初中英语中考书面表达复习叙事描写类写作指导
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写作指导
【注意事项】
叙事描写类的书面表达是以叙述和描写为主要表达方式，以写人、叙事和经历、写物、绘景等为主要内容的文体：
这一类的书面表达动词使用率最高，且富于变化，用得最多的是动词的过去时态，其他各种时态为辅。合理使用丰富多彩的动词时态是这类书面表达的首要语言特征。人物类书面表达如果是对人的性格、外貌等叙述常用一般现在时，如果通过事件来刻画人物的性格，那么就要用过去时。写好这类书面表达要注意以下几点：
1.头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好书面表达，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都要围绕五个＂W＂和一个＂H＂来展开，分别是why, what, when, where, who及how。
2.突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的一步。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写或粗述那些非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而会使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。
3.用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的叙事描写类书面表达的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事物描写得具体生动。
【常用表达】
1.Among various kinds of things/persons in my mind ...is the most unforgettable one.
2.On a sunny/rainy morning, while I was...First of all...Then ...After that...In the end ...
3.He/she/this was one of the most meaningful/enjoyable/unforgettable persons/things that I have ever met/ experienced,I will remember him/her forever.
【加分句子】
1.Sth impressed me greatly...
2.What impressed me most is that...
【经典句型】
1.Last Sunday（Saturday...）, it was sunny（rainy, windy, foggy）
2.I got up very early （late）.After breakfast I went to with my friends by bike, bus...
3.We enjoyed ourselves.
4.We forgot the time.We didn’t come back until 5 o’clock.
5.We all felt very tired, but we were happy.
6.I thought I would never forget this trip.
7.Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays.
8.We visited a lot of places of interest.
9.We had a good time there.
10.We bought a lot of things.The clothes here are good and cheap.
【写作模板】
一、人物类
主要通过刻画人物性格，塑造人物形象，反映生活，表现主题。
二、写景状物类
通过对事物和景点的描述表现主题。文章宜采用总—分—总的结构或总—分的结构，
【写作例文】
例文1：
An Experience of Overcoming Difficulties
Everyone has encountered many difficulties in their life.So have I.I remembered that was a geography exam.Before the exam, I really prepared for it carefully.I went over the book every day.But when I got the mark, I nearly cried.It was only 20, and the full score was 100.I felt so sad and even wanted to give up my study.
My friend saw this and helped me a lot.He told me the right way to learn geography.With his help and encouragement, I cheered myself up.
It’s a fact that everyone can meet difficulties in his or her life.The most important thing is to find a right way and never give up.
例文2：
My Happiness
Everyone has his or her own happy thing.So do I.
It was a sunny and hot day.After having four classes, I felt very hungry.So I decided to buy something to eat in the market.When I waited in line, I suddenly found that I forgot to take any money with me.Then I had to go back to my classroom with hunger.After a while, I saw a man coming into my classroom.That was my father who carried a box in his left hand.He came to me and said, “You must be hungry, dear.I forgot to give you money this morning.Eat now.” I felt so warm at that moment.It deeply touched me.
Sometimes, maybe a common, small thing would make me happy.And that is my happiness.
例文3：
Life is full of beauty
Life is full of beauty.I will never forget the day which makes me feel meaningful.
My best friend Lucy and I always ride bikes together after school.One day, I waited a long time but didn’t see her.Then I searched for her in the corner of our school.She was crying at that time.She told me that she was nervous because she would have an English test.I decided to help her with English.That evening, I helped her review the key points and notes.Two days later, she told me that she passed it.I felt so happy.
Helping others is the beauty of life.
例文4：
My Favorite Saying
My favorite saying is, “Only your real friends will tell you when your face is dirty”.It makes me think of my best friend.Her name is Li Xia.She’s serious about everything.She really cares about me and always tells me about my bad points to my face.Once, I couldn’t answer some difficult questions in a math test, so I opened the book and then wrote them down.Luckily, no one saw me.But after the test, Li Xia said she saw me open the book.She thought that it was not right for me to do that.My face turned red.Then she took out her notebook and showed me how to work out the problems.This is my best friend—a serious and caring girl.
例文5：
Me and my after-class course
In my school, there are many kinds of after-class courses.I choose the course of DIY.DIY literally means making things by hand.
My first assignment was to use the colored bubble mud commonly used by primary school students now, paste a colored blessing on the small board, and then make a frame with colored wool.Because I think everyone has a different understanding of happiness.I made a word Fu into color.It’s quite a test of a person’s patience to do some simple handicrafts, such as cross stitch, folding thousand paper crane...
Through this study, I learned that we can make handmade in many ways.Waste beverage bottles, wool, ice cream sticks and so on can become raw materials for handmade.We can create our own satisfactory works through our own imagination.
例文6：
I Learned How to Learn English Well
At the beginning of middle school, I always got bad grades in English.I was very upset and didn’t know how to learn it well.
One day, my English teacher talked to me and understood my problem.She gave me some advice like speaking more.From that day, I made an English study plan.First, I listened to English songs or watched English movies.Second, I listened to teacher in class carefully and took notes.Thirdly, I took part in the English corner.I communicated with others as much as possible in English.Finally, I have great progress in English.
From this experience, I know that when you face some difficulties, don’t give up easily.You should find some ways to deal with them.You will success one day.
