山西高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信

感谢信/祝贺信

1．假定你是李华。你的美国笔友Eric被中国北京大学录取了。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示祝贺；

2. 询问学习经验。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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2．假定你是李华，你校英语翻译爱好者协会成功举办了中华诗词英译大赛，请你代表协会在本次活动的颁奖仪式上进行总结发言，内容包括：

1. 表示祝贺；

2. 回顾本次活动；

3. 表达希望。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear fellow schoolmates,

It’s my great honor to make a concluding statement here.

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That’s all. Thank you!

3．假定你是李华，在交换生好友Alan的鼓励和帮助下，你在上周五的英语演讲比赛中取得了好成绩。请你就此写一封邮件给他，内容包括：

1.告知成绩；2.表示感谢；3.邀请一同庆祝。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Alan,

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Yours,

Li Hua

4．假定你是李华，你在生日时收到了加拿大好友Mike送给你的生日礼物—一本英语口语书(Sentences for Instant Use)，这对你的学习帮助很大。请你根据下面的要点提示，给他写一封表达感谢的电子邮件：

1.写信目的；

2.感谢理由；

3.你的期待。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

5．假定你是李华，你班的澳大利亚交流生Catherine在你市举办的“外国人写汉字”书法大赛中荣获一等奖，请你给她写一封邮件。内容包括：

1. 祝贺她获奖；

2. 请她分享经验；

3. 希望她明年也参加。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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6．假如你是李华，你的英国网友Mike参加了你市“首届外国留学生中国软笔书法竞赛”并获得了一等奖，请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1. 为他获奖表示祝贺；

2. 肯定他的成绩和努力；

3. 约时间在网上交流学习中国软笔书法的体会。

注意：1. 词数100左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2.参考词汇：首届外国留学生中国软笔书法竞赛 the First Chinese Calligraphy Contest for Foreign Students

Dear Mike,

I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations

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Yours,

Li Hua

7．假如你是李华，得知你升入心仪的大学，你的英国朋友Tom来信祝贺，并希望了解你的近况。请你给他写一封回信，要点如下：

1.大学留给你的第一印象；

2.开学后发生的一件令你尴尬（惊喜/欣慰）的事情；

3.学习压力较大，你准备全力以赴。

注意：1.词数100词左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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8．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Tony对中医文化很感兴趣，发来邮件向你询问有关中医的事情，请你回他一封邮件，回答他的问题，内容包括：

1. 中医的历史、地位；

2. 中医的优势（疗效好、副作用少、价格低）等。

参考词汇：中医 Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM)

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9．假如你是李华，你的美国网友Peter参加中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。

1) 祝贺他获奖；

2) 肯定他付出的努力；

3) 询问何时方便，在网上切磋棋艺。

注意：1)词数100左右；

2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3)开头和结尾已为你写好。

参考词汇：the Chinese Chess Network Challenge

Dear Peter,

I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations

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Congratulations again.

Yours,

Li Hua

10．假如你是李华。最近你刚结束在英国为期一个月的交换学习。学习期间，你和房东Mr. Wilson结下了深厚的友谊。请根据下面的写作提纲，给Mr. Wilson发一封电子邮件。

内容包括：1. 表示感谢  2. 回顾他对你的照顾和帮助  3. 邀请他来中国游览

注意：1.词数100左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. Wilson，

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Yours

Li hua

1．One possible version:

Dear Eric,

Knowing that you have been admitted to Peking University, I’m so happy that I can’t wait to offer you my heartfelt congratulations.

Opportunities favor those who are well-prepared. I believe that the final realization of your goal comes from years of hard work. Now your efforts have paid off. Congratulations! I’m sure that, at Peking University where more chances will be available for you, you will make even more remarkable achievements. Besides, I believe that you must have some valuable learning experience that helps you in your study. I’d appreciate it if you could share some with me.

Congratulations again and best wishes for your bright future.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于英文中的应用文写作。要求考生给自己的笔友Eric写信，祝贺他被北京大学录取，并向其询问学习经验。

【详解】1.词汇积累

源自于：come from→ originate from

坚信：be sure → be convinced

可得到的：available→ accessible/at hand

此外：besides → what’s more

2.句式拓展

句式转换

原句：Knowing that you have been admitted to Peking University, I’m so happy that I can’t wait to offer you my heartfelt congratulations.

拓展句：When I know that you have been admitted to Peking University, I’m so happy that I can’t wait to offer you my heartfelt congratulations.

【点睛】【高分句型1】 Opportunities favor those who are well-prepared.（运用了who引导的定语从句）

【高分句型2】I’m sure that, at Peking University where more chances will be available for you, you will make even more remarkable achievements.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和where引导的定语从句）

2．One possible version:

Dear fellow schoolmates,

It’s my great honor to make a concluding statement here. At this moment, I’d like to extend my sincere congratulations to all of the participants.

The competition would not be a great success without the joint efforts of everyone. My hearty thanks go firstly to our teachers, whose guidance and encouragement have given us much insight into translation of Chinese poetry. Besides, all the participants’ devotion and wonderful performance impressed us a lot. Most importantly, the competition has further stimulated our passion for Chinese poetry and boosted our cultural confidence.

I sincerely hope that we students will work to learn English well, carry forward and spread traditional Chinese culture.

That’s all. Thank you!

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表校英语翻译爱好者协会在中华诗词英译大赛颁奖仪式上进行总结发言，回顾活动并表示祝贺。

【详解】1.词汇积累

此刻：at this moment→ now

诚挚地：sincerely→genuinely

比赛：competition→match

推进：boost→promote

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Besides, all the participants’ devotion and wonderful performance impressed us a lot.

拓展句：Besides, what impressed us a lot is all the participants’ devotion and wonderful performance.

【点睛】【高分句型1】My hearty thanks go firstly to our teachers, whose guidance and encouragement have given us much insight into translation of Chinese poetry.（运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】I sincerely hope that we students will work to learn English well, carry forward and spread traditional Chinese culture.（运用了that引导宾语从句）

3．One possible version:

Dear Alan,

I have a burning desire to tell you that I won first prize in the English Speech Contest held in our school last Friday.

There’s no doubt that my achievement is largely credited to you because you gave me much encouragement and help. Without you, I wouldn’t have improved my pronunciation and eased my nervousness. For that, I’m deeply grateful.

I’m sure that you’d like to share my happiness, so I’d like to invite you to my house to enjoy a dinner on Tuesday evening. I will cook some traditional Chinese food to treat you.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生好友Alan写一封邮件，表示对他给予你的帮助的感谢。

【详解】1.词汇积累

告诉：tell →inform

因为：because → as

缓和：ease →alleviate

期望：look forward to→ expect

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Without you, I wouldn’t have improved my pronunciation and eased my nervousness.

拓展句：If you hadn’t helped me, I wouldn’t have improved my pronunciation and eased my nervousness.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I have a burning desire to tell you that I won first prize in the English Speech Contest held in our school last Friday.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】There’s no doubt that my achievement is largely credited to you because you gave me much encouragement and help.（运用了that引导的同位语从句和because引导的原因状语从句）

4．Dear Mike.

I am writing to express my sincere thanks for the book Sentences for Instant Use you gave me on my birthday.

It has helped improve my English greatly. Firstly, the sentences in the book are practical and easy to remember. Besides, it is quite handy to carry and use because of its small size. More importantly, I can use it to communicate with foreigners, which improves my spoken English and builds up my confidence.

Thanks again for your gift. By the way, how is your Chinese learning going? I am looking forward to talking with you in Chinese soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给加拿大好友Mike写一封表达感谢的电子邮件，感谢他在生日时送给自己的生日礼物—一本自己帮助很大的英语口语书(Sentences for Instant Use)。

【详解】1.词汇积累

真诚的：sincere→earnest

方便的：handy→convenient

增强：build up→boost

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Besides, it is quite handy to carry and use because of its small size.

拓展句：Besides, it is quite handy to carry and use because its size is small.

【点睛】【高分句型1】More importantly, I can use it to communicate with foreigners, which improves my spoken English and builds up my confidence.(使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。)

【高分句型2】I am writing to express my sincere thanks for the book Sentences for Instant Use you gave me on my birthday.(使用了省略关系代词that或which的定语从句。)

5．【参考范文】

Dear Catherine,

I’ve learned with delight that you have won the first prize in the handwriting competition. I’m writing to offer my congratulations from the bottom of my heart.

For months, not only have you read many books about Chinese calligraphy, but you’ve kept on practicing it every day. Now your efforts have paid off. In the meantime, I really wish to improve my handwriting, so could you please share your experience and unique ideas on handwriting?

I do hope you’ll also participate in next year’s competition. I’m certain that you’ll make greater achievements.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本文是一篇应用文，要求考生给班上澳大利亚交流生Catherine写一封邮件，祝贺她在“外国人写汉字”书法大赛中荣获一等奖，并请她分享经验，邀请她明年继续参加比赛。

【详解】1.词汇积累

了解：learn→ know

高兴：delight→ pleasure

努力：effort→ hard-working

提升：improve→ promote

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I’m writing to offer my congratulations from the bottom of my heart.

拓展句：I’m writing to offer my congratulations, which are from the bottom of my heart.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I’ve learned with delight that you have won the first prize in the handwriting competition. (运用that引导宾语从句)

【高分句型2】For months, not only have you read many books about Chinese calligraphy, but you’ve kept on practicing it every day. (运用not only …but also…和倒装结构)

6．Dear Mike,

I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your taking first place in the First Chinese Calligraphy Contest for Foreign Students in our city. As your friend, I just want you to know I am more than glad at your success.

Everything comes to him who waits. For these years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese calligraphy and kept on practicing it every day. Not only have you referred to many calligraphy books, but also you have consulted some calligraphy masters. Hard work pays off. Eventually, it was through your hard work and talent that you succeeded in winning the championship!

I’m happy about what you have achieved and I hope to exchange with you our experience in learning calligraphy so that we can make progress together. Please tell me when you have time.

Congratulations again.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本文是一篇应用文，就英国朋友Mike在首届外国留学生中国软笔书法竞赛上荣获一等奖表示祝贺。

【详解】1.词汇积累

展示：show→present

高兴的：glad→delighted

希望：hope→expect

继续：keep on→insist on

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：For these years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese calligraphy and kept on practicing it every day.

拓展句：For these years, it is because of your great interest in Chinese calligraphy that you have kept on practicing it every day.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Everything comes to him who waits. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Not only have you referred to many calligraphy books, but also you have consulted some calligraphy masters. (运用了部分倒装结构)

7．Dear Tom,

I have received your letter of congratulations. Thanks for caring about me.

The university impressed me with its unique beauty, its new facilities and enthusiastic teachers. I feel so fortunate being here. At the same time, I still remember an embarrassing moment when the whole class burst out laughing after my self-introduction. As you know, I was too nervous to notice that the teacher and I shared the same name Li Hua! What a coincidence!

With much homework to do and many activities to attend, everybody is put under great pressure. But I will of course go all out to achieve my goals. What about your new semester?

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Tom写一封回信，并在信中说明你升入大学的近况。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时，少量现在完成时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.大学留给你的第一印象；

2.开学后发生的一件令你尴尬（惊喜/欣慰）的事情；

3.学习压力较大，你准备全力以赴。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

congratulations; care about; impress with; embarrassing; burst out; too…to; under pressure; go all out; look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. I have received your letter of congratulations.

2. Thanks for caring about me.

3.The university impressed me with its unique beauty, its new facilities and enthusiastic teachers.

4.I still remember an embarrassing moment when the whole class burst out laughing after my self-introduction.

5. I was too nervous to notice that the teacher and I shared the same name Li Hua!

6. With much homework to do and many activities to attend, everybody is put under great pressure.

7. But I will of course go all out to achieve my goals.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

2.表并列补充关系：at the same time

3.表转折对比关系：but

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

【点睛】[高分句型1]

I still remember an embarrassing moment when the whole class burst out laughing after my self-introduction.(灵活运用了when引导定语从句)

[高分句型2]

With much homework to do and many activities to attend, everybody is put under great pressure.(灵活运用了with复合结构在句中做状语)

8．Dear Tony,

I am more than delighted to hear that you take an intense interest in Chinese culture, especially Traditional Chinese Medicine. The TCM, as an important part of Chinese culture, has been attracting attention from all over the world.

The TCM, with its unique diagnostic methods, long history and remarkable effects, has been used to treat cancer and other serious diseases for more than five thousand years. Unlike the Western Medicine, the TCM has fewer side effects, making it much more reliable for most Chinese people. Above all, compared with high fees of the Western Medicine, the TCM has a more reasonable price that ordinary people can afford.

In a word, the TCM has made great contributions to the development of Chinese health care. Hope you can have a better understanding of it.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封邮件。

【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。你的美国朋友Tony对中医文化很感兴趣，发来邮件向你询问有关中医的事情，请你回他一封邮件，回答他的问题，内容包括：1. 中医的历史、地位；2. 中医的优势（疗效好、副作用少、价格低）等。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，表示感谢，并说明自己的状况。第二段，学习内容和方式；锻炼方式；第三段，感想。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: be delighted to, take an intense interest in, attract attention, In a word, made great contributions to.

第四步：确定较为高级的句子: 非谓语动词结构Unlike the Western Medicine, the TCM has fewer side effects, making it much more reliable for most Chinese people； 非谓语动词和定语从句的运用 Above all, compared with high fees of the Western Medicine, the TCM has a more reasonable price that ordinary people can afford.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:Above all，In a word.

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。

【点睛】

文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: 非谓语动词结构Unlike the Western Medicine, the TCM has fewer side effects, making it much more reliable for most Chinese people； 非谓语动词和定语从句的运用 Above all, compared with high fees of the Western Medicine, the TCM has a more reasonable price that ordinary people can afford.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。

9．Dear Peter,

I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge. As your friend, I just want you to know how glad I am at your success.

“Everything comes to him who waits.” For these years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese chess and kept on practicing it every day. Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy, but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contests. Finally, you succeeded in winning the online competition!

So I’m so happy that you become champion of this network challenge. At last, I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together. Please tell me when you have time.

Congratulations again.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封祝贺信。

【详解】第一步：

审题：祝贺信  祝贺Peter参加中国象棋网络挑战赛获得了一等奖

人称：第一、二人称

时态：一般现在时

结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分祝贺Peter获奖，第二部分肯定Peter付出的努力，

第三部分想与他在网上切磋棋艺，询问何时方便，并再次表示祝贺。

要点：

1. 祝贺Peter获得中国象棋网络挑战赛一等奖

2．肯定Peter付出的努力

①每天坚持练习

②阅读有关象棋策略的书籍

③参加各种中国象棋比赛；

3．想与他在网上切磋棋艺，询问何时方便

4.再次表示祝贺

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）

congratulations to sb. on …；win the first prize；be glad at；show interest in；keep on doing…；chess strategy；compete in；contest；succeed in；win the competition； champion；play Chinese chess；make progress

第三步：连词成句

(1)I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge.

(2) You’ve shown great interest in Chinese chess.

(3) You keep on practicing it every day.

(4) You have read many books about Chinese chess strategy.

 (5) You have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contests.

(6) You succeeded in winning the online competition!

(7) You become champion of this network challenge.

(8) I hope to play Chinese chess with you.

(9)We can make progress together.  

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)

表示时间顺序： first of all; to begin/start with , in the beginning

firstly.... secondly .... lastly / finally/in the end

表示并列或补充关系： what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;

in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others

表示转折对比关系：but, however, although, though, yet, while

on one hand…on the other hand ...,

表示因果关系：because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence , consequently, thus

连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、

段与段之间结构清晰。

【点睛】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 congratulations to sb. on …；win the first prize；be glad at；show interest in；keep on doing…；compete in；succeed in；win the competition；champion；play Chinese chess；make progress等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如not only…but also 的倒装句式的运用 Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy, but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contests. ；so that引导的状语从句的运用I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together等。

10．Dear Mr. Wilson,

How is everything going? I’ve been back home now. I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kindness.

While I was in England, your help and kindness made my stay special and enjoyable. How I miss the days we spent together! Thanks to your help, I got used to the lifestyle there soon. I still miss the delicious meals you prepared for me. Besides, I really appreciate your patience while talking to me. By practicing speaking with you every day, I gradually improve my spoken English.

I hope we can keep in touch with and communicate with each other in the future. It would be a great honor for me to invite you to come to China so that you can experience Chinese culture. Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封电子邮件：假如你是李华。最近你刚结束在英国为期一个月的交换学习。学习期间，你和房东Mr. Wilson结下了深厚的友谊。请根据下面的写作提纲，给Mr. Wilson发一封电子邮件。内容包括：1. 表示感谢  2. 回顾他对你的照顾和帮助  3. 邀请他来中国游览。时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； kindness（好意、友好），gratitude（感谢），enjoyable（愉快的），lifestyle（生活方式）， experience（体验）及patience（耐心）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有express one’s gratitude to sb for sth（因……向某人表示感谢），thanks to（多亏、由于），get used to sth (适应某事)，in the future （将来），keep in touch with（与……保持联系）以及communicate with（与……交流），而且还使用了状语从句“While I was in England, your help and kindness made my stay special and enjoyable.”及“Besides, I really appreciate your patience while talking to me.”，定语从句“I still miss the delicious meals you prepared for me.”，宾语从句“I hope we can keep in touch with and communicate with each other in the future.”，形式主语“It would be a great honor for me to invite you to come to China so that you can experience Chinese culture.”，非谓语动词“By practicing speaking with you every day, I gradually improve my spoken English.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。