重庆高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter计划来中国旅行，希望你为他推荐一座城市。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1.推荐这座城市的理由（至少包含两点）；

2.注意事项。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使内容连贯。

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2．假如你是李华，请给你的外国朋友 Tom 写一封信，给他提一些汉语学习方面的好建议并陈述理由。 要点如下：1. 培养兴趣 2. 多阅读 3. 看中文电影

注意：1. 词数100词左右（信的开头和结尾已经给出，并不计入总词数）；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

3．假如你是Jack，从报纸上获悉，2014年10月，西双版纳地区一头大象被猎杀取牙。对此你非常愤怒，请你就此事用英语给《English Weekly》报社写封信，呼吁人们保护野生动物。

内容应包括：

1. 简述报道内容并发表看法。

2. 保护野生动物的必要性(至少二条)。

3. 提出建议（至少二条）。

参考词汇：象牙tusk   西双版纳Xishuangbanna　　　保护protect　　　野生的wild

注意：1. 词数不少于80；

2. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

4. 在答题卡上作答。

Dear Editor，

My name is Jack, a senior middle school student. The other day I happened to read a shocking piece of news. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

To live in a better future, let’s work together to help wildlife.

Yours,

Jack

4．假定你是高一新生李华，在高中学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，请你给“21st Century”报写一封信求助。内容包括：

1.自我介绍；

2.遇到的困难；

3.希望得到对方的建议。

注意：词数100字左右；可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Dear Editor,

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Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

5．假定你是高二学生李华。紧张的高三生活即将来临，你的父母对你最后一年的学习充满着期望。请你给你的父母写一封信。内容包括：

1. 表达你努力学习的决心，对他们的关心表示感谢

2. 向他们提出2-3个建议，以更好地支持你高三拼搏。

注意：1. 词数100左右。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear mom and dad，

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Best regards,

Your love

Li Hua

6．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Steve给你发邮件说他将在寒假期间来中国旅游。请你根据下列要点给Steve回—封邮件。

1. 欢迎Steve来华，邀请他到家做客;

2. 如果需要，可以陪同他—起旅行;

3. 给他提出来中国旅游的建议。

注意:1. 词数100左右，邮件开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Steve,

I’m glad to know that you will come to visit China in the coming winter holiday.

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Yours,

Li Hua

7．假如你是李华，学校最近要组织一次英语演讲比赛，主题为“垃圾分类益处多”。请你根据此话题写一篇演讲稿。要点如下:

1.你的观点；

2.你的建议。

参考词汇:垃圾分类garbage classification

注意:

1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

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8．假定你是李华。你的美国网友Eric打算寒假期间到中国来旅游。最近，他来信向你询问来中国旅游时的注意事项。请你用英语给他回封邮件。内容包括：

1. 交通工具的选择；

2. 购物付款方式；

3. 天气、饮食和住宿。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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9．假如你是李华。你的笔友Kenton写信告诉你，他自从上了高中之后成绩不理想，每次考试总是犯很多错误，他很焦虑。请你用英语回信，给他提一些建议。

要点提示: 1. 表示安慰；

2. 提出建议；

3. 给予鼓励。

参考词汇:分数score 压力 pressure

注意:1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Kenton,

I’ve received your letter.

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Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

10．假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”，请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。

    注意：

 1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

 2.词数120左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

 3.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

teacher and schoolmates,1t’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my  experience of learning English with you.

Thank you for listening.

1．Dear Peter,

I am so glad to hear from you．Learning that you are going to visit China，I strongly recommend you have a trip to Beijing.

As the captain of China，Beijing is famous for it's beautiful scene and cultural inheritance such as the Great Wall, and the Summer Palace. There is a famous saying, " He who cannot surmount the Great Wall is not a true man", the Summer Palace is a wonderful place all the time,which has its special characteristics in every season.

You should keep in mind when traveling in Beijing. Firstly, buy a map, and get familiar with the city and streets. Secondly. call the police in emergency.

Wish you a nice trip!

Yours Sincerely,

LiHua

【分析】本文为建议信。你的美国朋友Peter计划来中国旅行。请给你的朋友Peter写一封信，向他推荐一座城市，内容包括：推荐这座城市的理由（至少包含两点）；和注意事项。

【详解】本题为提纲式作文。根据要求可知，第一部分从总体上叙述推荐这座城市的理由。第二部分具体描述注意事项。最后一部分祝福你的朋友中国之行愉快。

【点睛】本文内容完整，结构合理。文中的句式相对灵活多变，简单句与复合句相结合。复合句有宾语从句Learning that you are going to visit China，I strongly recommend you have a trip to Beijing.，其中使用了非谓语动词和虚拟语气；由which引导的定语从句The Summer Palace is a wonderful place all the time, which has its special characteristics in every season.等。

2．Dear Tom,

As for the good ways to learn Chinese well, my suggestions are as follows.

First and foremost, be interested in what you are learning. As we all know, interest is the best teacher. If you have an interest in something, it’s easier for you to pay attention to it for a long time. In addition, it’s also a good idea to read more Chinese books. This is because you can learn many new words while reading. Last but not least, you can try to improve your Chinese by watching Chinese movies as well, which will help you to improve your listening and speaking skills.

I hope you can take my advice into consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇上面表达属于应用文——建议信的写作。要求考生写一封信，给外国朋友 Tom提一些汉语学习方面的好建议并陈述理由。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文——建议信

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

人称：第二人称

结构：总分法。先总说自己有建议，再分说具体的建议。最后提出期望。

要求：1.学习汉语有很多方法，表达自己的建议。

      2.分说具体建议

      1）培养兴趣（develop an interest）

      2）多阅读（reading more about Chinese）

      3) 看中文电影（watch Chinese movies）

      3.期待能考虑我的建议。（hope to take these suggestions into consideration）

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

as follows, be interested in, develop an interest in, read more Chinese books, gain much knowledge, improve Chinese, watch Chinese movies, improve listening and speaking skills

第三步：连词成句

My suggestions are as follows.

It’s a good idea to read more Chinese books.

You can learn many new words while reading.

You can try to improve your Chinese by watching Chinese movies.

It will help you to improve your listening and speaking skills.

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First and foremost, in addition, last but not least

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改

【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了多个短语如：as for, as follows, first and foremost, in addition, last but not least等表达,句式变化多样，用到了it作为形式主语的句式，表语从句，非限制性定语从句，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

3．Dear Editor,

My name is Li Hua, a senior middle school student. The other day I happened to read a shocking piece of news. In October, 2014, a wild Asian elephant was killed without mercy in Xishuangbanna, with its tusks taken away. I feel terribly sorry and ashamed of what people did to the animal.

In my opinion, we should attach great importance to wildlife protection. The number of wildlife is decreasing every year and some endangered species have even died out. Protecting wild animals, our friends, means protecting ourselves. It helps keep the balance of nature.

So something must be done for lovely wildlife. Anyone who hunts or kills wildlife should be fined and punished severely. The animal trade is never allowed as well, for when the buying stops, the killing can too. At the same time, every single one of us should shoulder our responsibility to protect the environment.

To live in a better future, let’s work together to help wildlife.

Yours,

Jack

【分析】本文属于提纲类作文，同时也属于应用文中的书信，要求考生把自己当成Jack，用英语给《English Weekly》报社写封信，呼吁人们保护野生动物。本文要求考生自行组织要点，总体难度较大。

【详解】第1步：审题。根据文字提示可知本文是一封书信，要求考生把自己当成Jack，因为西双版纳地区一头大象被猎杀取牙，就此事用给《English Weekly》报社写封信，呼吁人们保护野生动物。全文以一般现在时和第一和第三人称为主。

第2步：组织要点。1. 简述报道内容并发表看法：2014年10月，西双版纳地区一头大象被猎杀取牙。他感到很愤怒，为人们的做法羞愧。2. 保护野生动物的必要性：应该高度重视野生动物保护；要积极保护生态平衡。3. 提出建议：对猎杀野生动物的人进行严厉地处罚；禁止动物产品贸易；人人尽责保护以野生动物。

第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为be killed without mercy、feel terribly sorry and ashamed of 、attach great importance to 、some endangered species、keep the balance of nature、shoulder our responsibility 等。同时注意书信的惯用语和习惯表达。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。时态和人称运用准确，内容全面无遗漏，所提及的要点和建议十分合理。范文中考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化并不死板。尤其是使用了较多的高级词汇，如without mercy、shoulder our responsibility 等；尽量运用高级语法结构，如with复合结构In October, 2014, a wild Asian elephant was killed without mercy in Xishuangbanna, with its tusks taken away；宾语从句I feel terribly sorry and ashamed of what people did to the animal等；定语从句Anyone who hunts or kills wildlife should be fined and punished severely.以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。

4．Dear Ms King,

It has been a long time since we separated. I know that you’re teaching Chinese in a Confucius Institute in America. How are you going this period? Have you adapted to the lifestyle there? I hope everything is going well.

I never forget the days when you were my English teacher, because what you taught me benefited me a great deal. Now, at senior high, I’ve pushed myself to participate in various kinds of activities, enjoying my time to the fullest extent. By actively involving myself in the campus life, I’ve learned more about myself and tapped many unknown potentials. I have even made a huge progress in my English study. Without your teachings and encouragement, I couldn’t have made such an advancement. In the English class, I learned that American high school life is drastically different from ours. If it is convenient, can you share with me some information in that regard? Thanks in advance and look forward to your reply.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封求助信；假定你是高一新生李华，在高中学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，请你给“21st Century”报写一封信求助。内容包括：1.自我介绍；2.遇到的困难；3.希望得到对方的建议。

第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：separate（分开）；Confucius Institute（孔子学院）；adapt to（适应）；a great deal（许多）；drastically（彻底的）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。

第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如I never forget the days when you were my English teacher, because what you taught me benefited me a great deal.运用了时间状语从句和原因状语从句；In the English class, I learned that American high school life is drastically different from ours.运用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。

5．Dear Mom and Dad,

"Anxious but passionate, I am moving into the final academic year of my high school. As you know, I have been yearning to be admitted to a top university, so I promise I will spare no efforts to make it happen. I also want you to know there are not enough words to describe how grateful I am to both of you for your endless love and everlasting support.

Your support means a lot to me, especially in the last year. Since it is so vital, you may consider the following suggestions to back me up better. First, please don`t overreact to grades I get. It is said that there will be twelve formal exams during this year. It is common that I get ups and downs. Second, please give me some more personal space. This year will be a hard one and sometimes I just need to be alone. Third, please arrange a balanced diet, which is energy-giving, rich in vitamin and high in protein.

Thank you again for everything! I do have faith in achieving my ambition and I will make you proud.

Best regards,

Your Love

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封信；假定你是高二学生李华。紧张的高三生活即将来临，你的父母对你最后一年的学习充满着期望。请你给你的父母写一封信。内容包括：1. 表达你努力学习的决心，对他们的关心表示感谢；2. 向他们提出2-3个建议，以更好地支持你高三拼搏。

第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：passionate（热情的）；be yearn to（渴望）；be admitted to（录取）；spare no efforts（不遗余力）；endless（无尽的）；vital（重要的）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如I also want you to know there are not enough words to describe how grateful I am to both of you for your endless love and everlasting support.运用了宾语从句；Since it is so vital, you may consider the following suggestions to back me up better.运用了原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。

6．Dear Steve,

I’m glad to know that you will come to visit China in the coming winter holiday. I sincerely invite you to pay a visit to my house and it’s my pleasure to travel with you if necessary.

Because of the cold weather during winter vacation, here are some tips for you to pay attention before you come to China. First, warm clothes and anti-slip shoes must be taken, for I am afraid the temperature will be lower at that time and the snow is drawing near. Second, you can search the Internet for the places of interest where you prefer to go. Last but not the least, let me know your cellphone number so that I can keep in touch with you on your way to China.

I am forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文。Steve在寒假期间来中国旅游，要为其回信，邀请他来家里做客，或陪同一起旅行以及来中国旅游的建议。

【详解】第一步：

首先审题，Steve在寒假期间来中国旅游，要为其回信，邀请他来家里做客，或陪同一起旅行以及来中国旅游的建议。

第二步：

确认时态，选用正确的人称和时态，本文可用一般现在时或一般将来时，第一人称和第二人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。

第三步：

文章可以分为三段，第一段提到邀请对方来家里做客的，并提出可以陪伴对方一起旅游；第二段写出来中国旅游需要注意的几个要点；第三段提出期望得到对方的来信。

第四步：

注意事项：①写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏；

②这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可；

③写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题；

④尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的高级词汇、复合句和高级语法。例如：

并没有大量使用“我”来做主语：…it’s my pleasure to travel with you if necessary.

…warm clothes and anti-slip shoes must be taken,…

for引导的原因状语从句：…warm clothes and anti-slip shoes must be taken, for I am afraid the temperature…

where引导的定语从句：the places of interest where you prefer to go.

7．Hello, everyone! I’m glad to have this chance to share some ideas about garbage classification with you.

To my understanding, the earth is home to every individual, and it’s our duty to protect the environment voluntarily. By sorting the waste, we can not only reduce pollution but also conserve energy, which will pave the way for recycling of valuable recourses.

For the sake of our environment and life, we are expected to learn to sort the rubbish and make it a habit. Every individual can make a difference and let’s bring a brighter future for the planet!

Thank you!

【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇演讲稿；假如你是李华，学校最近要组织一次英语演讲比赛，主题为“垃圾分类益处多”。请你根据此话题写一篇演讲稿。要点如下:1.你的观点；2.你的建议。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：garbage classification（垃圾分类成立），to my understanding scenic spots（根据我的理解），pave the way（为……做准备）；for the sake of（为了），make a difference（有影响）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如By sorting the waste, we can not only reduce pollution but also conserve energy, which will pave the way for recycling of valuable recourses.运用了非限定性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

8．Dear Eric,

I’m glad to know you’re coming to China to travel in the winter vacation. Here re some tips for you during your stay here.

You can take the plane if you travel to a faraway place. By the way, high-speed railway, which is fast and comfortable, is very popular in China today. While shopping, you can use your credit card or cash. But there’s a new and interesting way of paying called Alipay or WeChat pay. As for the weather, it’s cold in winter here. So do wear thick and warm clothes. Hotels are easy to find and the Chinese food is distinctive and delicious. I’m sure you will enjoy yourself here.

Looking forward to seeing you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，要求为写一封电子邮件；你的美国网友Eric打算寒假期间到中国来旅游。最近，他来信向你询问来中国旅游时的注意事项。请你用英语给他回封邮件。内容包括：1. 交通工具的选择；2. 购物付款方式；3. 天气、饮食和住宿。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：glad to（高兴做某事），some tips （一些建议），By the way（顺便说一句），high-speed railway（高速铁路），distinctive and delicious（独特而美味）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I’m glad to know you’re coming to China to travel in the winter vacation. 运用宾语从句；By the way, high-speed railway, which is fast and comfortable, is very popular in China today.运用了定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

9．Dear Kenton,

I’ve received your letter. From your letter, I know that you are worried about your scores because you always make mistakes in exams. However, you should remember that even the best student can make mistakes sometimes, so don’t put too much pressure on yourself.

As far as I am concerned, learning from your mistakes in past exams is a quick way to stop making the same mistakes next time. To begin with, if there are questions that can’t be solved by yourself, you should turn to your teachers or classmates for help. What’s more, during the exams you’d better make a good plan to distribute your time according to the questions. Besides, try to leave a few minutes at the end to check your answers.

Enjoy the challenge that each new exam brings to you. I believe a good learning habit will finally help you gain success.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】考查应用文中的书信写作。

【详解】题目要求假如你是李华。你的笔友Kenton写信告诉你，他自从上了高中之后成绩不理想，每次考试总是犯很多错误，他很焦虑。请你用英语回信，给他提一些建议。

要点提示: 1. 表示安慰；2. 提出建议；3. 给予鼓励。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。

【点睛】这篇书信类短文的关键在于要点的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。From your letter, I know that you are worried about your scores because you always make mistakes in exams.宾语从句的运用；Enjoy the challenge that each new exam brings to you.定语从句的运用。

10．teacher and schoolmates, It’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my

experience of learning English with you.I'm interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future.Naturally lt’s very important for me to learn English well .As everybody knows,

vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building. I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible . After class．I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio. Besides ,I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.

 Now, I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school. Firstly ,we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it. Secondly, I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them.  Finally，1 suggest we have more English activities，such as English contests and festivals.

 Thank you for listening.

【详解】试题分析：本篇书面表达要求根据图表提示信息写一篇发言稿，介绍自己的英语学习情况并且对学校今后的教学提出意见建议。首先我们要分析图表得出准确信息以合理安排篇章结构。就此篇文章而言，因为要求是两部分所以在段落安排上可以采用两段式分别介绍。而且图表提示信息较为简单，所以在内容上要适当加以发挥补充，以使文章内容丰满，上下文连贯。此外在写作时还要注意连接词的恰当使用以使文章条理清晰，结构紧凑。

【亮点说明】在本文中作者采用两段式，分别介绍自己的学习情况和提出意见建议，并且在文中使用了firstly、secondly、thirdly等副词来陈述自己的建议，这样使文章结构和条理都异常清晰。在语言运用上，长短句的结合、短语like bricks in a building 的形象比喻使得文章内容更加生动。此外besides，naturally等副词也使文章上下文衔接紧凑，语意连贯。

考点：考查提纲作文