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安徽高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

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这是一份安徽高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共15页。试卷主要包含了假定你是李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。

建议信

1．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Bill上周三邀请你观看了他参加的留学生中文辩论赛，并在获奖后向你征求改进建议。请你用英文给他写一封邮件，

内容包括：

1.祝贺获奖；

2.提出建议；

3.表达祝愿。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Bill,

Yours,

Li Hua

2．假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。她在信中说，由于刚进入高中，还不能适应新的环境，不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请根据以下内容给她回信。

1. 向Jenny表示问候和慰问。

2. 针对她的问题提出几点建议。

注意：

1. 词数80左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Jenny,

I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

3．假如你是李华，现在伦敦某中学做交换生，该校要开设一个中国书房，现向中国留学生征集建议。请你给负责人Smith写一封建议信，内容包括：

1．书房采用中国传统风格设计；

2．提供蕴含中国文化的书籍；

3．定期举办读书交流会或中国传统文化讲座等。

注意：1．词数80左右；

2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Smith,

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

4．假定你是李华，你的好朋友李雷是高一学生。在最近的一次来信中李雷提到因为书写不够美观、整洁，在多次英语考试中他的作文得分都不理想，这是他目前最大的困扰。请你给李雷回信并针对他的问题提出建议。

内容包括：

1.理解和安慰；

2.你的建议。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Li Lei,

Yours,

Li Hua

5．假定你是李华，你的交换生朋友John 即将参加一场中文考试，这次考试结果会影响到他是否能继续留在中国学习，因此他很焦虑。请你写一封电子邮件给他提供一些备考建议，内容包括：

1.注重基础；

2.进行针对性练习；

3.调整心态。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

6．假定你是李华，得知你的笔友Catherine因体重超重而感到烦恼，请根据下面的写作提纲，给她回复一封邮件。内容包括：

1.表示理解；

2.为她提出几点建议；

3.祝她减肥成功。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

7．假定你是李华，是校报“Can I help you?”专栏编辑。阅读下面一封读者来信，给他回信。

内容包括：1. 表示理解；

2. 提出建议。

注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Li Hua,My roommates at my dorm isolate (孤立) me all the time. They have their own group chat and never talk to me. We have never had any real conflicts (冲突). I don’t know whether it’s because of different hobbies or my personality. Should I do something to change the situation?

Jiujiu

Dear Jiujiu,

Best wishes,

Li Hua

8．最近你校在开展“保护环境，从身边小事做起”的主题活动，现请你结合以下要点为该活动写一篇英文倡议书，向学校英语广播站投稿。

1.提出倡议；

2.给出建议；

3.举例解释。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

9．假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Eric最近总吃外卖，导致消化不良。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1.表示慰问；

2.提出建议；

3.表达祝愿。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

10．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom即将来你校做交换生，他对中国文化感兴趣，想报名参加你校课后社团，寻求你的建议。请给他回信，内容包括：

1.推荐的社团和理由；

2.参加所推荐社团的准备工作和注意事项。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

Yours,

Li Hua

1．

Dear Bill,

Congratulations! It came as no surprise that your team won the debate competition. I’m deeply impressed by your excellent debating skills and quick wit!

As for your performance, you were doing amazingly well during the debate except for some stumbles. Otherwise, you would have got your ideas across better. I understand it’s really challenging for foreign language learners to speak Chinese with great fluency. It calls for tremendous practice with native speakers. And I am always ready if you need help.

Congratulations again! Wish you continued success and progress!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Bill写一封回信，对他的中文辩论赛表示祝贺，以及提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

杰出的：excellent → outstanding

机智：wit →tact

令人惊讶地：amazingly →surprisingly

巨大的：tremendous → enormous

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I’m deeply impressed by your excellent debating skills and quick wit!

拓展句：It is your excellent debating skills and quick wit that deeply impress me.

【点睛】【高分句型1】It came as no surprise that your team won the debate competition.（运用了that引导的同位语从句）

【高分句型2】And I am always ready if you need help.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）

2．Dear Jenny,

I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school. I am writing to offer you some useful advice, which can help you adjust to high school life faster.

Firstly, it is important that you should learn how to get along with your teachers and classmates. You can build up a good relationship with them by respecting your teachers and helping your classmates. Besides, focusing on your studies will give you a sense of achievement and it will relieve your pressure. In addition, it is also helpful to develop various hobbies, which can make your life more colorful. All in all, I hope you can enjoy your high school life.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求给朋友提出建议帮助她更好的适应高中生活。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice→suggestion

适应：adjust to →adapt to

此外：beisides→what’s more

重要的：important→ vital

2.句式拓展

并列句变复合句

原句：Besides, focusing on your studies will give you a sense of achievement and it will relieve your pressure.

拓展句：Besides, focusing on your studies will give you a sense of achievement which will relieve your pressure.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to offer you some useful advice, which can help you adjust to high school life faster.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。）

【高分句型2】Firstly, it is important that you should learn how to get along with your teachers and classmates.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句。）

3．Dear Smith,

I’m more than pleased to know that we are planning to open a Chinese study in our school. As an exchange student from China, I’m happy to give my suggestions.

Firstly, the study can be designed in traditional Chinese style, providing readers with a strong Chinese cultural atmosphere. Secondly, it may be helpful to offer some excellent books that reflect Chinese culture to help readers raise their reading interest and broaden their cultural horizons. In addition, holding regular reading exchange meetings or lectures on traditional Chinese culture will also make the study more appealing.

Hope my ideas will be helpful!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生作为在伦敦某中学的交换生，学校即将开设一个中国书房，现要求考生给学校负责人Smith写一封建议信，提出相应的意见。

【详解】1.词汇积累

非常：more than→extremely/very

开心的：happy → delighted

建议：suggestion→ recommendation

吸引人的：appealing→ attractive

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Firstly, the study can be designed in traditional Chinese style, providing readers with a strong Chinese cultural atmosphere.

拓展句：Firstly, the study can be designed in traditional Chinese style, which will provide readers with a strong Chinese cultural atmosphere.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, the study can be designed in traditional Chinese style, providing readers with a strong Chinese cultural atmosphere.（运用了现在分词作伴随状语）

【高分句型2】 In addition, holding regular reading exchange meetings or lectures on traditional Chinese culture will also make the study more appealing.（运用了动名词作主语）

4．Dear Li Lei,

Knowing from your last letter that because your handwriting is not beautiful and tidy enough, your composition scores in many English tests are not ideal, which is your biggest trouble at present. I am writing to tell you that your problem is very common among students who are learning English and that there are quite a few ways to solve it.

First of all, you should practice handwriting according to a copybook and be patient at the beginning, which can make sure your handwriting is standard. In addition, turn to your English teacher for help, who must be glad to give you some guidance. What’s the most, you should stick to your practice, at least 20 minutes each day. And gradually, you can write beautiful letters in the limited time.

Looking forward to your good news.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的好朋友李雷是高一学生。在最近的一次来信中李雷提到因为书写不够美观、整洁，在多次英语考试中他的作文得分都不理想，这是他目前最大的困扰。请你给李雷回信并针对他的问题提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

麻烦：trouble→problem

普遍的：common→ordinary

方法：way→approach

确保：make sure→ensure

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：What’s the most, you should stick to your practice, at least 20 minutes each day. And gradually, you can write beautiful letters in the limited time.

拓展句：What’s the most, you should stick to your practice, at least 20 minutes each day, in which way you can write beautiful letters in the limited time.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing from your last letter that because your handwriting is not beautiful and tidy enough, your composition scores in many English tests are not ideal, which is your biggest trouble at present. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)

[高分句型2] In addition, turn to your English teacher for help, who must be glad to give you some guidance. (运用了who引导非限制性定语从句)

5．Dear John,

I’ve heard that you’re anxious because of a coming Chinese exam, which will determine whether you can continue your study in China. Here I have some suggestions on how to prepare for the exam.

First, you should pay attention to some basic knowledge like spelling and contents from the textbook. Second, you’d better practice key points. Remember that quality is more important than quantity. Finally, a good mental state plays an important role in each exam.

I wish you a good result in your exam.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生朋友John写一封电子邮件，给他提供一些中文考试备考建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

因为：because of →due to

建议：suggestion → advice

为……做准备：prepare for →make a preparation for

最终：Finally → Eventually

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Here I have some suggestions on how to prepare for the exam.

拓展句：Here I have some suggestions that/which will help you prepare for the exam.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I’ve heard that you’re anxious because of a coming Chinese exam, which will determine whether you can continue your study in China.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和whether引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】Remember that quality is more important than quantity.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

6．Dear Catherine,

I am terribly sorry to hear that you are upset about being overweight. So I am writing to offer you some practical suggestions to help you out.

I understand quite well how you feel. But nowadays it’s not unusual for us teenagers to become overweight. Actually, things will improve if you follow the suggestions below. For a start, it is highly recommended that you make it a regular part of your life to do some exercise on a daily basis, during which your fat and calories will be burned efficiently. On top of that it is high time that you should keen a balanced diet. Eating more vegetables and fruit will be of great benefit to you. Last but not least, a good attitude is to our life what water is to fish. Namely, more importance should be attached to your inner beauty rather than your appearance.

Ultimately, it is my sincere hope that my recommendations will work out for you. I am looking forward to your good news.

Yours

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给笔友Catherine写封信，对她因体重超重而感到烦恼表示理解，并为她提出几点建议，祝她减肥成功。

【详解】1.词汇积累

非常：terribly→exceedingly

建议：suggestion→advice

事实上：actually→as a matter of fact

最后：ultimately→finally

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：So I am writing to offer you some practical suggestions to help you out.

拓展句：So I am writing to offer you some practical suggestions which can help you out.

【点睛】[高分句型1] For a start, it is highly recommended that you make it a regular part of your life to do some exercise on a daily basis, during which your fat and calories will be burned efficiently. (运用了that引导的主语从句和“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Ultimately, it is my sincere hope that my recommendations will work out for you. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)

7．Dear Jiujiu,

Sorry to know that you have unfriendly roommates. This is, unfortunately, a common situation in life when interacting with others.

I know it can be difficult and awkward to take the initiative in talking with others. But, in life, it is often up to us to make the first move if we want to improve our relationships with others. What I suggest is this: Start with simple, small conversations when you see the right moment. Try to look for similarities you have in common and offer your opinion on how you relate. Knowing how to “break the ice” in this way is an essential social and life skill that is sure to help you in the years to come.

If you have further trouble, don’t hesitate to write to me.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生阅读下面一封读者来信，给他回信。内容包括：1. 表示理解；2. 提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

不友好的：unfriendly→unamiable

不幸地：unfortunately→unluckily

建议：suggest→advise

提供：offer→provide

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：What I suggest is this: Start with simple, small conversations when you see the right moment.

拓展句：What I suggest is that you should start with simple, small conversations when you see the right moment.

【点睛】[高分句型1] But, in life, it is often up to us to make the first move if we want to improve our relationships with others. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)

[高分句型2] Knowing how to “break the ice” in this way is an essential social and life skill that is sure to help you in the years to come. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)

8．One possible version:

In order to help protect the environment, we should start small and do our part just by changing our daily habits.

Some simple acts do make a difference. Firstly, save energy and electricity. Turn off lights, televisions, computers or printers each time you stop using them. Also, run your dishwasher only when it is completely full. Secondly, give away your old things that are still in good condition so that someone else can reuse them. Thirdly, you can turn useless junk into something creative and cute. For example, an old T-shirt can be cleverly turned into a shopping bag, and plastic bottles can serve as nice pots for flowers, while throwing them away may be a pity for you.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。请考生就学校最近开展的“保护环境，从身边小事做起”的主题活动写一篇英文倡议书。

【详解】1.词汇积累

有影响：make a difference→carry weight

行动：act→behavior

赠送：give away→donate

作为：serve as→work as

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Turn off lights, televisions, computers or printers each time you stop using them.

拓展句：Once you stop using lights, televisions, computers or printers, please turn off them.

【点睛】[高分句型1] In order to help protect the environment, we should start small and do our part just by changing our daily habits. (运用了不定式短语作目的状语)

[高分句型2] Secondly, give away your old things that are still in good condition so that someone else can reuse them. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)

9．Dear Eric,

I’m sorry to hear that you have a digestive problem these days because you have eaten too much takeout food. I understand how bad it is, so it’s urgent for you to make some changes.

Firstly, you should stop eating takeout food. Instead, it’s a good idea to cook by yourself. In addition, regular exercise is also necessary because working out properly helps you digest better. Last but not least, keep a good mood every day, which can positively affect your physical health. If you still don’t get better after two days, you should see a doctor.

I hope my advice will work for you. Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Eric最近总吃外卖，导致消化不良。请你给他写一封电子邮件，给出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice→suggestion

紧急的：urgent→pressing

独自：by oneself→on one’s own

此外：in addition→moreover

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：I understand how bad it is, so it’s urgent for you to make some changes.

拓展句：It’s urgent for you to make some changes because it is bad for your health.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you have a digestive problem these days because you have eaten too much takeout food. (运用了that引导宾语从句和because引导原因状语从句)

[高分句型2] Instead, it’s a good idea to cook by yourself. (运用了it作形式主语句型)

10．One possible version:

Dear Tom,

Knowing that you will study in my school as an exchange student and are eager to sign up for one of our school’s after-school clubs, I would like to recommend the Paper-cutting Club to you. The reasons for my recommendation are as follows.

Firstly, by learning Chinese paper-cutting, not only can you appreciate a wide range of paper cuts, but also you can gain insights into Chinese culture. Besides, there is no doubt that you can experience the delight which cutting out paper cuts on your own brings. As for the preparation for the club, you are supposed to bring a pair of scissors and arrive on time as required.

Hope you will like my recommendation and look forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Tom回信，对于他想报名参加学校课后社团一事提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

欣赏：appreciate→admire

此外：besides→what’s more

高兴：delight→happiness

喜欢：like→ enjoy

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：The reasons for my recommendation are as follows.

拓展句：The reasons why I recommend it are as follows.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowing that you will study in my school as an exchange student and are eager to sign up for one of our school’s after-school clubs, I would like to recommend the Paper-cutting Club to you.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2]Besides, there is no doubt that you can experience the delight which cutting out paper cuts on your own brings.（运用了that引导的同位语从句）