河北高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信

感谢信/祝贺信

1．假定你是李华，是一名在美国的交换生，你生病住院期间不少同学来看望你。现在请你给他们写一封信，内容包括：

1．感谢生活上的关心;

2．感谢学习上的帮助;

3．欢迎到中国做客;

注意：1．字数80左右

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear friends,

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Yours,

Li Hua

2．假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。上周，你校邀请美国某大学的Smith教授来校做了一场关于各国肢体语言的专题讲座，请你代表你校全体学生，用英语给他写一封信。

要点包括：1.表示感谢;

2.你的收获。

注意：1.词数80左右;

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. Smith,

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Yours,

Li Hua

3．假定你是李华，上周参加了你市组织的英语话剧比赛 (English Drama Competition) 并取得了较好的成绩。你的外教Mr. White此前给予了你很多帮助和鼓励，请你给他写封电子邮件表达谢意。

内容包括：1. 告知好消息;2. 感谢他的帮助(如陪伴练习。指出应改进之处等)和鼓励;

3. 邀请他到你家做客。

注意：1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：表演 perform；感激 gratitude；安慰 comfort

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4．假定你是光明中学学生会主席李华，上周你校邀请Smith教授来校做了一场有关各国身势语的专题讲座。请你代表学校全体师生，用英语给他写一封感谢信。

内容包括：

1.表达感谢;

2.通过讲座，师生对身势语有了更多的了解。

注意：

1.词数应为80左右;

2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Professor Smith,

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Yours,

Li Hua

5．我们除了感谢他人，也应该感谢自己。在高中生活即将结束之际，请根据自身的情况，给自己写一封感谢信，看到美好的自己和更美好的未来。

注意：

1.词数应为80左右；

2.信的开头和结尾已经给出。

Dear Self,

I’m writing to express my thanks to you.

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Self

6．假定你是李华，你的外教Mr. Moles 结束教学任务，即将退休。请用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1.表达祝贺；

2.表示感谢；

3.希望他实现旅行和写书的计划。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. Moles,

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Yours,

Li Hua

7．假定你是李华，上周你的英国朋友Johnson在中文演讲比赛中获得第一名。请你用英文给他写一封祝贺信。内容包括：

1.写信目的；

2.分享喜悦；

3.表达希望。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Johnson,

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Yours,

Li Hua

8．在毕业来临之际，请你给校刊英语角写篇文章，感谢你的英语老师。内容包括：

1. 介绍老师；

2. 举例说明老师对你的帮助；

3. 表示感谢。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

My English Teacher

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9．假定你是李华，在2021年上半年，你选择了美国教师Lucy的视频辅导课。最近，你参加了学校组织的英语演讲比赛，取得了优异的成绩。请向Lucy写信汇报成绩，并表示感谢。

注意：1.词数80左右。

2.请按如下格式在答案卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Lucy,

I am Li Hua, one of the students who chose your video lessons. Here I am writing to

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Again I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you and wish you all the best.

Yours,

Li Hua

10．假定你是李华，你的英国好友Tom在学校羽毛球比赛中获得第一名，请你给他写封祝贺信，要点如下：

1. 表示祝贺；

2. 肯定他的付出；

3. 希望学习他的技术。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头及结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

4. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Tom,

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Best wishes.

Yours,

LiHua

1．Dear friends,

I would like to express my heartfelt thanks for all the care and companionship you offered during my illness.

Your support and concern helped me to overcome my homesickness and I truly appreciate the time you spent visiting me in the hospital. Furthermore, thank you for helping me with my language skills. It is due to your assistance that my oral English has greatly improved. Lastly, I warmly welcome you to visit me in China whenever you have the chance. I would be delighted to show you around and offer you a taste of our culture and cuisine.

Thanks again and I hope I will have the opportunity to return your kindness.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，是一名在美国的交换生，你生病住院期间不少同学来看望你。现在请你给他们写一封信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

真诚的：heartfelt→sincere

克服：overcome→get over

此外：furthermore→what's more

因为：due to→because of

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句： I would be delighted to show you around and offer you a taste of our culture and cuisine.

拓展句： I would be delighted to show you around, which offers you a taste of our culture and cuisine.

【点睛】【高分句型1】It is due to your assistance that my oral English has greatly improved. （运用了强调句型）

【高分句型2】 Lastly, I warmly welcome you to visit me in China whenever you have the chance.（运用了状语从句）

2．Dear Mr. Smith,,

I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union. On behalf of our school, I’m writing to express our sincere gratitude for your amazing speech on the body language of different countries last week.

From your informative speech, we learn that the proper use of body language can make our communication smoother and more effective, especially when it comes to meeting foreign friends who can’t speak our language as freely and fluently as we do. But different countries have different body language. Therefore, knowing about the differences is of great importance, which can help us avoid mistakes when communicating with foreigners.

Thank you again and best wishes to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给上周来你们学校做专题讲座的美国某大学的Smith教授写一封信，对他表示感谢并写出收获。

【详解】1.词汇积累

表达：express →convey

适当的：proper →appropriate

因此：therefore →thus

很重要的：of great importance →very important

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：On behalf of our school, I’m writing to express our sincere gratitude for your amazing speech on the body language of different countries last week.

拓展句：On behalf of our school, I’m writing to express our sincere gratitude because you delivered an amazing speech on the body language of different countries last week.

【点睛】【高分句型1】From your informative speech, we learn that the proper use of body language can make our communication smoother and more effective, especially when it comes to meeting foreign friends who can’t speak our language as freely and fluently as we do.（运用了“make+宾语+宾补”结构以及who引导的定语从句）

【高分句型2】Therefore, knowing about the differences is of great importance, which can hep us avoid mistakes when communicating with foreigners.（运用了动名词短语作主语，which引导的非限制性定语从句）

3．Dear Mr. White,

I’m glad to tell you that I performed well in the English Drama Competition held in our city last week. Undoubtedly, I should extend my sincere gratitude to you.

Honestly speaking, I couldn’t have done such a good job without your help and encouragement. Every time I practised my part, you accompanied me, pointed out where I could improve, and told me how to do it better. Feeling discouraged, I could get an encouraging hug, which inspired me a lot.

Thanks to you, I made my best performance. I’m wondering if it is convenient for you to come to my home so that I can cook authentic Chinese food for you as a treat. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。上周参加了考生所在市组织的英语话剧比赛(English Drama Competition)并取得了较好的成绩。考生的外教Mr. White此前给予了考生很多帮助和鼓励，请考生给他写封电子邮件表达谢意。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad→ delighted

诚挚的：sincere→genuine

帮助：help→assist

表示：extend→express

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Honestly speaking, I couldn’t have done such a good job without your help and encouragement.

拓展句：Honestly speaking, I couldn’t have done such a good job if I didn't have your help and encouragement.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Every time I practised my part, you accompanied me, pointed out where I could improve, and told me how to do it better.(运用了every time引导的时间状语从句和where引导的宾语从句)

【高分句型2】I’m wondering if it is convenient for you to come to my home so that I can cook authentic Chinese food for you as a treat.(运用了so that引导的状语从句)

4．

Dear Professor Smith,

      I am Li Hua, chairman of the student union of Guangming Middle School. Representing our school, I’m writing to convey my sincere appreciation to you for the lecture you gave us last week.

      Through your lecture, we have learned that body language is one of the most effective methods of expressing our feelings. For example, smiling is the most universal expression of happiness. Looking away from a person means showing no interest in the person. However, not all cultures greet people in the same way. I do believe the knowledge will be very beneficial when we communicate with people from other countries.

      Thank you again for your wonderful lecture.

Yours,

LiHua.

【导语】本篇文章属于应用文。要求考生代表光明中学全体师生给上周来校做有关身势语讲座的教授写一封感谢信。其中需要包括表达感谢及大家对身势语的掌握情况。

【详解】1.词汇积累

表达：convey→express

真诚的：sincere→honest

感激：appreciation→gratitude

有效的：effective→potent

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Representing our school, I’m writing to convey my sincere appreciation to you for the lecture you gave us last week.

拓展句：I, who represent our school, write this letter to convey my sincere appreciation to you for the lecture you gave us last week.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Through your lecture, we have learned that body language is one of the most effective methods of expressing our feelings (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

【高分句型2】I do believe the knowledge will be very beneficial when we communicate with people from other countries.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）

5．Dear Self,

I’m writing to express my thanks to you. As time goes by, I will graduate from high school soon. Looking back on the three years of high school life, I thank you for your courage and hard work. In the face of difficulties, you are never afraid of failure. Over the past three years, you have been getting along well with your classmates and teachers, leaving many good memories of your high school life. Your dream university is Zhejiang University, which is one of the key universities in China. As long as you work hard, you will realize your college dream. I believe a bright future is waiting for you.

     I wish you can be admitted to your dream university.

Self

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在高中生活即将结束之际，给自己写一封感谢信，看到美好的自己和更美好的未来。

【详解】1.词汇积累

表达：express→convey

回首：look back on→recall

面对：in the face of→be faced with/confront

相处：get along with→get on with

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Looking back on the three years of high school life, I thank you for your courage and hard work.

拓展句：When I look back on the three years of high school life, I thank you for your courage and hard work.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Over the past three years, you have been getting along well with your classmates and teachers, leaving many good memories of your high school life. (运用了非谓语中的现在分词作结果状语)

【高分句型2】Your dream university is Zhejiang University, which is one of the key universities in China. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

6．Dear Mr. Moles,

Congratulations on your retirement!

My whole school appreciates your great contributions, which have been precious possessions. With your patient instructions and hard work, our interest in learning English has grown rapidly. I can’t forget so many times you directed me to practice my spoken English again and again until I did well. I can’t count the times I have come into your office to ask for advice. We have appreciated what you did, which was often beyond your normal duties.

I hope you finally do the traveling you have been talking about, and that you also write that planned book after retirement.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Moles写一封信，祝贺他退休，并表达对他的感谢。

【详解】1.词汇积累

珍贵的：valuable→precious

建议：suggestion→advice

奉献：devotion→contribution

责任：responsibility→duty

2.句型拓展

陈述句变强调句

原句：With your patient instructions and hard work, our interest in learning English has grown rapidly.

拓展句：It is with your patient instructions and hard work that our interest in learning English has grown rapidly.

【点睛】[高分句型1]My whole school appreciates your great contributions, which have been precious possessions.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]We have appreciated what you did, which was often beyond your normal duties.（运用了what引导宾语从句和which引导的非限定性定语从句）

7．Dear Johnson,

I’m writing to offer my sincere congratulations on your winning the first place in the Chinese speech contest.

To be honest, I feel proud of you. I believe you really deserve the honor, for you have been working hard on Chinese. I want you to know how joyful I’m to witness your success. Winning the first place will inspire you to learn more of Chinese, which is bound to make you expert in using Chinese more fluently. I hope you’ll contribute to the spread of Chinese traditional culture.

Sincere congratulations on you again.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英文给在上周中文演讲比赛中获得第一名的英国朋友Johnson写一封祝贺信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

比赛：contest →competition

鼓励：inspire →encourage

一定：be bound to →must

做贡献：contribute to →make a contribution to

2.句式拓展

简单句变为复合句

原句：I’m writing to offer my sincere congratulations on your winning the first place in the Chinese speech contest.

拓展句：I’m writing to offer my sincere congratulations on you, because you won the first place in the Chinese speech contest.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I want you to know how joyful I’m to witness your success.(运用了how引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] Winning the first place will inspire you to learn more of Chinese, which is bound to make you expert in using Chinese more fluently.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

8．One possible version:

My English Teacher

Looking back on my three school years, I’d like to convey my gratitude to Ms. Wang, my English teacher. She is kind, humorous and knowledgeable and treats us as friends. I used to hate English because of my poor grades. Ms. Wang found my disadvantage and encouraged me. She said she trusted me and helped me with a lot of practice. Gradually, I became more confident. With her help, I can speak fluent English in front of people now.

To sum up, I’d like to express my sincere gratitude to Ms. Wang once again. Without her help, I could not have made such big progress.

【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇记叙文。要求考生给校刊英语角写篇文章，感谢自己的英语老师。

【详解】1.词汇积累

想要做某事：would like to do sth.→want to do sth.

因为：because of→due to

帮助某人做某事：help sb. with sth.→assist sb. with sth.

感激：gratitude→appreciation

2.句式拓展

简单句变强调句

原句：Looking back on my three school years, I’d like to convey my gratitude to Ms. Wang, my English teacher.

拓展句：Looking back on my three school years, it was Ms. Wang, my English teacher who I’d like to convey my gratitude to.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

Looking back on my three school years, I’d like to convey my gratitude to Ms. Wang, my English teacher. (现在分词短语作状语)

[高分句型2]

She said she trusted me and helped me with a lot of practice. (said后面为省略了that引导的宾语从句)

9．Dear Lucy,

I am Li Hua, one of the students who chose your video lessons. Here I am writing to express my sincere gratitude from the bottom of my heart.

During the first half of this year, you taught many practical learning skills in your video lessons, I made great progress in English, especially the pronunciation. I don’t know what my English would be like without your patient help. Last week, I took Part in the English speech competition which was held by our school. And to my great joy, I won the first. What’s more, the judges spoke highly of my speech, saying that my pronunciation sounded like a native. How proud I am!（99w）

Again I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you and wish you all the best.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给写一封感谢信，感谢美国教师Lucy对你的辅导。

【详解】1.词汇积累

实用的：actual→practical

高兴：happy→joy

称赞：praise→ speak highly of

表达：express→convey

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I don’t know what my English would be like without your patient help.

拓展句：Hadn't you helped me patiently, I don't know what my English would be like.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Last week, I took Part in the English speech competition which was held by our school.(which引导的定语从句)

[高分句型2]What’s more, the judges spoke highly of my speech, saying that my pronunciation sounded like a native.(非谓语动词作状语)

10．One possible version：

Dear Tom,

I'm very excited to know the news that you are the first in the badminton match held in school last Sunday.

I show my congratulations sincerely. This is a good evidence to show what hard work you've devoted to practising and improving your skills. When you first learned to play badminton, you were at a loss about the basic skills and felt embarrassed. But it wasn't long before you caught up and became an excellent player. That you won the first prize shows your great determination and painstaking effort in practising badminton. I hope that one day we can have a game of badminton，so that I can learn from you.

Best wishes.

Yours,

LiHua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Tom写封祝贺信，祝贺他在学校羽毛球比赛中获得第一名。

【详解】词汇积累

比赛：match→competition

努力：hard work→effort

好的：good→excellent

提高：improve→perfect

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I show my congratulations sincerely.

拓展句：I’m writing to congratulate you on your good performance you have achieved in the match.

【点睛】[高分句型1] This is a good evidence to show what hard work you've devoted to practising and improving your skills. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] That you won the first prize shows your great determination and painstaking effort in practising badminton. (运用了that引导的主语从句)