ten years old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over and asked him why he wasn't with the other children. He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run.
What was wrong? He had worked so hard for this event!
I quickly searched the crowd for the school's coach and asked him what had happened. "I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him," he explained uncomfortably. "I gave him the choice to run or not, and let him decide."
I bit back my frustration（懊恼）. I knew the coach meant well — he thought he was doing the right thing. After making sure that David could run if he wanted, I turned to find him coming towards me, his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward.
David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children, but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid. He always participated to the best of his ability in whatever they were doing. That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the cross-country team. It just took him longer — that’s all. David had not missed a single practice, and although he always finished his run long after the other children, he did always finish. As a special education teacher at the school, I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.
We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me.



I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.





【范文赏析】
We sat down together on some steps, but David wouldn’t look at me.
I turned him around and looked him in the eye sincerely. I quietly said, “David, if you’re not running because you’re afraid someone is going to laugh, that’s not a good enough reason. Are you going to let them get in your way? If you really want to run, David, run!” I held my breath as David took this in. Then he looked at the field and said with a fierce but quiet determination, “I’m gonna run.”
I watched as David moved up to the starting line.
The starter’s gun sounded. But he had only gone a few metres before he tripped and fell flat on the ground. My heart sank. As I started to shout encouragement, other voices around me took up the call. “Come on David, you can do it!” David picked himself up and started again until he crossed the finish line to wild cheers and applause.
最后几句结尾有三种：
第一种：（首选结尾）
That day, David got a special award for his courage. He also got respect of all students. To him, that was worth a whole lot more than an award. (169 words)
第二种：（原文结尾）
Then, when David’s coach slapped him on the back and said proudly, “Good job, David!” he caught my eye, flashed me a toothy grin and said, “That was easy!” （169 words）
第三种：
That day, David got a special award for his courage. He was shining on the winner’s podium. David, with so many birth problems, was a hero to all of us and most importantly, to himself! (175 words)

2.（2022年1月浙江卷读后续写）
When Dr. Henderson was assigning（指定） project mates for his psychology class, I secretly hoped he would pair me with my best friend or at least a classmate I could have some fun with. Above all, I hoped he wouldn't assign me to work with the fiercely competitive, extremely serious fellow who always wore dark clothes and apparently had a personality to match. As fate （命运）would have it, Dr. Henderson very deliberately matched everyone in class and announced that I would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoid.
I went up to my new teammate and introduced myself. He looked at me as though I weren't there. I felt he treated me as though I would hold him back and probably make him fail to get an A in the course. He wasn't mean or abusive; he just gave me the impression he could do whatever project we dreamed up better if he did it alone.
Needless to say, I didn't look forward to an entire term of being brushed off, but I tried to make the best of it and didn't say anything for fear that I would make things worse.
The project required each team to develop a hypothesis （假说）, set up an experiment to test the hypothesis, do the statistical analysis and present the findings. Whatever grade the team received would be shared by both students.
When my teammate and I met to discuss our project, I was uneasy. Here was this challenging student who had a reputation for single-mindedness and good grades—the exact opposite of me. I was outmatched. I actually wanted to drop the class at one point, but stopped short because I didn't want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out. I decided to stick to it no matter what.
After long discussions we somehow agreed to do a study on the psychological well-being of teenagers. I wasn't sure what it meant exactly, but at least we had a topic.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 结部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para 1. We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.
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Para 2. One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease.
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【范文赏析】
We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans. Though I wanted to share my ideas with him fully, I failed to do so for fear that I would hold him back. I just kept nodding when he asked me whether it is ok to do this way or that way. I thought it was impossible to persuade him into accepting my views, so I didn’t want to waste our time to discuss. I started to wait to leave immediately we arrived at the place, and so did he. I just hoped that the presentation day could come earlier.
One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease. I felt so sorry to hear that and I thought I should visit him in any case. He was a little surprised to see me when I stepped into his ward with some flowers and fruits. I offered to do the rest work of our project and he invited me to share my ideas to perfect it. We began to work as a fine team and finally finished our project on time. Our hard work paid off and Dr. Henderson’s was very satisfied with our wonderful findings. From this project, we also learned the significance of teammates. Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.
二 2022年高考真题
1.（2021年新高考I卷读后续写）
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
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【范文赏析】
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Father’s appearing was like a savior to the two children. Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions and started all over again. They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. It was all right this time. Delicious breakfast was ready. How happy they were!
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn’t expect. The children said loudly, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.

2.（2021年1月浙江卷读后续写）
My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn't understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.
I didn't really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and I thought that I would surpass (超过) anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.
Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone (长号).
The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockle burs, lamb's-quarters, fox tails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to.
At home, my dad said, "A job's a big step to growing up. I'm glad you will be contributing to the household." My dad's words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.
My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested. I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：The pay arrived at last
Paragraph 2：I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.
【范文赏析】
The pay arrived at last. Although the job was very tiring, I was very happy in my heart for I got something from my work. The toil of labor was forgotten for the time being. I thought I should have my own money and planned how to spend it. “How much money have you earned?” Dad asked. I was surprised, reluctant to say my income. The next morning, my dad’s livestock truck started running. I saw my father’s hard-working figure and thought of his words “A job’s a big step to growing up”.
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. They were worried that I was too selfish to give. I realized that my labor was very hard, but my growth and our whole family had been depending on the hard work of my parents! Dad never complained about unfairness! He even seemed to think that was fair. I thought, “I’ve only worked for two weeks, but how many years my father has worked!” In the evening, Dad came back. I proudly took out my own money and handed it to Dad.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者高中毕业后，参加农场工作，辛辛苦苦挣到的钱，不情愿贡献给家庭，后来在看到父亲的辛劳之后，理解了父母担心的是自己太过自私而不知奉献，终于想通，并自豪地将自己劳动所得交给父亲的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“工资终于到了。”可知，第一段可描写作者的工资到手后，高兴地计划自己用这笔钱，不愿意交给父亲，然后看到父亲的辛劳。
②由第二段首句内容“我立刻明白了父母的担心。”可知，第二段可描写作者明白了父母担心自己不懂得奉献，想通了，然后自豪地把钱交给了父亲。
2. 续写线索：高兴——计划——不情愿——发现——奉献——自豪
3.词汇激活
行为类
①计划：programme/plan
②.奉献：give/devote
③发现：see/find
情绪类
①.不情愿的：unwilling/reluctant
②.自豪地：proudly/with pride
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I thought I should have my own money and planned how to spend it. (运用了疑问词加动词不定式作宾语)
[高分句型2]. I realized that my labor was very hard, but my growth and our whole family had (that引导的宾语从句以及过去完成进行时)
三 2020年高考真题
1.（2020年1月浙江卷读后续写）
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.
Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes，that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.
As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard，and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).
I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter(相遇), I took some pictures of the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and，through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar(吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph2:At that very moment, the helicopter arrived._______________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文赏析】
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp, then we realized the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread. But it wasn’t long before he eat up all the bread and came back again.
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. “Thank goodness we are saved!” Elli cried out. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to the spot that the bear had finally tore down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene- we were robbed by a polar bear.
【解析】本文以事件为线索展开，讲述了作者和妻子前往被称为“北极熊之都”的加拿大丘吉尔镇拍摄北极熊。夫妻二人做饭之时，一头饥饿的雄性幼熊跟着面包的蒜香味，靠近了营地，猛烈撞击营地边上的铁丝围栏。作者和妻子使出浑身解数，想吓退这头熊，不料它“不破篱笆誓不归”。无奈之下，作者求助营地管理员，被告知救援直升机要30分钟后才能赶到，只得先尝试用胡椒喷雾喷洒北极熊的眼睛，不料这使熊变得更加暴躁，在千钧一发之际直升机及时赶到，他们得救了的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容“几分钟后，熊返回了我们的营地。”可知，第一段可描写作者夫妻二人如何再次对付熊及两人在此过程中的紧张害怕。
由第二段首句内容“就在那时，直升机赶到了。”可知，第二段可描写作者夫妻二人获救时的心情。
2.续写线索：熊返回营地——紧张害怕——用面包攻击——直升机赶到——快速登上飞机——熊把篱笆推到——拍下熊“打劫”的画面
3.词汇激活
行为类
①激怒：anger/provoke / enrage
②抓起：grab/snatch up
③拿出：take out/fetch out
情绪类
①疯狂的：mad/crazy
②兴奋的：excited/thrilled
【点睛】
[高分句型1] then we realized the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly.（for引导的原因状语从句）
[高分句型2] My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. （现在分词作状语）
[高分句型3] Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. (once引导时间状语从句和形容词作状语)。

四 2023年名校最新模拟题

Writing 1 ( 2022年浙江山水联盟高三入学考试 )
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的文章。
On the first day of school, I stared in awe at the huge buildings. This high school was definitely bigger than the one I had previously attended.
This was my second year of high school, but my first year of school in St. Louis. I had decided the night before that I would be much happier in a new school if I made friends that were so-called “popular”. Getting in with the right group of people would make my life a whole lot better. I even bought a new outfit and had my hair styled just so the first day would be perfect.
Scared, yet anxious to begin my new life, I walked up the stairs to the front door. The halls were packed with kids yelling and laughing and telling stories of their summer adventures. My first class was geometry, but where was that?
I was standing in the hall looking confused, when a short, blond girl wearing glasses came up and asked, “Are you new? You look lost. Do you need help? My name is Diane. What’s yours?” Even though she seemed a bit strange, definitely not the kind of person I wanted to be associated with, I decided to answer her anyway. I was, after all, lost.
After exchanging names. I followed her up the stairs and down a hallway on the right, making polite conversation the whole way. When we reached my room she said, “Well, here you are. Welcome to JFK, and I hope your day goes all right.”
I said thanks and waved good-bye. Once inside the classroom, I saw one big group of people huddled around someone who seemed to be telling some sort of story. I walked over and got close enough to overhear. All eyes were glued to the guy in the middle of the circle who was wearing a letter jacket covered with patches. I decided that this guy was popular, so I managed to get a seat right next to him. I said, “Hi, my name is Lisa and I’m new here.” He said, “Johnny.”
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右：
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置答题。
At the end of the class, I turned to him and asked, “I’m not sure where my next class is, could you help me?”
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Just at that time, someone came up and tapped me on the shoulder.
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【范文赏析】
At the end of the class, I turned to him and asked, “I’m not sure where my next class is, could you help me?” With a frown, he looked at me and then said a quick no, turned back to his friends, and walked out of the classroom. As they were walking out I heard him say, “Did you guys see that new girl trying to get into our group? That outfit was too strange.” They all laughed and some of them turned around and stared at me. My face hot with shame, I stood stock-still, not believing what had just happened.
Just at that time, someone came up and tapped me on the shoulder. It was Diane. Like a ray of sunshine, the big smile on her face swept away my gloom. I struggled to hold my feelings back and told her what I had encountered. A gleam of concern in her eyes, she said she was sorry and offered to find my next class. At that moment I realized how wrong I was in wanting to only be friends with popular people. Maybe I shouldn’t decide whether a person is worth being my friend or not by their reputation, but by who they are.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者高中第二年是在圣路易斯的第一年，作者在学校认识了Diane，Diane给作者指路。结果作者因为穿着被班上的同学嘲笑，Diane也对作者表示了关心，作者也感悟到不应该只和受欢迎的人交朋友。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“下课的时候，我转向他问：‘我不知道下节课在哪里，你能帮我吗？’”可知，第一段可描写对方的反应以及作者被嘲笑的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“就在那时，有人走过来拍了拍我的肩膀”可知，第二段可描写Diane帮助作者以及作者的感悟。
2.续写线索：询问——拒绝——嘲笑——帮助——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①走出：walk out of/step out of
②融入：get into/fit into
③抑制：hold back/restrain
情绪类
①奇怪的：strange /odd
②担心：concern /worry
【点睛】[高分句型1] My face hot with shame, I stood stock-still, not believing what had just happened.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Maybe I shouldn’t decide whether a person is worth being my friend or not by their reputation, but by who they are. (运用了whether引导宾语从句)。

Writing 2 ( 2022-2023学年浙江省新高考研究联盟高三9月返校联考英语试题 )
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Radzi was the first out of the plane. He collected his luggage and quickly made his way to the arrival, hardly able to contain his excitement at meeting his family after six years abroad. He looked around expectantly, hoping to hear his voice being called out but he heard no sweet voices. He turned around and saw his parents, their dear faces shining with pride and pleasure but of his teenage twin sisters—none. There was no sign of them.
“They must be hiding somewhere—they love to play hide and seek.”. His father smiled but said nothing. His mother kept on hugging him not allowing him to say anything. His father murmured, “Let's get home. They're waiting for us at home.” Radzi smiled, relieved to know they were at home. He kept on talking about how he toured Europe as Wani asked him to in her letter and he was rather puzzled whenever his parents exchanged glances.
Reaching home, he spied a lone figure at the door. “Why one? There should be two.” The twins were inseparable but it could be that six years had made all the difference. As that lone figure rushed towards him, he thought it was Wani but she said she was Wati. So it must be. He really could not differentiate between the two of them and they had fun deceiving him all the time. And they really had a lot of laughter over his mistaking one for the other.
“Where's Wani?”
“In your bedroom.”
“Wani, Bang's home.”
He walked into his room and read the words ‘Welcome Home, Dr. Radzi!’ He trusted his twin sisters to be so dramatic! He was studying medicine as a doctor and he had been focusing on his final examinations which needed much concentration. Wati invited him to go downstream to their favorite hideout. “Bang, I wish to be alone with you without Wani. Wani can wait her turn.”
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
In a quiet sad and serious tone, she related what had happened to Wani.
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Paragraph 2:
He took the letter and walked to the graveyard.
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【范文赏析】
In a quiet sad and serious tone, she related what had happened to Wani. A year ago, Wani fell seriously ill and was diagnosed with cancer. Everyone wanted to tell Radzi but Wani begged them not to as he was sitting for his finals and she did not want him to lose all concentration and be so upset. Everyone had to promise and even after his finals, she wrote him to tour Europe before coming home. She sent him photos of her with Wati, smiling, cheerful, and healthy. Radzi was stunned and asked in agony, “How could she? Why did you let her do it? Why? Why? ” Wati kept silent. All she could do was to hug her brother, comforting him as he sobbed his heart out. When the tears dried up, Wati held out a letter. Radzi recognized the handwriting.
He took the letter and walked to the graveyard. Wati went with him, then left him to read the letter and to be alone in spirit with his beloved sister. “Bang, please don’t grieve. Remember me as the healthy, cheerful, fun-loving sister. Treasure our past moments and keep me always in your heart. Wati is with you. In her, you see me. I want to be a doctor like you. I can’t but you are one now. Be the best doctor I know. I am proud of you. ” As he read her letter, a strange peace fell on him. It was as though she was beside him, comforting him and holding his hand. He looked around, saw Wati and she smiled. In Wati, he saw Wani. He walked up to Wati, took her hand. Together, the brother and sister walked home in the silence of the quiet evening.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Radzi时隔六年回国，在机场的时候特别期待见到亲人，看到了父母但是没有瞧见两个双胞胎妹妹的踪影，回家后也只看到Wati，没有见到另一个妹妹Wani的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“她以一种平静、悲伤和严肃的语气讲述了发生在Wani身上的事情。”和第二段首句关键词“ 墓地”可知，Wani去世了，所以第一段可描述在Radzi出国期间，妹妹Wani生病了但隐瞒了哥哥的故事。
②由第二段首句内容“他接过信，走向墓地。”可知，第二段可描写Wani写的信的具体内容以及哥哥读完信后的感受。
2.续写线索：Wati讲述事情真相——Wani身患重病——祈求隐瞒——得知真相痛哭——读信——情绪缓解
3.词汇激活
行为类
①讲述：relate/narrate/tell
②拥抱：hug/embrace/give sb a hug
③想要做：want to do/desire to do/be eager to do
情绪类
①震惊的：stunned/shocked
②沮丧的：upset/depressed
③高兴地：cheerful /delightful
【点睛】[高分句型1]Everyone wanted to tell Radzi but Wani begged them not to as he was sitting for his finals and she did not want him to lose all concentration and be so upset. (as引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2]It was as though she was beside him, comforting him and holding his hand. (as though引导表语从句；现在分词做伴随状语)。

Writing 3 ( 福建省连城县第一中学2022-2023学年高三上学期英语试题)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Sports Day was fast coming to the school. All the children were very excited and were
practicing for the big race. Jim, one of the fast runners of the school was confident that he would
win so he was not doing anything at all. “You have to work hard to come first in the race, Jim. You
are not practicing at all,” said Jim’s mother.
“Mom, you know how fast I am! Then why should I waste my time running? Only I will win；
no one else will win!” shouted Jim. “Jim, you may be right but talent without hard work is not good
at all. This laziness of yours will cost you greatly,” his mother warned him. Jim just laughed and
shrugged (耸肩) his shoulders. He was so confident that he would win the prize as no one else in
his class was as fast as he was!
Tim, a classmate of Jim was also participating in the running race. He was not a fast runner.
However, he was very devoted and practiced till late night and had developed great endurance (耐
力) and willpower (意志) to win the race.
There were a few days left for the Sports Day but Jim did not practice at all. On the other hand,
Tim practiced day and night. The Sports Day was almost around the corner but Jim was confident
that no one could beat him and had not practiced at all. But Tim with his devotion and hard work
had become a very fast runner.
At last, the Sports Day arrived. All the students crowded the ground to cheer their favorites.
The signal was given to the participants to begin the race. The coach blew the whistle and everyone
began to run towards the finishing line. It was so exciting. Jim and Tim left all the racers far behind.
Both of them were neck to neck.
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1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答案卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly, Jim went ahead of Tim.
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Jim’s mother came to Tim and praised him for his hard work.
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【范文赏析】
Suddenly, Jim went ahead of Tim. The crowd cheered for him. Soon, it was clear that Jim was going to beat Tim. But, when they were just a few metres away from the finishing line, Tim surprisingly picked up speed and ran ahead of Jim and reached the finishing line. Tim surprised everyone with his brilliant performance. He proudly received the prize and the money.
Jim’s mother came to Tim and praised him for his hard work. She said, “You deserve it for your devotion and effort!” “Thanks, Ms! ” Tim replied with an open smile and walked happily with his prize. Jim hung his head in shame. His mother turned to him and said, “Look, Jim, talent without hard work is simply useless. That boy put efforts and got rewarded for his hard work. Hard work is the only way to success. ” Now Jim understood the importance of hard work. This incident brought about a major change in his life.

Writing 4 ( 重庆市巴蜀中学2022-2023学年高三上学期9月底英语试题)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was turning ten in the summer of 1959.On a warm evening while at the dinner table, my mother announced we were taking a trip to Niagara Falls when summer vacation started so that we could celebrate my birthday there. It all sounded incredibly good until Mom said we would be driving to Canada，As usual，my father would do all the driving while my mother managed the directions. I looked over at my sister，Marlene，who was three years younger than me and rolled my eyes. She giggled and did the same. It wasn't that I didn't like car rides ---- but my Dad usually took a wrong turn along the way and Mom would complain. "You were supposed to turn right according to the map like I told you，but you made a left.” My Dad would get annoyed and growl. My mother would end the conversation with“I can't believe we're arguing over this.”Later，they'd apologize and make up until the next wrong turn.Driving in the car also meant I'd share the back seat with my sister，which was not part of what I considered a pleasant journey.“Hey，can we take a plane there instead?”I asked between mouthfuls of hamburger and French fries. Sometimes，when Dad had a day off from work，we would drive out to Idle wild Airport to watch the planes take off and land. I always hoped one day Pd get to sit in my own seat on one of those planes. It would be cool to get high up and then stick my head out a window. Windows on planes do open，don't they?“Sorry honey，maybe next time,”my mother replied as she and my father exchanged glances. l turned to my sister，hoping she'd say she wanted to get on a plane，but she stuck her tongue out at me and giggled.Didn't they get it? I was in desperate need of a plane ride，and I needed something cool to talk about with my friends when we got home.“Sitting in the back seat of the car sucks,”I blurted out.“Jay!" My mother shouted. “Watch your mouth ! ”“ok, sorry, but I really wanted to go by plane."“This conversation's over.”My father growled." If you're finished eating，go to your room."
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We left two days later on Saturday morning in our car.
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I was told to wait until we checked in our bags at the airport.
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【范文赏析】
We left two days later on Saturday morning in our car: I gave a sincere apology to both my parents and helped stuff the car trunk full of suitcases.There I was stuck in the back seat with no
hope of having great tales of adventure for my friends and little expectation of celebrating my birthday with style.After what seemed like a lifetime,I felt extremely bored as Marlene fell asleep
beside me.Rolling down the window,I caught a glimpse of a large plane flying overhead.How I
wished I were on that plane! At that moment,I noticed my father made a turn off the highway and
drove past a sign that read“Airport Parking”I couldn’t believe my eyes.We were heading right into the airport!
I was told to wait until we checked in our bags at the airport. “We were planning this as a
birthday present for you all along,”my mother explained,“ despite your impolite language the other
night. Happy Birthday,sweetheart”My father also wished me a happy birthday as he bent down to kiss my head while Marlene threw her arms around me, winking and giggling.Overwhelmed with
emotions,I looked at the boarding pass in my hands,finally waking up to the fact that my dream of
taking a flight was eventually coming true. Yet what touched me most was the great lengths that my family had gone to that actually made it the best birthday ever!

Writing 5 （湖南省邵阳市中学2022-2023学年高三第三次月考）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Ugh, chicken rolls again? I hate chicken rolls!” Matt yelled. “I’m not eating this.” Matt’s mom and dad looked at each other. Matt’s outbursts had been happening at least once a week all summer long.“You know what, Matt? We re going to let you take over dinnertime from now on. You can pick the meals and cook them, as long as they’re healthy,” Mom said.“Good, we’re going to eat good food every night!” Matt answered.The next day, Dad sat down with Matt to make the meal plan so he could go grocery shopping. Matt had already been thinking about his favorite dinners. “We’re going to have beef tonight, and spaghetti tomorrow, and macaroni (通心粉) and cheese the next day,” Matt started.“Woah, hold on now,” Dad said. “What else are we going to have with the beef? We need to have at least one vegetable with each meal, and usually we have another side to go with it.”“Oh, yeah. Um, we can have corn with the beef,” Matt said.“Sophia does not like corn,” said Dad.“Well, it’s my choice, so I’m going to make corn,” Matt replied.
“OK, but she might complain at dinner tonight. Are you ready for that?” Dad asked.“Yeah, whatever,” Matt answered.Matt and his dad spent the next hour figuring out the whole week’s meals and side dishes. It was a lot more work than Matt expected, and almost every time he picked something out, his dad would tell him that someone in the family wouldn’t like it. It was very frustrating. “This is impossible!” Matt said.“Yes, it is hard. Your mother and I try very hard to make everyone happy, but everyone has different tastes, and sometimes, we just can’t please everyone.”“Fine, we’ll have to just go with this plan this week. Next week I’ll try to make everyone happy,” replied Matt.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When finishing grocery shopping, it was time for Matt to make his first meal.
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Two hours had passed by before the dishes were ready on the table.
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【范文赏析】
When finishing grocery shopping, it was time for Matt to make his first meal.Looking at the grocery he deadly wanted to eat,Mattfeltsoexcitedandconfidentaboutthedinnertobemadebyhimatfirst. But the reality gave him a lesson soon.When he tried to fry the beef,he didn’t know how to control the fire, sot hat the beef was burning. His parents wanted to lend him a hand but he refused it and finally he made it in the fourth time with the help of the cooking video!For the corn, he just boiled it and covered some cream on it.Two hours had passed by before the dishes were ready on the table. Deadly exhausted, Mattfeltsoproudofhimselfandanticipatedthepraisesfromhisfamilies.“Ew,t his beef tastes very odd,”Sophia said.Matt took a bite. It did taste odd. But he’d worked so hard! He felt like he might cry.“It’s OK,Matt, cooking is hard.It takes a long time to figure it out.Sophia,just be nice.Matt worked really hard on this dinner.We should appreciate it.”Mm said.“I’m sorry…”he apologized. Since then,it downed on Matt that he should treat every meal from his parents with respect and appreciation.
Writing 6 ( 江苏省南通市海安市2022-2023高三9月联考 )
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。At 76 years old, Melanie felt tired all the time. It had nothing to do with her age, though. 14 years ago, her son,Anthony, died in a plane crash. After a long-time search, the rescuers said there were no survivors and no hope for the victims’ families.Luckily, Melanie had Anthony’s son, Mark, and his wife, Kayla, to get her by. But it wasn’t the same. She missed Anthony and often felt hopeless about life. Her son died at a young age. He left a baby, and Kayla had not recovered from his death either.One day at home, when watching the news on TV, Melanie and Kayla were suddenly surprised by what they were seeing. A news reporter was talking beside a man who looked like Anthony. He seemed older than he had ever been. The news caused great excitement. “It must be him!” Melanie and Kayla both said happily.“If you recognize this man, please call the number on the screen. Recently, a vague (模糊的)memory of having a plane crash hit this man’s mind. But he still doesn’t remember anything before the crash 14 years ago near the Canary Islands. Authorities now have reason to believe that there was a mistake in the previous report that the crash left no survivors…”When the news ended, Kayla called the number immediately. She told the attendant that she believed the man was her husband Anthony and provided details. Kayla also asked for more information about what had happened over the past 14 years since the accident. The attendant said, “14 years ago, some local fishermen found him who lost his memory. They offered him a job, and he has worked and lived with one of them since then.”This attendant then told Anthony that his family were waiting for him to go home. Weeks later, Anthony went tothe city where Melanie and Kayla lived. All the family members were waiting at the airport. Finally, the gates opened,and people were coming out.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly, Kayla noticed a familiar face in the crowd. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Back home, Melanie and Kayla tried to restore Anthony’s memory.
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Suddenly, Kayla noticed a familiar face in the crowd. She could hardly contain her excitement. “Anthony!”She screamed, waving joyfully at her long lost husband. Hearing his name called, Anthony immediately hurried to them. Meanwhile, Melanie recognized her son in an instant, who hadn’t changed so much except for some wrinkles on his forehead. “Thank goodness! How nice to have you come back!” She said in a trembling voice and held him tightly, tears blurring her eyes. Confused as Anthony was, he believed they were his beloved family members mentioned by the attendant and agreed to go back home with them.Back home, Melanie and Kayla tried to restore Anthony’s memory.
Every day, they accompanied him to receive the rehabilitation treatment in the hospital. Apart from that, they showed him their former pictures, which they hoped would bring back his memory. One day, as they were browsing the pictures, one of them caught his eyes. It was Anthony and his son, in which they took a trip to their old house. “Mark! It’s Mark!” he yelled. Happy memories of the past flooded into his mind. With great effort, Anthony’s memory was restored.
Writing 7 ( 广东省汕头市金山中学2022-2023高三9月考试 )
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My parents do a lot of embarrassing things! Usually, it's my dad who sings silly songs or tells corny jokes around my friends. But a few weeks ago, it was my mother who played the embarrassing-parent role.
While my mom and I were shopping, we ran into my teacher, who mentioned that the school didn’t have a music teacher to help our class put together a performance for Winter Fair. And, right then and there, my mom said, “I know the perfect song and dance. I’ll teach it to the kids!”
Before I could say “Please don’t”, my mom had agreed to come to my class every morning at 9:30for a week. Oh, and just to be clear, it’s not as if she’s a professional entertainer. My parents run a small grocery store, and the only singing my mom does is in the shower.
“Um,” I said on our way home, “are you sure this is such a good idea?” “Of course! ” she said. “If we want your school Winter Fair to happen, people need to step up and volunteer.” “I know volunteering is important,” I said, “but couldn’t you help out in Tex and Indi’s kindergarten instead?” She laughed, “Don’t be silly. We will have fun!”
“OK, fellas!” my teacher said at 9:28 on Monday. “We’re going to stop silent reading a little early today because a special guest is here to help us with a performance for Winter Fair. Let’s all welcome Arizona’s mother.”
I looked up to discover my mom standing at the front of the room wearing the world’s silliest snowflake hat. “I’m super excited to be here with you!” my mom said, “I’m going to teach you a fun little song-and-dance performance I learned a few years back, when I did some theater in college. Here goes !”
Oh please, oh please, I said over and over in my head, let there be a fire drill, or an assembly, or a power failure, or anything to stop my mom from completely embarrassing herself- and me!!!
But apparently, my mom was not at all concerned about looking silly. She turned on some background music and started singing and dancing away.
注意：
1． 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1“I can’t believe this is happening” was all I could think.
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Paragraph 2My mom turned out to be more than a little OK at performing.
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【范文赏析】
“I can t believe this is happening” was all I could think.I closed my eyes, covered my ears and shrank as low as I possibly could in my chair. After a few seconds, though, I mustered up enough courage to uncover one ear and peek through a half-open eye. That’s when I saw the expression of pure joy on my mom’s face. She was having so much fun that I couldn’t help smiling. My classmates clapped and cheered,and I heard someone say, “Wow! Arizona’s mother is pretty talented!”
My mom turned out to be more than a little OK at performing.She was also good at teaching us the song and the dance steps, too. We learned quickly. By the time of the fair, I was actually proud of her for putting herself out there for the sake of us kids. Our performance at the Winter Fair was a huge success. As we drove home, I said to my mom, “I’m really glad you volunteered to help my class with the performance.” My mom reached back and squeezed my hand. “Thanks for saying that. I can see why you might’ve been embarrassed, but I had such a great time.”
Writing 8 ( 2022广东省茂名电白区一中高三测试卷)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文
I moved to a new place. After the first day at my new school, I walked home alone. Mom told me she had to work. I was still hoping she’d meet me after the bell.
I opened the door. I was hungry. I wandered into the kitchen, tearing tape from the packed boxes while I searched for a clean plate. My fingers slipped, and something went crashing to the ground.
“Benjamin!” cried Mom from the doorway. I didn’t hear her come in. “What just broke?” she asked, bending to pick up the shards (碎片). In her hands, I recognized the pieces. It was Grandma’s bowl, the one Mom put out for special occasions.
“Why couldn’t you have waited for me to unpack? I couldn’t believe you broke this,” she said.
Words burst from my mouth and spilled across the room. “Well, I can’t believe we have to live here now! I can’t believe I have to switch schools when there are only a few weeks left before summer!” I ran into my room, shutting the door behind me violently.
The broom (扫帚) swept across the kitchen floor. Then the click of Mom’s bedroom door closed behind her. I stole out into the kitchen and picked out the shards in the dustbin. There were so many pieces in here, but maybe I could put them back together.
“I’ m sorry I yelled,” said Mom, as she opened her door. “Please just throw out the pieces. We can’t make a fresh start with broken things.”
As I wandered down the hall, Mr. Sato, my neighbor, was emptying his garbage.
“Are you sure you want to throw that out?” he asked, gesturing towards the bowl.
“It’s broken,” I whispered. “This is all my fault.”
“Things break, Benjamin. That isn’t anyone’s fault. Besides, this is a simple repair. Come. I’ll show you.” Taking a thin knife, Mr. Sato started to repair the bowl. After a long time, Mr. Sato said to me, “This needs to dry. Come back on Saturday, and we will finish it.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
3． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Saturday morning, I stole out early and knocked on the Satos’ door.
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I was a little nervous to show Mom the bowl, but that night I brought it into her room.
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【范文赏析】
Saturday morning, I stole out early and knocked on the Satos’ door. “Now comes my favorite part,” said Mr. Sato. He offered me a tiny brush. “Take your time, and fill in the crack lines.” At first my hand was shaking, but then I painted with smooth strokes. When I finished, the bowl looked completely different. Instead of the cracks blending in and disappearing, now you could see exactly where it was broken. “This bowl has another layer to its history— it has been broken, repaired, and is stronger because of it,” said Mr. Sato. I took the bowl home quietly.
I was a little nervous to show Mom the bowl, but that night I brought it into her room. She ran her fingertip over the golden veins. “Mr. Sato helped me fix it,” I said. “It’s so beautiful,” she replied. “A new beginning.” I sat on the edge of her bed, and Mom reached out to me. Our hands joined with crisscrossed fingers. Maybe it finally did feel like a fresh start. The bowl was stronger like this too. It was the cracks that were holding it together.
Writing 9 ( 2022 江苏省淮安中学测试卷)
I Owe You Thanks
Mrs. Crawley, a large woman, often worked into night at a hotel beauty-shop. She was walking alone with a large heavy back-pack at about eleven o’clock one night when a boy named Jack ran up behind her and tried to snatch (抢夺) her pack.
The pack’s strap (带子) broke. The boy’s weight and the weight of the pack combined cased him to lose his balance, so Jack fell on his back on the sidewalk. Mrs. Crawley simply turned around and picked the boy up by his shirt front.
The woman did not release Jack. “I’m very sorry, lady, I’m sorry,” he whispered in an embarrassed (尴尬的) voice.
Mrs. Crawley said, looking at his face, “Now I got a great mind to wash your face. It’s dirty! Did you have nobody home to tell you to wash your face?”
“No, Ma’am,” said Jack.
“Then it will get washed this evening,” said Mrs. Crawley starting up the street dragging Jack behind her. “You ought to be my son. I would teach you right from wrong. Least I can do right now is to wash your face. Are you hungry?”
“Yes, Ma’am,” said the being dragged boy.
When getting to her door, Mrs. Crawley dragge Jack inside.
“You go to that sink and wash your face, and I’m going to fix us something to eat. You’re hungry — or been hungry — to try to snatch my pack.” said the woman, turning Jack loose. He went to the sink.
“I wanted a pair of blue suede shoes,” said Jack.
“Well, you didn’t have to snatch my pack to get your suede shoes,” said Mrs. Crawley. “You could have asked me.”
“Ma’am?”
The water dripping from his face, Jack looked at her. There was a long pause. A very long pause.
Then supper was ready, with a bite of cakes cooked for each. Mrs. Crawley set the table.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
3. She did not ask Jack anything that would embarrass him as they ate.
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“Shoes got in that way will make you uncomfortable,” continued Ms. Crawley, ready to get her rest.
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【范文赏析】
She did not ask Jack anything that would embarrass him as they ate. It seemed that silence surrounded the room. Lowering his head with shame, Jack didn’t what to say but just tried to finish his meal as quickly as he could. After a long pause, Mrs. Crawley stopped eating, looking straight into his eyes and asking, “Could you please tell me why that pair of blue suede shoes is important to you?”. “All the boys I know have this pair of shoes. I want one.”, he answered in a low voice with face flushing.
“Shoes got in that way will make you uncomfortable,” continued Ms. Crawley, ready to get her rest. “Remember get what you want through your hard work and you’ll feel proud. But getting what you want by doing something wrong will bring shame to your life.”,Ms. Crawley patted his back gently. What made Jack amazed was that Ms. Crawley didn’t blame and punish him. She taught him an unforgettable lesson. Tears of gratitude welled up in his eyes. He had made up his mind to be righteous man since then.
Writing 10 ( 湖南省长沙市雅礼中学2022-2023学年高三上学期月考)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Price of a Miracle
Tess was an eight-year-old girl when she heard her mom and dad talking about her little brother, Andrew. All she knew was that he was very sick and they were completely out of money.
Only a very costly operation could save him now and it was looking like there was no one to lend them the money. She heard Dad say to her tearful mom with desperation, “Only a miracle can save him now.”
Tess went to her bedroom and poured all the change she had saved out on the floor and counted it carefully:47 cents. She slipped out of home and made her way to Rexall’s Drug Store. She waited patiently for the pharmacist to give her some attention but he was too busy at this moment. Finally, she took a quarter from her pocket and banged it on the glass counter. That did it ! “And what do you want?” the pharmacist asked in an annoyed tone of voice. “I’m talking to my brother from Chicago Medical University whom I haven’t seen in ages,” he said without waiting for a reply to his question.
“Well, I want to talk to you about my brother,” Tess answered back in the same annoyed tone. “He’s really, really sick and I want to buy a miracle.”
“We don’t sell miracles here, little girl. I’m sorry but I can’t help you,” the pharmacist said, softening a little. “Listen, I have the money to pay for it. If it isn’t enough, I will get the rest. Just tell me how much it costs.” Tess answered with a blind faith.
The pharmacist’s brother was a well-dressed man. He stooped down and asked the little girl, “What kind of a miracle does your brother need?” “I don’t know,” Tess replied with her eyes welling up.
“I just know he’s really sick and Mom says he needs an operation. But my dad can’t pay for it, so I want to use my money.”
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
“How much do you have?” asked the man from Chicago.
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The operation was completed.
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【范文赏析】
“How much do you have?” asked the man from Chicago. “47 cents!” Tess replied without any hesitation. To her surprise, the man said that he was a doctor and that it was a fair price for a miracle. Overcome with excitement, Tess grasped his hand, leading him to her home. With doubt and hope, Dad and Mom had Andrew checked by the man, who declared that he would perform an operation on the boy and promised it wouldn’t be long before he could pick himself up. Hearing his words, the whole family burst into tears of joy.
The operation was completed. Hardly had Andrew been sent back home when his parents went to thank the doctor with Tess, for they knew that 47 cents was a joke for an operation. They promised to save enough money to pay for the bill only to be told that Tess had paid for it. “It’s a fair deal,” the doctor explained to the parents，and then looked into Tess’s eyes, smiling, “47 cents was what it cost—plus the faith of a little girl.”
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了八岁的小女孩Tess听到爸爸妈妈谈论她的弟弟，得知弟弟得了重病，需要动手术，但是家里没有钱。听到爸妈说“只有奇迹才能救他”时，她拿了自己的零花钱去药店买“奇迹”，幸运地遇到了能做手术的医生，医生真地给了她们家一个“奇迹”，为她弟弟做了手术的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“‘你有多少钱？’那个从芝加哥来的人问。”可知，第一段可描写医生和Tess之间的对话，并想要帮助她。②由第二段首句内容“手术完成。”可知，第二段可描写Tess一家人对医生的感谢。2.续写线索：回答——了解——承诺——高兴——手术完成——感谢3.词汇激活行为类①.回答：answer/reply/response②.承诺：promise/undertake情绪类①.感谢：thank/be grateful/appreciate②.高兴：burst into tears of joy/burst into tears of pleasure
[高分句型1]. With doubt and hope, Dad and Mom had Andrew checked by the man, who declared that he would perform an operation on the boy and promised it wouldn’t be long before he could pick himself up. (由关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句,省略了that的宾语从句，before引导状语从句)[高分句型2]. Hearing his words, the whole family burst into tears of joy. (运用了现在分词作状语)

Writing 10 ( 湖南省师范大学附属中学2022-2023学年高三上学期月考)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Red Tool Box
It was early in 1981 when I first met George. I was in my early 30s, seeking a creative outlet unrelated to the boredom of housework and raising little ones. My children, then aged three and five, were just entering kindergarten and school life. At 65, George had recently retired and was seeking a rewarding hobby for his golden years. For both of us, painting was ‘it’ and we met at a local TAFE painting class.
George was a man who lived life to the full; he worked hard, played hard, and had an opinion about everything. He adored his wife, his family, his friends, and was loyal and outspoken to an equal degree. George took pride in his fitness and walked three kilometers every day.
And as the only male in a painting class full of women, George was in his element. He took to painting with an awe-inspiring level of passion and devotion, even transforming the spare bedroom of his home into a studio. His painting equipment was comprehensive an easel (画架), quality paints, linseed oil, turpentine, brushes, 8 palette, canvases, charcoal pencils, fixative, palette knives — even a rolling pin for removing air bubbles when gluing. Ever practical, George housed many of these items in a red metal tool box purchased from a local hardware store. Not fancy, but shiny and very red-the sports car of conveyance for painting equipment.
For about six years George and I studied together through various units until the completion of the course and other commitments drew us apart, though we always maintained personal contact as we lived within a couple of kilometers of each other. I’d sometimes see him on his daily walk or at the local shops and occasionally we’d touch base with a ‘proper’ afternoon tea, sharing a cuppa and a chinwag (聊天).
Let’s fast-forward some years and George was about 80 years old.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
George rang one day and asked me to go to his house, saying he needed to ask me something. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
And so it was that George left all his painting equipment to me.
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【范文赏析】
George rang one day and asked me to go to his house, saying he needed to ask me something. While his dear wife Dorothy served tea and cake, George explained that he was giving up painting and giving away all his ‘stuff’. Everything — paints, boards, canvases, completed works, the rolling pin and even the precious red tool box! “I can’t paint, Bella. I don’t know why I ever thought I could,” he declared. He was mistaken about his painting ability because he had turned out some unique and wonderful works. However, George had decided he was through with painting, and no amount of talking could persuade him otherwise.
And so it was that George left all his painting equipment to me. “You have the best talent and are most likely to use it well,” he said. After considerable persuasion, I accepted this precious gift, insisting that he could reclaim it at any time. He never did, of course, and I still use much of his equipment today, more than 20 years later. As I paint, I often remember George, his sunny personality, generous spirit and unfailing encouragement. The red tool box witnessed a friendship that lasted for 25 years — until the day he passed away.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者与乔治相识于绘画班，他对绘画极其热爱和投入，当停止绘画后，他很慷慨地把自己的装备送给作者，包括他最喜欢的红色工具箱。通过绘画，作者与乔治建立了长达25年的友谊。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“有一天，乔治打电话来，要我去他家，说他有事要问我。”可知，第一段可描写作者到乔治家后，两人的交流内容。
②由第二段首句内容“所以乔治把他所有的绘画设备都留给了我。”可知，第二段可描写作者使用乔治给他的绘画设备的情况。
2.续写线索：去乔治家——与乔治交流——乔治放弃画画——赠送绘画设备——作者使用设备——睹物思人
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①放弃：give up/quit
②决定：decide/make a decision
③使用：use/take advantage of
情绪类
①慷慨的：generous/munificent
②鼓励：encouragement/hearten
[高分句型1] While his dear wife Dorothy served tea and cake, George explained that he was giving up painting and giving away all his ‘stuff’. (运用了while引导的时间状语从句和that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] He was mistaken about his painting ability because he had turned out some unique and wonderful works. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
[高分句型3] After considerable persuasion, I accepted this precious gift, insisting that he could reclaim it at any time. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)