浙江高考英语写作分类训练：申请信

申请信

1．假如你是李华，你想申请成为2022年北京冬奥会（the 2020 Beijing Winter Olympics）的一名英语志愿者，请给外教 Peter 写一封邮件求助，请他帮你写推荐信。邮件内容包括：

1. 写信目的；

2. 推荐信的内容、截止时间、接收邮箱地址（info @ sinobwc. cc）；

3. 表达感谢。

注意：1. 词数不少于80；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

2．假定你是学生李华，在加拿大求学期间，得知学校将举办加中文化交流活动（Canada-China Cultural Exchange），需要招聘志愿者。请写一封申请信，内容包括：

1. 写信目的；

2. 个人优势；

3. 期待录用。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

3．假如你是李华，寒假在伦敦学习，得知伦敦市政府在社区招募防疫志愿者。请你用英文写一封电子邮件应聘，内容包括：

1.写信目的；

2.个人优势；

3.能做的事情。

注意：1.词数80左右

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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4．假如你是李华，你想申请成为2020年中国国际进口博览会（the 2020 China International Import Expo）的一名英语志愿者，请给外教James写一封邮件求助，请他帮你写推荐信。邮件内容包括：

1. 写信目的；

2. 推荐信的内容、截止时间接收邮箱地址（infò@sinoexpo. cc）；

3. 表达感谢。

注意：

1. 词数不少于80；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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5．假设你是李华，就读于某国际学校。现校学生会各部门（文娱部、外联部、学习部……）聘干事，请你用英文给此次招聘负责人 Mr. Smith 写一封申请信，内容包括：

1.  申请岗位；

2.  个人优势；

3.  你的希望。

注意：

1.  词数 80 左右；

2.  可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：干事 secretar

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6．假定你是李华，亚运会将在你居住的城市举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：

1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历；

2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况；

3.承诺：提供最佳服务。

注意：1.词数80左右，开头语已为你写好，不计入字数；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.申请   apply (v.), application(n.)     志愿者 volunteer

Dear Sir / Madam,

My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Asian Games. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

7．假如你是星光中学高二的李华，你打算高中毕业后到美国某大学读书，所以写了一封信给该校了解情况。内容包括：

1. 介绍自己的情况，例如目前的学业水平，爱好，特长，参加社会实践活动等；

2. 咨询到该所大学留学的条件，如：外语水平、所需学费，申请奖学金条件等；

3. 希望得到更多关于该校的资讯。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear sir/ madam,

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Yours,

Li Hua

8．假如你是李华，即将赴英国剑桥大学就读。然而，由于国内新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情爆发，你无法按照规定时间报到。请你写一封邮件，向学校申请延迟报到。

内容包括：1. 表达歉意； 2. 阐述原因； 3. 希望获准。

注意：1. 词数 80 左右

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：新型冠状病毒肺炎 COVID-19

剑桥大学 the University of Cambridge

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9．假设你是学校的学生会主席，你校文艺部计划拍摄校园微电影（micro film），正在招聘学生演员。请你代表学生会用英语写一则招聘启事，内容包括：

1. 招聘人数；

2.要求：喜欢表演，精通英语；

3.微电影内容：与校园生活相关；

4.报名方式及截止时间。

注意：词数80词左右。

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10．假定你是李华，从网上得知北京冬奥会正在招募英语志愿者。请你用英语向组委会写一封申请信，内容包括：

1. 表达意愿；

2. 个人优势；

3. 希望回复。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：申请—— apply v.

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1．Dear Peter,

I’ m Li Hua from your class. I was wondering if you could write a recommendation letter for me. I am applying to be an English volunteer for the 2020 Beijing Winter Olympics, which requires a recommendation from my English teacher. It would be great if you could mention my outgoing personality, fluent English and previous volunteering experience, as is shown in my attached resume. The letter is due on July 25th. Could you please send it to info @ sinobwc. cc?

Thanks for your precious time.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教 Peter 写一封邮件，请他帮你写一封成为2022年北京冬奥会的一名英语志愿者的推荐信。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在进行时,少量过去进行时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 介绍写信的目的；

2. 推荐信的内容、截止时间、接收邮箱地址（info @ sinobwc. cc）；

3. 表达感谢。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

write a recommendation letter; apply to; outgoing personality; as is shown

第三步：连词成句

1. I was wondering if you could write a recommendation letter for me.

2. I am applying to be an English volunteer for the 2020 Beijing Winter Olympics, which requires a recommendation from my English teacher.

3. It would be great if you could mention my outgoing personality, fluent English and previous volunteering experience, as is shown in my attached resume.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1]：I am applying to be an English volunteer for the 2020 Beijing Winter Olympics, which requires a recommendation from my English teacher.这句话运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句。

[高分句型2]：It would be great if you could mention my outgoing personality, fluent English and previous volunteering experience, as is shown in my attached resume.这句话运用了it作形式主语，真正的主语为if引导的条件状语从句和as引导的非限定性定语从句。

[高分句型3]：I will appreciate it if you could write a recommendation letter for me.这句话运用it作形式宾语，真正的宾语为if引导的条件状语从句。

2．Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm a Chinese student taking summer courses in Canada now. Hearing that volunteers are needed for Canada-China Cultural Exchange activities, I can't wait to apply for the position.

The following are my advantages. Firstly, I can express myself freely in fluent English so there isn't any trouble in communicating with visitors. Better yet, I have participated in several similar activities, which equipped me with relevant experience. Last but not least, as a Chinese painting lover, I know a lot about this art form, enabling me to help visitors have a better understanding of the paintings.

If accepted, I'll spare no effort to introduce those wonderful works on display and answer questions with patience. I believe my enthusiasm and devotion will live up to your expectations.

Thank you for your consideration. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是应用文写作。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是学生李华，在加拿大求学期间，得知学校将举办加中文化交流活动，需要招聘志愿者。请写一封申请信。内容包括：1)写信目的；2)个人优势；3) 期待录用。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）： participated in (参加)；spare no effort (不遗余力)；live up to (实现)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【高分句型一】I have a good command of English and know well about our traditional Chinese culture. Also, outgoing, energetic and responsible are my great personalities. 我有良好的英语和了解我们的中国传统文化。另外，我性格开朗，精力充沛，有责任心。

【高分句型二】I would be grateful if you could give me a favorable consideration of my application. 如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。

3．Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Li Hua, a Chinese student currently studying in London. Knowing that volunteers are wanted to fight against the virus, I am writing to apply to be one of them.

As a warm-hearted boy, I am always willing to help people in need. Besides, my good command of English and abundant relevant experience make me well qualified for the job. If chosen as a volunteer, I will use my medical knowledge to appeal to local people to raise awareness of self-protection, such as washing hands regularly and wearing masks when going out.

I would be very grateful if you could consider my application. I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours faithfully  

Li Hua

【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是求职信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，准备在暑假赴美国进行短期旅行，请你用英语给美国网友Tom写一封邮件，内容包括：1)写信目的：请他提供参考意见；2)旅行要求：体验生活，参观名校；3)其他事项。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：fight against (抵抗)；warm-hearted (热心的)；be willing to (愿意)；abundant (丰富的)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【高分句型一】I am writing to apply to be one of the volunteers who are wanted to fight against the virus. 我知道志愿者们想要与病毒作斗争，所以我写信申请成为他们中的一员。运用who引导的定语从句。

【高分句型二】I am well qualified for the job because of my good command of English and abundant relevant experience. 由于我良好的英语能力和丰富的相关经验，我非常适合这份工作。运用because of+名词性短语。

4．Dear James,

I’m Li Hua from your class. I was wondering if you could write a recommendation letter for me.

I am applying to be an English volunteer for the 2020 China International Import Expo, which requires a recommendation from my English teacher. It would be great if you could mention my outgoing personality, fluent English and previous volunteering experience, as is shown in my attached resume. The letter is due on July 25th. Could you please send it to info@sinoexpo. cc?

Thanks for your precious time.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。要求写一封求助信，请外教James写一封推荐信。

【详解】假如你是李华，你想申请成为2020年中国国际进口博览会（the 2020 China International Import Expo）的一名英语志愿者，请给外教James写一封邮件求助，请他帮你写推荐信。邮件内容包括：1. 写信目的；2. 推荐信的内容、截止时间接收邮箱地址（infò@sinoexpo. cc）；3. 表达感谢。分析提示可知，文章主要以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。根据提示的要点考生要先想好写哪几点，本文的主要要点已经给出，写作时注意运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。

【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。例如：I am applying to be an English volunteer for the 2020 China International Import Expo, which requires a recommendation from my English teacher.使用了定语从句；It would be great if you could mention my outgoing personality, fluent English and previous volunteering experience, as is shown in my attached resume.使用了固定句型和as引导定语从句。

5．Dear Mr. Smith,

I'm Li Hua, a freshman in our school. Interested in the position of Secretary of the Foreign Affairs Department, I am writing to apply for it.

Of all my abilities, being able to write and speak English and Chinese well counts the most. That means language barriers will not be a problem for me to carry out work with students all over the globe. Besides, I have gained similar experience in middle school. Such experience makes me more organized so that I can handle various problems.

I think I am qualified for the position. Please give me a chance.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是申请信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，就读于某国际学校。现校学生会各部门（文娱部、外联部、学习部……）聘干事，请你用英文给此次招聘负责人 Mr. Smith 写一封申请信，内容包括：1. 申请岗位；2.  个人优势；3.  你的希望。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：freshman(新生)；the Foreign Affairs Department (外事部门)；apply for (申请)；be able to(能够)；be qualified for (有……的资格)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【高分句型一】The reason why I’m writing to you is that I want to apply for the position of Secretary of the Foreign Affairs Department. 我给你写信的原因是我想申请外事秘书一职。运用表语从句。

【高分句型二】Language barriers will not be a problem for me because I’m able to write and speak English and Chinese well. 语言障碍对我来说不是问题，因为我能很好地写和说英语和汉语。运用原因状语从句。

6．Dear Sir / Madam,

My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Asian Games. I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Games will be held in the city I live. I am a 16-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sport during the time.

Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是申请信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，亚运会将在你居住的城市举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历；2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况；3.承诺：提供最佳服务。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：apply(申请)；volunteer (志愿者)；would like to (想要)；work as (担任)；be ready to (准备好的)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【高分句型1】

I am a 16-year-old boy student in a senior middle school who want to be a volunteer for the games. 我是一个16岁的高中生，想成为奥运会的志愿者。运用who引导非限定性定语从句。

【高分句型2】

I would appreciate it if I can be chosen to be one. 如果我能被选中，我会很感激的。运用it做形式宾语。

7．Dear sir/ madam,

I am a Senior Two student in Xingguang High school in China. I will graduate from high school in one year. I plan to study in your university after graduation. Now, my academic performance is pretty good and I competed in Nation Olympic Math Contest for High school students last year and won the first place. I love sports, especially ball games and I am a member of school basketball team. Also, I am a volunteer in Protection The Great Wall.

If I attend your university, what kind of English level should I have? How much the fee should I pay? What qualification do I need to apply for a scholarship?

I am looking forward to receiving your reply and more information about your university.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给美国某大学写信了解该校的情况。

【详解】体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主

结构：总分总

要求：

1. 介绍自己的情况，例如目前的学业水平，爱好，特长，参加社会实践活动等；

2. 咨询到该所大学留学的条件，如：外语水平、所需学费，申请奖学金条件等；

3. 希望得到更多关于该校的资讯。

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

graduate from/ plan to do sth./ learn about/ do well in/ win the first prize/ take part in/ be involved in/ volunteer/ school fee/ apply for/ qualification/ look forward to/ information

第三步：连词成句

1. I am Li Hua, a Senior Two student in Xingguang High school in China.

2. I will graduate from high school in one year.

3. I plan to study in your university after graduation.

4. Now, my academic performance is pretty good and I competed in Nation Olympic Math Contest for High school students last year and won the first place.

5. I am interested in sports, ball games in particular, and I am a member of school basketball team.

6. Besides, I am a volunteer in Protection The Great Wall.

7. If I attend your university, what kind of English level should I have?

8. How much the fee should I pay?

9. What qualification do I need to apply for a scholarship?

10. Looking forward to receiving your reply and more information about your university.

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）

【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，符合逻辑，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，例如，qualification, scholarship, performance；If I attend your university, what kind of English level should I have?中if引导条件状语从句。

8．Dear Sir or Madam,

I’d like to express my sincere thanks to you for enrolling me into the University of Cambridge. However, something unexpected has happened to me that makes it impossible for my school enrollment, for which I’m conveying my deepest apology.

As you know, China is currently dealing with an outbreak of the COVID-19. Faced with the crisis, we are recommended to stay at home, thus preventing me from attending the school as scheduled. I wonder if you can adopt a flexible approach with regard to the registration time.

Your prompt attention and reply to the letter would be highly appreciated.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，即将赴英国剑桥大学就读。然而，由于国内新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情爆发，你无法按照规定时间报到。请你写一封邮件，向学校申请延迟报到。内容包括:1. 表达歉意； 2. 阐述原因； 3. 希望获准。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：sincere thanks (真诚的感谢)；enroll into (入学)；the University of Cambridge(剑桥大学)；unexpected (意外的)；registration (注册)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和现在完成时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如However, something unexpected has happened to me that makes it impossible for my school enrollment, for which I’m conveying my deepest apology.运用了非限定性定语从句；I wonder if you can adopt a flexible approach with regard to the registration time.运用宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

9．Actors and Actresses Wanted

The arts department of our school plans to shoot an English micro film on campus. We need two girl students and two boy students. Whoever is fond of acting and has a good ability of expressing English orally can sign up for it. The micro movie reflects campus life and shows students' youth and vitality, which will be interesting. Should you want to take part, you can go to the students' union to hand in your applicant or send your information to hkyzwyb@163.com.The deadline of registration is October 23.

I am looking forward to your participation.

The Students Union

【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是应用文写作。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是学校的学生会主席，你校文艺部计划拍摄校园微电影（micro film），正在招聘学生演员。请你代表学生会用英语写一则招聘启事，内容包括：1. 招聘人数；2.要求：喜欢表演，精通英语；3.微电影内容：与校园生活相关；4.报名方式及截止时间。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：arts department (文艺部)；plan to(计划)；shoot(拍摄)；micro film (微电影)；be fond of (喜欢)；vitality(活力)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【高分句型一】Not only does the micro movie reflect campus life, but also they shows students' youth and vitality. 微电影不仅反映了校园生活，也展现了学生的青春和活力。运用倒装句。

【高分句型二】If you want to take part, you can go to the students' union to hand in your applicant or send your information to hkyzwyb@163.com. 如果你想参加，你可以去学生会提交你的申请人或发送你的信息到hkyzwyb@163.com。运用条件状语从句。

10．Dear sir or madam,

My name is LiHua, and I am keen to do some voluntary work for the 2022 Winter Olympics. So I am writing to apply to be a part of you.

I am outgoing and active, which can be a great help for voluntary work. Besides, I am familiar with how to perform my duty. Most important of all, I have a good command of English. I would appreciate it if you give me a chance and I do hope I can be accepted as a member of volunteers.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

LiHua.

【分析】本篇考查申请信的写作，要求考生给北京冬奥会的组委会写一封希望成为英语志愿者的申请信。

【详解】体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主

结构：分总

要求：

1. 表达意愿

2. 个人优势（有志愿者工作经历；擅长英语；性格外向等）

3. 希望回复

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

be interested in/ apply for/ be familiar with/ have a good command of/ look forward to/ offer sb. sth.

第三步：连词成句

My name is LiHua, and I am eager to do some voluntary work for the 2022 Winter Olympics.

I am writing to apply to be a part of you.

I am outgoing and active, which can be a great help for voluntary work.

I have experience in voluntary work and know how to perform my duty.

I have a good command of English.

I would appreciate it if you give me a chance and I do hope I can be accepted as a member of volunteers.

Looking forward to your reply.

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）

【高分句型1】

I have a good command of English, making me suitable for the work.我熟练掌握英语，这让我适合这项工作。句中使用了现在分词做状语。

【高分句型2】

The reason for my writing this letter is that I want to apply to be a part of you.我写信的原因是想申请成为你们的一员。句中用that引导表语从句。