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浙江高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

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这是一份浙江高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共15页。

建议信

1．假如你是李华，你的外国网友Jack沉迷于手机游戏不能自拔，写信向你求助，请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：

1.表示理解与关心；

2.分析手机游戏可能存在的不良影响；

3.提出具体建议。

注意：addiction to 对……的瘾

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

2．假如你是高中生李华，你的美国笔友Alice准备明年来你校做交换生，写信向你咨询如何学习中文，请你用英语给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示欢迎；

2. 提出学习中文的建议（不少于两条）；

3. 期待与祝福。

注意：1词数80左右；

2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

3．假定你是李华，你的朋友 Tom 最近沉迷于抖音(Tik Tok)，你很担心他，请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括：

1. 简述其危害：对健康有害，影响学习；

2. 提出建议：严格控制玩手机时间，参加课外活动等；

3. 表达信心。

注意: 1. 词数 80 词左右；

2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

Yours,

Li Hua

4．假设你叫李华, 你的朋友John沉迷于抖音(Tik Tok) 而不能自拔, 写信向你寻求帮助, 请你给他回一封电子邮件. 内容包括:

1. 表示理解和关心,

2. 提出抖音的危害;

3. 提出具体建议,

要求. 1. 词数 100 左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯

5．假设你是高二学生李华，你的留学生好友Mark体重超重。请根据自己经验，给Mark写一封邮件，给他提一些建议。内容包括：

1.表示关切；

2.提供建议；

3.表达祝愿。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mark,

Yours,

Lihua

6．假定你是李华，你的好友Mike最近在考虑是否要来中国留学，他来信寻求你的意见。请你就此用英语给他写一封回信，内容包括：

1.你的建议；

2.说明原因。

注意：写作词数应为80左右。

7．假如你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的交换生Jack对中国书法很感兴趣，想要学书法，希望你推荐一位书法老师。请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信，内容包括：

1.写信目的；

2.推荐的理由；

3.表达祝愿。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参加词汇：书法calligraphy

8．假定你是李华，你校的英国交换生Jason准备参加为外国人举办的“讲中国成语故事比赛”（Chinese Idiom Story Competition），他发邮件向你求助。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1.答应帮助；

2.提供建议；

3.表达祝愿。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

9．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Eric打算暑假到中国旅游，希望你介绍一个值得去的旅游城市。请你用英语给他写一封回信。要点包括：

1.简要介绍该城市

2.该城市吸引人之处

3.你的期待

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

10．假定你是李华，刚从敦煌莫高窟旅游回来，你看到莫高窟受到了自然和人为的破坏，为此感到心痛。因此，你给当地政府写了封邮件，希望当地政府能够采取措施保护这宝贵的文化遗产。

内容包括：

1. 莫高窟现状：受到破坏;

2. 保护文化遗产的重要性;

3. 你的建议。

注意：1. 词数80左右;

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：敦煌莫高窟Dunhuang Mogao Grottoes

1．One possible version:

Dear Jack,

I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from addiction to mobile phone games. Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about mobile phone games, which distract them from studies. Besides, it causes a lack of sleep, posing a threat to their health.

Therefore, to avoid it, I recommend you to manage your time wisely and responsibly. The less time you spent on online gaming, the less likely it is you will be addicted. Moreover, if I were you, I would prefer to engage with family and friends outdoors rather than sit on the couch looking down at your phone.

I do hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. Looking forward to your good news.

Best Wishes!

Yours

Lihua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国网友Jack写封电子邮件，对他沉迷于手机游戏不能自拔表示理解与关心，分析手机游戏可能存在的不良影响，提出具体建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

事实上：actually→in fact

另外：besides→moreover

导致：cause→lead to

因此：therefore→hence

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Therefore, to avoid it, I recommend you to manage your time wisely and responsibly.

拓展句：Therefore, to avoid it, I recommend that you should manage your time wisely and responsibly.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from addiction to mobile phone games. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about mobile phone games, which distract them from studies. (运用了that引导的主语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)

2．Dear Alice,

Welcome to be an exchange student at our school next year. As to how to learn Chinese, here come my tips.

First, you might as well take a Chinese course to lay a solid foundation. What’s more, it is a wise choice to pick up proper Chinese TV programs, which will enable you to access standard and authentic Chinese. Plus, befriending warm-hearted Chinese friends around you is sure to better your oral Chinese. Meanwhile, it can enrich your knowledge of Chinese customs. Finally, I suggest you try e-mailing me in Chinese.

I hope my suggestions above may benefit you. Hope you will make sufficient progress in Chinese soon. I am looking forward to your arrival.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Alice回一封电子邮件，内容包括表示对Alice的欢迎，提出学汉语的建议并表达期待和祝福。

【详解】1.词汇积累

关于：as to →as for

此外：what’s more →besides

汉语口语：oral Chinese →spoken Chinese

建议：suggestion →advice

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：First, you might as well take a Chinese course to lay a solid foundation.

拓展句：First, you might as well take a Chinese course to lay a solid foundation, which I think is quite essential for improving your Chinese.

【点睛】【高分句型1】What’s more, it is a wise choice to pick up proper Chinese TV programs, which will enable you to access standard and authentic Chinese.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Plus, befriending warm-hearted Chinese friends around you is sure to better your oral Chinese.（运用了动名词短语作主语）

3．Dear Tom,

I’m sorry to hear that you’re so addicted to Tik Tok that you feel painful. I really understand how you feel. Addiction to Tic Tok is bad to your health and affect your study. Therefore, I’d like to offer you some advice that I think may be helpful to you.

First of all, I recommend that you（should）learn to control yourself and make good use of your time to work hard. Secondly, it’s better for you to take part in some extracurricular activities, which can not only keep you healthy but also enrich your life. Last but not least, you have to develop other hobbies that can help you forget Tik Tok.

I hope these suggestions can help you get rid of your addiction as soon as possible.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】这是一篇应用文。假如你是李华，你的朋友 Tom 最近沉迷于抖音(Tik Tok)，你很担心他，请你给他写一封邮件，告诉沉迷抖音的危害，并提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

沉迷：are addicted to → are obsessed with

有帮助：be helpful to → of great help to

首先：first of all → to start with →firstly/ in the first place

推荐：recommend → suggest /advise /propose

使丰富：enrich your life→ make your life rich

好好利用：make good use of → take advantage of

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Secondly, it’s better for you to take part in some extracurricular activities

拓展句：Thirdly, it’s better that you should take part in some extracurricular activities

【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear that you’re so addicted to Tik Tok that you feel painful.（运用了结果状语从句）

【高分句型2】First of all, I recommend that you（should）learn to control yourself and make good use of your time to work hard. （运用了虚拟语气）

【高分句型3】 Secondly, it’s better for you to take part in some extracurricular activities, which can not only keep you healthy but also enrich your life.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

4．Dear John.

Hope my letter finds you well. Sorry to hear that you are trapped in the addiction to Tik Tok, I can’t wait to express my concern and offer my suggestions.

It is easy for teenagers to get addicted to short videos. However, not only will they change the way of thinking, they will also damage the ability of concentration. So when you want to relax yourself, choose a healthier way. Sports, reading and watching long videos like documentary will be a better choice.

Hopefully, you will free yourself from addiction to Tik Tok. Wish you a meaningful and fruitful life.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“朋友John沉迷于抖音(Tik Tok) 而不能自拔”，写一封电子邮件，提供建议和帮助。内容包括：表示理解和关心、提出抖音的危害以及提出具体建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

表达：express → convey

提供：offer → provide

建议：suggestion → tip/advice

沉溺于：be/get addicted to→ be obsessed with

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Sorry to hear that you are trapped in the addiction to Tik Tok, I can’t wait to express my concern and offer my suggestions.

拓展句：I’m awfully sorry to hear that you are trapped in the addiction to Tik Tok, and I can’t wait to express my concern and offer my suggestions.

【点睛】【高分句型1】However, not only will they change the way of thinking. they will also damage the ability of concentration. （运用了部分倒装的句型。）

【高分句型2】 So when you want to relax yourself, choose a healthier way. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句）

5．Dear Mark,

Concerned to learn that you are overweight, I’m writing to give you some suggestions based on own experience for your consideration.

Firstly, it’s essential for you to cut down on your calories intake while keeping a balanced diet, including proper amount of protein, vitamins and sugar. In addition, it’s a good idea to do some sport on a regular basis, such as jogging and swimming, which can not only help you burn calories but also help you keep fit. All in all, only by forming a good eating habit and keeping working out can you lose weight and have a nice figure.

Hope my suggestions are of help to you and you’ll lose your weight safely and steadily.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给留学生好友Mark写一封邮件，给他提一些注意健康的建议。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

给，提供：give → offer

建议：suggestion→ advice

必需的：essential → necessary

减少：cut down → reduce

2. 句式拓展

简单句变为复合句

原句：Concerned to learn that you are overweight, I’m writing to give you some suggestions based on own experience for your consideration.

拓展句：Concerned to learn that you are overweight, I’m writing to give you some suggestions, which are based on own experience for your consideration.

【点睛】【高分句型1】

Firstly, it’s essential for you to cut down on your calories intake while keeping a balanced diet, including proper amount of protein, vitamins and sugar. （运用了it作形式主语和状语从句的省略）

【高分句型2】

All in all, only by forming a good eating habit and keeping working out can you lose weight and have a nice figure.（运用了部分倒装）

6．Dear Mike,

I’ve learned that you’re hesitant about whether to come to China for further study. Personally, I hope you can study in China. Here are the reasons.

First, China has many great universities where you can literally get good education. Plus, by studying in China you can get a better understanding of Chinese language and culture, which, in turn, makes you to be a better global citizen and thus be more competitive in job hunting. Better still, varieties of delicious food will definitely make your life wonderful.

I hope my suggestion can be helpful to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Mike写一封回信，就他是否要来中国留学给出自己的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

得知：learn→hear

希望：hope→wish

好的：good→nice

此外：plus→besides

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Here are the reasons.

拓展句：Here are the reasons, which I hope are useful to you.

【点睛】【高分句型1】First, China has many great universities where you can literally get good education. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】Plus, by studying in China you can get a better understanding of Chinese language and culture, which, in turn, makes you to be a better global citizen and thus be more competitive in job hunting. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

7．Dear Jack,

Delighted to know that you are interested in learning Chinese calligraphy, I’m writing to recommend my calligraphy teacher, Mr. Wang, to you.

Mr. Wang is a suitable person for you. For one thing, he is a skilled calligrapher with rich teaching experience, from whom you can get professional guidance. For another, with gentle and patient personalities, he is popular with his students. The most important factor is that his good command of English will undoubtedly make it convenient for you to communicate with him.

For further information, please don’t hesitate to contact me. Wish you great progress.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的交换生Jack对中国书法很感兴趣，想要学书法，希望你推荐一位书法老师。请给他写一封回信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

对……感兴趣：be interested in→have interest in

熟练的：skilled→experienced

重要的：important→significant

精通：good command of→good knowledge of

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：For another, with gentle and patient personalities, he is popular with his students.

拓展句：For another, because he has gentle and patient personalities, he is popular with his students.

【点睛】【高分句型1】 For one thing, he is a skilled calligrapher with rich teaching experience, from whom you can get professional guidance.（运用了介词+关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】 The most important factor is that his good command of English will undoubtedly make it convenient for you to communicate with him.（运用了that引导表语从句，和it作形式宾语，不定式短语作真正的宾语）

8．Dear Jason,

Knowing that you are participating in the Chinese Idiom Story Competition for foreigners, I am more than glad to help.

Here are some suggestions for you. Firstly, you may choose the most commonly used idioms from interesting stories. Besides, I advise fully digging into their meanings and origins to explore their cultural history, which will help make your storytelling highly interesting and impressive.

I hope the suggestions can be practical to you. May you enjoy this competition and get a good result.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国交换生Jason回封邮件，给他提一些参加为外国人举办的“讲中国成语故事比赛”的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad→delighted

建议：suggestion→advice

另外：besides→moreover

参加：participate in→take part in

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Firstly, you may choose the most commonly used idioms from interesting stories.

拓展句：Firstly, you may choose idioms that are most commonly used from interesting stories.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are participating in the Chinese Idiom Story Competition for foreigners, I am more than glad to help. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] Besides, I advise fully digging into their meanings and origins to explore their cultural history, which will help make your storytelling highly interesting and impressive. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

9．Dear Eric,

How is it going?

I’m very glad to know that you are going to visit China during your summer holiday. Since China is a big country, I’d like to give you some advice about visiting in China.

I sincerely hope that you can pay a visit to my hometown Xi’an first. Xi’an is the capital of Shanxi Province and also the political, economic and cultural center of the Northwest China. Xi’an is also a world-famous tourist city, a treasure house of cultural relics. Besides all those reasons referred before, you will taste a lot of delicious Chinese food as well.

When you arrive in Xi’an, I will be your tour guide. Trust me you’ll have a wonderful time in Xi’an, China. I’m looking forward to your coming.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Eric打算暑假到中国旅游，希望你介绍一个值得去的旅游城市。请考生用英语给他写一封回信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice→ suggestion

此外：Besides →In addition to

玩的高兴：have a wonderful time→ enjoy oneself

期盼，渴望：look forward to→ long for

2.句式拓展

合并句子

原句：Xi’an is the capital of Shanxi Province and also the political, economic and cultural center of the Northwest China. Xi’an is also a world-famous tourist city, a treasure house of cultural relics.

拓展句：Xi’an is the capital of Shanxi Province and also the political, economic and cultural center of the Northwest China, which is also a world-famous tourist city, a treasure house of cultural relics.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Since China is a big country, I’d like to give you some advice about visiting in China.（运用了since引导的原因状语从句）

【高分句型2】I sincerely hope that you can pay a visit to my hometown Xi’an first.（运用了that连接的宾语从句）

10．Dear Sir,

I have just finished traveling in Dunhuang Mogao Grottocs. The scenery there is really beautiful, but it is suffering from damages due to natural forces such as frequent sand storms. What’s worse, some tourists even carve their names on the walls, making me heartbroken.

I strongly feel it significant to protect cultural heritage. Cultural heritage, which is the witness to the historical development, is an important basis for historical research. So I hope the authorities can take measures to protect Dunhuang Mogao Grottoes, such as raising people’s awareness by handing out leaflets on preserving cultural heritage. Besides, strict regulations should be made to fine spoilers. I would appreciate it if my suggestions could be accepted.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生就莫高窟受到自然和人为破坏的情况给当地政府写一封建议信希望能采取措施保护这宝贵的文化遗产。

【详解】1.词汇积累

由于：due to→because of

重要的：significant→important

提升：raise→improve

此外：besides→what’s more

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：What’s worse, some tourists even carve their names on the walls, making me heartbroken.

拓展句：What’s worse, some tourists even carve their names on the walls, so it makes me heartbroken.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I strongly feel it significant to protect cultural heritage.(运用了it作形式宾语)

【高分句型2】Cultural heritage, which is the witness to the historical development, is an important basis for historical research.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)