湖南高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信

感谢信/祝贺信

1．假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛(Chinese Traditional Culture Contest)”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信,内容包括：

1.表示祝贺；

2.回顾他的付出和努力；

3.期待他为弘扬中国文化做出贡献。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Peter,

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

2．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Kevin来信说他在“留学生汉字书法竞赛Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students”取得了第一名的好成绩。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示祝贺；

2. 肯定他的成绩和努力；

3. 期待与他交流学习心得。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式作答。

Dear Kevin,

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

3．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack在你因疫情居家学习期间经常在网上帮你辅导英语，鼓励你积极面对疫情、学习和生活。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1. 回顾帮助并感谢；

2. 邀请来中国游玩；

3. 表达期待。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：流行病 epidemic；疫情 epidemic situation；新型冠状病毒肺炎COVID-19(Corona Virus Disease 2019)

Dear Jack,

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

4．假如你是李华，在英国做交换生时曾患病住院，寄宿家庭房东Eric给予你悉心照料，并经常辅导你功课。你现已回国，请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示感谢；

2. 回顾帮助；

3. 邀请来中国游玩。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Eric,

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

5．假定你是校学生会成员李华，你校学生会组织了图书捐赠及互换活动，外教 Smith 捐赠了许多英文图书 。请你代表学生会给他写一封邮件 ，内容包括:

1. 表达感激之情;

2. 回顾活动以及 Smith 给予的帮助。

注意:

1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;

2. 请按如下格式作答。

Dear Smith,

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

6．假如你是韩梅梅，你的朋友李磊被北大录取，请你写一封祝贺信，内容包括：

1.表示祝贺；

2.肯定他的努力和付出；

3.表达祝愿。

注意：1.写作词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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7．假如你是一名失学儿童，名叫李华，你有幸得到在中国工作的Mr. Brown的资助，可以重返校园。你给Mr. Brown写了一封信，内容如下：

★在老师的帮助下，学习有了很大的进步，受到老师的表扬和鼓励;

★决心更加努力学习，取得更大的进步;

★盼望见到Mr. Brown，希望他寄来一张照片。

注意：1.书信应包括以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

2.词数：80左右(所给出的开头和结尾不计算在字数内)

Dear Mr. Brown,

I am writing to express my deepest gratitude for the money and books you sent me. I could not have returned to school without your help. Thank you so much.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thank you again for your generous help and best wishes!

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

8．假设你是晨光中学高三学生李华。你的美国笔友Chris得知你即将迎来18岁生日，走向成年，特发来邮件向你表示祝贺。请根据以下要点，给他回复，内容包括：

1.表达感谢；

2.打算如何过这个特别的生日（做疫情防控志愿者、去养老院陪伴老人）；

3.你对成年的感悟及未来规划。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

参考词汇： 疫情防控epidemic prevention and control；   养老院nursing home

Dear Chris,

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

9．假设你是李明,刚从学校安排的“英国行”返回北京。请给在英国时借住的家庭写一封信, 信的内容主要包括:

1.你已安全返回北京；

2.感谢他们在英国期间的热情接待；

3.邀请他们来北京游览。

注意:

1.词数100左右, 开头语已为你写好；

2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称

Dear Mr and Mrs Johnson:

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

10．假设你是李华，要参加学校的英语征文活动。这次征文要求大家给一位历史人物写感谢信，感谢他（她）为人类的进步所做出的贡献。内容请包括：

1. 历史人物的名字及其贡献；

2. 该人物对你的影响和启发；

3. 你对他（她）表达感谢。

注意：词数80词左右。

Dear ________,

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thank you again, and best regards!

Yours,

Li Hua

1．[参考范文]

Dear Peter,

Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.

It came as no surprise, for you are keenly interested in Chinese culture and have been continuously exploring it. Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but also you consulted many locals and professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture.

Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信表示祝贺。

【详解】1.词汇积累

赢得：win→bear off

强烈的：keenly→intense

精通：good command of→proficiency in

致力于：devote oneself to→ commit oneself to

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.

拓展句：Because I have Learned your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.

【点睛】【高分句型1】 Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but also you consulted many locals and professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture.（运用了倒装句，非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world.（运用and连接并列句，省略连词的宾语从句）

2．One possible version:

Dear Kevin,

Learning that you have won the first place in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students, pretty excited, I’m writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.

Just as the saying goes, you reap what you sow. It’s your passion and hard work that contribute to your winning! Interested in Chinese culture, you have long been devoted to Calligraphy, learning from masters and keeping practicing every day. How I wish you could share your experience and reflection with me as I am eager to get my Calligraphy improved!

Once again, congratulations on your splendid achievement. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国朋友Kevin来信说他在“留学生汉字书法竞赛Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students”取得了第一名的好成绩，要求考生写一封邮件表示祝贺。

【详解】1.词汇积累

相当、非常：pretty → quite

表达：express → convey

促成：contribute to → lead to

极佳的、非常好的：splendid →unexceptionable

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Learning that you have won the first place in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students, pretty excited, I’m writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.

拓展句：The fact that you have won the first place in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students makes me quite excited, which is also the reason why I am writing this letter to you.

【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s your passion and hard work that contribute to your winning!(运用了强调句式)

【高分句型2】How I wish you could share your experience and reflection with me as I am eager to get my Calligraphy improved!(运用了感叹句和as引导的原因状语从句)

3．范文一：

Dear Jack,

I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your generous assistance during my stay at home because of the epidemic situation.

Without your timely help with my English online, I couldn’t have got along with my English study. Besides, it was your constant encouragement and positive attitude towards life that enabled me to go through the tough time. Now I sincerely invite you to come to China, whose breathtaking scenery and splendid culture will surely guarantee an enjoyable journey.

Thank you again. Looking forward to your arrival.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

范文二：

Dear Jack,

I’m writing to convey my heartfelt gratitude to you for your generous assistance during my stay at home because of the epidemic situation.

Never will I forget your practical and patient guidance on my English online, which made it possible for me to make great progress in English study. Additionally, if it hadn’t been for your devotion and constant encouragement, I wouldn’t have been so positive to my study and life. In return for your kindness, I’d like to invite you to travel in China next summer vacation.

Thanks again for all your help. Looking forward to your arrival.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本文是一篇应用文。假如考生是李华，你的英国笔友Jack在你因疫情居家学习期间经常在网上帮你辅导英语，鼓励你积极面对疫情、学习和生活。请你给他写一封电子邮件。

【详解】1.词汇积累

表达：express→convey

真挚的：heartfelt→sincere

此外：besides→furthermore

帮助：help→aid

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your generous assistance during my stay at home because of the epidemic situation.

拓展句：I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for what you help during my stay at home because of the epidemic situation.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Without your timely help with my English online, I couldn’t have got along with my English study.(运用了含蓄型虚拟语气)

[高分句型2]Now I sincerely invite you to come to China, whose breathtaking scenery and splendid culture will surely guarantee an enjoyable journey.(运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)

4．Dear Eric,

I’ve returned to China, and your kindness has always warmed me. So I’m writing to express my gratitude to you for your great help with my exchange program.

What impressed me most was what you did for me when I was in hospital. In my life, you attended to me like my parents, which soon eased my anxiety and made me feel at home. In my study, you patiently tutored me. Without you, I couldn’t have made great progress in my courses.

Many thanks again. I do hope you will come to China to have a nice trip where you can witness the perfect combination of culture and nature in person.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给寄宿家庭房东Eric写一封电子邮件，表示对他给予你的照顾的感谢。

【详解】1.词汇积累

感谢：gratitude→thanks

照顾：attend to→ look after

减轻：ease→lighten

旅行：trip→ journey

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Without you, I couldn’t have made great progress in my courses.

拓展句：If you had not helped me, I couldn’t have made great progress in my courses.

【点睛】【高分句型1】What impressed me most was what you did for me when I was in hospital.（运用了what引导的主语从句，what引导的表语从句和when引导的时间状语从句）

【高分句型2】In my life, you attended to me like my parents, which soon eased my anxiety and made me feel at home.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

5．Dear Smith,

On behalf of the student Union, I’m writing to express our heartfelt gratitude for your generous donation of so many English books.

Last Friday, we organized a book donation and exchange event. Many students and teachers took an active part in it. It’s so kind of you to bring books covering a wide range of topics. Besides, the books you donated were very popular, all of which were taken away in a short time. There is no denying that your generosity and contribution made a big difference to our event, which turned out to be a great success.

Thank you once again for your support.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语给外教Smith 写一封电子邮件，向他介绍图书捐赠及互换活动，并对他给予的爱心捐赠表示感谢。

【详解】1.词汇积累

由衷的：heartfelt →profound

参加：take part in →participate in

不可否认：no denying  →no doubt

伟大的：big → great

2.句式拓展

简单句变并列句

原句：Last Friday, we organized a book donation and exchange event.

拓展句：Last Friday, not only did we organize a book donation but also we have an exchange event.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, the books you donated were very popular. all of which were taken away in a short time. （运用了介词加which引导的定语从句）

【高分句型2】There is no denying that your generosity and contribution made a big difference to our event,which turned out to be a great success.（运用了that引导的同位语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

6．Dear Li Lei,

I’m writing to convey my heartfelt congratulations on your receiving the offer from Peking University. I feel more than glad for you as it’s a golden chance to learn from the great minds.

But indeed no one could have been more deserving of it than you, because I know you have been studying for many years. It is your diligence, perseverance and effective learning methods that stand you out in the crowd. It is a real encouragement to see your efforts paid off.

Wish you greater progress and further success at university in the future.

Yours,

Han Meimei

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“朋友李磊被北大录取”一事写一封祝贺信，内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.肯定他的努力和付出；3.表达祝愿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

表达：convey→express

衷心的、真诚的：heartfelt→sincere/genuine

高兴的：glad→delighted

机会：chance→opportunity

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：It is a real encouragement to see your efforts paid off.

拓展句：There is no doubt that it is a real encouragement to see your efforts paid off.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I feel more than glad for you as it’s a golden chance to learn from the great minds. (运用了as引导的原因状语从句)

【高分句型2】It is your diligence, perseverance and effective learning methods that stand you out in the crowd. (运用了强调句型)

7．Dear Mr. Brown,

I am writing to express my deepest gratitude for the money and books you sent me. I could not have returned to school without your help. Thank you so much.

I have been working hard since I went back to school. I have made great progress in my studies with the help of my teachers. They often praise me and encourage me. But for your help, I might have left school and couldn’t have got such a good education. I have made up my mind to study harder and make greater progress.

How are you getting on with your life and work? I would like to meet you in person, but I have no opportunity to do so. Would you please send me a photo of yourself?

Thank you again for your generous help and best wishes!

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生以一名失学儿童的身份给在中国工作的Mr. Brown写一封感谢信，感谢他对自己的资助。

【详解】1.词汇积累

进展；进行：get on with→get along with

机会：opportunity→chance

决心；决定：make up one’s mind→determine

表达：express→voice

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I would like to meet you in person, but I have no opportunity to do so.

拓展句：Though I would like to meet you in person, I have no opportunity to do so.

【点睛】【高分句型1】But for your help, I might have left school and couldn’t have got such a good education.(运用了含蓄的虚拟语气)

【高分句型2】I have been working hard since I went back to school.(运用了since引导的时间状语从句)

8．Dear Chris,

I'm more than delighted to hear from you. Thank you for congratulating me on my eighteenth birthday. I'm very happy about it.

As I am about to become an adult, I plan to do something special on this special birthday, such as volunteering for epidemic prevention and control and accompanying the elderly in the nursing home. All of these can contribute to the society and bring happiness to myself, which is very meaningful. Being an adult means not only more freedom, but also more responsibility, which requires me to make a plan for my future as an adult. First of all, I hope to major in medicine in college, because the profession of doctor can heal the wounded and save the dying. Secondly, I hope I can take better care of my family and not let my parents worry.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是晨光中学高三学生李华。你的美国笔友Chris得知你即将迎来18岁生日，走向成年，特发来邮件向你表示祝贺。给他回信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：delighted→happy

有意义的：meaningful→significative

首先：first of all→in the first place

照顾：take care of→look after

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Thank you for congratulating me on my eighteenth birthday. I'm very happy about it.

拓展句：Thank you for congratulating me on my eighteenth birthday，which I'm very happy about .

【点睛】【高分句型1】

As I am about to become an adult, I plan to do something special on this special birthday, such as volunteering for epidemic prevention and control and accompanying the elderly in the nursing home.（运用了as引导时间状语从句，不定式作宾语，动名词作宾语）

【高分句型2】

All of these can contribute to the society and bring happiness to myself, which is very meaningful.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）

9．Dear Mr and Mrs Johnson:

I'm writing to tell you that I had a safe journey back to Beijing. Thanks to your hospitality, I had a wonderful time in England. It was my first time to go abroad and I was naturally bit nervous when I first arrived. When I saw you at the airport, however, I knew from your warm smile of welcome that everything would be all right. With Jenny's help, I visited so many places of interest in England, which leaves me quite a good memory. I hope some day you will come to visit Beijing and I can return your kindness.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于刚从学校安排的“英国行”返回北京这一情况，给在英国时借住的家庭写一封信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

多亏，由于：Thanks to→ owing to

紧张的：nervous → stressed out

拜访：visited→ pay a visit to

希望：hope→ wish

2.句式拓展

简单句变强调句

原句：It was my first time to go abroad and I was naturally bit nervous when I first arrived.

强调句：It was the first time that I went abroad and I was naturally bit nervous when I first arrived.

【点睛】【高分句型1】With Jenny's help, I visited so many places of interest in England, which leaves me quite a good memory.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】When I saw you at the airport, however, I knew from your warm smile of welcome that everything would be all right.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句。）

10．Dear Li Shizhen,

I am Li Hua, a high school student. I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion.

You are a scholar and doctor of the Ming dynasty. You are also one of the most important figures in China’s medical community. Your famous book, Compendium of Materia Medica, which cost you years of effort, has been regarded as the most complete and comprehensive medical work in the history of Chinese medicine. What impressed me most is your perseverance shown in your career. Encouraged by you, I’m determined to work harder for my dream.

I can never express my thankfulness too much for your selfless contribution.

Thank you again, and best regards!

                                                                                                                                                    Yours,

                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给一位历史人物写一封感谢信，感谢他（她）为人类的进步所做出的贡献。

【详解】1.词汇积累

诚挚的：sincere→genuine

重要的：important→significant

著名的：famous→well-known

决定做某事：be determined to do sth.→decide to do sth.

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：You are a scholar and doctor of the Ming dynasty.

拓展句：As everyone knows, you are a scholar and doctor of the Ming dynasty.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Your famous book, Compendium of Materia Medica, which cost you years of effort, has been regarded as the most complete and comprehensive medical work in the history of Chinese medicine. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】What impressed me most is your perseverance shown in your career. (运用了what引导的主语从句)