高考英语写作分类训练：图表作文

图表作文

1．今日，你校英语报拟介绍学生参加社团的情况。请你结合图标信息，以“Our School Clubs”为题写一篇英语短文投稿，内容包括：

1、参与社团的情况；2、你的看法。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在相应位 置作答。

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2．学校英语报就近三年暑假，学生使用手机娱乐的平均时长情况进行问卷调查，作为校报记者，请就图表中的调查结果写一篇分析报告，内容包括：

1.问卷结果描述；

2.简单评论；

3.你的建议。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式作答。

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3．学校英文报正在开展以“Protecting our eyes to enjoy a bright world”为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1.学生近视率状况描述；

2.简单评论；

3.你的建议。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.短文题目和首句已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Protecting our eyes to enjoy a bright world

The health of children’s vision is facing a growing threat.

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4．假定你是李华，最近你的班级就学生在学习和生活中面临的问题对班上的同学进行了调查。请根据图表，用英语写一篇短文向学校英文报投稿。内容包括：

1.学生面临困难的状况描述；

2.简单评论；

3.你的建议。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.稿件标题已给出，不计入总词数。

What Trouble We Have

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5．假定你是李明，去年曾赴美国加州帕萨迪那市的一所中学进行短期参观访问，住在Peter家。今年寒假Peter要来北京，将住在你家。请根据下列信息给Peter发个电子邮件。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2. 对紧扣主题的发挥不予扣分。

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6．近日，你校英语报拟介绍学生课外体育锻炼的情况。请你结合图表信息，以“Physical Exercise After Class”为题写一篇英语短文投稿，内容包括：

1. 课外体育锻炼情况描述；

2. 简单评论；

3. 你的建议。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Physical Exercise After Class

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7．学校英文报正在开展以Protecting our eyes to enjoy a bright word为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1.学生近视率状况描述；

2.简单评论；

3.你的建议。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.短文题目和首句已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Protecting our eyes to enjoy a bright world

The health of children’s vision is facing a growing threat.

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8．最近，你所在的新华中学开展了以Waste on Campus为主题的调查， 请写一篇短文向学校英文报投稿。内容包括：

1.调查结果；

2.简单评论；

3.相关建议。

注意：

1.词数80左；

2.短文的题目已为你写好。

Waste on Campus

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9．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查，调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学生李华，请就此话题谈谈你的看法，写一篇150-180的作文，文章内容需涵盖：

1.简要描述图表；

2.你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代；

3.你的理由。

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10．学校英文报就“The best ways of spending a vacation”展开了一项调查，请根据下图调查结果写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：

1.度假方式；

2.你的观点。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.题目和首句已为你写好。

Last week, the school English newspaper interviewed 200 students to find out their ways of spending a vacation.

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参考答案：

1．Our School Clubs

With the purpose of enriching students’ extracurricular life, our school offers a broad choice of clubs, about which our students are extremely passionate.

Of all the clubs, Chinese Calligraphy and Painting Club is the most likable, with 48% of students signing up. It is followed by Pingpong Club and Erhu Club, taken up by 25% and 10% of the students respectively. The rest of the students show their preference towards other clubs, accounting for 17%.

Joining clubs and getting involved in the activities held by clubs serves as a superb way to refresh us students and cultivate our minds. Let’s embrace our hobbies and get energized through the interactions the clubs offer.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。今日，你校英语报拟介绍学生参加社团的情况。请你结合图标信息，以“Our School Clubs”为题写一篇英语短文投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

目的：purpose→ aim

加强：enrich → strengthen

包含：get involved in→ consist of

举行：hold→ celebrate

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Joining clubs and getting involved in the activities held by clubs serves as a superb way to refresh us students and cultivate our minds.

拓展句：Joining clubs and getting involved in the activities which are held by clubs serves as a superb way to refresh us students and cultivate our minds.

【点睛】【高分句型1】With the purpose of enriching students’ extracurricular life, our school offers a broad choice of clubs, about which our students are extremely passionate.(运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】The rest of the students show their preference towards other clubs, accounting for 17%.(运用现在分词作状语)

2．One possible version:

Recently a survey about the time that the students spent on smartphones was conducted among students.

As can be seen from the chart, students spent an hour and a half on phones on average in 2020, while the time doubled in 2021. What is the most striking is that students spent 6 hours on smartphones in 2022. The number of hours students spent using smartphones during spare time has shown a sharp rising trend year by year.

Students are seriously addicted to smartphones, and this has a negative effect on their grades and family relationships. So I suggest that students turn off their phones, communicate with friends face to face, and engage in more outdoor activities.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生根据图表中的调查结果写一篇关于学生使用手机娱乐的分析报告。

【详解】1.词汇积累

进行：conduct→carry out

严重的：seriously→severely

趋势：trend→tendency

建议：suggest→recommend

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Students are seriously addicted to smartphones, and this has a negative effect on their grades and family relationships.

拓展句：Students are seriously addicted to smartphones, which has a negative effect on their grades and family relationships.

【点睛】【高分句型1】As can be seen from the chart, students spent an hour and a half on phones on average in 2020, while the time doubled in 2021.（运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句和连词while强调前后两者的对比）

【高分句型2】What is the most striking is that students spent 6 hours on smartphones in 2022.（运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）

3．One possible version:

Protecting our eyes to enjoy a bright world

The health of children’s vision is facing a growing threat. Data shows that 14.3 percent of pre-school kids are nearsighted. The rate is 35.6 percent for primary school students, 71.1 percent for junior high school pupils and 80.5 percent for senior high school students.

The age for the beginning of shortsightedness is getting younger. Meanwhile, there is the rapid progression of shortsightedness during the middle school.

To tackle the growing problem, schools should reduce the academic burden of students and increase the time of outdoor activities. What’s more, we should attach importance to our visual health and control the time spent on electronic devices.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生以“Protecting our eyes to enjoy a bright world”为题，根据图表调查结果写一篇短文，简述学生近视率状况，给与评论并提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

同时：meanwhile→at the same time

解决：tackle→handle/cope with/solve

减少：reduce→decrease/cut down

重视：attach importance to→take sth seriously/make account of

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Data shows that 14.3 percent of pre-school kids are nearsighted.

拓展句：Data shows that 14.3 percent of pre-school kids are nearsighted, which should arouse our attention.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Data shows that 14.3 percent of pre-school kids are nearsighted.（运用了that引导宾语从句）

【高分句型2】What’s more, we should attach importance to our visual health and control the time spent on electronic devices.（运用了“spent on electronic devices”过去分词作后置定语，修饰名词“the time”）

4．                                           What Trouble We Have

Having done a survey among our classmates recently, we find out what troubles students are facing.

According to the data, more than half of the students think the biggest trouble they face is keeping up with others, which, in my opinion, is the main source of students’ pressure. Nearly one fifth think it’s rather challenging to have more friends. About 12 percent believe that the biggest challenge they face is having a healthier lifestyle. Also a few students express their concern about their relationship with parents and several consider keeping hobbies as a luxury. Only 3 percent think they have no problems.

I guess it is the high pressure from study and peers that causes these problems. Consequently, I suggest that some activities should be organized to provide students with opportunities to relieve stress so that they would adopt a more positive attitude toward coming challenges.

【导语】这是一篇图表作文。假定你是李华，最近你的班级就学生在学习和生活中面临的问题对班上的同学进行了调查。请根据图表，用英语写一篇短文向学校英文报投稿。内容包括：学生面临困难的状况描述；简单评论；你的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

在我看来：in my opinion→in my view/as far as I am concerned

面对：face→be faced with

关心：concern→care

结果：Consequently→As a result

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Only 3 percent think they have no problems.

拓展句：It is only 3 percent that think they have no problems.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Having done a survey among our classmates recently, we find out what troubles students are facing.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] According to the data, more than half of the students think the biggest trouble they face is keeping up with others, which, in my opinion, is the main source of students’ pressure. (运用了省略关系代词的定语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)

5．November 26th, 2016

Hi! It’s Li Ming here.

Glad to learn you’re coming to Beijing in a couple of days. My family and I are looking forward to your visit and we feel honored you can stay with us while you are in Beijing. We have got everything ready for you so as to make you feel at home.

On the day you arrive, my father and I will meet you at the airport and in the evening we will have a nice dinner party at home. I’m sure you will like all the traditional Chinese food. During the following days, I will show you around many places of interest in Beijing, including the Great Wall, which is known as one of the seven wonders of the world. And Tian’anmen Square is a scenic spot we can’t miss.

I believe we will have much fun together. Well, see you soon. Bye!

Yours,

Li Ming

【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。假定你是李明，去年曾赴美国加州帕萨迪那市的一所中学进行短期参观访问，住在Peter家。今年寒假Peter要来北京，将住在你家。请根据下列信息给Peter发个电子邮件。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad→delighted

被称为：be known as→be considered as

玩得开心：have much fun→enjoy oneself

传统的：traditional→conventional

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：My family and I are looking forward to your visit and we feel honored you can stay with us while you are in Beijing.

拓展句：Not only are my family and I looking forward to your visit, but also we feel honored you can stay with us while you are in Beijing.

【点睛】[高分句型1] My family and I are looking forward to your visit and we feel honored you can stay with us while you are in Beijing. (运用了while引导时间状语从句)

[高分句型2] During the following days, I will show you around many places of interest in Beijing, including the Great Wall, which is known as one of the seven wonders of the world. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)

6．One possible version:

Physical Exercise After Class

Recently, a survey on students’ after-class physical exercise has been conducted among students in our school. The results are as follows.

More than half of the students, about 65%, choose running as their regular form of exercise, while only 15% would play basketball after class. Meanwhile, badminton is preferred by 40% of the participants, followed by basketball, which attracts 20% of the students. As for the reasons, it is likely that running requires less on equipment and field, and can be done at will. The other three, especially football, are usually played by boys, and thus have less participants.

Whatever physical exercise we choose, we should bear in mind that it is the workout itself that matters. Therefore, we’d better set aside some time for exercise each day.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生结合图表信息，介绍学生课外体育锻炼的情况，进行简单评论并提出你的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

吸引：attract→appeal to

随意：at will→as one pleases

因此：therefore→as a consequence

留出：set aside→spare

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Therefore, we’d better set aside some time for exercise each day.

拓展句：Therefore, we’d better set aside some time for exercise each day, which is beneficial for our body and learning.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Meanwhile, badminton is preferred by 40% of the participants, followed by basketball, which attracts 20% of the students.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Whatever physical exercise we choose, we should bear in mind that it is the workout itself that matters.（运用了Whatever引导的让步状语从句和that引导的宾语从句）

7．                                                Protecting our eyes to enjoy a bright world

The health of children's vision is facing a growing threat. Data show that 14.3 percent of pre-schoolkids are nearsighted. The rate is 35.6 percent for primary school students, 71.1 percent for junior high school pupils and 80.5 percent for senior high school students.

The age for the beginning of shortsightedness is getting younger. Meanwhile, there is the rapid progression of shortsightedness during the middle school.

To tackle the growing problem, schools should reduce the academic burden of students and increase the time of outdoor activities. What’s more, we should attach importance to our visual health and control the time spent on electronic devices.

【导语】这是一篇图表作文。学校英文报正在开展以Protecting our eyes to enjoy a bright word为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：学生近视率状况描述；简单评论；你的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

面对：face→be faced with

同时：Meanwhile→At the same time

快速的：rapid→fast

解决：tackle→address/deal with

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：The age for the beginning of shortsightedness is getting younger. Meanwhile, there is the rapid progression of shortsightedness during the middle school.

拓展句：Not only is the age for the beginning of shortsightedness getting younger, but also there is the rapid progression of shortsightedness during the middle school.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Data show that 14.3 percent of pre-schoolkids are nearsighted. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] To tackle the growing problem, schools should reduce the academic burden of students and increase the time of outdoor activities. (运用了不定式作目的状语)

8．                                                            Waste on Campus

    Our school launched a survey on the theme of Waste on Campus. From the survey, we know that food, water, electricity, paper are wasted among many students. Food accounts for 67 percent, which is the main part. Water and electricity accounts for 8 percent and paper for 22 percent. Other things account for 3 percent.

     The figures show that students are wasting so much, which will have a bad effect on the earth, because resources of the earth are running out.

     To change this, we should raise the consciousness of not wasting. Besides, students should form the habit of saving food.

【导语】这是一篇图表作文。最近，你所在的新华中学开展了以Waste on Campus为主题的调查， 请写一篇短文向学校英文报投稿。内容包括：调查结果；简单评论；相关建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

数字：figures→numbers

影响：effect→ impact

意识：consciousness→awareness

此外：Besides→In addition

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句： Our school launched a survey on the theme of Waste on Campus.

拓展句： Our school launched a survey whose theme is Waste on Campus.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Food accounts for 67 percent, which is the main part.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] The figures show that students are wasting so much, which will have a bad effect on the earth. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)

9． Recently, our school conducted a survey on the topic of whether teachers will be replaced by artificial intelligence. 10% of respondents were unsure. 34% said they thought teachers would be replaced by artificial intelligence, while 56% said no.

Personally speaking, teachers won’t be replaced by artificial intelligence. Because in addition to teaching students knowledge, teachers have a more important mission, which is to educate people. In terms of educating people, teachers possess qualities that cannot be replaced by artificial intelligence. Teachers are rich in feelings and wisdom, knowing how to imperceptibly into the excellent quality of education.

Besides, artificial intelligence is only a partial replacement of teachers’ labor, and cannot replace the role of teachers. This is because although robots have communication functions such as dialogue and movement, they are far from the rich and delicate feelings of human beings.

That is to say, the possibility of teachers being replaced is very small, and teachers become one of the jobs that artificial intelligence is difficult to replace.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文，最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查，调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学生李华，请就此话题谈谈你的看法，写一篇150-180的作文，文章内容需涵盖：1.简要描述图表；2.你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代； 3.你的理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

取代：replace→supersede

拥有：possess→take possession of

重要的：important→significant

也就是说：that is to say=in other words

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Teachers are rich in feelings and wisdom, knowing how to imperceptibly into the excellent quality of education.

拓展句：Teachers are rich in feelings and wisdom, who know how to imperceptibly into the excellent quality of education.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Because in addition to teaching students knowledge, teachers have a more important mission, which is to educate people. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Teachers are rich in feelings and wisdom, knowing how to imperceptibly into the excellent quality of education. (运用了现在分词作状语)

10．    Last week, the school English newspaper interviewed 200 students to find out their ways of spending a vacation. When it comes to the best ways of spending a vacation, students’ opinion is divided.

    From the chart above, we can easily see that the percentages of students who choose reading and traveling are respectively 45% and 23%. Those who choose volunteering account for 12%. And there are some other ways of spending a vacation, which account for 20%.

    In my opinion, it’s necessary for us students to do some volunteer work, which has various benefits, including widening our social circles and building our confidence by doing something helpful. More importantly, it can help improve our sense of responsibility and make us feel we’re part of our community, thus helping create a more harmonious society.

【导语】本篇书面表达图表作文，学校英文报就“The best ways of spending a vacation”展开了一项调查，请根据下图调查结果写一篇短文投稿。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

以我的观点：in my opinion→in my view

各种各样的：various→ varieties of

提高： improve→ facilitate

包括：include→ involve

2. 句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：More importantly, it can help improve our sense of responsibility and make us feel we’re part of our community, thus helping create a more harmonious society.

拓展句：What is more important is that it can help improve our sense of responsibility and make us feel we’re part of our community, thus helping create a more harmonious society..

【点睛】[高分句型1] Those who choose volunteering account for 12%.（who引导的限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2] In my opinion, it’s necessary for us students to do some volunteer work, which has various benefits.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）