高考英语写作分类训练：图画作文

图画作文

1．请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。

You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.

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2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

请简单描绘图片内容，并用你生活中的一个经历来具体说明。你的文章必须包括：

1） 对图片的简单描述；

2） 对个人经历的具体描写；

3） 你当时的感受或想法。

3．假定你是李华，明天英语课前将做主题为“My Favorite China Symbol”的简短演讲，请从以下图片中选择一个主题写一份演讲稿，内容包括：1.你的选择及理由；2.该Symbol的相关内容；3.你的愿望。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置上作答。

My Favorite China Symbol

Dear classmates,

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Thank you!

4．假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英语写一篇周记。记述爸爸出差期间，妈妈生病，你照顾她的过程。

注意：1.周记的开头已经为你写好。

2. 词数不少于80。

Last Monday，

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5．假如你是陈威，与英国交换生 David 是好友。请依据图片提示写一封邀请函。

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6．假如你是高中生李津，读报纸时看到下面这幅漫画，很有感触。请给你校校刊的“英语园地”栏目写一篇英文稿件。要求如下：

(1)简要描述漫画内容；(2)分析其揭示的问题；(3)谈谈个人感想。

注意:

(1)词数不少于100；

(2)内容充实、行文连贯；

(3)稿件开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Last weekend I saw an interesting cartoon in the newspaper. As is vividly illustrated in the cartoon,

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7．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

请仔细阅读以下三幅图片《三代农夫》（Three Generations of Farmers）并完成写作。

在写作中，你必须：

1）简要描述三幅图片中的内容；

2）分析其背后所反映的现象及原因；

3) 对你的启示。

8．上周末Anna去商店购物。下面四幅图描述的是Anna购物后回家时在路上所发生的事。请以“What an Unlucky Day”为题写一篇短文。

参考词汇：

出故障 break down     经过 pass by

What an Unlucky Day

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9．请针对图片反映出现象，谈谈你对此的看法。你的作文必须包括：

描述图片内容

谈谈你的看法

10．随着现代科技的发展，网络已经成为年轻人生活的一部分。简要描述图片所展现的现象，结合自己的实际生活谈谈你的看法。

1．As we can see in the picture, a boy is climbing a high mountain, sweating all over and having a tired look. In spite of many large rocks blocking his way, the exhausted boy is still struggling on the steep mountainside, because he knows that there is a rainbow behind the mountain.

What the picture conveys is that although the way to success seems long and difficult, there is still hope like the rainbow in our hearts. In everyday life, all of us are facing many difficulties and experiencing great hardships just like the boy. However, if we are determined to get to the top, we’ll see the rainbow. Therefore, as long as we are confident and never give up, we are sure to achieve success.

【详解】本文考查看图作文。看图作文对考生的要求较高，首先考生要看懂图的中心思想。要求考生筛选出要点或者中心思想，不能出现审题方面的偏差。然后再把要点用连接词串联成文。通过分析图片可知，一个男孩正在爬一座高山，满头大汗，看上去很疲倦。 尽管有许多大石头挡住了路，但精疲力尽的男孩仍在陡峭的山坡上挣扎，因为他知道山后有彩虹。本文告诉我们的道理是，尽管成功之路似乎漫长而艰难，但我们的心中仍然充满希望。 在日常生活中，我们每个人都面临着许多困难，就像男孩一样，正经历着巨大的困难。 但是，如果我们决心登顶，就会看到彩虹。 因此，只要我们有信心并且永不放弃，我们一定会取得成功。写作时要使用高级的词汇或者句型让文章更有文采。要使用连接词把层次感交代清楚。

【点睛】[高分句式1]In spite of many large rocks blocking his way, the exhausted boy is still struggling on the steep mountainside, because he knows that there is a rainbow behind the mountain.（because引导的原因状语从句）

[高分句式2]What the picture conveys is that although the way to success seems long and difficult, there is still hope like the rainbow in our hearts.（what引导的主语从句）

[高分句式3]Therefore, as long as we are confident and never give up, we are sure to achieve success.（as long as引导的条件状语从句）

2．As is shown from the picture, a couple is standing behind the boy with a pair of wings.

 To our astonishment, the father is cutting the boy's wings with pair of scissors.

The picture sets me thinking of my experience. While I was in the high school, I was fond of drawing very much. I made it clear that I would become an artist, which upset my parents. They insisted that I should devote myself to my study and be admitted to a top university. In order to live up to my parents' expectation, I gave up my dream.

Now I work in a company and got a well-paid work, but I don't live a happy life. This is not the life that I want to live. Had it not been for my parents, I would realize my dream.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于图画作文，要求考生简单描绘图片内容，并用生活中的一个经历来具体说明。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：图画作文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 对图片的简单描述；

2. 对个人经历的具体描写；

3. 你当时的感受或想法。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

a pair of; to one’s astonishment; think of; be fond of; be admitted to; in order to; live up to; give up; realize one’s dream

第三步：连词成句

1. As is shown from the picture, a couple is standing behind the boy with a pair of wings.

2. To our astonishment, the father is cutting the boy's wings with pair of scissors.

3. The picture sets me thinking of my experience.

4. They insisted that I should devote myself to my study and be admitted to a top university.

5. In order to live up to my parents' expectation, I gave up my dream.

6. Had it not been for my parents, I would realize my dream.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] As is shown from the picture, a couple is standing behind the boy with a pair of wings.这句话运用了as引导的非限定性定语从句；

[高分句型2] I made it clear that I would become an artist, which upset my parents. 这句话运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句；

[高分句型3] Had it not been for my parents, I would realize my dream.这句话运用了虚拟语气。

3．Dear classmates,

Many figures, customs and buildings are considered as China symbols. My favorite is Chinese Calligraphy, a written form of Chinese characters, mainly because it can help me beautify my written work and inspire my confidence in writing. Chinese Calligraphy is a most abstract art form. It is not only just a means of communication but also a means of displaying the dynamic forces of the paper, and the flexibility of the brush. Artists are free to produce various styles and forms, showing the abstract beauty of line.

“The way characters are written is a portrait of the person who writes them” is quite impressive. I hope all of you will come to love it.

Thank you!

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生从所给图片中选择一个主题写一份演讲稿，主题为“My Favorite China Symbol”。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.你的选择及理由；

2.该Symbol的相关内容；

3.你的愿望。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

be considered as; Chinese Calligraphy; abstract; Chinese characters; beautify; inspire; confidence; communication; not only…but also…; dynamic; flexibility; produce; portrait; impressive; all of

第三步：连词成句

1. Many figures, customs and buildings are considered as China symbols.

2.Chinese Calligraphy is a most abstract art form.

3. My favorite is Chinese Calligraphy, a written form of Chinese characters, mainly because it can help me beautify my written work and inspire my confidence in writing.

4.It is not only just a means of communication but also a means of displaying the dynamic forces of the paper, and the flexibility of the brush.

5. Artists are free to produce various styles and forms, showing the abstract beauty of line.

6. “The way characters are written is a portrait of the person who writes them” is quite impressive.

7. I hope all of you will come to love it.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second, And then（供参考）

2.表并列补充关系：not only…but also…

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句)（供参考）

4.表因果关系：Because

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] My favorite is Chinese Calligraphy, a written form of Chinese characters, mainly because it can help me beautify my written work and inspire my confidence in writing. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)

[高分句型2] Artists are free to produce various styles and forms, showing the abstract beauty of line. (运用了现在分词作状语)

4．Last Monday, my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip. He would be away for three days. However, just the next morning I found my mother wasn’t feeling well. She had a cold, which made me realize I should take care of her. Therefore, I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her. Finally, with my special care, my mother recovered quickly. When my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened. He praised me for what I had done.

I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生根据以下四幅图的先后顺序写一篇周记，记述爸爸出差期间，妈妈生病，你照顾她的过程。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时,少量过去进行时、过去完成时、一般现在时和现在完成时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 爸爸出差了；

2. 妈妈生病了；

3.我照顾病中的妈妈；

4. 妈妈向爸爸讲述我照顾她的事情，我被爸爸称赞了。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

say goodbye to; go on a business trip; have a cold; take care of; prepare…for…; praise sb. for sth.

第三步：连词成句

1. Last Monday, my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip.

2. She had a cold, which made me realize I should take care of her.

3. Therefore, I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her.

4. He praised me for what I had done.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：and then, Finally

2.表转折对比关系：However

3.表因果关系：Therefore

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] She had a cold, which made me realize I should take care of her. 用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。

[高分句型2] When my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened. 用了what引导的宾语从句。

5．Dear David,

We are very happy to invite you to our home for dinner on Lantern Festival. You’re supposed to arrive around 3 o'clock in the afternoon and then we may do some festive decorations together. We’ll put riddles on the lanterns and then hang them up. Traditionally we have rice balls for breakfast, yet mother has decided to save our hand-made rice balls to you for supper together with Jiaozi which is a must for many Chinese festivals. Since fireworks have long been banned, we’ll only watch the festival Gala on TV inside while chatting after supper.

Look forward to seeing you then!

Yours sincerely,

Chen Wei

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生依据图片提示给英国交换生 David写一封邀请函。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

你与英国交换生 David 是好友。请依据图片提示写一封邀请函。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

invite sb. to do sth.; be supposed to; arrive; decoration; lantern; hang up; decide to do sth.; together with; firework; supper; look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. We are very happy to invite you to our home for dinner on Lantern Festival.

2. You’re supposed to arrive around 3 o’clock in the afternoon and then we may do some festive decorations together.

3. We’ll put riddles on the lanterns and then hang them up.

4. Traditionally we have rice balls for breakfast, yet mother has decided to save our hand-made rice balls to you for supper together with Jiaozi which is a must for many Chinese festivals.

5. Since fireworks have long been banned, we’ll only watch the festival Gala on TV inside while chatting after supper.

6. Look forward to seeing you then!

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

表转折对比关系：yet

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] Traditionally we have rice balls for breakfast, yet mother has decided to save our hand-made rice balls to you for supper together with Jiaozi which is a must for many Chinese festivals. (运用了which引导定语从句)

[高分句型2] Since fireworks have long been banned, we’ll only watch the festival Gala on TV inside while chatting after supper. (运用了since引导原因状语从句)

6．Last weekend I saw an interesting cartoon in the newspaper. As is vividly illustrated in the cartoon, a man asks his son to fetch him another glass of water. To his surprise, the boy refuses. He tells his father to do it himself and explains that his homework for winter vacation requires him to give his father only one glass and that he needn’t do it again.

The idea conveyed is that some children are unwilling to do anything for their parents. The cartoon got me reflecting. We care little about our parents while parents work hard to provide their children with a comfortable life. We should do more to reward our parents and love them in our daily life.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于图画文，要求考生给校刊的“英语园地”栏目写一篇英文稿件，分享读报纸时看到的漫画的感悟。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：图画作文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量一般过去时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.简要描述漫画内容；

2.分析其揭示的问题；

3.谈谈个人感想。

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

be vividly illustrated in; do it himself; winter vacation; be unwilling to do; care little about; in our daily life

第三步：连词成句

1.As is vividly illustrated in the cartoon, a man asks his son to fetch him another glass of water.

2.He tells his father to do it himself and explains that his homework for winter vacation requires him to give his father only one glass and that he needn’t do it again.

3.The idea conveyed is that some children are unwilling to do anything for their parents.

4.We care little about our parents while parents work hard to provide their children with a comfortable life.

5.We should do more to reward our parents and love them in our daily life.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand…Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1]As is vividly illustrated in the cartoon, a man asks his son to fetch him another glass of water.这句话运as引导的非限制性定语从句。

[高分句型2]He tells his father to do it himself and explains that his homework for winter vacation requires him to give his father only one glass and that he needn’t do it again.这句话运用了that引导两个宾语从句。

[高分句型3]The idea conveyed is that some children are unwilling to do anything for their parents.这句话运用that引导表语从句。

7．Fifty years ago, grandfathers worked in the land with oxen. Thirty years ago, my parents used small walking tractors in their fields. Today, farmers use large tractors and plant protection drones.

In fact, in recent years, China has promoted the modernization of agriculture through a series of measures such as the rural revitalization strategy. It is necessary to cultivate high-quality farmers' feelings and responsibilities for agriculture, strengthen the feelings of "three agriculture", and take the road of ecological, environmental protection and sustainable development.     

Looking at the work of three generations, I am filled with emotion. The past two generations' glorious retirement will be recorded in the  history, remembering the struggle and prosperity of Chinese farmers who persevered, innovated and pursued progress.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。根据题中所提供的三幅图片《三代农夫》（Three Generations of Farmers）完成写作。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：图画作文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1）简要描述三幅图片中的内容；

2）分析其背后所反映的现象及原因；

3) 对你的启示。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

Fifty years ago；In fact；promote the modernization of agriculture；a series of measures；responsibilities for agriculture;be filled with

第三步：连词成句

1. Thirty years ago, my parents used small walking tractors in their fields.

2. In fact, in recent years, China has promoted the modernization of agriculture through a series of measures such as the rural revitalization strategy.

3. Today, farmers use large tractors and plant protection drones.

4. Looking at the work of three generations, I am filled with emotion.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（仅供参考）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] Today, farmers use large tractors and plant protection drones.（运用现在分词作状语）

[高分句型2] The past two generations' glorious retirement will be recorded in the history, remembering the struggle and prosperity of Chinese farmers who persevered, innovated and pursued progress.（运用关系代词who引导定语从句）

8．One possible version:

What an Unlucky Day

Last weekend Anna went shopping. With bags full of goods in both hands, she headed for a nearby bus stop, tired and hungry. She was waiting for the bus when it began to rain. After what seemed ages, came a bus, crowded with passengers. When it was her turn to get on the bus, someone said, “Sorry, no more room.” Quite disappointed, Anna had to take a taxi. Halfway home, however, the taxi broke down. Hardly had she got out of the taxi when a bus passed by. It was empty, but she had missed it! What an unlucky day!

【分析】本篇书面表达属于图画作文，要求考生根据四幅图描述的内容“Anna购物后回家时在路上所发生的事”，以“What an Unlucky Day”为题写一篇短文。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：记叙文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。

结构：总分总法。首先交待事件发生的背景，然后分别描述每幅图，最后作出总结。

审图列重点：

1. 介绍事件发生的背景：安娜去商店购物；

2. 分别描述每幅图：

   第一幅：购物袋比较多而且重，要去坐公交车

   第二幅：等待中下雨了，车上乘客很多

   第三幅：要乘出租车

   第四幅：出租车抛锚，安娜只好下车；与公交车错过

3. 作出总结：What an Unlucky Day!

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

go shopping; head for; wait for; (be) crowded with; it’s one’s turn to do sth; have to do; break down

第三步：连词成句

1. Last weekend Anna went shopping.

2. With bags full of goods in both hands, she headed for a nearby bus stop, tired and hungry.

3. She was waiting for the bus when it began to rain.

4. After what seemed ages, came a bus, crowded with passengers.

5. Quite disappointed, Anna had to take a taxi.

6. Halfway home, however, the taxi broke down.

7. Hardly had she got out of the taxi when a bus passed by.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章时间顺序：At first; Finally; In the end, At last(供参考)

2.表转折对比关系：However; but

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1]

With bags full of goods in both hands, she headed for a nearby bus stop, tired and hungry.(她双手捧着装满货物的袋子，向附近的公交车站走去，又累又饿。)

本句使用了“with”复合结构作伴随状语，且“tired and hungry”为形容词作状语。

[高分句型2]

Hardly had she got out of the taxi when a bus passed by.(她刚下出租车，一辆公共汽车就经过了。)

本句使用了“Hardly had +主语+done…when…”句式，为部分倒装结构。

9．It is illustrated in the picture that Kevin and his partner had different ways of looking at things. His friend bought something and saved £250 at the sales, but Kevin thought she spent £420 again. The picture reflects a phenomenon that some people tend to buy more things at the sales. In my opinions, we should buy things for the sake of we need them instead of the lower price.

Nowadays, many stores attract more people to spend more money buying their products with the discounts that seems reasonable. And many holidays became an excuse for sales, so most of people especially female can easily fall into this kind of consumerist trap. They always think that they can buy things with less money but receive the equal quality and quantity of products, but seldom recognize that they spend more money in total on them,which leads to a result that more money has been spent. As for me, if the products that are really useful and needy in daily life,　discounts can be a good reason to purchase them, but remember not to purchase things just for the discounts, especially for the things that we don’t really need.

Therefore, when we try to buy things, we had better think carefully before action. Buying things with right reasons is the right way to consume.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。要求考生按题目要求，针对图片反映出现象，谈谈对此的看法。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：议论文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般将来时和一般过去时。

结构：总分总法

总分总法指把开头提出论点，中间若干分论点，结尾总括论点的写作方法，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

描述图片内容

谈谈你的看法

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

It is illustrated…that; reflect; phenomenon; tend to; for the sake of; instead of; attract; product; discount; reasonable; excuse; especially; female; fall into; consumerist trap; receive; equal; quality; quantity; seldom recognize; in total; lead to; purchase ;therefore; action; consume.

第三步：连词成句

1.It is illustrated in the picture that Kevin and his partner had different ways of looking at things.

2.His friend bought something and saved £250 at the sales, but Kevin thought she spent £420 again.

3.The picture reflects a phenomenon that some people tend to buy more things at the sales.

4.In my opinions, we should buy things for the sake of we need them instead of the lower price.

5.Nowadays,　many stores attract more people to spend more money buying their products with the discounts that seems reasonable.

6.And many holidays became an excuse for sales, so most of people especially female can easily fall into this kind of consumerist trap.

7.They always think that they can buy things with less money and receive the equal quality and quantity of products, but seldom recognize that they spend more money in total on them, which leads to a result that more money has been spent.

8.As for me, if the products that are really useful and needy in daily life, discounts can be a good reason to purchase them, but remember not to purchase things just for the discounts, especially for the things that we don’t really need.

9.Therefore, when we try to buy things, we had better think carefully before action.

10.Buying things with right reasons is the right way to consume.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表示个人观点：In noe’s opinion, As for sb.

2.表示因果关系：Therefore

3.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Secondly, Thirdly.(供参考)

4.表并列补充关系：Additionally, moreover (供参考)

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] It is illustrated in the picture that Kevin and his partner had different ways of looking at things. (使用it作形式主语，真正的主语为that引导的主语从句)

[高分句型2] The picture reflects a phenomenon that some people tend to buy more things at the sales. (使用that引导同位语从句)

[高分句型3] They always think that they can buy things with less money and receive the equal quality and quantity of products, but seldom recognize that they spend more money in total on them, which leads to a result that more money has been spent. (使用that引导宾语从句；which引导非限定性定语从句)

[高分句型4] Therefore, when we try to buy things, we had better think carefully before action.(使用when引导时间状语从句)

10．

As is shown in the picture above, a student is doing homework, not thinking for himself, but relying on the Internet. Apparently, students rely too much on the Internet.

Honestly speaking, with the development of modern science and technology, Internet has become a part of young people’s life. I think Internet can bring us both advantages and disadvantages. If you have some trouble studying, you can surf the Internet to find more helpful information. But if you spend too much time on it, you will become lazy and can’t put your heart on study.

To solve the problem, teachers and parents should limit the time their kids spend on it. Students should also learn to use the Internet properly. In a word, we must be careful when we use the Internet.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生结合自己的实际生活及图片内容，谈谈对图片所展现的现象的看法。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：议论文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时，少量现在进行时和一般将来时。

结构：三段式

第一段简要描述图片；第二段结合实际谈谈对此现象的看法；第三段提出解决方案。

要求：

1. 简要描述图片所展现的现象；

2. 结合自己的实际生活谈谈你对图片所展现的现象的看法。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

do homework; rely on; a part of; have some trouble (in) doing sth.; surf the Internet; spend...on...

第三步：连词成句

1. Apparently, students rely too much on the Internet.

2. Honestly speaking, with the development of modern science and technology, Internet has become a part of young people’s life.

3. I think Internet can bring us both advantages and disadvantages.

4. If you spend too much time on it, you will become lazy and can’t put your heart on study.

5. To solve the problem, teachers and parents should limit the time their kids spend on it.

6. Students should also learn to use the Internet properly.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表并列补充关系：both…and…; and

2.表转折对比关系：but

3.表总结：in a word

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1]. But if you spend too much time on it, you will become lazy and can’t put your heart on study. （由if引导的条件状语从句）

[高分句型2]. In a word, we must be careful when we use the Internet.（由when引导的时间状语从句）