广东高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份广东高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共15页。
建议信1．假设你是某中学学生李华，在你班级留学的美国学生Bill无法适应这里的学习与生活，感到苦闷，他写信向你求助，请你用英文给他写一封回信，内容如下：1. 深表同情；2. 提出建议并给出理由；3. 希望建议能有所帮助。注意：1. 词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学，他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：1.表示欢迎；2.建议他上哪所大学及做哪些准备工作。注意：词数80左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假定你是李华，你的朋友John沉迷于微信（WeChat）而不能自拔，写信向你寻求帮助，请你给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 表示理解和关心；2. 沉迷微信的影响；3. 提出具体建议。注意：1. 词数：80词左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：沉溺于be addicted to；沉溺addiction___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack十月份打算来广州旅行，发email给你询问旅游建议，请你根据下列提示，给他回复email，推荐广州的旅游景点和出行方式。1.参观陈家祠——广州最有名的历史建筑，有一百多年的历史，富有岭南建筑风格。2.珠江夜游——欣赏珠江两岸夜景。3.广州塔——高约600米，是世界第三高塔，是广州的地标建筑。4.交通方式——公交汽车，地铁。注意:1.词数80左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：陈家祠Chen Clan Academy，珠江夜游Pearl River Night Cruise，广州塔Canton Tower，岭南建筑风格Lingnan architecture styleDear Jack,I’m glad to know that you are going to visit Guangzhou in October. It’s my pleasure to recommend the tourist attractions of Guangzhou to you._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假设你是李华，得知你的美国笔友Peter暑假要来中国旅游并在北京停留一天。有两条游览路线让他犹豫不决：(1)长城一日游;(2)天安门广场、故宫一日游。Peter想征询你的意见。请你根据以下内容，给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括：(1)欢迎他来北京旅游；(2)推荐路线并说明理由；(3)提出可以陪他游览一天。注意:1词数100左右，已给出部分不记入总词数；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,How are things going?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua6．假设你是李津，最近你收到英国笔友Peter的来信，他说最近感到压力大，想就 “How to live with pressure” 的话题和你交流。请根据此话题及以下提示，写一封回信。内容要点如下：1. 表示理解对方的感受；2. 结合你过往应对压力的经验，谈谈如何面对压力；3. 表达你的希望。注意：1. 写100词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯。3. 文中不得出现透露个人信息的文字，例如真实学校名称、真实姓名等等。Dear Peter,I’ve received your letter and I’m sorry that you are under great pressure. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Li Jin7．假定你是李华，你有一位网友David是在中国学习的交换生。最近他身体不好，经常感冒，影响了学习。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 饮食，运动的重要性；2. 给出建议；3. 你的祝愿注意: 1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;8．你在李华的来信中得知李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习和身体健康。作为他的好朋友Tony，你打算怎么帮他呢？请写一篇100个词左右的短信．字迹工整，语言流畅．写作内容：1. 你给好朋友的建议。2. 沉迷于电脑的危害。3. 你能给他提供的帮助。提示词：沉迷于（be addicted to +n/doing）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom将来中国某中学进行交换学习，他来信告诉你他不知道如何和新同学相处，请你根据以下要点给他回信，给出相关建议。1、多与同学交流；2、对人友好，多交朋友；3、多参加课外活动。注意：1.信件内容完整，首句已给出，记得补全；2.词数80词左右，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Dear Tom，        I am glad to know that you are coming to study in China. As your problem of how_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom发邮件说他不能适应高中的学习生活，为此他感到很焦虑。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.给他一些建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Tom,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua              1．Dear Bill,I am sorry to know you are having trouble with your life and study here. However, the situation is easy to change. Now, I’d like to give you some advice. Firstly, join some school clubs, where you can make some friends. Secondly, communicate with the people who have the same interest with you. Maybe it can get rid of your loneliness. Thirdly, do some outdoor activities and they can make you relaxed. By doing all these, you can get used to your school life and live happily. Hope my advice can help you. Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。班上留学生Bill无法适应这里的学习与生活，感到苦闷，他写信向你求助，考生写一封回信给他提出一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累麻烦，问题：trouble→matter建议：advice→suggestion加入：join→participate in 摆脱：get rid of→break away from2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：By doing all these, you can get used to your school life and live happily.拓展句：If you do all these, you will get used to your school life and live happily.【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, join some school clubs, where you can make some friends. (运用了关系副词where引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Secondly, communicate with the people who have the same interest with you. (运用了关系代词who引导的限制性定语从句，先行词people在从句中做主语成分)2．Dear Jim,I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijng in your last letter. First, I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing. Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in profound Chinese history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance is needed like The Story of the Stone and some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt to the Chinese language environment. I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know. Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于建议信，要求考生给英国朋友Jim写封信，建议他上北京的哪所大学及做哪些准备工作，并表示欢迎。【详解】1. 词汇积累高兴的：glad→delighted肯定的：sure→certain建议：suggest→advise有用的：helpful→useful2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I’m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijng in your last letter.拓展句：I’m so glad to hear that you plan to get future education in Beijng in your last letter.【点睛】[高分句型1]Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in profound Chinese history and rich culture.（运用了where引导的限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes.（运用了省略连词that的宾语从句和when引导的时间状语从句）3．Dear John,I’m sorry to hear that you’re suffering from WeChat addiction. I really understand how you feel and I’d like to offer you some useful advice.First of all, I suggest that you should start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music, or playing chess, etc, which will take your mind off WeChat. Besides, you’d better make more friends and communicate with each other face-to-face. They’ll help you out when you can’t resist the temptation of WeChat. Last but not least, it’s better for you to do some sports instead of using WeChat a lot because sports can not only keep you healthy but also enrich your life and help you keep away from WeChat.I hope you can accept my suggestions and get rid of addiction to WeChat as soon as possible.Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达为应用文。要求学生代替李华给John写一封建议信，因为朋友John沉迷于微信（WeChat）不能自拔。【详解】1.词汇积累：建议：advice→proposal/suggestion/recommendation摆脱：get rid of→cast off/break away from诱惑：temptation→attraction接受：accept→take/adopt2.句式拓展：合并简单句原句：I’m sorry to hear that you’re suffering from WeChat addiction. I really understand how you feel and I’d like to offer you some useful advice.拓展句：Extremely sorry to hear that you’re suffering from WeChat addiction, I really understand how you feel and I’d like to offer you some useful advice.原句：Besides, you’d better make more friends and communicate with each other face-to-face. They’ll help you out when you can’t resist the temptation of WeChat.拓展句：Besides, you’d better make more friends and communicate with each other face-to-face, which will help you out when you can’t resist the temptation of WeChat.【点睛】【高分句型1】Last but not least, it’s better for you to do some sports instead of using WeChat a lot because sports can not only keep you healthy but also enrich your life and help you keep away from WeChat.（这句话使用了it做形式主语以及not only，but also连接两个动词。）【高分句型2】First of all, I suggest that you should start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music, or playing chess, etc, which will take your mind off WeChat.（这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。）4．Dear Jack,I’m glad to know that you are going to visit Guangzhou in October. It’s my pleasure to recommend the tourist attractions of Guangzhou to you.On the first day, I will meet you at the airport and we can take a bus there to visit Chen Clan Academy. It is the most famous historical building in Guangzhou. It has a history of more than 100 years and is rich in Lingnan architectural style. In the evening, we will have a Pearl River Night Cruise, sitting on the boat and enjoying the night scenery on both sides of the Pearl River. The next day, we can take the subway from my home to Canton Tower. The tower is about 600 meters high, which is the third tallest tower in the world and the landmark of Guangzhou. After that, I will lead you to taste authentic Guangzhou snacks.Looking forward to your visit.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇书面表达类应用文。要求考生给十月份来广州的英国朋友Jack推荐旅游景点和出行方式。【详解】1.词汇积累参观：pay a visit to→visit著名的：well-known→famous欣赏：appreciate→enjoy带某人做某事：take sb. to do sth.→lead sb. to do sth.2.句型拓展合并简单句原句：On the first day, we can take a bus from the airport to visit Chen Clan Academy. It is the most famous historical building in Guangzhou. 拓展句：On the first day, we can take a bus from the airport to visit Chen Clan Academy, which is the most famous historical building in Guangzhou.【点睛】[高分句型1]In the evening, we will have a Pearl River Night Cruise, sitting on the boat and enjoying the night scenery on both sides of the Pearl River. (运用了现在分词作状语)[高分句型2]The tower is about 600 meters high, which is the third tallest tower in the world and the landmark of Guangzhou. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)5．Dear Peter,How are things going?I'm so excited to hear that you are coming to Beijing this winter vacation. I just can't wait to see you.Regarding your two choices of how to spend the day, I'd like to recommend the second, a one day tour of the Forbidden City and the Tian'anmen Square. As the largest museum of culture and art in China, and the centre of the Beijing city, the two scenic spots have been regarded as must-see attractions, especially for those who will visit Beijing for only one day. Don't worry about the tour guide. I can accompany you throughout the day. We're sure to have a good time.I hope my suggestion will be of some help to you. If you have any other questions, just write to me.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给美国笔友Peter写一封电子邮件，对于他的到来表示欢迎，推荐路线并说明理由。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：excited→delighted选择：choice→option把……看待成：regard…as…=treat…as…帮助：help→assistance2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：I can accompany you throughout the day. We're sure to have a good time.拓展句：I can accompany you throughout the day when we're sure to have a good time.【点睛】[高分句型1]I'm so excited to hear that you are coming to Beijing this winter vacation.（that引导宾语从句）[高分句型2]As the largest museum of culture and art in China, and the centre of the Beijing city, the two scenic spots have been regarded as must-see attractions, especially for those who will visit Beijing for only one day.（who引导定语从句）6．Dear Peter,I’ve received your letter and I’m sorry that you are under great pressure. You are fully understood because I had this experience before. Just don’t worry. I still remember struggling to find time for everything I wished to accomplish. I was playing the piano for the singing group with an important competition on its way. I couldn’t miss any practice and meanwhile there was much homework to do! I nearly broke down under pressure. Exactly at this point, however, I discovered it impossible to achieve perfection. I just needed to strike a balance between studies and hobbies. That was how tension was removed finally. There are many ways to relax, such as doing sports and listening to music. When it comes to my own experience, being realistic and adjusting the goal to suit the situation can definitely reduce stress.I hope you find this useful. Cheer up and you will be refreshed! Best wishes!Yours,Li Jin【分析】本篇书面表达是书信，属于应用文。假设你是李津，最近你收到英国笔友Peter的来信，他说最近感到压力大，想就 “How to live with pressure” 的话题和你交流。请根据此话题及以下提示，写一封回信。内容要点如下：1. 表示理解对方的感受；2. 结合你过往应对压力的经验，谈谈如何面对压力；3. 表达你的希望。【详解】词汇积累压力大：feel stressful→ be under great pressure 完成：achieve→ accomplish                   同时：at the same time→ meanwhile累垮了：fall ill→ break down2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：I just needed to strike a balance between studies and hobbies. That was how tension was removed finally.拓展句：I just needed to strike a balance between studies and hobbies, which was how tension was removed finally.【点睛】[高分句型1] I still remember struggling to find time for everything I wished to accomplish.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句，由于作宾语，that省略)[高分句型2] I discovered it impossible to achieve perfection. (运用了it作形式宾语)7．Dear David,I'm very sorry to learn that you have not been feeling quite yourself these days, which affects your study a lot. Personally I think you need to pay attention to the following aspects.First of all, keep a balanced diet, which is the key to keeping fit. Besides, take regular exercise, which can build up your body and prevent diseases attacking you at the same time. Only in this way can you guarantee a healthy body and efficient study.Wish you all the best.Yours,LiHua【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求考生给最近身体状况欠佳的外国网友David写一封电子邮件，就如何保持身体健康，提出一些建议，并祝福他早日康复。【详解】1.词汇积累感到不适：feel sick→feel uncomfortable在我看来：as far as I’m concerned→personally逐渐增强：strengthen→build up确保：make sure of→guarantee2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Only in this way can you guarantee a healthy body and efficient study.拓展句：Only in this way can you guarantee a healthy body, which can in turn assure you of efficient study.【点睛】[高分句型1] Only in this way can you guarantee a healthy body and efficient study. (运用了only+状语的部分倒装结构)[高分句型2] Besides, take regular exercise, which can build up your body and prevent diseases attacking you at the same time. (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)8．Dear Li Hua,I’m sorry to hear that you’re addicted to playing computer games. Here are my suggestions for you to solve the problem.Firstly, I think you should spend most of your time on your study instead of playing computer games．Secondly，I must tell you that playing computer games too much is bad for your health, especially for your eyes, so you must give it up. You can play more sports with your classmates after school so that you may become more interested in sports than computer games. Finally, you should concentrate more on your study. Of course, I will try my best to help you with all your subjects. At the same time，I'll ask both your parents and your teachers to help you. I'm sure you will make great progress soon.I hope that my suggestions are helpful to you anyway.Yours, Tony【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给沉迷电脑游戏的朋友李华写一封建议信，帮助他摆脱对电脑游戏的瘾，不再影响学习和健康。【详解】1.词汇积累代替：instead of → rather than对…有害：is bad for → be harmful to/does harm to放弃：give up → quit专注：concentrate more on →focus more on 尽全力做：try my best to → spare no effort to取得进步：make great progress → make great advances有助于：are helpful to → are of great help to2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Finally,  you  should  concentrate  more  on  your  study.拓展句：Finally,  you  should  concentrate  more  on  your  study, which is of great importance for you.【点睛】【高分句型1】You can play more sports with your classmates after school so that you may become more interested in sports than computer games.（运用了结果状语从句）【高分句型2】I'm sure you will make great progress soon.（运用了宾语从句）9．Dear Tom,I’m glad to know that you have come to study in China. As for the problem of how to get on with new classmates, here is my advice.First, you should try to communicate with your classmates actively. I think the cultural difference is a good topic. Second you should care about your classmates and offer help to those in need. After all, being friendly is always a good way to make friends. Finally, you should take an active part in different kinds of class activities so that you can build close relationships with your new classmates.I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. Wish you a good time in your new school.Yours.Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Tom写信，告诉他如何与新同学相处。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：advice→ suggestion提供：offer→ provide与……相处：get on with→ get along with 参加：take part in→ join最终：finally→ at last句式拓展简单句变并列句原句：First, you should try to communicate with your classmates actively.拓展句：First, you should try to communicate with your classmates actively so you can make friends with them easily.【点睛】【高分句型1】Finally, you should take an active part in different kinds of class activities so that you can build close relationships with your new classmates.（运用了so that引导的结果状语从句）【高分句型2】After all, being friendly is always a good way to make friends.（运用了动名词作主语）10．参考范文：Dear Tom,You wrote that you haven’t adapted to the senior school life. I understand quite well that you are anxious. Here are three tips you can try to improve your situation.To start with, you should form the habit of making plans for study and keep a good balance between study and entertainment. What’s more, in class you’d better listen carefully to what teachers teach. Last but not least, you should take an active part in after-school activities, which will make you relaxed.I hope you can take my suggestions into consideration.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华，你的英国朋友Tom发邮件说他不能适应高中的学习生活，为此他感到很焦虑。请你回复邮件。【详解】1. 词汇积累焦虑的，担忧的：worried→ anxious参加：participate in→ take part in希望： wish→ hope把……考虑在内：take…into account→ take…into consideration2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：To start with, you should form the habit of making plans for study and keep a good balance between study and entertainment.拓展句：To start with, you should form the habit of making plans for study and keep a good balance between study and entertainment, which is beneficial to you.【点睛】[高分句型1] Last but not least, you should take an active part in after-school activities, which will make you relaxed.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2] What’s more, in class you’d better listen carefully to what teachers teach.（what引导的宾语从句）