高考英语写作专题 旅游观光

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给报刊投稿
(2021·天津卷3月)假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等);
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)；
(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意：(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin





【范文】
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Sichuan Prvince is lcated in the suthwestern part f China. It enjys many wrld­famus places f interest, such as Jiuzhai Valley and Dujiangyan Irrigatin System.
Jiuzhai Valley Natinal Park is a nature reserve in the nrth f Sichuan Prvince. ①What is the mst impressive is its many multi­level waterfalls and clurful lakes. ②What's mre, walking in the nature reserve, yu have a chance t see rare animals like giant pandas and glden mnkeys. There are als many species f rare plants prtected there. Anther famus scenic spt is Dujiangyan Irrigatin System. It dates frm ver 2，000 years ag. ③Hwever, it is still playing an imprtant part in irrigatin tday.
Sichuan is a wnderful place. I'm sure the visitrs will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiuzhai Valley as well as the cnstructin f Dujiangyan Irrigatin System.
点评：
1. 词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如be lcated in, wrld­famus, places f interest, a nature reserve, impressive, multi­level waterfalls, have a chance t d sth., rare animals, scenic spt, date frm, play an imprtant part in, be amazed by 等。
2. 句式美：①句What is the mst impressive是What引导的主语从句。
②句walking in the nature reserve是动词­ing形式短语作状语，t see rare animals是不定式作后置定语。
③句中的Hwever表示转折关系。此外，文中多处巧妙运用适当的衔接词语，比如What's mre表示递进关系；such as, like表示列举等。
练习：
(2021·浙江杭州二中模拟)假定你是李华。上周你校组织了嘉兴南湖一日游学活动。请你给校报英文版投稿，介绍该活动。内容包括：
1. 活动时间、参加人员；
2. 游学活动安排(坐游船、参观纪念馆等)；
3. 活动反响。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：Memrial Hall纪念馆





【参考范文】
Last week, ur schl rganised a ne­day study tur in Nanhu, Jiaxing. All the teachers and students f ur schl tk part in the activity. On Wednesday, we gathered at the schl gate at 7 'clck in the mrning, and then went there by bus.
In rder t review the histry f the funding f the Party and appreciate the spirit f the Red Bat, we tk a cruise ship and visited the Memrial Hall. We listened carefully t the teacher's explanatin f the histry f the Party Building.
One hundred years ag, the lder generatin made cntinuus effrts t revitalise China, which made us very mved. We will wrk harder fr the happiness f mankind in the future.
Ⅱ. 读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Vacatin with My Mther
I had an interesting childhd. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because f my mther — lving, sweet, yet absent­minded and frgetful. One strange family trip we tk when I was eleven tells us a lt abut her.[悬念1]
My tw sets f grandparents lived in Clrad and Nrth Dakta, and my parents decided t spend a few weeks driving t thse states and seeing all the sights alng the way. As the first day f ur trip apprached, David, my eight­year­ld brther, and I unwillingly said gdbye t all f ur friends. Wh knew if we'd ever see them again! Finally, the mment f ur departure arrived, and we laded suitcases, bks, games, camping equipment, and a tent int the car and bravely drve ff. We bravely drve ff again tw hurs later after we'd returned hme t get the purse and traveller's checks Mum had frgtten.[悬念2]
David and I were always a little nervus when using gas statin bathrms if Mum was driving while Dad slept. “Yu stand utside the dr and play lkut (放哨) while I g, and I will stand utside the dr and play lkut while yu g.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Hney, where are the kids？” “What？！ Oh, I thught they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren't abut t take any chances.
On the furth r fifth night, we had truble finding a htel with a vacancy (空房间). After driving in vain fr sme time, Mum suddenly gt a great idea: Why didn't we find a huse with a likely­lking backyard and asked if we culd set up tent there? David and I became nervus.[悬念3] T ur great relief, Dad turned dwn the idea. Mum never culd understand ur bjectins (反对). If a strange family shwed up n her frnt drstep, Mum wuld have been delighted. She thinks everyne in the wrld is as nice as she is. We finally fund a vacancy in the next twn.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
The next day we remembered the brand new (崭新) tent we brught with us.


We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f sights alng the way.


一、理清文章大意
关键：Wh: the authr's family
Where: n the jurney
When: when the authr was eleven
What: They drve t Clrad and Nrth Dakta.
Hw: The authr experienced many strange and interesting things.
大意：本文叙述了作者的母亲很健忘，一家四口自驾旅游去祖父母和外祖父母所居住的地方，途中发生了很多有趣的事情。
二、挖掘文中悬念点
悬念1思考：为什么作者说他们的家庭旅游是奇怪的？
悬念2思考：为什么作者说他们勇敢地开车离开？
悬念3思考：作者和大卫为什么紧张？
三、分析段落开头语
段首句1思考：
①他们带帐篷了吗？
②妈妈是健忘的，途中会不会有什么麻烦？
③假如爸爸不在场，孩子们会怎样？
段首句2思考：
①他们带的帐篷会发挥作用吗？
②野营时，妈妈会怎么做？
③作者对这次旅行的感悟是什么？
通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：
Paragraph 1：没有忘记带帐篷→妈妈健忘把爸爸丢了→妈妈决定路边露营等他→孩子们害怕→母爱
Paragraph 2：露营→母爱的力量→见到了爸爸→作者的感悟
The next day we remembered the brand new(崭新) tent we brught with us. We were happy t see it all still packed, and hped it wuld be packed frever. Hwever, things came t its turning pint. Mum lst Dad in the gas statin when we were sleeping. What's mre, as the dark apprached, we met the same truble again. Fearful as Mum was, she decided t camp near the rad waiting fr Dad. The wind blew wildly like a mnster. Tears tk cntrl f us. Mum embraced us tightly singing a sft sng, which really relaxed us. We didn't meet Dad in the last few days, but we felt cmfrtable staying with Mum.
We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f sights alng the way. The tent became a clse friend then. Every time we camped, Mum wuld read a bk r sing a sft sng. The warmth f her arms never faded away in my memry. Thugh she was frgetful, laughter accmpanied us alng the way. We finally met pr Dad in ur destinatin. This trip made me realise that lve may have many ways, but it can always warm peple in the dark.
1. 使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。
①frever暗示作者不喜欢露营。
②the same表明途中爸爸走散了，他们不得不黑夜路边露营。
③blew wildly like a mnster烘托了让作者害怕的自然环境。
④pr一词照应Mum lst Dad，在孩子的眼里，妈妈因为健忘把爸爸弄丢了，爸爸好可怜。
2. 词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。
①still, things cme t its turning pint, apprach, take cntrl f, embrace, fade away, accmpany等堪称经典。
②Fearful as Mum was是as引导的让步状语从句的倒装结构。
③which really relaxed us为which引导的非限制性定语从句。
④staying with Mum为动词­ing形式作状语。