辽宁高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假定你是李华，你的朋友Simon写信告诉你他沉迷于打篮球，每天花很多时间打球，结果家庭作业不能准时上交。父母和老师很不满，要他放弃这个爱好，他很生气。根据以下提示，请你就 Simon的问题给他提一些有用的建议。

1.认真计划好自己的时间；

2.不要放弃自己的爱好，但也不要忘记学习；

3.保持学习和爱好之间的平衡。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

2．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友David是你校的一名交换生，六一儿童节期间他准备参加当地帮助残疾儿童的志愿者活动，他想给一些残疾儿童送一些礼物，发来邮件询问什么礼物合适。请你根据下列要点回复，并表示感激。

1. 感谢他尽己所能去帮助残疾儿童；

2. 说明自己决定和他一起去；

3. 建议送些水果或儿童书籍等，并说明理由。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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3．假定你是李华，你的朋友尼克近来沉迷于游戏《王者荣耀》（King of Glory）不能自拔，你在得知此事后非常担忧。请你给他写一封信予以劝说，要点如下：

1. 你对他的担心；     

2. 游戏的危害；       

3. 摆脱游戏的办法。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；       

2. 可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Nick,

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Yours sincerely

Li Hua

4．假设你是李华。你的英国笔友John写信告诉你近日他沉迷于电脑游戏，健康受到了很大的影响，他十分焦虑。请你根据以下要点提示，给他写一份回信，建议他养成良好的生活习惯。

1.改变生活习惯，合理安排时间。

2.经常锻炼，增强体质。

注意：

1、词数80左右；

2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear John,

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Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

5．假如你是李华，你在网上获悉“汉语桥”世界大学生中文比赛初试（the “Chinese Bridge” Chinese Proficiency Competition for Foreign College Students）将在下个月当地电视台举办。你的外国朋友Frank正在大学学习中文，你建议他去试一试，并表示可以提供帮助。

报名时间：5月20日截止；报名地点：所在大学的学生会。

注意：1.词数80左右

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Frank,

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Yours,

Li Hua

6．假如你是李华，你校将在校内给老师安排自愿接种新冠疫苗活动，请写信通知你的外教David，内容包括：

1.时间和地点；

2.注意事项；

3.建议参加。

参考词汇：疫苗：vaccine；接种疫苗：get vaccinated

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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7．假设你是李华，有外国友人到你校参观，想了解你们英语学习的情况。请你代表学校用英语发言，要点如下：

1. 表示欢迎并简要介绍学校情况；

2. 说明英语学习情况(课堂、活动等)；

3. 征求对方学好英语的建议。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear friends，

Welcome to our school!

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That’s all. Thank you.

8．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友John来信说，他在自学英语时，发现汉字的读音很难掌握。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1.表示理解

2.提出建议

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear John,

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Yours,

Li Hua

9．假定你是李华，你校将开展音乐选修课课程。即将来校学习的英国交换生 Peter 不知如何选择，请你给他写信提供建议，内容包括：

 1. 选修课种类介绍。

2. 你的建议及理由。

参考词汇： 选修课：optional course     民乐 folk music

注意：

1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Peter,

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Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

10．假定你是李华，你和你的同学决定要在紧张的学习之余，为高三生活拍摄英文纪录片。请你给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导，内容包括：

1.告知拍摄的具体计划与内容；

2.请她编写英文字幕；

3.询问对拍摄的建议。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

参考词汇：字幕subtitle；纪录片documentary

Dear Miss Evans,

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Yours,

Li Hua

1．Dear Simon,

Thank you for your letter. You say you don't have enough time to do your homework I think you'd better plan your day carefully. It will be a good choice to make a list of all the homework you have to do. This will give you an idea of how much free time you can have to play basketball. Don't give up your hobby but do not forget about your study，either. You should keep a balance between study and bobby.

I hope my advice will be of some value to you

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写信给自己的沉迷于篮球而忽略学习的朋友Simon一些建议。

【详解】词汇积累

感谢：thank you/ thanks /I really appreciate it

足够的：enough =adequate

建议：suggestion =advice

有价值的：be of value=be valuable

句式拓展

简单句变为复合句

原句：You say you don't have enough time to do your homework

拓展句：You say you don't have enough time to do your homework，which bothers you recently.

【点睛】[高分句型1] . It will be a good choice to make a list of all the homework you have to do.（运用了it充当形式主语的固定结构，和省略that的定语从句）

[高分句型2] This will give you an idea of how much free time you can have to play basketball.（运用了定语从句）

2．Dear David,

I’m grateful that you want to help the disabled children. Reading your email, I’m so moved that I’ve decided to see the disabled children on Children’s Day with you.

As to what presents are the best choice, it’s really a matter of personal preference. I’d like to recommend sending the children some fruits or some books. On the one hand, fruits are good for children’s health, and it is also convenient to carry. On the other hand, disabled as they are, all of them, I think, are eager to study. Therefore, books may also be a good choice.

Anyway, whatever presents you choose, you’ll be appreciated by those disabled children.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是李华，你的英国朋友David是你校的一名交换生，六一儿童节期间他准备参加当地帮助残疾儿童的志愿者活动，他想给一些残疾儿童送一些礼物，发来邮件询问什么礼物合适。请你根据题干中提供的要点进行回复，并表示感激。

【详解】1.词汇积累

礼物：present→gift

感激的：grateful→thankful

对……有好处：be good for→ benefit

无论什么：whatever=→no matter what

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：On the other hand, disabled as they are, all of them, I think, are eager to study. Therefore, books may also be a good choice.

拓展句：On the other hand, disabled as they are, all of them, I think, are eager to study, so books may also be a good choice.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Reading your email, I’m so moved that I’ve decided to see the disabled children on Children’s Day with you. (运用了现在分词及so…that句型)

[高分句型2] As to what presents are the best choice, it’s really a matter of personal preference.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)

3．Dear Peter,

I'm sorry to hear that you are addicted to King of Glory. Spending too much time on games is not only harmful to your health but also makes you isolated from the real world.

I think you can try other things to distract your attention. For example, you can play basketball or other sports with your friends, which can improve your fitness and strengthen your friendship. It’s also a good choice to communicate with your parents and friends, sharing your happiness and sorrow. Besides, you can read some books to broaden your horizon in your spare time.

Longing for good news from you!

Yours sincerely

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国朋友尼克写封信，陈述沉迷游戏的坏处，然后提出一些建议，帮他远离游戏。

【详解】1.词汇积累

健康：health→fitness

加强：deepen→strengthen

扩大：widen→broaden

对……有害：be bad for=be harmful to

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：You can read some books to broaden your horizon in your spare time.

拓展句：You can read some books to broaden your horizon in your spare time, whose content interests you so much that games are out of your mind.

【点睛】[高分句型1] you can play basketball or other sports with your friends, which can improve your fitness and strengthen your friendship. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Spending too much time on games is not only harmful to your health but also make you isolated from the real world. (运用了动名词短语作主语，not only…but also…引导的并列句)

4．Dear John,

I’m sorry to hear that you’re addicted to computer games which have had a bad influence on your health. Knowing you worry about it very much, I’m willing to give you some advice.

Firstly, you should change your living habits and arrange your time reasonably, such as getting up and going to bed at a specific time so that you can form a good habit. Besides, you should do exercise regularly to strengthen your body. I do hope that you can get rid of computer games and form a healthy lifestyle.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

LiHua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友John写一份回信，就他沉迷于电脑游戏使健康受到了很大的影响，建议他养成良好的生活习惯。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

影响：effect→ influence

增强：build up→ strengthen

摆脱：get out of→ get rid of

期待：expect→ look forward to

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Besides, you should do exercise regularly to strengthen your body.

拓展句：Besides, it is important that you should do regular exercise to strengthen your body.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you’re addicted to computer games which have had a bad influence on your health.（运用了由that引导的宾语从句作hear的宾语和由which引导的定语从句）

[高分句型2] Firstly, you should change your living habits and arrange your time reasonably, such as getting up and going to bed at a specific time so that you can form a good habit. （运用了由so that连接的结果状语从句）

[高分句型3]  I do hope that you can get rid of computer games and form a healthy lifestyle.（运用了由that引导的宾语从句作hope的宾语）

5．One possible version:

Dear Frank,

I read on the Internet that the first round of “Chinese Bridge” Chinese Proficiency Competition for Foreign College Students — an noted international Chinese competition will be held in the local television station next month.

I know you are an outstanding Chinese learner, and you are studying Chinese in the university. I think this is a good chance for you to show your language competence, and how well you have learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you are required to go to the Students Union to sign up. Don’t hesitate to find my help whenever you need. And the last thing I want to remind you of is the deadline — March 31st.

May success wait upon your efforts.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国朋友Frank写封信，建议他参加下个月当地电视台举办的“汉语桥”世界大学生中文比赛初试（the “Chinese Bridge” Chinese Proficiency Competition for Foreign College Students）。

【详解】1.词汇积累

举办：hold→host

尝试：try→attempt

杰出的：outstanding→splendid

提醒某人某事：remind sb. of sth.= remind sb. to do sth.

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：I know you are an outstanding Chinese learner, and you are studying Chinese in the university. I think this is a good chance for you to show your language competence, and how well you have learned Chinese.

拓展句：I know you are an outstanding Chinese learner, and you are studying Chinese in the university. So I think this is a good chance for you to show your language competence, and how well you have learned Chinese.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I know you are an outstanding Chinese learner, and you are studying Chinese in the university. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] Don’t hesitate to find my help whenever you need. (运用了祈使句及whenever引导的让步状语从句)

6．Possible versions one:

Dear David，

By means of this letter, I’d like to tell you a recent vaccination arrangement of our school.

According to announcement released by school commission, there will be a COVID-19 vaccination lasting from 1st to 5th of May at school’s clinic, from whose website you can browse relevant information. Once you’ve made up your mind to get vaccinated, these following tips should be borne in your mind: check up if you’re allergic to the vaccine; stay at the site for 30 minutes after getting the shot and alcohol should be excluded from your diet since then.

I strongly suggest you seek vaccination, which not only protects you, but those around you.

Yours,

Li Hua

Possible versions two:

Dear David,

I’m writing to inform you of the COVID-19 vaccination arrangement of our school.

The vaccination is totally optional, and it will last from next Monday to Friday at school clinic. But before getting vaccinated, you have to figure out whether you’re allergic to the vaccine. If not, then check with the provider to make sure you bring any needed documents. After getting the injection, it’s recommended to remain at the site for 30 minutes to make sure you do not have a concerning reaction.

I strongly advise you to seek vaccination. This not only protects you, but those around you.

Sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写信通知外教David学校给老师安排自愿接种新冠疫苗的活动。

【详解】范文1

1.词汇积累

通过：through→by means of

公开/通知：announce→release

决定：decide to do→make up your mind to do

记住：remember→bear sth in your mind

排除/删除：cut out→exclude

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：By means of this letter, I’d like to tell you a recent vaccination arrangement of our school.

拓展句：Now I’m writing this letter, in which I’d like to tell you a recent vaccination arrangement of our school.

【点睛】[高分句型1] According to announcement released by school commission, there will be a COVID-19 vaccination lasting from 1st to 5th of May at school’s clinic, from whose website you can browse relevant information. （该句中“from whose website you can browse relevant information”运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句。）

[高分句型2] Once you’ve made up your mind to get vaccinated, these following tips should be borne in your mind: check up if you’re allergic to the vaccine; stay at the site for 30 minutes after getting the shot and alcohol should be excluded from your diet since then. （该句中“Once you’ve made up your mind to get vaccinated”为“once(一旦)”引导的时间状语从句。）

范文2

1.词汇积累

通知：notice→inform sb. of sth

弄清楚：find out→figure out

建议：suggest→recommend

停留：stay→remain

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：The vaccination is totally optional, and it will last from next Monday to Friday at school clinic.

拓展句：The vaccination is totally optional, which will last from next Monday to Friday at school clinic.

[高分句型1]

But before getting vaccinated, you have to figure out whether you’re allergic to the vaccine. （该句中“whether you’re allergic to the vaccine”为whether引导的宾语从句。）

[高分句型2]

After getting the injection, it’s recommended to remain at the site for 30 minutes to make sure you do not have a concerning reaction.（该句中使用了“it”作为形式主语，构成“it’s recommended to do”结构，真正主语为动词不定式“to remain at the site for 30 minutes”。）

7．Dear friends，

Welcome to our school! I feel honored to give you a brief introduction of our school，which covers an area of about 200，000 square meters. There are about 300 teaching staff and over 3000 students in our schoo1.

We have one English class each day from Monday to Friday. Every Thursday afternoon，we can go to the English Comer，talking freely in English. Each semester，we hold one English debate and one English speech contest. We have been trying our best to learn English，but we would appreciate it if you could give us some valuable advice.

That’s a11. Thank you.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生代表学校向外国友人介绍英语学习情况，并征求学好英语的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

简要介绍：introduce briefly→give you a brief introduction

占地：has an area of→covers an area of

学期：term→semester

感激：be grateful→appreciate

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Every Thursday afternoon，we can go to the English Comer，talking freely in English.

拓展句：In order that we can apply what we’ve learned in class to our daily life, we can go to the English Comer every Thursday, talking freely in English.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I feel honored to give you a brief introduction of our school，which covers an area of about 200，000 square meters. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] We have been trying our best to learn English，but we would appreciate it if you could give us some valuable advice. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)

8．One possible version:

Dear John,

Knowing that you have trouble learning the Chinese pronunciation, I think it doesn’t matter. After all, it’s difficult for foreigners to grasp it. However, some practical approaches are of great help.

Obviously, it is highly recommended to refer to Xinhua Dictionary when you come across a challenging Chinese character. Then, with mobile phones catching on, some Chinese learning apps are increasing popular with Chinese learners because they are so handy and quick that you can acquire the pronunciation.

I know for sure that you will make much progress in learning Chinese pronunciation. It is welcome to write to me when you are in trouble.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友John回信，对学习汉字读音很难掌握表示理解并提出建议。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量一般将来时。

结构：总分法。总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 表示理解；

2. 提出建议。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

have trouble learning the Chinese pronunciation; it doesn’t matter; practical approaches; refer to Xinhua Dictionary; some Chinese learning apps; make much progress

第三步：连词成句

1. Knowing that you have trouble learning the Chinese pronunciation, I think it doesn’t matter.

2. After all, it’s difficult for foreigners to grasp it.

3. However, some practical approaches are of great help.

4. Obviously, it is highly recommended to refer to Xinhua Dictionary when you come across a challenging Chinese character.

5. Then, with mobile phones catching on, some Chinese learning apps are increasing popular with Chinese learners because they are so handy and quick that you can acquire the pronunciation.

6. I know for sure that you will make much progress in learning Chinese pronunciation.

7. It is welcome to write to me when you are in trouble.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考)

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including, (供参考)

3.表转折对比关系：However

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result(供参考)

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowing that you have trouble learning the Chinese pronunciation, I think it doesn’t matter.(运用了现在分词作状语)

[高分句型2] Then, with mobile phones catching on, some Chinese learning apps are increasing popular with Chinese learners because they are so handy and quick that you can acquire the pronunciation.(运用了with的独立主格结构)

9．Dear Peter,

Learning that you are wondering which music optional courses to choose, I am writing to make some suggestions.

There are various music optional courses in our school, including folk music, choir, playing instruments and so on. Considering that you are interested in Chinese culture, it is suggested that you choose folk music. In class, you can learn to sing folk songs.  In addition, you will enjoy music pieces played with traditional instruments, which is a good way to learn about Chinese culture.  I think they will be a feast for your ears.

Sincerely hope my advice is helpful to you. Looking forward to your reply！

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求给交换生 Peter 关于如何选择音乐选修课课程提出建议。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：一般现在时

结构：总分法

第一部分是文章的开头段，说明写邮件的原因；第二部分是支持段，关于如何选择音乐选修课课程提出建议；第三部分是结尾段，希望建议对对方有用。

要求：

1. 说明写信的原因：关于如何选择音乐选修课课程给Peter提出建议

2. 提出具体的建议：

①选修课种类介绍：民族音乐、合唱、乐器演奏

②建议选择民族音乐：学唱民族歌曲，欣赏民族乐曲

3. 希望建议对对方有帮助

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

wonder；make some suggestions；play instruments；be interested in；folk music；enjoy music pieces；play with；traditional instrument；learn about；a feast for one’s ears；be helpful to

第三步：连词成句

(1) Learning that you are wondering which music optional courses to choose, I am writing to make some suggestions.

(2) There are various music optional courses in our school, including folk music, choir, playing instruments and so on.

(3) Considering that you are interested in Chinese culture, it is suggested that you choose folk music.

(4) In the class, you can learn to sing folk songs.  

(5) You will enjoy music pieces played with traditional instruments.

(6) It is a good way to learn about Chinese culture.  

(7) I think they will be a feast for your ears.

(8) Sincerely hope my advice is helpful to you.  

提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

表递进关系：in addition

【点睛】[高分句型1]

Learning that you are wondering which music optional courses to choose, I am writing to make some suggestions.

（现在分词作状语）

[高分句型2]

It is suggested that you choose folk music.  （it作形式主语）

[高分句型3]

You will enjoy music pieces played with traditional instruments, which is a good way to learn about Chinese culture.（which引导定语从句）

10．参考范文：

Dear Miss Evans,

How is everything going? I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. As Senior Three students，we are having a busy but very meaningful year. Therefore we intend to make a documentary in English for it.

We have decided to focus on both our study and life. On the one hand, we will record some wonderful scenes in time; on the other hand, we are going to insist on videoing once a month to record our life. However, we find it demanding to write English subtitles. I would really appreciate it if you could offer us the English subtitles and give us some valuable suggestions.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导拍摄英文纪录片。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.告知拍摄的具体计划与内容；

2.请她编写英文字幕；

3.询问对拍摄的建议。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

do sb. a favor； intend to；decide to do；focus on； in time；insist on；look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1.I am writing to ask you to do me a favor.

2.As Senior Three students，we are having a busy but very meaningful year.

3.Therefore we intend to make a documentary in English for it.

4.We have decided to focus on both our study and life.

5.On the one hand, we will record some wonderful scenes in time; on the other hand, we are going to insist on videoing once a month to record our life.

6.However, we find it demanding to write English subtitles.

7. I would really appreciate it if you could offer us the English subtitles and give us some valuable suggestions.

8.I am looking forward to your reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表转折对比关系：However, On the one hand…,On the other hand…

2.表因果关系：Therefore

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

【点睛】[高分句型1] On the one hand, we will record some wonderful scenes in time; on the other hand, we are going to insist on videoing once a month to record our life.(动词不定式作目的状语)

[高分句型2] However, we find it demanding to write English subtitles.(it作形式宾语，真正的宾语是动词不定式)