浙江高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Charles被一所大学录取，但由于疫情，他正在犹豫是否应该通过网上课程来学习。得知你上过网课，他写信向你寻求建议，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：

1.远程学习的优点和缺点：

2.你的建议。

注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。（疫情：epidemic）

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2．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友David 准备组织一个“人文中国” （Cultural China）的活动，写信向你求助。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1. 推荐中国书法艺术；

2. 提供活动建议；

3. 表达祝愿。

参考词汇：书法calligraphy

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

163．假定你是李华，你的朋友Tony刚刚升入高三，因为寒假时间短，没有休息好，所以现在状态很差。面临高考压力，Tony不知所措。请你给他写一封信表示安慰，要点如下：

1. 表示难过和理解；

2. 就如何调整状态提出建议。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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4．假如你叫李华, 你的美国笔友John将要在下学期作为交换生来你校学习。但是他担心文化习俗、语言交流等问题会影响他在你校的学习生活。请你给他写一封电子邮件提出一些建议。

内容要点如下：1.表示欢迎；

2.给出建议；

3.表达祝愿。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.书信格式已给出（不计入总词数）

Dear John,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

5．假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Tim想在寒假时到中国旅游, 发邮件向你征求旅游建议。请你回复邮件， 内容包括：

1. 推荐一个旅游城市；

2. 给出推荐理由；

3. 表达祝愿。

注意：1. 词数 80 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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6．假定你是李华。你的英国笔友杰克刚刚升入高中，但他一时无法适应新的校园生活，写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封信，内容包括:

1. 表示安慰；

2. 提出建议；

3. 表达期望。

参考词汇：适应 adjust to/adapt to

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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7．假定你是李华，你的新加坡朋友Nancy将于2022年来杭州参加亚运会（the Asian Games），她来信向你咨询如何在短时期内提高汉语口语水平，请你用英语给她写一封回信，提出建议并说明理由，建议如下：

1.多交中国朋友；

2.听中文歌曲、观看中文影片；

3.……

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Nancy,

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Yours,

Li Hua

8．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris 刚刚转学，感到一切很陌生。在邮件中向你询问如何尽快融入新环境。请你根据以下信息回信：

1. 多跟同学交流沟通；2. 积极参加学校活动；3. 向老师寻求帮助。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Chris,

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Yours,

Li Hua

9．假设你是校英文报编辑李华，近期收到一封署名为Anxiety的求助信，在信中Anxiety同学表示由于期中考试临近，压力剧增，吃不好睡不香，导致课堂无法集中精神，苦恼。如何缓解焦虑，走出困境。请用英文给该同学回信，内容要点如下：

1.表示安慰；

2.提出建议；

3.表达祝愿。

注意：1.词数100词左右；

2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.

Dear Anxiety,

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Yours,

Li Hua

10．假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Adam将在下学期来你校就读希望你给他一些建议，以便更好地融入新学校。请你写一封信，内容包括:

1.表示欢迎

2.你的建议

3.你的期待

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1．Dear Charles,

Congratulations on your success! Knowing you are wondering whether it is advisable to take online classes because of the epidemic, I'm writing to offer you some advice.

Admittedly, we can benefit a lot from distance education. For example, we don't need to worry about getting infected with novel coronavirus or getting stuck in traffic. However, distance learning requires self-discipline and thereby is not suitable for students who lack perseverance. Moreover, students do not have opportunities to socialize together, thus making it difficult for us to develop interpersonal skills. Therefore, I suggest you complete your degree at university instead of studying at home.

I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给已经被大学录取正在犹豫是否应该通过网上课程来学习的英国笔友Charles一些建议，就网课学习谈谈利弊，给予相关建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

了解到：learn→know

建议：suggestion→advice

适于……：be fit for…→be suitable for…

机会：chance→opportunity

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Moreover, students do not have opportunities to socialize together, thus making it difficult for us to develop interpersonal skills.

拓展句：Moreover, students do not have opportunities to socialize together, which makes it difficult for us to develop interpersonal skills.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing you are wondering whether it is advisable to take online classes because of the epidemic, I'm writing to offer you some advice. (运用了现在分词短语作状语和whether引导的宾语从句)

【高分句型2】However, distance learning requires self-discipline and thereby is not suitable for students who lack perseverance. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)

2．Dear David,

Hearing that you are planning to hold an activity called Cultural China, I am writing to recommend Chinese calligraphy and offer some relevant suggestions.

Chinese calligraphy is a traditional art of Chinese characters writing, which has developed into various categories over the centuries. Undoubtedly, it is an important part of Chinese culture, reflecting Chinese people’s wisdom. To hold the activity, it is advisable to provide authentic works, thus enabling students to have a vivid appreciation. Besides, preparations like purchasing writing brushes, ink and paper can be made to let students have a try and post their own works online.

I do hope my suggestions can be of help to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友David写信，向他推荐中国书法艺术，提供活动建议，为David提供帮助。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：suggestion→advice

多种多样的：various→diverse

重要的：important→significant

另外：besides→in addition

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Undoubtedly, it is an important part of Chinese culture, reflecting Chinese people’s wisdom.

拓展句：Undoubtedly, it is an important part of Chinese culture, which reflects Chinese people’s wisdom.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Chinese calligraphy is a traditional art of Chinese characters writing, which has developed into various categories over the centuries.（运用了which引导定语从句）

【高分句型2】I do hope my suggestions can be of help to you.（运用了do强调谓语动词，和省略引导词that的宾语从句）

3．Dear Tony,

I am sorry to hear that you fail to adapt yourself to Senior 3 for lack of rest in the past short vacation. Moreover, burdened with pressure from College Entrance Exam, you feel totally at a loss. I can really relate to how you feel and would like to offer some suggestions.

To begin with, try to relax and find some positive distractions. It is not a good idea to constantly remind yourself of not having enough rest. Instead, keep yourself occupied physically and mentally so that you don. have time to be downcast. What’s more, it is of great significance to work out a plan and set small targets. When you follow the plan strictly and make it a routine, you’ll achieve a sense of accomplishment day by day, which can guarantee your final success. Last but not least, a best friend and partner of the same grade really counts. It is advisable to turn to him or her and share your sufferings. I believe your friend will surely offer some helpful advice that can give you inspirations. Hopefully my suggestions could be of some help and I am convinced that you’ll find the way out.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你的朋友Tony刚刚升入高三，因为寒假时间短，没有休息好，所以现在状态很差。面临高考压力，Tony不知所措。请你给他写一封信表示安慰。

【详解】1.词汇积累

不能：be unable to→fail to

建议：advice→suggestion

重要的：significant→be of great significance

目标：goal→target

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：To begin with, try to relax and find some positive distractions. It is not a good idea to constantly remind yourself of not having enough rest.

拓展句：To begin with, try to relax and find some positive distractions because it is not a good idea to constantly remind yourself of not having enough rest.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that you fail to adapt yourself to Senior 3 for lack of rest in the past short vacation. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] When you follow the plan strictly and make it a routine, you’ll achieve a sense of accomplishment day by day, which can guarantee your final success. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)

4．Dear John,

I am more than glad to hear that you will come to my school as an exchange student. Since you are worried about the cultural differences, I’m writing to offer some suggestions.

In my opinion, there’s no need for you to be shy and all of us are willing to be friends with you. First of all, you’d better communicate with your new classmates in Chinese as much as possible, which may help improve your spoken Chinese quickly. Besides, I am ready to introduce Chinese cultures to you. Only in this way will you deepen your understanding of Chinese and adapt to the life here more easily.

I believe that you will have a wonderful and unforgettable time in our school. Looking  forward to your arrival.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给即将来学校做交换生的John写一封回信，给他一些关于文化习俗、语言交流等方面的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：delighted→glad

担心：be concerned about→be worried about

建议：advice→suggestion

在我看来：as far as I am concerned→ in my opinion

2.句型拓展

同义句转换

原句：I am more than glad to hear that you will come to my school as an exchange student.

拓展句：Hearing that you will come to my school as an exchange student, I am very happy.

【点睛】[高分句型1]I am more than glad to hear that you will come to my school as an exchange student.（句中运用that引导宾语从句）

[高分句型2]First of all, you’d better communicate with your new classmates in Chinese as much as possible, which may help improve your spoken Chinese quickly. （句中运用which引导非限制性定语从句）

5．Dear Tim,

Knowing that you’ll visit China in the coming winter holiday, I’m writing to recommend a city to you.

Recognized as the capital city of China, Beijing is a city you can never miss.

With a long history and various tourist attractions, it attracts thousands of tourists every year. What will amaze you most is the Great Wall, one of the greatest wonders in the world. The Palace Museum and the Summer Palace are well worth visiting, too. Besides, the local snacks will surely be appealing to you.

Wish you a pleasant and rewarding journey in China.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Tim写封信，提出在寒假时到中国旅游的建议。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

认可：recognize→acknowledge

使惊讶：amaze→surprise

另外：besides→moreover

有吸引力的：appealing→attractive

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：With a long history and various tourist attractions, it attracts thousands of tourists every year.

拓展句：Beijing, which has a long history and various tourist attractions, attracts thousands of tourists every year.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Recognized as the capital city of China, Beijing is a city you can never miss. （运用了that引导的定语从句，省略了引导词that；运用了过去分词作状语）

[高分句型2] What will amaze you most is the Great Wall, one of the greatest wonders in the world.（运用了what引导的主语从句）

6．Dear jack,

I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adjusting to your high school life. It is common that many students have the same problem when going to a new school. I’m writing to give you some suggestions for you.

First of all, you’d better make a good plan for your studies, which can help you get used to the new studying environment in a short time. Additionally, I recommend that you make some friends and take an active part in some activities. I’m sure you will find your school life colorful and interesting in the near future.  

I will be more than happy to hear good news from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友杰克写封信，提出适应高中校园生活的建议。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

适应：adjust→adapt

建议：suggestion→advice

另外：additionally→moreover

习惯于：get used to→get accustomed to

2．句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I will be more than happy to hear good news from you.

拓展句：I will be more than happy if I can hear good news from you.

【点睛】[高分句型1] It is common that many students have the same problem when going to a new school.(运用了that引导的主语从句)

[高分句型2] First of all, you’d better make a good plan for your studies, which can help you get used to the new studying environment in a short time. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

7．Dear Nancy,

Learning that you will come to Hangzhou for the 2022 Asian Games, I’m more than delighted. As for how to improve your spoken Chinese in a short time, I’d like to give you some suggestions as follows.

To begin with, make more Chinese friends in your daily life, with whom you can practice your spoken Chinese. What’s more, it would be also good ways to listen to Chinese songs and watch Chinese movies, which can help you broaden your horizons and gain some Chinese. Last but not least, reading and writing in Chinese will be definitely of great benefit to your oral Chinese level.

I hope you’ll make great progress in oral Chinese.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给新加坡朋友Nancy写一封信，针对如何在短期内提高汉语口语水平给出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：suggestion→advice

首先：to begin with→first of all

此外：what’s more→besides

每日的，日常的：daily→everyday

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Last but not least, reading and writing in Chinese will be definitely of great benefit to your oral Chinese level.

拓展句：Last but not least, you can read and write in Chinese, which will be definitely of great benefit to your oral Chinese level.

【点睛】【高分句型1】What’s more, it would be also good ways to listen to Chinese songs and watch Chinese movies, which can help you broaden your horizons and gain some Chinese.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】I hope you’ll make great progress in oral Chinese.（运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略了that）

8．Dear Chris,

I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful.

First, I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible. In this way, you will get to know each other. Second, it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students. They are good for developing friendly relationships. Lastly, you might consider turning to your teachers, who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions.

I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you. If there is anything more I can do to help, please let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Chris写一封信，针对如何尽快融入学校生活给出你的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

做某事有困难：have trouble (in) doing sth.→have difficulty (in) doing sth.

正常的，常见的：normal→common

参加：take part in→join in

向某人求助：turn to sb. (for help)→ask sb. for help

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：In this way, you will get to know each other.

拓展句：If you often communicate with your classmates, you will get to know each other.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Second, it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Lastly, you might consider turning to your teachers, who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）

9．Dear Anxiety,

Learning that you are burdened with intense pressure due to the coming mid-term exam, I could completely relate to you as this is fairly common for senior high school students. Don’t worry too much and I will share you some effective tips to cope with stress.

In my opinion, sharing your feelings with your friends is a wise choice as you can remove your negative emotions when communicating with your peers. Additionally, it is strongly recommended that you take physical exercise for an hour or so after school, which can lift your spirits and thus help get you stay focused in class. Also, keep an optimistic attitude towards life about your future since you will become more strong-willed after going through all the challenges.

With the suggestions above I firmly believe you will cope with the intense pressure well. I would be more than happy to see you have an extraordinary performance in the exam.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Anxiety同学写封回信，对考试前的压力造成的焦虑给予安慰、建议和祝愿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice→tip

压力：pressure→stress

聪明的：clever→wise

帮助：assist→help

2.句式拓展

同义句替换

原句：In my opinion, sharing your feelings with your friends is a wise choice as you can remove your negative emotions when communicating with your peers.

同义句：In my opinion, it is a wise choice to share your feelings with your friends as you can remove your negative emotions when communicating with your peers.

【点睛】【高分句型1】In my opinion, sharing your feelings with your friends is a wise choice as you can remove your negative emotions when communicating with your peers. (运用了动名词作主语)

【高分句型2】Additionally, it is strongly recommended that you take physical exercise for an hour or so after school, which can lift your spirits and thus help get you stay focused in class. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

10．Dear Adam,

Highly delighted to hear that you are going to study in our school next term, I'm writing to express warmest welcome to you. Meanwhile, I'm more than willing to offer you some suggestions concerning how to adjust to school life in China.

To begin with, it is a good idea to learn as much as possible about Chinese culture so that you will be able to avoid culture shock and misunderstanding. Besides that, it is strongly recommended that you get your Chinese improved. Without the language barrier, you will find it easier to fit into your new surroundings. In addition, be sure to keep track of our school on the homepage.

Hopefully, my suggestions will be of great help to you. Please feel free to contact me with any questions. Looking forward to your arrival. Best wishes !

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Adam写信，给他提一些建议，以便他更好地融入新学校。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：delighted→glad

首先：to begin with→first of all

适应：fit into→adapt to

此外：in addition→what’s more

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Without the language barrier, you will find it easier to fit into your new surroundings.

拓展句：If there is no language barrier, you will find it easier to fit into your new surroundings.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

Highly delighted to hear that you are going to study in our school next term, I'm writing to express warmest welcome to you.（that引导宾语从句）