天津高考英语写作分类训练:推荐信
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1.假如你是李津, 你的英国朋友Edward正在学习汉语, 希望你推荐一个适合他学习汉语的网站. 请你根据以下内容, 给他回复邮件.
推荐网站:www. edchinese. com
网站内容:
1. 网络课程:中文情景对话、中国风俗、成语;
2. 其它:中文电影、中文歌曲、唐诗等;
3. 有在线教师答疑解惑.
费用:全部免费
注意:1. 词数不少于100词;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯.
Dear Edward,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
2.假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你的美国笔友Chris正在学习汉语,他得知“中国诗词大会”在CCTV播出,非常感兴趣,便写信给你,希望你介绍相关情况及更多了解中国文化的途径。请根据以下提示给他写一封回信。
(1)简单介绍“中国诗词大会”引起的反响;
(2)介绍了解中国文化的途径(如阅读相关书籍、利用媒体资源等);
(3)表达对Chris学习中国文化的祝愿。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
中国诗词大会 Chinese Poetry Competition
Dear Chris,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
3.假设你是晨光中学的李津。你的英国笔友,孔子学院的学生David对中国的古典文学非常感兴趣,希望你能给他推荐一本书。请你给他回复一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.书名及作者;
2.主要内容及影响;
3.推荐的理由。
参考词汇:
《三国演义》Romance of the Three Kingdoms
《西游记》Journey to the West 《水浒传》Water Margin
《红楼梦》Dream of the Red Chamber《诗经》The Book of Songs
《史记》The Historical Records《论语》The Analects of Confucius
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)所推荐书籍不限于参考词汇给出的范围;
(3)适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯:
(4)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear David,
I'm so glad to receive your e-mail and learn that you have a strong interest in classical Chinese literature.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Jin
4.假设你是李华,得知你校外教Peter计划不久后回英国。他想给母亲选一份有中国文化特色的礼物。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)推荐礼物;
(2)推荐原因;
(3)表达祝愿。
注意:
(1)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
(2)字数不少于100。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5.假设你是高二学生李津,准备参加学校组织的英文诗朗诵比赛,请给外教John写封邮件求助,内容包括:
1.说明比赛要求:
2.请他推荐英文诗:
3.请教朗诵技巧。
注意:
1.须包含以上所有内容,可适当增加细节;
2.邮件内容不少于100词。
参考词汇:
英文诗朗诵比赛 English Poetry Recitation Contest
6.据悉国外某网站将举办新一轮网上讨论活动,正面向全球中学生征集讨论话题。假定你是晨光中学的学生李津,经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站写一封信,向其推荐话题。
内容要点:
(1)推荐话题:倡导健康的生活方式;
(2)推荐的理由;
(3)预祝活动成功。
注意:
(1)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)词数不少于100;
Dear Sir / Madam,
I’m Li Jin, a Chinese student from Chenguang Senior High School and a local netizen of your website.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
7.假如你是李华,你的加拿大网友Mike圣诞节期间打算来中国,他对中国传统文化非常感兴趣,希望你能为他推荐一些名胜古迹。请你用英语给他发一封电子邮件,向他推荐一个或两个你所喜欢的名胜古迹。
要点包括:
1.简介你推荐的名胜古迹;
2.叙述你推荐的理由;
3.表达你的祝愿。
注意:词数90左右。
8.假定你是晨光中学的李津。你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以“Trash Sorting Around Us”为题的征文活动。根据个人对垃圾分类的所见所做所感,要求同学们积极投稿,推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿,文章内容应包括:
1.你的学校或所在社区(community)垃圾分类情况;
2.你是如何做的;
3.你的感受。
参考词汇:
可循环垃圾recyclable waste
不可循环垃圾unrecyclable waste
有害垃圾 hazardous waste
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.内容充实、行文连贯;
Trash Sorting Around Us
November 15, 2020
When it comes to trash sorting,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
By Li Jin
9.假如你是高中生李津,你的美国笔友James热爱中国传统文化,最近打算来中国工作生活一段时间,但是不确定应该去往哪个城市,写信向你咨询。请你给他写一封回信,主要内容包括:
(1)你推荐的城市(天津或北京选其一);
(2)推荐的理由(不少于两条);
(3)美好祝愿。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)开头结尾已经给好,不计入总字数。
Dear James,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
10.假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,近日你校英语社团的微信公众号准备在原有两个栏目(学校简介、学习生活)之上,增加一个新栏目。请你从以下三个备选栏目(职业规划、学生风采、校园文化)中挑选一个栏目,给公众号负责人Mr. Zhang写一封邮件进行推荐,并陈述你的理由。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
公众号 Official WeChat 职业规划Career Planning
学校简介 School Profile 学习生活Study Life
学生风采 Our Students 校园文化Campus Culture
Dear Mr. Zhang,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
1.Dear Edward,
I'm more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. I'd like to recommend www.edchinese.com to you.
It's a good website for non‐Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese, especially for beginners. Firstly, it provides you with a variety of online courses, such as Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs. Besides, it will help you learn Chinese in interesting and effective ways. Here you can learn to sing some Chinese songs, enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies. More importantly, there are teachers online whom you can turn to for help. And all these are free of charge.
I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful. Wish you a happy learning time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。你的英国朋友Edward正在学习汉语, 希望你根据要求,推荐一个适合他学习汉语的网站。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:pleased→ delighted
此外:besides → what’s more
提供:provide→ supply
吸引人的:attractive→ charming
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, it provides you with a variety of online courses, such as Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs.
拓展句:Firstly, it provides you with a variety of online courses which include Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It's a good website for non‐Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese, especially for beginners.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】More importantly, there are teachers online whom you can turn to for help.(运用了whom限制性定语从句)
2.Dear Chris,
I’m glad to hear from you, and I am writing to tell you something you are interested in. Chinese Poetry Competition, which aims to encourage people to know more about traditional Chinese poetry culture, has been successfully held on CCTV and has attracted almost all the people who are interested in Chinese poetry.
In your letter, you mentioned that you were eager to know about Chinese culture. I think the best way to learn about it is to read some relevant books. I’d like to recommend a book to you. The book, entitled Read Poetry and Learn History by Wang Chunshui, is suitable for foreigners to learn classical Chinese poetry. The poems in the book reflect the Chinese history and culture,many of which can give readers vivid pictures of the life of the ancient Chinese. And they can also improve your appreciation of Chinese poetry.
I think the book is a good choice for you. I believe you will understand the poems easily and efficiently. Wish you to enjoy the book and have a better understanding of China.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国笔友Chris写一封信,向他介绍“中国诗词大会”的相关情况及更多了解中国文化的途径。
【详解】1.词汇积累
吸引:appeal→attract
说:speak/state→mention
被命名为:named→entitled
推荐:introduce→recommend
2.句式拓展
简单句变复杂句
原句:The book, entitled Read Poetry and Learn History by Wang Chunshui, is suitable for the foreigners to learn classical Chinese poetry.
拓展句:The book which entitled Read Poetry and Learn History by Wang Chunshui, is suitable for the foreigners to learn classical Chinese poetry.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Chinese Poetry Competition, which aims to encourage people to know more about traditional Chinese poetry culture, has been successfully held on CCTV and has attracted almost all the people who are interested in Chinese poetry. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In your letter, you mentioned that you were eager to know about Chinese culture. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
3.One possible version:
Dear David,
I'm so glad to receive your e-mail and learn that you have a strong interest in classical Chinese literature. So, I'm writing to recommend Dream of the Red Chamber to you.
Written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist of Qing dynasty, Dream of the Red Chamber is one of the four masterpieces of novels in China. With the thriving and declining of four noble families as the background, it tells the love story between Jia Baoyu and Lindaiyu. Vividly depicting the life at that time, the novel reveals the darkness and corruption of the old society as well as the desire for freedom and is of high artistic value. So far, it has been translated into different languages.
The novel is simple, meaningful in language and contains many graceful classical Chinese poems, which is beneficial in improving your Chinese. Besides, reading this novel will definitely help to deepen your understanding of Chinese culture.
I sincerely hope that you enjoy reading this novel and can share your feelings and opinions with me.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国笔友David回复一封电子邮件,向他推荐一本中国的古典文学书籍。
【详解】1.词汇积累
描述:depict→describe
揭露:reveal→disclose
包含:contain→involve
真诚地:sincerely→truly
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist of Qing dynasty, Dream of the Red Chamber is one of the four masterpieces of novels in China.
拓展句:Dream of the Red Chamber is one of the four masterpieces of novels in China, which is written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist of Qing dynasty.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist of Qing dynasty, Dream of the Red Chamber is one of the four masterpieces of novels in China. (运用了过去分词作状语)
[高分句型2] The novel is simple, meaningful in language and contains many graceful classical Chinese poems, which is beneficial in improving your Chinese. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
4.Dear Peter,
Knowing that you would like to select a Chinese gift for your mother before returning to England soon, I’m happy to recommend you a silk dress as a gift.
As is known to all, Chinese silk industry has the longest history with the famous Silk Road as an indication, making it famous at home and abroad. Besides, with strong Chinese cultural characteristics. Chinese silk dresses are comfortable and elegant to wear. They are a favorite choice for ladies of your mother’s age. What’s more, silk dresses can show her good taste as well as inner beauty. So, I’m sure your mother will definitely like one.
Best wishes to your family.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Peter写一封邮件,向他推荐给他母亲的一份有中国文化特色的礼物。
【详解】词汇积累
挑选:choose→select
礼物:present→gift
著名:well-known→famous
喜欢:love→like
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Chinese silk dresses are comfortable and elegant to wear. They are a favorite choice for ladies of your mother’s age.
拓展句:Chinese silk dresses, which are a favorite choice for ladies of your mother’s age, are comfortable and elegant to wear.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you would like to select a Chinese gift for your mother before returning to England soon, I’m happy to recommend you a silk dress as a gift. (非谓语动词现在分词作状语以及that引导的宾语从句、动名词作介词宾语)
[高分句型2] As is known to all, Chinese silk industry has the longest history with the famous Silk Road as an indication, making it famous at home and abroad. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句以及非谓语动词现在分词作状语)
5.Dear John,
Informed of the approaching English Poetry Recitation Contest, I’m writing to convey my earnest longing for your help.
To offer students an opportunity to enjoy the beauty of poems, the English Poetry Recitation Contest is to be held next Friday, in which each participant is required to recite an English poem in five minutes. I have encountered some tough problems in the process of selecting English poetry, for which I sincerely hope that you could recommend one for me. Besides, I have been exerting myself to read poems. Yet I fail to grasp the skills of it. Would you be kind enough to provide me with professional guidance?
Your generous assistance and immediate response are enthusiastically expected and truly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给给外教John写封邮件求助信,咨询如何参加英文诗朗诵比赛。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时。
结构:总分总法
要求:
1.说明比赛要求:
2.请他推荐英文诗:
3.请教朗诵技巧。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
enjoy the beauty of;be required to;in the process of ;exert oneself to ; fail to;provide…with…;
第三步:连词成句
1. Informed of the approaching English Poetry Recitation Contest, I’m writing to convey my earnest longing for your help.
2. To offer students an opportunity to enjoy the beauty of poems, the English Poetry Recitation Contest is to be held next Friday, in which each participant is required to recite an English poem in five minutes.
3. I have encountered some tough problems in the process of selecting English poetry, for which I sincerely hope that you could recommend one for me.
4. Besides, I have been exerting myself to read poems.
5. Yet I fail to grasp the skills of it.
6. Would you be kind enough to provide me with professional guidance?
7. Your generous assistance and immediate response are enthusiastically expected and truly appreciated.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表并列补充关系:Besides
2.表转折对比关系:Yet
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] To offer students an opportunity to enjoy the beauty of poems, the English Poetry Recitation Contest is to be held next Friday, in which each participant is required to recite an English poem in five minutes.(动词不定式作目的状语,in which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I have encountered some tough problems in the process of selecting English poetry, for which I sincerely hope that you could recommend one for me. (for which引导非限制性定语从句)
6.Dear Sir / Madam,
I’m Li Jin, a Chinese student from Chenguang Senior High School and a local netizen of your website. Knowing that you are collecting topics to be discussed in the upcoming events, I feel more than delighted.
I am writing to share my perspective of the topic. In my view, healthy lifestyle should be the topic we can’t miss. As we all know, a healthy body lays a solid foundation for everything we are eager to do, without which, nothing can be achieved. However, facing the high pace of the modern life, an increasing number of people are living a life on the go, neglecting the true meaning of healthy lifestyle. They work around the clock at the expense of their own health. As a consequence, their lifestyle has been ruined, and some people even take the chance of losing their life. Therefore I strongly recommended healthy lifestyle should be put forward for netizens to discuss.
Eventually, I sincerely hope this meaningful activity will enjoy a great success and popularity.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以倡导健康的生活方式为主题给将举办新一轮网上讨论活动的国外某网站写一封信。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时,少量现在完成时和将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
(1)推荐话题:倡导健康的生活方式;
(2)推荐的理由;
(3)预祝活动成功。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
one’s perspective of;in my view;lay a solid foundation for;eager to do;an increasing number of;around the clock;at the expense of;As a consequence;take the chance of;put forward for
第三步:连词成句
1. I am writing to share my perspective of the topic.
2. In my view, healthy lifestyle should be the topic we can’t miss.
3. As we all know, a healthy body lays a solid foundation for everything we are eager to do, without which, nothing can be achieved.
4. However, facing the high pace of the modern life, an increasing number of people are living a life on the go, neglecting the true meaning of healthy lifestyle.
5. They work around the clock at the expense of their own health. As a consequence, their lifestyle has been ruined, and some people even take the chance of losing their life.
6. Therefore I strongly recommended healthy lifestyle should be put forward for netizens to discuss.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:Eventually
2.表转折对比关系:However,
3.表因果关系:As a consequence, Therefore
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]:Knowing that you are collecting topics to be discussed in the upcoming events, I feel more than delighted.这句话运用了现在分词作状语的结构。
[高分句型2]:In my view, healthy lifestyle should be the topic we can’t miss.这句话运用了省略关系代词which/that的定语从句。
[高分句型3]:As we all know, a healthy body lays a solid foundation for everything we are eager to do, without which, nothing can be achieved.这句话运用了非限制性定语从句。
7.Dear Mike,
I’m glad to know that you are coming to China during Christmas. The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest that I strongly recommend to you.
The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world and is visible from outer space. Because of its rich history and splendid appearance, the Great Wall attracts a lot of tourists, scientists, and historians.
The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores of the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay. The view of the West Lake is simply charming. Different time and different weather make it a different scene.
Look forward to your arrival.There are many other wonderful places here. Wish you a nice journey.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给加拿大网友Mike发一封电子邮件,向他推荐一个或两个所喜欢的中国名胜古迹。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
结构:总-分-总法
要点:
1.简介你推荐的名胜古迹;
2.叙述你推荐的理由;
3.表达你的祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
Christmas;a brief introduction;places of interest;the Great Wall;one of the greatest wonders of the world;because of;a lot of;the West Lake;charming;look forward to;there be
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m glad to know that you are coming to China during Christmas.
2. The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest that I strongly recommend to you.
3. The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world and is visible from outer space.
4. Because of its rich history and splendid appearance, the Great Wall attracts a lot of tourists, scientists, and historians.
5. The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores of the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay.
6. The view of the West Lake is simply charming. Different time and different weather make it a different scene.
7. Wish you a nice journey.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系:and;What is more, Besides, Moreover(供参考)
3.表因果关系:Because of
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] The following is a brief introduction about some places of interest that I strongly recommend to you.(使用了由that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] The famous West Lake is like a brilliant pearl embedded in the beautiful and fertile shores of the East China Sea near the mouth of the Hangzhou Bay.(使用了非谓语动词作状语)
[高分句型3] The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders of the world and is visible from outer space.(使用了由and连接的并列句)
8.Trash Sorting Around Us
Nov.15, 2020
When it comes to trash sorting, my school and community are doing a wonderful job. Dustbins in different colors have been put into use in certain places. Trash is also sorted into recyclable waste, unrecyclable waste and hazardous waste, which is now deeply rooted in people’s mind and making a change to the way we live.
In addition, I am also a volunteer in our school and community. Learning plenty of knowledge about trash sorting via the Internet, I have been taking an active part in activities of trash sorting in my school and community.
Therefore, I think it essential to sort trash out. Not only can it save our money and time while dealing with trash, but it also can enhance the quality of life. So I approve of trash sorting for our own sake and the sake of nature.
By Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文,要求考生根据个人对垃圾分类的所见所做所感,以“我们身边的垃圾分类”为题写一篇征文进行投稿。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:记叙文
时态:根据写作内容,时态以一般现在时为主,记录日常的垃圾分类所见所做所感
结构:总分法(或总分总)
要求:
1.你的学校或所在社区垃圾分类情况;
2.你是如何做的;
3.你的感受。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
do a wonderful job, be deeply rooted in people’s mind, make a change to the way we live, take an active part in activities of trash sorting, save our money and time, enhance the quality of life, approve of trash sorting
第三步:连词成句
1. Dustbins in different colors have been put into use in certain places.
2. Trash is also sorted into recyclable waste, unrecyclable waste and hazardous waste, which is now deeply rooted in people’s mind and making a change to the way we live.
3. Learning plenty of knowledge about trash sorting via the Internet, I have been taking an active part in activities of trash sorting in my school and community.
4. Not only can it save our money and time while dealing with trash, but it also can enhance the quality of life.
5. So I approve of trash sorting for our own sake and the sake of nature.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表并列补充关系: In addition
2.表因果关系: Therefore
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Trash is also sorted into recyclable waste, unrecyclable waste and hazardous waste, which is now deeply rooted in people’s mind and making a change to the way we live.(灵活运用非限制性定语从句把句子串起来,定语从句中还运用了被动语态be rooted in,并再次运用了定语从句we live)
[高分句型2] Learning plenty of knowledge about trash sorting via the Internet, I have been taking an active part in activities of trash sorting in my school and community.(现在分词短语做状语,用法地道)
[高分句型3] Not only can it save our money and time while dealing with trash, but it also can enhance the quality of life.(正确运用表补充递进的not only…but also…连接句子,其中not only部分需倒装)
9.Dear James,
I am so pleased to learn that you are planning to spend some time in China.
I strongly recommend you stay in Beijing, the capital and cultural center of China. First of all, It is well known that the city enjoys a high reputation for its abundance of ancient architecture, which represents the traditional local lifestyles. What’s more, there are also plenty of museums where precious relics of historical interest are waiting for you to explore. Thirdly, and perhaps most importantly, the exceptional Peking Opera performances there are also what you can’t miss.
I wish you a very happy and meaningful time in China!
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假如你是高中生李津,你的美国笔友James热爱中国传统文化,最近打算来中国工作生活一段时间,但是不确定应该去往哪个城市,写信向你咨询。请你给他写一封回信,主要内容包括:(1)你推荐的城市(天津或北京选其一);(2)推荐的理由(不少于两条);(3)美好祝愿。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):pleased (高兴的);strongly recommend (强烈推荐);the capital and cultural center of China (中国的首都和文化中心);high reputation (享有盛誉)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如I am so pleased to learn that you are planning to spend some time in China.运用了宾语从句;First of all, It is well known that the city enjoys a high reputation for its abundance of ancient architecture, which represents the traditional local lifestyles.运用了非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
10.Dear Mr. Zhang,
Delighted to know a new column will be added in our English Club’s Official WeChat Accounts, I’m writing to offer my recommendation to you.
Among the three columns “Career Planning”, “Our Students” and “Campus Culture”, I would like to choose “Career Planning” to be the one to be added, based on the original two columns “School Profile” and “Study Life”. I know that right now a large number of students still have absolutely no idea about what they truly want to become in the future, so it’s quite urgent and necessary to give students basic understanding of what different kinds of jobs are like and what kinds of qualities are required for different jobs. This may help us gain a better understanding of our strengths and weakness so that we can figure out our goals. To me, it’s much more meaningful than “Our Students” or “Campus Culture”.
I would be most grateful if you would like to consider my recommendation. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,近日你校英语社团的微信公众号准备在原有两个栏目(学校简介、学习生活)之上,增加一个新栏目。请你从以下三个备选栏目(职业规划、学生风采、校园文化)中挑选一个栏目,给公众号负责人Mr. Zhang写一封邮件进行推荐,并陈述你的理由。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):Official WeChat(公众号);Career Planning (职业规划);School Profile(学校简介);Study Life(学习生活)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如I know that right now a large number of students still have absolutely no idea about what they truly want to become in the future, so it’s quite urgent and necessary to give students basic understanding of what different kinds of jobs are like and what kinds of qualities are required for different jobs.运用宾语从句;I would be most grateful if you would like to consider my recommendation.运用条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
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