重庆高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假定你是李华，你的英语笔友Steven和同学因小事发生争执，关系闹僵了，他来信向你请教如何与同学和睦相处，请根据以下要点写一封回信。

1.表示安慰；

2.如何解决该矛盾；

3.如何与同学和睦相处。

注意:1.写作词数应为100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Steven,

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Yours,

Li Hua

2．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友John在信中说自己每天花太多时间上网并为此感到苦恼。请你写信表示关心并给出建议。

具体内容：1.表达关心；

        2.具体建议；

注意：

1. 字数100词左右；2. 可适当增加细节

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3．假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter正在学习汉语但遇到了一些困难，他写信向你求助，现在请你写封回信，内容包括：

1. 写信目的；

2. 提出建议（至少3条）；

3. 表达祝愿。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

4．假设你是李华，你班的交换生Jim对中国文化很感兴趣， 准备选修一门相关课程，就此向你寻求建议。请给Jim写一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 推荐一门选修课；

2. 说明推荐的理由；

3．表达期望与祝愿。 注意：

1. 词数 80 左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jim,

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

5．假设你是李华，你的好友Tom当选为高一28班的班长。最近他的班级常常有同学上学迟到，作为新手班长，他不知道该如何做。因此，他写信向你求助，寻求你的建议。请给他回信。内容包括：

1、知晓他的问题，并明白他的感受；

2、你的建议；

3、你做出此建议的原因。

注意： 1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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6．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据以下要点写回信。

1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4交中国朋友。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter

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Yours sincerely

Li Hua

7．假设你是李华，你的朋友 John 最近沉溺于手机游戏，严重影响了学习和身心健康。请你根据以下要点提示，给他写一封信。要点如下：

1. 关掉手机，发展新爱好；

2. 多和家人朋友待在一起；

3. 每天锻炼半小时，增强体质。

注意：1. 词数 80 左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear John,

I’m sorry to hear that

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Yours sincerely

Li Hua

8．假定你是李华，在某网站的“树洞”栏目中，你看到一个名叫Trapped的中学生发帖(post)寻求帮助。请仔细阅读以下内容，根据写作要点回贴。

Trapped Post at 18-12-2021 22:08

Hi, everyone, I’m 15 years old and I have been a senior high school student already. But my mother continues to treat me as a five-year-old.

What should I do?

写作要点：1. 告诉Trapped要理解母亲

2. 给Trapped提出解决问题的具体建议:诸如多沟通协助家务等。

注意：1.词数100左右

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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9．假设你校英文报有一个专栏“Heart to Heart”，你是该栏目编辑Rachel，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。该同学的困扰是：坚持背英语单词，可是却很难保持长时记忆。请用英文给该同学回信。内容要点包括：

1.表示理解并给予安慰；

2.提出建议并说明理由；

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

10．假定你是李华，你们英语俱乐部计划录制一个向在渝外国人介绍重庆传统文化的视频。请你写一封邮件给你的外教Ernie咨询，向他了解哪些重庆的传统文化吸引在渝外国友人。

邮件内容包括：1．写信事由；

2．征求意见；

3．表示感谢。

注意：1．写作词数应为80词左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Ernie,

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Yours,

Li Hua

1．Dear Steven,

I hope you don't feel very sad and angry after having a conflict with your classmates. And I'm really glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to get along with your classmates.

The first thing you need to do is that you should calm down and communicate with your classmates to clear up the misunderstanding between you. Regarding to getting along well with your classmates, you should be kind and friendly to them. What's more, you’d better learn to control your emotion. In my opinion, if you put yourself in others' position, you would understand them better.

I hope the advice above will be helpful to you and wish you a happier time at school.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英语笔友Steven回信，对他和同学因小事发生争执表示安慰并就如何解决该矛盾，怎样与同学和睦相处给出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad→pleased/happy

建议：advice → suggestion

此外：What's more→Besides

依我看：In my opinion→ From my point of view

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：And I'm really glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to get along with your classmates.

拓展句：And I'm really glad to receive your letter, in which you asked for my advice on how to get along with your classmates.

【点睛】【高分句型1】The first thing you need to do is that you should calm down and communicate with your classmates to clear up the misunderstanding between you.（运用了省略关系词that的定语从句及that引导的表语从句）

【高分句型2】In my opinion, if you put yourself in others' position, you would understand them better.（运用了if引导的状语从句）

2．参考范文

Dear John,

Knowing that you are feeling upset about spending too much time on the Internet, I’m glad to share my opinions with you and offer some suggestions to smooth your path.

Admittedly, Internet addiction is common among all age groups due to its irresistible temptation. Therefore, it’s unnecessary to feel excessive guilt or anxiety. But with your conscious effort, you can use the Internet more wisely. First of all, you should try to limit the time you surf the Internet, like 1 hour a day. Besides, cultivate some healthy hobbies. Boredom is the greatest enemy on our way, so fostering some healthy habits like climbing mountains, playing chess and so on will reduce your Internet time and enrich your life.

I believe with your effort and determination, you can embrace a more healthy and productive life.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生关于你的外国朋友John在信中说自己每天花太多时间上网并为此感到苦恼此事，写一封信给他一些建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

生气的，心烦意乱的：upset → distracted

观点，看法：opinion → view

此外：besides → what’s more

培养：cultivate → develop

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I’m glad to share my opinions with you and offer some suggestions to smooth your path.

拓展句：I’m glad to share my opinions with you and offer some suggestions in order that they can smooth your path.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you are feeling upset about spending too much time on the Internet, I’m glad to share my opinions with you and offer some suggestions to smooth your path. (运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作原因状语和that引导的宾语从句)

【高分句型2】Therefore, it’s unnecessary to feel excessive guilt or anxiety. (运用了it作形式主语，动词不定式to do作真正的主语)

3．Dear Peter,

I am delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese. It’s true that Chinese is not easy to learn, but there is no need to feel anxious. I will give you some advice.

To start with, it’s best to choose a good Chinese teacher, with whose help you can make great progress. In addition, you may as well make friends with the Chinese students in your school. Were I you, I would find a Chinese friend with common interest. Last but not the least, as a famous saying goes, “Practice makes perfect”, keep in mind that you need practice more. Don’t be frightened by the seemingly hard task. Break your main task into smaller goals and you will realize your dream in the end.

I sincerely hope my suggestions are of benefit to you and you will be getting on better with your Chinese.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友皮特回信，就如何学习汉语向对方提出建议，并表达祝愿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：delighted→happy

建议：advice→suggestion

选择：choose→select

有益：be of benefit to→be beneficial to

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Don’t be frightened by the seemingly hard task.

拓展句：Don’t be frightened by the task which is seemingly hard.

【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s true that Chinese is not easy to learn, but there is no need to feel anxious.（运用了it作形式主语，that从句作真正的主语）

【高分句型2】Were I you, I would find a Chinese friend with common interest.（运用了if虚拟条件句的省略）

4．Dear Jim,

I am glad that you are interested in Chinese culture and eager to explore more. I think the Ancient Poetry is your best choice.

By learning Chinese ancient poems, you can have an extensive knowledge of history and culture in ancient China. Also, you can feel the charm of language by reading poems, which helps to improve your Chinese. To follow the course well, you'd better read and recite as many poems as possible. Besides, it is a good idea to search for related background knowledge so that you will fully understand the conception of poetry.

What do you think of the course? I am sure you will have a lot of fun from it.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Jim写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 推荐一门选修课；2. 说明推荐的理由；3．表达期望与祝愿。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

高兴的：glad→delighted

选择：choice→option

另外：besides→moreover

完全地：fully→completely

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：To follow the course well, you'd better read and recite as many poems as possible.

拓展句：You'd better read and recite as many poems as possible, the purpose of which is to follow the course well.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Also, you can feel the charm of language by reading poems, which helps to improve your Chinese.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Besides, it is a good idea to search for related background knowledge so that you will fully understand the conception of poetry.（运用了so that引导的目的状语从句）

5．Dear Tom,

I am more than delighted to know that you make a monitor. I understand quite well that you are anxious about your classmates` being late for school.

If you ask me, here is a possible solution. I would come up with a class contract. I firmly believe that no one can deny a pleasant learning atmosphere, just as the old saying goes, “Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards.” It is not common that students` requirements and expectations vary, which makes it necessary to have a contract. For example, I would write “No being late for school otherwise clean the classroom.”

Should you find my suggestion helpful, I would be appreciated. Needless to say they will listen to you, since you are a person of charm and wisdom.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Matthew.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给好友Tom写一封回信，对他作为班长应该如何处理班级常常有同学上学迟到的问题提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：delighted→pleased

提出：come up with→bring forward

完成：accomplish→complete

建议：suggestion→advice

2.句式拓展

同义句改写

原句：I am more than delighted to know that you make a monitor.

拓展句：Knowing that you make a monitor，I am more than delighted .

【点睛】[高分句型1] It is not common that students` requirements and expectations vary, which makes it necessary to have a contract. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和it作形式主语)

[高分句型2] Needless to say they will listen to you, since you are a person of charm and wisdom.  (since引导的原因状语从句)

6．Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.

Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.

Try and write me in Chinese next time.

Best wishes.

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Peter回信，告诉他怎样学好中文。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：suggestion → tip

另外：besides→ in addition

记住：remember sth. → keep sth. in mind

询问某人的建议：ask for sb.’s advice→  turn to sb. for advice

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句。

原句：Here are a few suggestions.

拓展句：Here are a few suggestions which will help you improve your Chinese.

【点睛】【高分句型1】First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. （运用了as引导的原因状语从句）

【高分句型2】Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）

7．Dear John,

I’m sorry to hear that you are addicted to smartphone games which have had a bad influence on your health. As a good friend, I’m willing to give you some advice.

First of all, try turning off your phone and develop a new hobby such as hiking and painting, which are related to nature. In addition, it is a good idea to visit your friends regularly or stay with your family to communicate with them. Ultimately, you are supposed to do exercise about half an hour every day to strengthen your body.

Hope the advice will be of help to you.

Looking forward to your quick reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友约翰写信，关于约翰沉溺于手机游戏这一情况给他提建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

影响：influence→effect

建议：advice→suggestion

培养：develop→form

此外：in addition→besides

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Ultimately, you are supposed to do exercise about half an hour every day to strengthen your body.

拓展句：Ultimately, you are supposed to do exercise about half an hour every day so that you can strengthen your body.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear that you are addicted to smartphone games which have had a bad influence on your health.（运用了that引导宾语从句，which引导定语从句）

【高分句型2】First of all, try turning off your phone and develop a new hobby such as hiking and painting, which are related to nature.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）

8．Hi, Dear Trapped,

As a student of your age, I understand your situation. The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers. However, it should be wise not to do anything that hurt your mother’s feelings. Here are a few suggestions.

First, it’s advisable to communicate more with your mom. I am sure that talks can help you understand each other better. They are also opportunities to let her know our ideas and attitudes towards many things. Second, I strongly recommend you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a “grown-up”. It’s even better to share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking, which is to strengthen the relationship between you two.

Hope my idea will work out.

Yours,

LiHua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给名叫Trapped的中学生写信给予他具体建议来解决他与母亲间的问题。

【详解】1.词汇积累

面对：are facing→are faced with

让她知道：let her know→allow her to know

向你的母亲证明：proving to your mom→convincing your mom

增强：strengthen→promote/enhance

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I am sure that talks can help you understand each other better. They are also opportunities to let her know our ideas and attitudes towards many things.

拓展句：I am sure that talks can help you understand each other better, which are also opportunities to let her know our ideas and attitudes towards many things.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, I strongly recommend you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a "grown-up”.（运用了非谓语现在分词短语作状语）

【高分句型2】It’s even better to share more of the housework, such as cleaning,washing and cooking, which is to strengthen the relationship between you two.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

9．Dear Worried,

I appreciate the effort and time you put into the vocabulary learning and thank you for speaking to me regarding the problem you’re having with it. I understand that this must be quite a challenge for you. I’d like to share with you some of my insights regarding remembering English words.

Initially, the key to it is revision and repetition. You may as well review the words you’ve memorized on a daily or weekly basis, which certainly helps you remember words more efficiently. Additionally, there is no better way of learning a language than being exposed to it in context. Only by applying words to your own experiences will those words go to your long-term memory.

I hope I’ve been able to help, if only in a small way. And I know that you will successfully resolve this issue.

Yours sincerely,

Rachel

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给署名为Worried的同学写回信，对于该同学在背英语单词方面的困扰表示理解并给予安慰；且提出建议并说明理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

关于：regarding→in regard to/concerning

此外：additionally → in addition/what’s more

复习：review→go over

投入：put into→ be devoted to

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I’d like to share with you some of my insights regarding remembering English words.

拓展句：I’d like to share with you some of my insights which is concerned with remembering English words.

【点睛】[高分句型1]You may as well review the words you’ve memorized on a daily or weekly basis, which certainly helps you remember words more efficiently.（运用了限制性定语从句中缺少宾语关系代词可以省略和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Only by applying words to your own experiences will those words go to your long-term memory.（运用了only+介词短语放句首引起的部分倒装句）

10．参考范文

Dear Ernie

How is it going? I am very excited that a video about the traditional culture of Chongqing is scheduled to be shot by our English Club, so I’m writing to consult you about your idea.

With unique geographical features, Chongqing has earned a reputation as an amazing 5-dimensional magic metropolis, attracting thousands of tourists at home and abroad. I believe it is our duty to offer quality materials to better introduce the highlights of Chongqing. We consider the topics like the Dragon of Tongliang, Dazu Rock Carvings, the rise and fall of Bangbang and so forth. I wonder if you have some other things in mind.

I would appreciate it if you could share with us what foreigners are interested in about the conventions of Chongqing. Look forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求假定你是李华，你们英语俱乐部计划录制一个向在渝外国人介绍重庆传统文化的视频。请你写一封邮件给你的外教Ernie咨询，向他了解哪些重庆的传统文化吸引在渝外国友人。

【详解】1.词汇积累

激动的：excited→thrilled

计划做：be scheduled to do →plan to do

独特的：unique→particular

许多：thousands of→plenty of

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：With unique geographical features, Chongqing has earned a reputation as an amazing 5-dimensional magic metropolis, attracting thousands of tourists at home and abroad.

拓展句：With unique geographical features, Chongqing has earned a reputation as an amazing 5-dimensional magic metropolis, which attracts thousands of tourists at home and abroad.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I am very excited that a video about the traditional culture of Chongqing is scheduled to be shot by our English Club, so I’m writing to consult you about your idea. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] I wonder if you have some other things in mind.(运用了if引导宾语从句)