天津高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

这是一份天津高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信，共32页。试卷主要包含了假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，假定你是学生李津等内容，欢迎下载使用。
建议信
1．假如你是李津，你的加拿大的朋友 Tim 在邮件中谈到他们那里也出现了很多新型冠 状病毒肺炎的病例，他有些紧张，并感觉网络信息的传播加剧了人们的恐慌。请你给他写封回信，主要内容如下：
（1）对他的恐慌表示理解，谈谈你的境况；
（2）简单阐述如何对待网络信息，说明理由；
（3）给 Tim 提一些建议(如：勤洗手，少出门，戴口罩)。参考词汇：新型冠状病毒肺炎 coronavirus； 口罩 mask
注意：词数不少于 100；
内容充实、行文连贯；
开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tim,
I’ve got your email and know that…
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2．假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你所喜爱的英语杂志 Teens’ Spacec 创刊五周年，在此之际, 该杂志向读者征集对杂志的意见或给出建议，请你根据以下内容给杂志主编写一封信。
内容：① 说明你是该杂志的忠实读者；
② 说明你喜欢该杂志的原因；
③ 提出你的建议。
注意：① 词数不少于 100；
② 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯;
③ 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
请把以下句子翻译成英文（注意把省略内容补充完整）：
1. 我是晨光中学的学生李津，是该杂志的忠实读者。（用定语从句表达）
2. 我喜欢该杂志的原因如下。（用 the reason why…表达）
3. 首先，该杂志包含国内和国际新闻，所以我能….（用 cover, so that 表达，注意把省略内容补充完整）
4. 其次，该杂志不仅内容丰富，而且还…, 这对英语学习者来说是非常有帮助的。（用 not only… but also 倒装结构，which 定语从句表达，注意把省略内容补充完整）
5. 我最喜欢读…，所以如果该杂志能介绍一些这类内容，就再好不过了。（用 what 引导的名词性从句，it couldn’t be better if… 结构表达，注意把省略内容补充完整）
3．假如你是高三学生李津，请你代表你的同学们，结合下面要点提供的信息给你们的外教 Mr. Black写一封电子邮件，向他提出一些建议。
要点：
（1）问候并说明大家都很喜欢上他的课；
（2）今天受同学的委托向老师提几点建议；
（3）想了解美国同龄人的学习和生活；
（4）想了解美国一些著名大学的信息。
注意：（1）词数不少于100；
（2）开头和结尾已经写出，不计人总词数；
（3）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：同龄人peer
Dear Mr Black,
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Your student,
Li Jin
4．虽然人们不停的说给孩子减负 ，但是大部分学生的学习压力仍然很大， 有些青少年尤其是高三的学生出现了心理问题， 焦虑，不愿意与人交往等。就这种现象，你们班要举行一次班会，作为班长，写一篇发言稿。内容包括：
1. 健康的心理很重要。
2.. 给同学提些建议：如了解自己， 树立信心；与人相处；热爱生活
注意：1. 字数不少于 100 字 。
2. 适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear classmates,
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5．假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你所喜爱的英语杂志 Teens’ Spacec 创刊五周年，在此之际, 该杂志向读者征集对杂志的意见或给出建议，请你根据以下内容给杂志主编写一封信。
内容：① 说明你是该杂志的忠实读者；
② 说明你喜欢该杂志的原因；
③ 提出你的建议。注意：① 词数不少于 100；
② 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯;
③ 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor-in-chief,
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Yours,
Li Jin
6．假如你是晨光中学高三一班班长李津。由于新冠疫情，不得不在家学习。你计划开学后举行一次班会，鼓励大家充分利用时间，向高考冲刺。现请用英文根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿。
1. 表达能够上学的喜悦；
2. 给出学习上的建议(至少3条)；
3. 希望同学们只争朝夕，不负韶华。
注意： 1.词数不少于100词；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：新冠疫情 the novel coronavirus outbreak
只争朝夕，不负韶华seize the day and live it to the full
Dear classmates, good afternoon! It’s my great pleasure to stand here, on behalf of everyone, to deliver a speech.
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Thank you for your listening!
7．假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将就 “How to keep healthy” 这一话题进行讨论。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈健康的重要性，并从饮食、运动、睡眠等方面就应该如何保持健康给出自己的建议。
注意：（1）词数不少于100；
（2）发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；
（3）可适当补充细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
Good morning, everyone!
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That’s all. Thank you!
8．假定你是学生李津。你的美国朋友Tom在给你的邮件中提到他对中国的移动支付（mobile payment）很感兴趣，请你给Tom回复邮件并做简要介绍。内容包括：
1.目前中国使用移动支付的情况；
2.移动支付的好处；
3.你对移动支付的看法。
注意：（1）词数不少于120；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯：
（3）回邮开头及结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。
参考词汇：微信：WeChat；支付宝：Alipay；二维码：QR code
Dear Tom,
In you letter you asked about mobile payment in China.
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Yours,
Li Jin
9．假设你是晨光中学的李津，你在上网时发现一个国外的英语学习网站，你很喜欢里面的内容。请你根据以下提示，用英语给该网站写一封电子邮件。
1. 表示感兴趣
2. 其中一些栏目对学习很有帮助（词汇、阅读等）
3. 提些建议（建立交友平台，介绍不同国家的文化等）
参考词汇：栏目column        网站website
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Jin, a Chinese student in Senior Three. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack在观看《中国汉语桥》Chinese Bridge Contest节目时，决定学习中国语言文化，希望你能给他一些建议。请你根据以下提示写一封信。
1．通过中国古典作品了解中国文化；
2．借助电视节目以及报刊更好地了解中国国情；
3．和中国朋友多沟通。
注意：1. 词数不少于100字。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack，
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Yours，
Li Hua

1．I’ve got your email and know that many cases where people unfortunately get infected with coronavirus have been found in Canada. Learning that you are worried about it and feel that the spread of news in the website adds to people’s panic, I am writing to show my concern about you and tell you something about my situation.
Firstly, it’s natural that people will get panic when faced with unknown things. At the beginning of the outbreak of the disease, I was also very worried, just like you. But now with more and more patients with coronavirus being cured, I am quite confident. What’s more, I think it necessary for us to hold an objective attitude to the news in the website where there is always much false news. Don’t focus too much on it. Finally, at this particular time, in order not to get infected, you ‘d better wash hands more. Meanwhile, it couldn’t be better if you stay indoors as much as possible. If you have to go out, you must wear protective mask to keep yourself from getting infected.
I firmly believe that we are able enough to defeat the coronavious in the near future.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封电子邮件：假如你是李津，你的加拿大的朋友 Tim 在邮件中谈到他们那里也出现了很多新型冠 状病毒肺炎的病例，他有些紧张，并感觉网络信息的传播加剧了人们的恐慌。请你给他写封回信，主要内容如下：（1）对他的恐慌表示理解，谈谈你的境况；（2）简单阐述如何对待网络信息，说明理由；（3）给 Tim 提一些建议(如：勤洗手，少出门，戴口罩)。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； coronavirus（新型冠状病毒肺炎），mask（口罩），panic（恐慌），outbreak（爆发），natural（自然的），worried （担心的），cure（治愈），infect（感染），objective（客观的）及protective（防护的）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有add to（增加），show sb’s concern about sth（表达对某事的关心），hold a(n)+adj+  attitude to （对某事持一种……的态度），in order not to（为了不……）以及keep sb from doing（防止某人做某事），而且还使用了宾语从句“I firmly believe that we are able enough to defeat the coronavious in the near future.”，状语从句“If you have to go out, you must wear protective mask to keep yourself from getting infected.”，定语从句和形式宾语“What’s more, I think it necessary for us to hold an objective attitude to the news in the website where there is always much false news.”，非谓语动词“Learning that you are worried about it and feel that the spread of news in the website adds to people’s panic, I am writing to show my concern about you and tell you something about my situation.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
2．1. I’m Li Jin from Chenguang middle school, who is a regular reader of your magazine.
2. The reason why I like your magazine is as follows.
3. To begin with, it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things that happened in the world.
4. In addition, not only does the magazine cover a rich content, but it is also interesting and easy to understand, which is of great help to English learners.
5. What I like reading most is the stories of famous people in the world, so it couldn’t be better if the magazine introduces some passages of this kind.
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信：假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你所喜爱的英语杂志 Teens’ Spacec 创刊五周年，在此之际, 该杂志向读者征集对杂志的意见或给出建议，请你根据以下内容给杂志主编写一封信。内容：① 说明你是该杂志的忠实读者；
② 说明你喜欢该杂志的原因；③ 提出你的建议。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； regular reader（忠实读者），cover（包含、涵盖），national（国内的），international（国际的），rich（丰富的），content（内容），interesting（有趣的）及English learners（英语学习者）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题（文章陈述的是客观情况，基础时态为一般现在时）。注意：根据要求可知：第一句用定语从句，先先行词为Li Jin ，指人，关系词在非限定性定语从句中作主语，所以用who来引导，故翻译为：I’m Li Jin from Chenguang middle school, who is a regular reader of your magazine；第二句用the reason why句型，表示“之所以、这就是……的原因”，故翻译为：The reason why I like your magazine is as follows；第三句cover作及物动词，表示“包含、涵盖”，so that表示“以便”，引导目的状语从句，同时需要对省略部分进行合理的补充，故翻译为：To begin with, it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things that happened in the world；第四句用not only… but also…表示“不但……而且……”，当not only位于句首时，其后的部分要采用部分倒装，同时用which指代整个主句内容，并在非限定性定语从句中作主语，故翻译为：In addition, not only does the magazine cover a rich content, but it is also interesting and easy to understand, which is of great help to English learners；第五句使用主语从句，关系词用what作reading的宾语，同时用it couldn’t be better if…句式表示“如果……就再好不过了”，故翻译为： What I like reading most is the stories of famous people in the world, so it couldn’t be better if the magazine introduces some passages of this kind.
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有as follows（如下），so that（以便），be of great help (有很大的帮助)，to begin with（首先）以及in addition（此外），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“I’m Li Jin from Chenguang middle school, who is a regular reader of your magazine.”及“In addition, not only does the magazine cover a rich content, but it is also interesting and easy to understand, which is of great help to English learners.”，主语从句“What I like reading most is the stories of famous people in the world, so it couldn’t be better if the magazine introduces some passages of this kind.”，定语从句“he reason why I like your magazine is as follows.”，状语从句“To begin with, it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things that happened in the world.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
3．Mr. Black,
  I’m Li Jin, one of your students. At first, I would like to thank you for your wonderful teaching skills and humorous teaching styles on behalf of my classmates. We really like your class. Then I want to make some suggestions about your class.
  We hope you can introduce more information about USA at class, because you are an American who knows the USA well. On the one hand, we want to learn about American teenagers’ life. For example, what lesson do they have? What do they do in their spare time? On the other hand, it is some information about famous universities in the USA that we desire to learn about. You know, some of us want to study abroad in the future. Those are our suggestions. Thank your for your teaching again.
Your student,
Li Jin
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是高三学生李津，请你代表你的同学们，结合下面要点提供的信息给你们的外教 Mr. Black写一封电子出件，向他提出一些建议。要点：（1）问候并说明大家都很喜欢上他的课；（2）今天受同学的委托向老师提几点建议；（3）想了解美国同龄人的学习和生活；（4）想了解美国一些著名大学的信息。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：one of (其中之一)；would like to (想要)；humorous teaching styles (幽默的教学风格)；on behalf of (代表)；study abroad(留学)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如  We hope you can introduce more information about USA at class, because you are an American who knows the USA well.运用了原因状语从句；On the other hand, it is some information about famous universities in the USA that we desire to learn about.运用强调句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．Dear classmates,
Mental health is something that decides whether we can live a happy life or not. However, mental health is easy to be overlooked, which can result in serious mental diseases. Here is some advice on keeping mental health.
First, know your own potential and accept yourself. Instead of having impractical and high expectations and demands for yourself, you should make practical goals for your life.
Second, be sociable and make as many friends as possible. Try to be a person easy to get along with. When you are discouraged, you can share your trouble with your friends, whose comfort and help can greatly relieve your sufferings and help you out.
Third, love your life and work. Try to display your talent in your work and you can get pleasure and satisfaction from your achievements, which can help you keep a good mood.
That is my idea. Thank you for listening.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，针对学生由于压力过大而出现心理问题这一现象提出一些建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
要求：1.健康的心理很重要。
2. 给同学提些建议：如了解自己，树立信心；与人相处；热爱生活
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
live a happy life or not; mental health; be easy to do; overlook; result in; disease; some advice on doing; potential; Instead of doing; impractical; expectation; make practical goals for; sociable; as many as possible; get along with; discourage; share...with...; relieve sufferings; display; pleasure; achievement; keep a good mood  .
第三步：连词成句
Mental health is something that decides whether we can live a happy life or not.
However, mental health is easy to be overlooked, which can result in serious mental diseases.
First, know your own potential and accept yourself.
Instead of having impractical and high expectations and demands for yourself, you should make practical goals for your life.
Second, be sociable and make as many friends as possible.
When you are discouraged, you can share your trouble with your friends, whose comfort and help can greatly relieve your sufferings and help you out.
Try to display your talent in your work and you can get pleasure and satisfaction from your achievements, which can help you keep a good mood.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n./doing, On the one hand…, On the other hand… Some…, while others…, as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Mental health is something that decides whether we can live a happy life or not. 这句话运用了that引导的定语从句；When you are discouraged, you can share your trouble with your friends, whose comfort and help can greatly relieve your sufferings and help you out. 这句话运用了when引导的时间状语从句，whose引导的定语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如be easy to do、Instead of doing、as many as possible等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
5．Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Teens’ Space!
I’m a regular reader of your magazine. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things that happened in the world. Second, Teens’  Space carries articles to guide me in our English learning, which is helpful to me.
As a student, I am looking forward to reading the success stories of famous people in the world, which is of great benefit to me to understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place. Meanwhile I hope Teens’ Space will become better and better.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本文为提纲类作文。要求给Teens'Spacec杂志主编写一封信。
【详解】本文为提纲作文中的书信体。你所喜爱的英语杂志Teens'Spacec 创刊五周年，在此之际, 该杂志向读者征集对杂志的意见或给出建议，请你根据以下内容给杂志主编写一封信。书信体作文主要包括三个部分。第一部分叙述写信的内容，第二部分叙述写信的内容，内容主要有：① 说明你是该杂志的忠实读者；② 说明你喜欢该杂志的原因；③ 提出你的建议。最后部分表达自己的期望。注意 词数不少于 100；可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
【点睛】本文内容完整，结构合理。语言委婉礼貌。文章中运用了许多较高级的词汇如congratulations on ;be helpful to;  of great benefit，以及顺序连词first,... second,...等，使的文章内容脉络清晰，结构明了。文中简单句与复合句相结合，一张一弛，相得益彰。较高级的复合句有“so that...”引导的状语从句it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things...， 由that引导的限制性定语从句I can learn all important things that happened in the world；由which引导的非限制性定语从句Teens’  Space carries articles to guide me in our English learning, which is helpful to me和I am looking forward to reading the success stories of famous people in the world, which is to me to understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place；以及宾语从句I hope Teens’ Space will become better and better等，这体现了作者对英语很好的驾驶能力。
6．Dear classmates, good afternoon! It’s my great pleasure to stand here, on behalf of everyone, to deliver a speech.
Because of the novel coronaving outbreak, we have studied at home for about two months. Today, we come back. First of all, let me convey my pleasure for seeing all of you, my dear friends. Secondly, I‘d like to give you some advice on study. Not only should you make a detailed plan every day but you should also stick to your plan, which will definitely help you make the best of your precious time. Meanwhile, apart from listening to the teacher carefully, you’d better review what you have learnt in time. What’s the most important, I think, is that you should turn to teachers for help when you are faced with difficult problems. Only in this way can you make great progress.
Dear classmates, the College Entrance Examination is just around the corner. Let’s seize the day and live it to the full.
Thank you for your listening!
【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一篇演讲稿：假如你是晨光中学高三一班班长李津。由于新冠疫情，不得不在家学习。你计划开学后举行一次班会，鼓励大家充分利用时间，向高考冲刺。现请用英文根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿：1. 表达能够上学的喜悦；2. 给出学习上的建议(至少3条)；3. 希望同学们只争朝夕，不负韶华。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； the novel coronaving outbreak（新冠肺炎疫情），detailed（详细的），definitely（必定），review（复习），seize（抓紧、把握），College Entrance Examination（高考）及carefully（认真地）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有because of（由于），stick to（坚持），apart from (除了)，make progress（取得进步），be faced with（遇到、面临），around the corner（即将来临）以及turn to sb for help（向某人求助），而且还使用了倒装句和非限定性定语从句“Not only should you make a detailed plan every day but you should also stick to your plan, which will definitely help you make the best of your precious time.”，宾语从句“Meanwhile, apart from listening to the teacher carefully, you’d better review what you have learnt in time.”，表语从句“What’s the most important, I think, is that you should turn to teachers for help when you are faced with difficult problems.”，倒装句“Only in this way can you make great progress.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
7．Good morning, everyone!
As we all know, health is the most important thing in the world. But what should we do to keep healthy? My views are as follows.
Firstly, eat in a proper way. It’s good for us to eat some fresh vegetables and fruit rich in vitamins and minerals every day. And breakfast is necessary. It gives us energy for the morning. Secondly, exercise regularly. Exercise can help keep us strong and active. Thirdly, get enough sleep. Staying up late is bad for our health. Go to bed early and we’ll feel refreshed next morning. Last but not least, enjoy the time with your friends and family, which will also contribute to your good health.
That’s all. Thank you!
【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将就 “How to keep healthy” 这一话题进行讨论。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈健康的重要性，并从饮食、运动、睡眠等方面就应该如何保持健康给出自己的建议。
第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）：as we all know（众所周知）；keep healthy?（保持健康）；fresh vegetables（新鲜蔬菜）；exercise regularly（定期锻炼）；stay up（熬夜）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如It’s good for us to eat some fresh vegetables and fruit rich in vitamins and minerals every day.运用了it做形式主语；Last but not least, enjoy the time with your friends and family, which will also contribute to your good health.运用非限定性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。
8．Dear Ton
In your letter you asked about mobile payment in China. It's my honor to introduce it to you.
Mobile payment has been advocated around the world, which is a future way to pay bills. In China, WeChat and Alipay are popular everywhere. Just scanning the QR code with a smart phone, people can easily pay for the items they need, even small business can be finished in this advanced way People play the joke that they don’t need to worry about the lack of cash. The advantages of mobile payment are obvious. Firstly, it saves people's time to pay bills. The use of mobile payment is carried out with a smart phone. Especially when we go to the supermarket, there are always a lot of people waiting in the long line. the process of costing customers' time is to take out the cash or use the credit card, because both customers and cashiers need to count the money or check the bills. But now the cashier can just scan the phone and the bill will be paid and the customer can check quickly. Secondly, people dont have to worry about getting the fake cash. Many years ago, people were easy to get fake money as they received the change. But now, as the cash have been used less, people won t receive the fake cash without paper money.
I believe with the development of mobile payment, our life will be more convenient.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本次书面表达是一篇应用文，要求写一封邮件，介绍移动支付在中国的情况，开头结尾已给出。此次写作以应用文为“壳”，行说明文之“实”。
【详解】完成本次写作，最关键两步是审题和列提纲。
体裁：应用文为“壳”，说明文为“实”
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总——分——总
要求：
1. 目前中国使用移动支付的情况（说明介绍）
2. 移动支付的好处（分点列举）
3. 你对移动支付的看法（表达议论）
第二步：分清详略，列明提纲：
本次写作与平时所见的邮件写作在详略处理上有所不同，大多数应用文写作的第一点往往只是引入，简要带过即可；但本文三个要点均要展开阐述，建议第二点较为详细地分点写作，但三点用力需要总体均衡。
移动支付在中国的情况：迅速普及，占领市场。
移动支付的好处：方便快捷，提高效率；不容易出错；资金安全更有保障；催生更丰富的应用场景；等等。
对移动支付的看法：首先应明确移动支付是大势所趋，应谈论其优点（或辩证看待，利大于弊）。可以从移动支付便利了人们的生活，推动了时代的进步，促进了互联网经济的发展等角度展开，注意尽量拓宽思路，从多维度进行分析，尽量避免与第二点重复。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了一些高级词汇短语，如be advocated around, scan等；作者运用firstly, secondly表达层次，并综合运用定语从句，连接词（but, because…）等来构造较为流畅地道的复合句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了较高的驾驭英语的能力。
9．Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Jin, a Chinese student in Senior Three. Yesterday I found a foreign English learning website. I like it very much.
The website has some useful columns. Grammar Column for the key grammar difficulties offers explanations so thoroughly and clearly that I can easily understand them. Vocabulary Column lists some common key words for us. Reading Column introduces many effective reading skills, which is of great help to me.
I think it's a great site, but I want more. Can you add a platform for us to make friends? I also hope the website can introduce more about different countries, which can broaden our horizons.
I'm looking forward to the website getting better and better.
                                                           Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【分析】本文为应用文。你在上网时发现一个国外的英语学习网站，你很喜欢里面的内容。请你根据以下提示，用英语给该网站写一封电子邮件。主要内容包括：表示对这个内容感兴趣；其中一些栏目对学习很有帮助（词汇、阅读等）；并提些建议（建立交友平台，介绍不同国家的文化等）。
【详解】本文是一封电子邮件。属于书信体作文。第一段主要写邮件的原因，即觉得这个英语学习网站内容很好，很喜欢。第二部分主要表达自己对这个网站内容感兴趣，尤其是其中的一些栏目对学习很有帮助（词汇、阅读等）。这部分在写作时可适当地增加细节，但要合理。注意使用一些高级词汇和较复杂的句型结构，如定语从句等，增强文章的逻辑性，提高文章得分等级。最后一部分表达自己对这个网站更多的企盼，提出的个人建议，表达建议的语气要礼貌委婉。
【点睛】本文要点完整，结构合理，发挥适当，逻辑严密。表达建议时语气真诚，易于接受。文中运用了一些较高级的词汇如be of great help；add... to；broaden one's horizons；look forward to...等。句式简洁明了，以简单句为主，同时穿插了复合句。如由so..that...引导的状语从句，Grammar Column for the key grammar difficulties offers explanations so thoroughly and clearly that I can easily understand them以及由which引导的定语从句Column introduces many effective reading skills, which is of great help to me和I hope the website can introduce more about different countries, which can broaden our horizons. 这些句式的运用,增强了文章的表现力。
10．Dear Jack，
I'm glad to know that you are interested in Chinese Bridge Contest and want to learn more about the Chinese language and culture. I’d like to offer you some proposals, which I think can be of benefit to your Chinese study.
To learn the Chinese language and culture well，first of all，you have to read some classical literature，which will broaden your horizon. Besides，watching TV programs and reading newspapers are also good ways of language learning. Last but not least，you are supposed to make some Chinese friends with whom you can communicate frequently. Only by doing so can you achieve your goal better.
I sincerely hope my suggestions will be good for your Chinese study and that you will make greater progress in it.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封建议信，给英国朋友Jack就如何学习中国语言文化给出一些建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法    
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1．通过中国古典作品了解中国文化；
2．借助电视节目以及报刊更好地了解中国国情；
3．和中国朋友多沟通。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be interested in; Chinese Bridge Contest; Chinese language and culture; proposal; be of benefit to; classical literature; Tb programs; be supposed to do; communicate with; make progress.
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm glad to know that you are interested in Chinese Bridge Contest and want to learn more about the Chinese language and culture.
2. I’d like to offer you some proposals,
3 To learn the Chinese language and culture well， you have to read some classical literature，which will broaden your horizon.
4. Watching TV programs and reading newspapers are also good ways of language learning.
5. You are supposed to make some Chinese friends with whom you can communicate frequently
6. I sincerely hope my suggestions will be good for your Chinese study
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least;
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+ clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级句型，如：To learn the Chinese language and culture well，first of all，you have to read some classical literature，which will broaden your horizon.使用了which引导的定语从句；watching TV programs and reading newspapers are also good ways of language learning.用了动名词做主语；Only by doing so can you achieve your goal better.使用了倒装。除此之外，本文还有一些好的词和词组，如proposal, be of benefit to; broaden your horizon, be supposed to 等等。文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。











121．I’ve got your email and know that many cases where people unfortunately get infected with coronavirus have been found in Canada. Learning that you are worried about it and feel that the spread of news in the website adds to people’s panic, I am writing to show my concern about you and tell you something about my situation.
Firstly, it’s natural that people will get panic when faced with unknown things. At the beginning of the outbreak of the disease, I was also very worried, just like you. But now with more and more patients with coronavirus being cured, I am quite confident. What’s more, I think it necessary for us to hold an objective attitude to the news in the website where there is always much false news. Don’t focus too much on it. Finally, at this particular time, in order not to get infected, you ‘d better wash hands more. Meanwhile, it couldn’t be better if you stay indoors as much as possible. If you have to go out, you must wear protective mask to keep yourself from getting infected.
I firmly believe that we are able enough to defeat the coronavious in the near future.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封电子邮件：假如你是李津，你的加拿大的朋友 Tim 在邮件中谈到他们那里也出现了很多新型冠 状病毒肺炎的病例，他有些紧张，并感觉网络信息的传播加剧了人们的恐慌。请你给他写封回信，主要内容如下：（1）对他的恐慌表示理解，谈谈你的境况；（2）简单阐述如何对待网络信息，说明理由；（3）给 Tim 提一些建议(如：勤洗手，少出门，戴口罩)。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； coronavirus（新型冠状病毒肺炎），mask（口罩），panic（恐慌），outbreak（爆发），natural（自然的），worried （担心的），cure（治愈），infect（感染），objective（客观的）及protective（防护的）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有add to（增加），show sb’s concern about sth（表达对某事的关心），hold a(n)+adj+  attitude to （对某事持一种……的态度），in order not to（为了不……）以及keep sb from doing（防止某人做某事），而且还使用了宾语从句“I firmly believe that we are able enough to defeat the coronavious in the near future.”，状语从句“If you have to go out, you must wear protective mask to keep yourself from getting infected.”，定语从句和形式宾语“What’s more, I think it necessary for us to hold an objective attitude to the news in the website where there is always much false news.”，非谓语动词“Learning that you are worried about it and feel that the spread of news in the website adds to people’s panic, I am writing to show my concern about you and tell you something about my situation.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
122．1. I’m Li Jin from Chenguang middle school, who is a regular reader of your magazine.
2. The reason why I like your magazine is as follows.
3. To begin with, it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things that happened in the world.
4. In addition, not only does the magazine cover a rich content, but it is also interesting and easy to understand, which is of great help to English learners.
5. What I like reading most is the stories of famous people in the world, so it couldn’t be better if the magazine introduces some passages of this kind.
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信：假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你所喜爱的英语杂志 Teens’ Spacec 创刊五周年，在此之际, 该杂志向读者征集对杂志的意见或给出建议，请你根据以下内容给杂志主编写一封信。内容：① 说明你是该杂志的忠实读者；
② 说明你喜欢该杂志的原因；③ 提出你的建议。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； regular reader（忠实读者），cover（包含、涵盖），national（国内的），international（国际的），rich（丰富的），content（内容），interesting（有趣的）及English learners（英语学习者）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题（文章陈述的是客观情况，基础时态为一般现在时）。注意：根据要求可知：第一句用定语从句，先先行词为Li Jin ，指人，关系词在非限定性定语从句中作主语，所以用who来引导，故翻译为：I’m Li Jin from Chenguang middle school, who is a regular reader of your magazine；第二句用the reason why句型，表示“之所以、这就是……的原因”，故翻译为：The reason why I like your magazine is as follows；第三句cover作及物动词，表示“包含、涵盖”，so that表示“以便”，引导目的状语从句，同时需要对省略部分进行合理的补充，故翻译为：To begin with, it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things that happened in the world；第四句用not only… but also…表示“不但……而且……”，当not only位于句首时，其后的部分要采用部分倒装，同时用which指代整个主句内容，并在非限定性定语从句中作主语，故翻译为：In addition, not only does the magazine cover a rich content, but it is also interesting and easy to understand, which is of great help to English learners；第五句使用主语从句，关系词用what作reading的宾语，同时用it couldn’t be better if…句式表示“如果……就再好不过了”，故翻译为： What I like reading most is the stories of famous people in the world, so it couldn’t be better if the magazine introduces some passages of this kind.
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有as follows（如下），so that（以便），be of great help (有很大的帮助)，to begin with（首先）以及in addition（此外），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“I’m Li Jin from Chenguang middle school, who is a regular reader of your magazine.”及“In addition, not only does the magazine cover a rich content, but it is also interesting and easy to understand, which is of great help to English learners.”，主语从句“What I like reading most is the stories of famous people in the world, so it couldn’t be better if the magazine introduces some passages of this kind.”，定语从句“he reason why I like your magazine is as follows.”，状语从句“To begin with, it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things that happened in the world.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
123．Mr. Black,
  I’m Li Jin, one of your students. At first, I would like to thank you for your wonderful teaching skills and humorous teaching styles on behalf of my classmates. We really like your class. Then I want to make some suggestions about your class.
  We hope you can introduce more information about USA at class, because you are an American who knows the USA well. On the one hand, we want to learn about American teenagers’ life. For example, what lesson do they have? What do they do in their spare time? On the other hand, it is some information about famous universities in the USA that we desire to learn about. You know, some of us want to study abroad in the future. Those are our suggestions. Thank your for your teaching again.
Your student,
Li Jin
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是高三学生李津，请你代表你的同学们，结合下面要点提供的信息给你们的外教 Mr. Black写一封电子出件，向他提出一些建议。要点：（1）问候并说明大家都很喜欢上他的课；（2）今天受同学的委托向老师提几点建议；（3）想了解美国同龄人的学习和生活；（4）想了解美国一些著名大学的信息。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：one of (其中之一)；would like to (想要)；humorous teaching styles (幽默的教学风格)；on behalf of (代表)；study abroad(留学)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如  We hope you can introduce more information about USA at class, because you are an American who knows the USA well.运用了原因状语从句；On the other hand, it is some information about famous universities in the USA that we desire to learn about.运用强调句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
124．Dear classmates,
Mental health is something that decides whether we can live a happy life or not. However, mental health is easy to be overlooked, which can result in serious mental diseases. Here is some advice on keeping mental health.
First, know your own potential and accept yourself. Instead of having impractical and high expectations and demands for yourself, you should make practical goals for your life.
Second, be sociable and make as many friends as possible. Try to be a person easy to get along with. When you are discouraged, you can share your trouble with your friends, whose comfort and help can greatly relieve your sufferings and help you out.
Third, love your life and work. Try to display your talent in your work and you can get pleasure and satisfaction from your achievements, which can help you keep a good mood.
That is my idea. Thank you for listening.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，针对学生由于压力过大而出现心理问题这一现象提出一些建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
要求：1.健康的心理很重要。
2. 给同学提些建议：如了解自己，树立信心；与人相处；热爱生活
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
live a happy life or not; mental health; be easy to do; overlook; result in; disease; some advice on doing; potential; Instead of doing; impractical; expectation; make practical goals for; sociable; as many as possible; get along with; discourage; share...with...; relieve sufferings; display; pleasure; achievement; keep a good mood  .
第三步：连词成句
Mental health is something that decides whether we can live a happy life or not.
However, mental health is easy to be overlooked, which can result in serious mental diseases.
First, know your own potential and accept yourself.
Instead of having impractical and high expectations and demands for yourself, you should make practical goals for your life.
Second, be sociable and make as many friends as possible.
When you are discouraged, you can share your trouble with your friends, whose comfort and help can greatly relieve your sufferings and help you out.
Try to display your talent in your work and you can get pleasure and satisfaction from your achievements, which can help you keep a good mood.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n./doing, On the one hand…, On the other hand… Some…, while others…, as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Mental health is something that decides whether we can live a happy life or not. 这句话运用了that引导的定语从句；When you are discouraged, you can share your trouble with your friends, whose comfort and help can greatly relieve your sufferings and help you out. 这句话运用了when引导的时间状语从句，whose引导的定语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如be easy to do、Instead of doing、as many as possible等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
125．Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Teens’ Space!
I’m a regular reader of your magazine. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things that happened in the world. Second, Teens’  Space carries articles to guide me in our English learning, which is helpful to me.
As a student, I am looking forward to reading the success stories of famous people in the world, which is of great benefit to me to understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place. Meanwhile I hope Teens’ Space will become better and better.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本文为提纲类作文。要求给Teens'Spacec杂志主编写一封信。
【详解】本文为提纲作文中的书信体。你所喜爱的英语杂志Teens'Spacec 创刊五周年，在此之际, 该杂志向读者征集对杂志的意见或给出建议，请你根据以下内容给杂志主编写一封信。书信体作文主要包括三个部分。第一部分叙述写信的内容，第二部分叙述写信的内容，内容主要有：① 说明你是该杂志的忠实读者；② 说明你喜欢该杂志的原因；③ 提出你的建议。最后部分表达自己的期望。注意 词数不少于 100；可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
【点睛】本文内容完整，结构合理。语言委婉礼貌。文章中运用了许多较高级的词汇如congratulations on ;be helpful to;  of great benefit，以及顺序连词first,... second,...等，使的文章内容脉络清晰，结构明了。文中简单句与复合句相结合，一张一弛，相得益彰。较高级的复合句有“so that...”引导的状语从句it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things...， 由that引导的限制性定语从句I can learn all important things that happened in the world；由which引导的非限制性定语从句Teens’  Space carries articles to guide me in our English learning, which is helpful to me和I am looking forward to reading the success stories of famous people in the world, which is to me to understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place；以及宾语从句I hope Teens’ Space will become better and better等，这体现了作者对英语很好的驾驶能力。
126．Dear classmates, good afternoon! It’s my great pleasure to stand here, on behalf of everyone, to deliver a speech.
Because of the novel coronaving outbreak, we have studied at home for about two months. Today, we come back. First of all, let me convey my pleasure for seeing all of you, my dear friends. Secondly, I‘d like to give you some advice on study. Not only should you make a detailed plan every day but you should also stick to your plan, which will definitely help you make the best of your precious time. Meanwhile, apart from listening to the teacher carefully, you’d better review what you have learnt in time. What’s the most important, I think, is that you should turn to teachers for help when you are faced with difficult problems. Only in this way can you make great progress.
Dear classmates, the College Entrance Examination is just around the corner. Let’s seize the day and live it to the full.
Thank you for your listening!
【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一篇演讲稿：假如你是晨光中学高三一班班长李津。由于新冠疫情，不得不在家学习。你计划开学后举行一次班会，鼓励大家充分利用时间，向高考冲刺。现请用英文根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿：1. 表达能够上学的喜悦；2. 给出学习上的建议(至少3条)；3. 希望同学们只争朝夕，不负韶华。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； the novel coronaving outbreak（新冠肺炎疫情），detailed（详细的），definitely（必定），review（复习），seize（抓紧、把握），College Entrance Examination（高考）及carefully（认真地）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有because of（由于），stick to（坚持），apart from (除了)，make progress（取得进步），be faced with（遇到、面临），around the corner（即将来临）以及turn to sb for help（向某人求助），而且还使用了倒装句和非限定性定语从句“Not only should you make a detailed plan every day but you should also stick to your plan, which will definitely help you make the best of your precious time.”，宾语从句“Meanwhile, apart from listening to the teacher carefully, you’d better review what you have learnt in time.”，表语从句“What’s the most important, I think, is that you should turn to teachers for help when you are faced with difficult problems.”，倒装句“Only in this way can you make great progress.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
127．Good morning, everyone!
As we all know, health is the most important thing in the world. But what should we do to keep healthy? My views are as follows.
Firstly, eat in a proper way. It’s good for us to eat some fresh vegetables and fruit rich in vitamins and minerals every day. And breakfast is necessary. It gives us energy for the morning. Secondly, exercise regularly. Exercise can help keep us strong and active. Thirdly, get enough sleep. Staying up late is bad for our health. Go to bed early and we’ll feel refreshed next morning. Last but not least, enjoy the time with your friends and family, which will also contribute to your good health.
That’s all. Thank you!
【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将就 “How to keep healthy” 这一话题进行讨论。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈健康的重要性，并从饮食、运动、睡眠等方面就应该如何保持健康给出自己的建议。
第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）：as we all know（众所周知）；keep healthy?（保持健康）；fresh vegetables（新鲜蔬菜）；exercise regularly（定期锻炼）；stay up（熬夜）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如It’s good for us to eat some fresh vegetables and fruit rich in vitamins and minerals every day.运用了it做形式主语；Last but not least, enjoy the time with your friends and family, which will also contribute to your good health.运用非限定性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。
128．Dear Ton
In your letter you asked about mobile payment in China. It's my honor to introduce it to you.
Mobile payment has been advocated around the world, which is a future way to pay bills. In China, WeChat and Alipay are popular everywhere. Just scanning the QR code with a smart phone, people can easily pay for the items they need, even small business can be finished in this advanced way People play the joke that they don’t need to worry about the lack of cash. The advantages of mobile payment are obvious. Firstly, it saves people's time to pay bills. The use of mobile payment is carried out with a smart phone. Especially when we go to the supermarket, there are always a lot of people waiting in the long line. the process of costing customers' time is to take out the cash or use the credit card, because both customers and cashiers need to count the money or check the bills. But now the cashier can just scan the phone and the bill will be paid and the customer can check quickly. Secondly, people dont have to worry about getting the fake cash. Many years ago, people were easy to get fake money as they received the change. But now, as the cash have been used less, people won t receive the fake cash without paper money.
I believe with the development of mobile payment, our life will be more convenient.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本次书面表达是一篇应用文，要求写一封邮件，介绍移动支付在中国的情况，开头结尾已给出。此次写作以应用文为“壳”，行说明文之“实”。
【详解】完成本次写作，最关键两步是审题和列提纲。
体裁：应用文为“壳”，说明文为“实”
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总——分——总
要求：
1. 目前中国使用移动支付的情况（说明介绍）
2. 移动支付的好处（分点列举）
3. 你对移动支付的看法（表达议论）
第二步：分清详略，列明提纲：
本次写作与平时所见的邮件写作在详略处理上有所不同，大多数应用文写作的第一点往往只是引入，简要带过即可；但本文三个要点均要展开阐述，建议第二点较为详细地分点写作，但三点用力需要总体均衡。
移动支付在中国的情况：迅速普及，占领市场。
移动支付的好处：方便快捷，提高效率；不容易出错；资金安全更有保障；催生更丰富的应用场景；等等。
对移动支付的看法：首先应明确移动支付是大势所趋，应谈论其优点（或辩证看待，利大于弊）。可以从移动支付便利了人们的生活，推动了时代的进步，促进了互联网经济的发展等角度展开，注意尽量拓宽思路，从多维度进行分析，尽量避免与第二点重复。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了一些高级词汇短语，如be advocated around, scan等；作者运用firstly, secondly表达层次，并综合运用定语从句，连接词（but, because…）等来构造较为流畅地道的复合句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了较高的驾驭英语的能力。
129．Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Jin, a Chinese student in Senior Three. Yesterday I found a foreign English learning website. I like it very much.
The website has some useful columns. Grammar Column for the key grammar difficulties offers explanations so thoroughly and clearly that I can easily understand them. Vocabulary Column lists some common key words for us. Reading Column introduces many effective reading skills, which is of great help to me.
I think it's a great site, but I want more. Can you add a platform for us to make friends? I also hope the website can introduce more about different countries, which can broaden our horizons.
I'm looking forward to the website getting better and better.
                                                           Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【分析】本文为应用文。你在上网时发现一个国外的英语学习网站，你很喜欢里面的内容。请你根据以下提示，用英语给该网站写一封电子邮件。主要内容包括：表示对这个内容感兴趣；其中一些栏目对学习很有帮助（词汇、阅读等）；并提些建议（建立交友平台，介绍不同国家的文化等）。
【详解】本文是一封电子邮件。属于书信体作文。第一段主要写邮件的原因，即觉得这个英语学习网站内容很好，很喜欢。第二部分主要表达自己对这个网站内容感兴趣，尤其是其中的一些栏目对学习很有帮助（词汇、阅读等）。这部分在写作时可适当地增加细节，但要合理。注意使用一些高级词汇和较复杂的句型结构，如定语从句等，增强文章的逻辑性，提高文章得分等级。最后一部分表达自己对这个网站更多的企盼，提出的个人建议，表达建议的语气要礼貌委婉。
【点睛】本文要点完整，结构合理，发挥适当，逻辑严密。表达建议时语气真诚，易于接受。文中运用了一些较高级的词汇如be of great help；add... to；broaden one's horizons；look forward to...等。句式简洁明了，以简单句为主，同时穿插了复合句。如由so..that...引导的状语从句，Grammar Column for the key grammar difficulties offers explanations so thoroughly and clearly that I can easily understand them以及由which引导的定语从句Column introduces many effective reading skills, which is of great help to me和I hope the website can introduce more about different countries, which can broaden our horizons. 这些句式的运用,增强了文章的表现力。
130．Dear Jack，
I'm glad to know that you are interested in Chinese Bridge Contest and want to learn more about the Chinese language and culture. I’d like to offer you some proposals, which I think can be of benefit to your Chinese study.
To learn the Chinese language and culture well，first of all，you have to read some classical literature，which will broaden your horizon. Besides，watching TV programs and reading newspapers are also good ways of language learning. Last but not least，you are supposed to make some Chinese friends with whom you can communicate frequently. Only by doing so can you achieve your goal better.
I sincerely hope my suggestions will be good for your Chinese study and that you will make greater progress in it.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封建议信，给英国朋友Jack就如何学习中国语言文化给出一些建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法    
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1．通过中国古典作品了解中国文化；
2．借助电视节目以及报刊更好地了解中国国情；
3．和中国朋友多沟通。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be interested in; Chinese Bridge Contest; Chinese language and culture; proposal; be of benefit to; classical literature; Tb programs; be supposed to do; communicate with; make progress.
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm glad to know that you are interested in Chinese Bridge Contest and want to learn more about the Chinese language and culture.
2. I’d like to offer you some proposals,
3 To learn the Chinese language and culture well， you have to read some classical literature，which will broaden your horizon.
4. Watching TV programs and reading newspapers are also good ways of language learning.
5. You are supposed to make some Chinese friends with whom you can communicate frequently
6. I sincerely hope my suggestions will be good for your Chinese study
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least;
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+ clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级句型，如：To learn the Chinese language and culture well，first of all，you have to read some classical literature，which will broaden your horizon.使用了which引导的定语从句；watching TV programs and reading newspapers are also good ways of language learning.用了动名词做主语；Only by doing so can you achieve your goal better.使用了倒装。除此之外，本文还有一些好的词和词组，如proposal, be of benefit to; broaden your horizon, be supposed to 等等。文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。