重庆高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信

感谢信/祝贺信

1．假设你是李华，你的南非朋友Martin给你发来一封邮件, 告诉你他在外国人汉字书法大赛(Chinese Calligraphy Contest For Foreigners)中获得一等奖。请你用英语给他回一封邮件。内容包括：

1.对他表示祝贺；

2.肯定他的付出；

3.了解参赛经验。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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2．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Tom在红星中学举办的“中国诗词大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。请根据以下提示写信向他表示祝贺，内容包括：

1. 祝贺获奖；

2. 肯定付出的努力；

注意：

1.词数 100 左右；

2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：中国诗词大会 Chinese Poetry Contest

Dear Tom,

How are you these days?

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

3．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter坚持学习汉语10年，最近顺利通过汉语水平考试(HSK)四级。请写信向他表示祝贺。内容要点包括：

1．表示祝贺；

2．肯定Peter平时为之做出的努力；

3．鼓励和期望。

注意：

1．词数80左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

4．假定你是学生会主席李华，近期你学校开展“党在我心中”英文演讲比赛活动，你代表学生会邀请你的一位外籍老师Mary参加此次活动，并担任评委工作。内容包括：

1.活动时间和地点；    

2.活动主题为“党在我心中”；

3.比赛主要议程。            

4.期待参与。

注意：

1.词数100左右;

2.符合英文邀请函格式要求。

3.参考词汇：

中国共产党the Communist Party of China (or the CPC)

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5．假如你是李华，你的笔友Jason大学毕业后如愿被一家IT公司录用了。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。

1)祝贺他被录用；

2)肯定他的努力和付出；

3表达自己向他学习的愿望。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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6．我们除了感谢他人，也应该感谢自己。在高中生活即将结束之际，请根据自身的情况，给自己写一封感谢信，看到美好的自己和更美好的未来。

注意：

1.词数应为80左右；

2.信的开头和结尾已经给出。

Dear Self,

I’m writing to express my thanks to you.

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Self

7．假定你是李华，你在美国纽约旅游期间受到了Mrs Smith的接待。请你写一封感谢信，内容要点如下：

1. 告知安全返回；

2. 感谢她的帮助；

3. 表达美好愿望。

注意：词数80左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mrs. Smith,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

8．假定你是李华，上周日你不慎在阅览室丢失了一个书包，里面有一些重要物品。你校外教 Mr. Smith 捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：

1. 写信目的； 2. 描述事情的经过； 3. 再次表达感谢。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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9．假定你是橙子、你的英国网友Fudao参加中国围棋网络挑战赛（The Chinese Go Network Competition）获得了一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺：

1. 祝贺他获奖；

2. 赞扬他的付出和努力；

3. 表达向他学习的意愿。

注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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10．假设你是李华，暑假参加了为期两周的“美国夏令营”活动。在这两周里，你住在Smith夫妇家中，他们为你提供了吃、住、行及旅游方面的帮助。请写一封电子邮件感谢他们。信件内容需包括以下几点：

1. 问候并告知Smith 夫妇已安全回到中国；

2. 感谢Smith 夫妇的帮助；

3. 希望保持联络。

注意：信的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。字数80词左右

Dear the Smiths,

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Yours,

Li Hua

1．Dear Martin,

Learning that you’ve won the first prize in Chinese Calligraphy Contest For Foreigners, I’m writing to offer my congratulations to you.

Success favors the mind that is prepared. Not only have you referred to calligraphy books, but also you have consulted some masters. It is your hard work and talent that make you succeed in winning the championship.

I’d like to know some experience about taking part in the contest. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给南非朋友Martin写信祝贺他在外国人汉字书法大赛中获得一等奖，同时肯定他的付出并了解参赛经验。

【详解】1.词汇积累

天赋：talent→ gift

知道：learn→ know

获得一等奖：win the first prize→ win the championship

参加：take part in→ join in

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I’d like to know some experience about taking part in the contest.

拓展句：I’d like to know some experience which is about taking part in the contest.

【高分句型1】Success favors the mind that is prepared.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Not only have you referred to calligraphy books, but also you have consulted some masters.（运用了not only…but also…引导的部分倒装句）

2．Dear Tom,

How are you these days? I am writing to extend to you my utmost congratulations on your winning the first prize of your group in the Chinese Poetry Contest. As your friend, I just want you to know how delighted I was when I know your success.

For these years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese poetry and kept on reciting poems every day. Not only have you accumulated much knowledge about Chinese poetry but also you have formed a deep understanding of it. It is a reward you richly deserve for your appreciation towards those poems.

All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就你的英国朋友Tom在红星中学举办的“中国诗词大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖的事，写信向他表示祝贺。

【详解】1.词汇积累

提供、传达：extend to→convey

极大的祝贺：utmost congratulation→sincere congratulation

高兴的：delighted→pleased

对……感兴趣：show interest in→have interest in / be interested in

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：I am writing to extend to you my utmost congratulations on your winning the first prize of your group in the Chinese Poetry Contest.

拓展句：Hearing that you won the first prize of your group in the Chinese Poetry Contest, I can’t wait to write this letter to convey my sincere congratulations.

【点睛】【高分句型1】As your friend, I just want you to know how delighted I was when I know your success.(运用了how引导的宾语从句和when引导的时间状语从句)

【高分句型2】Not only have you accumulated much knowledge about Chinese poetry but also you have formed a deep understanding of it.(运用了not only…but also…连接的并列句和部分倒装)

3．Dear Peter,

I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your passing the HSK 4 test. I feel incredibly proud of your remarkable academic achievements.

From my perspective, you are one of the most diligent students I’ve ever known. You are active in class and you spend most of your spare time in the library. The past 10 years have seen your devotion, persistence, strenuous efforts, and eventually your rapid progress in Chinese learning. Therefore, I firmly believe this fulfillment is a reward that you richly deserve.

I am sure that the certificate you have won is the first of many honors that you will attain in the years to come. I genuinely wish you could make still further achievements in the future and I am looking forward to good news from you soon again.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter坚持学习汉语10年，最近顺利通过汉语水平考试(HSK)四级。请写信向他表示祝贺。

【详解】1.词汇积累

感到无比自豪：feel incredibly proud of→take incredible pride in

勤奋的：diligent→hardworking

积极的：active→positive

最终：eventually =finally

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your passing the HSK 4 test. I feel incredibly proud of your remarkable academic achievements.

拓展句：I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your passing the HSK 4 test and I feel incredibly proud of your remarkable academic achievements.

【点睛】[高分句型1] From my perspective, you are one of the most diligent students I’ve ever known. (运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Therefore, I firmly believe this fulfillment is a reward that you richly deserve. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)

4．Dear Mary:

On behalf of our student union, I sincerely invite you to participate in an English speech contest and serve as a judge.

Aimed to raise the awareness of loving our Party, a speech contest themed “the CPC in my heart” will be held in Academic Reporting Hall at 3:00 p.m. on November 20. After all the competitors finish their speeches, each judge will make a comment on the speakers, and give a mark comprehensively. According to the scores, the competitors will be awarded different prizes. At the end of the competition, the winners will have photos taken with all the judges.

I am looking forward to your participation.

Yours

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教写一封学校活动的邀请信。

【详解】词汇积累

代表：On behalf of→ representing

真诚地：sincerely→ faithfully

参加：participate in→ join in → take part in

比赛：contest→ competition

旨在：aimed to→ intended to

评论：make a comment on→ comment on

综合地：comprehensively→ overall

期待：looking forward to→ anticipate

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句1：At the end of the competition, the winners will have photos taken with all the judges.

拓展句1：When the competition come to an end, the winners will have photos taken with all the judges.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Aimed to raise the awareness of loving our Party, a speech contest themed “the CPC in my heart” will be held in Academic Reporting Hall at 3:00 p.m. on November 20.（运用了分词作状语。）

【高分句型2】After all the competitors finish their speeches, each judge will make a comment on the speakers, and give a mark comprehensively.（运用了时间状语从句。）

5．Dear Jason,

Much delighted to learn that you have been recruited into your long-anticipated IT company, I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations to you.

It came as no surprise to me that you can distinguish yourself as the most desired candidate in that you have readied yourself for the chance since you stepped into the university. Via so many emails we have exchanged, I am acutely aware of it. What strikes me most is that you displayed a strong sense of discipline and labored to acquire professional proficiency in-all related subjects, thus making you stand out among your peers. Beyond that, upon graduation, you look pains over throughout research of the company as well as its culture, potential clients and defining moments etc, which definitely served you well in the job interview. You always told me success awaits those who make adequate preparations and exert themselves tirelessly and you made it happen. So inspired and motivated am I by your achievement that I can’t wait to learn from you.

Again, congratulations and best wishes for all the good in your future.

 Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于祝贺信。要求考生给笔友Jason写信，对其被一家IT公司录用表示祝贺。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：happy → delighted

进入：enter → step into

表现：show→ display

足够的：enough→ adequate

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Much delighted to learn that you have been recruited into your long-anticipated IT company, I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations to you.

拓展句：Because I am very delighted to learn that you have been recruited into your long-anticipated IT company, I’m writing to extend my heartfelt congratulations to you.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Beyond that, upon graduation, you look pains over throughout research of the company as well as its culture, potential clients and defining moments etc, which definitely served you well in the job interview.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】You always told me success awaits those who make adequate preparations and exert themselves tirelessly and you made it happen.（运用了省略that的宾语从句以及who引导的定语从句）

6．Dear Self,

I’m writing to express my thanks to you. As time goes by, I will graduate from high school soon. Looking back on the three years of high school life, I thank you for your courage and hard work. In the face of difficulties, you are never afraid of failure. Over the past three years, you have been getting along well with your classmates and teachers, leaving many good memories of your high school life. Your dream university is Zhejiang University, which is one of the key universities in China. As long as you work hard, you will realize your college dream. I believe a bright future is waiting for you.

     I wish you can be admitted to your dream university.

Self

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在高中生活即将结束之际，给自己写一封感谢信，看到美好的自己和更美好的未来。

【详解】1.词汇积累

表达：express→convey

回首：look back on→recall

面对：in the face of→be faced with/confront

相处：get along with→get on with

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Looking back on the three years of high school life, I thank you for your courage and hard work.

拓展句：When I look back on the three years of high school life, I thank you for your courage and hard work.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Over the past three years, you have been getting along well with your classmates and teachers, leaving many good memories of your high school life. (运用了非谓语中的现在分词作结果状语)

【高分句型2】Your dream university is Zhejiang University, which is one of the key universities in China. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

7．Dear Mrs. Smith,

I’ve got back safe and sound. Now I’m writing to express my sincere thanks to you. During my stay in New York, you provided me with everything needed and even took the trouble to drive me around, making it such a wonderful experience. When I was in a mess, you always offered me timely help, which turned every awkward moment into laughter. Thank you for all you’ve done for me. Wish you all the best and hope to return your kindness someday.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就自己在美国纽约旅游期间受到了Mrs Smith的接待一事写一封感谢信，告知Mrs Smith自己安全返回和感谢她的帮助。

【详解】1.词汇积累

感谢：thanks→appreciation

提供某人某物：provide sb. with sth.→supply sth. for sb.

绝妙的：wonderful→fabulous

令人尴尬的：awkward→embarrassing

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：During my stay in New York, you provided me with everything needed and even took the trouble to drive me around, making it such a wonderful experience.

拓展句：During my stay in New York, you provided me with everything that I needed and even took the trouble to drive me around, which made it such a wonderful experience.

【点睛】【高分句型1】When I was in a mess, you always offered me timely help, which turned every awkward moment into laughter. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】Thank you for all you’ve done for me. (运用了省略that引导的限制性定语从句)

8．Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Grade 2. I’m writing to thank you for returning my schoolbag.

Last Sunday, I left my schoolbag in the reading-room owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school’s Lost and Found and it was you who had found my schoolbag. My excitement was truly beyond description at that moment!

Please accept my cordial thanks for your help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写一封信，感谢他把你丢失在阅览室的书包上交给学校。

【详解】1.词汇积累

归还：give...back→return

由于：due to→owing to

通知，告知：tell→inform

诚恳的：sincere→cordial

2.句型拓展

变强调句

原句：Last Sunday, I left my schoolbag in the reading-room owing to my carelessness.

拓展句：Last Sunday, it was owing to my carelessness that I left my schoolbag in the reading-room.

【点睛】[高分句型1]I was worried because my student ID card, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school’s Lost and Found and it was you who had found my schoolbag.（运用了强调句，as引导的时间状语从句和that引导的宾语从句）

9．I heard that you won the first prize in The Chinese Go Network Competition, for which I sincerely congratulate you.

I believe this is not an accident, but the inevitable result of your persistence and efforts. Besides , I believe your achievements will not be achieved overnight. During this period, you must have made great efforts and persistence. Your persistence and efforts for 20 years have finally paid off. Congratulations again.

You are my example. Your actions tell me that where there is a will, there is a way.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国网友Fudao写封信，祝贺他获得中国围棋网络挑战赛的一等奖。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

真诚地：sincerely→genuinely

必然发生的：inevitable→unavoidable

此外：besides→moreover

榜样：example→model

2. 句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：During this period, you must have made great efforts and persistence. Your persistence and efforts for 20 years have finally paid off.

拓展句：During this period, you must have made great efforts and persistence, which have finally paid off.

【点睛】[高分句型1]I heard that you won the first prize in The Chinese Go Network Competition, for which I sincerely congratulate you.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Your actions tell me that where there is a will, there is a way.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

10．Dear the Smiths,

How time flies. I reached your home two weeks ago as if it had happened yesterday.

I am delighted to tell you that I have returned China safe and sound. Thinking of the wonderful two-week experiences that I spent with you in America, I just can’t help wanting to express my sincere gratitude to your couple. It was so considerate of you to have provided me everything and make my stay such a wonderful experience. I have gained a lot. Not only did I practice my English, but also I had a precious opportunity to appreciate different cultures. It was your hospitality and great help that made my journey fruitful and worthwhile.

I will cherish those sweet memories. And I hope we can keep in touch.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Smith夫妇写一封电子邮件，感谢他们为你提供了吃、住、行及旅游方面的帮助。

【详解】1.词汇积累

到达：reach →get to

高兴的：delighted →happy

提供：provide →supply

机会：opportunity →chance

2.句式拓展

句式转换

原句：I will cherish those sweet memories.

拓展句：I will cherish the merry memories for the rest of my life

【点睛】[高分句型1] I am delighted to tell you that I have returned China safe and sound. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] Not only did I practice my English, but also I had a precious opportunity to appreciate different cultures. (运用了部分倒装结构)