天津高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假如你是李津，你的英国朋友Lynn来信说她即将上大学而她的妈妈担心她的生活自理能力。她不知该如何消除妈妈的顾虑。请你给Lynn回一封邮件，内容包括：

(1)表示理解；

(2)提出建议并说明理由。

注意：(1) 词数不少于100；

(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；

(3)邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Lynn,

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Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Jin

2．假如你是晨光中学高三学生李津。为了改进教学并有效提升每个学生的英语水平，你的英语老师Ms.Li希望了解你的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。

①对英语学习的认识；

②自己目前的英语水平；

③自己英语学习存在的主要问题；

④对英语教学的两点建议。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 信的开头和结尾已给出。

Dear Ms.Li,

I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.

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Thank you!

Yours,

Li Jin

3．假定你是晨光中学的高一学生李津，你的美国笔友Chris在汉语水平考试（HSK）中失利。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1.表示安慰；

2.提出建议。

注意：1.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数，短文不少于100词；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

4．假设你是中学生李津，你的网友Susan应邀将参加我国驻美大使馆组织的中美青年友好招待会，与来自中国的高中生进行交流，她来信向你咨询见面礼节和谈论话题。请根据你了解的知识，给她写一封邮件。内容包括：

*简要说明这一活动的好处（如结交新朋友等）；

*介绍见面时如何问候（如握手，说“你好”等）；

*与中国学生可谈论的话题（如爱好等）。

注意：（1）词数不少于100；

（2）邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Susan,

I’m glad to hear that you’ll attend the reception.

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Jin

5．假定你是李华，你校在学生中征集意见，询问学生是否赞成开设iPad课堂(iPad classrooms)，你支持开设iPad 课堂：请给校长写一封建议信，要点如下：

1. 陈述观点；

2. 列举iPad课堂的优势(资源丰富;促进交流;利于环保……)；

3. 提出希望和祝愿。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好。

Dear Headmaster,

We have been asked about our opinions on opening iPad classrooms.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

6．假如你是李津，你的美国朋友Chris来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。

1. 参加中文学习班；

2. 看中文书刊、电视；

3. 学唱中文歌曲；

4. 交中国朋友。

注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。

Dear Chris,

It’s great to receive your letter.

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Yours,

Li Jin

7．假设你是晨光中学的李津，你的英国笔友Mike发邮件祝贺2022年北京冬奥会成功举行，并且告诉你说，很多英国人通过奥运更多地了解了中国，希望到中国来看一看；他也计划寒假时到北京旅游。请你写邮件回复Mike，并给他提些建议。要点如下：

(1)注意气候：

(2)注意交通安全：

(3)有关风俗习惯的建议。

注意：

(1)词数不少于100;

(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mike,

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Looking forward to seeing you.

Yours,

Li Jin

8．假定你是晨光中学的李津，近日你校英语社团的微信公众号准备在原有的两个栏目（学校简介、学习生活）之上，增加一个新栏目。请你从以下三个备选栏目（职业规划、学生风采、校园文化）中选一个栏目，跟帖发表你的建议和看法，内容应该包括：

（1）你喜欢的栏目及特点；

（2）推荐的理由。

参考词汇：

公众号：Official WeChat；职业规划：Career Planning

学校简介：School Profile；学习生活：Study Life

学生风采：Our Students；校园文化：Campus Culture

注意：

（1）词数不少于100；

（2）内容充实，行文连贯；

（3）开头已给出，不计入总数。

March 23, 2022

By Li Jin

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9．假设你是晨光中学高三一班的李津。你的英国笔友Chris发来邮件告诉你，他很高兴在当地孔子学院主办的“汉语桥”世界中学生中文比赛中荣获诗歌朗诵一等奖，但还想更深入的学习中文，希望你能给他一些建议。请你根据以下提示，用英文给Chris回复一封电子邮件。

内容包括：

（1）祝贺Chris获奖；

（2）提供深入学习汉语的建议（如：读中文原著，用中文记日记等）；

（3）邀请Chris来中国学习交流。

注意：（1）词数不少于100词；

（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：

孔子学院 Confucius Institute

汉语桥 Chinese Bridge

Dear Chris,

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Yours,

Li Jin

10．假设你是晨光中学的李津，你校学生会创办的你最喜爱的《英语月报》（English Monthly）向读者征集意见。请你给主编写封邮件，内容包括：

1. 自我介绍：

2. 说明该报优点：（如：内容方面，对学生帮助方面等）；

3. 提出建议：（如：增加某些内容等）

注意：1. 词数100左右：

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.

参考词汇：励志的inspirational

Dear editors

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Yours,

Li Jin

1．Dear Lynn,

I’m sorry to learn about your problem. It’s normal for your mother to worry about your new college life. Here are some suggestions.

First, why not talk more with your mom? Heart-to-heart talks can help you understand each other better. Second, you’d better learn to take care of yourself in daily life, which will definitely help prove to your mom that you are already grown-up. It would also ease her anxiety if you could share with her the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking.

I hope my proposals will be of some help to you.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Jin

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Lynn一封邮件，提出一些可以打消她妈妈担心她生活自理能力的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：suggestion →advice

为什么不……：why not… →why don’t you…

照顾：take care of →look after

忧虑：anxiety →worry

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Here are some suggestions.

拓展句：Here are some suggestions, which are of great help to you.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, you’d better learn to take care of yourself in daily life, which will definitely help prove to your mom that you are already grown-up.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】It would also ease her anxiety if you could share with her the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）

2．Dear Ms. Li

Learning that you seek to enhance your teaching method so as to improve our English, I am more than grateful and pleased to offer you some information.

First and foremost, I’d like to talk about my view on English learning. As I see it, the core of English learning is based on extensive reading and speaking, by which we can be familiar with scores of English grammar rules and expressions. I am now quite fluent in oral English. However, to my discouragement, I am terrible in working out questions about English passages. Therefore, I hope that you can give a clear analysis of the structures of some English articles. In this way, we will master how to figure out the main idea of an article. In addition, it would be better if you can instruct us to complete English comprehension questions.

Thanks again for your devoted teaching.

     Yours,

Li Jin

【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生应英语老师Ms.Li的要求，谈谈自己对英语学习的看法，说明自己目前英语水平及不足之处，并最后提出英语教学方面的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

提供：offer→provide

提高；改善：improve→enhance

搞清楚；查明：figure out→find out

教授；讲解：teach→instruct

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：First and foremost, I’d like to talk about my view on English learning.

拓展句：First and foremost, I’d like to talk about my view on English learning, which may help you to organize your teaching more properly.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that you seek to enhance your teaching method so as to improve our English, I am more than grateful and pleased to offer you some information. (运用了现在分词作状语)

[高分句型2] As I see it, the core of English learning is based on extensive reading and speaking, by which we can be familiar with scores of English grammar rules and expressions. (运用了介词+which引导的非限定性定语从句)

3．Dear Chris,

I am sorry to hear that you failed to pass HSK. I hope that the unexpected failure will not let you down, for I have still been amazed by the excellent Chinese you spoke when we first met.

As we all know, language learning is never an easy task, but needs great efforts and patience. Personally, I think you’d better pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions, which really counts. Meanwhile, you may as well read as many Chinese materials as you can. More importantly, you should learn from the mistakes that you have made. Anyway, you’ve already made great progress in your learning of Chinese.

I would be happy if my suggestions can be of use to you. Good luck next time.

Yours,

Li Jin

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Chris写一封电子邮件，对他在汉语水平考试（HSK）中失利表示安慰和提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

惊讶的：amazed →astonished

同时：Meanwhile →In the meantime

无论如何：Anyway →In any way

建议：suggestion→ advice

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Meanwhile, you may as well read as many Chinese materials as you can.

拓展句：Meanwhile, you may as well read as many Chinese materials as you can, which will improve your Chinese.

【点睛】【高分句型1】As we all know, language learning is never an easy task, but needs great efforts and patience.（运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Personally, I think you’d better pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions, which really counts.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

4．Dear Susan,

I’m glad to hear that you’ll attend the reception. I think it’s a good chance for you to make some new friends. I’d like to give you some advice at your request.

When introduced, you may shake hands with them and say “Nihao” in Chinese. If you can’t speak Chinese, you may speak simple English. They like to communicate with you in English to practice their spoken English.

Senior high school students in China today have various hobbies. Boys are familiar with NBA stars, while girls are crazy about film stars and singers. Of course, new films can attract their attention easily. I hope these suggestions will be helpful to you.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Jin

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是中学生李津，你的网友Susan应邀将参加我国驻美大使馆组织的中美青年友好招待会，与来自中国的高中生进行交流，她来信向你咨询见面礼节和谈论话题。请根据你了解的知识，给她写一封邮件。

【详解】1.词汇积累

机会：chance→opportunity

参加：attend→participate in

建议：advice→suggestion

有用的：helpful→useful

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：If you can’t speak Chinese, you may speak simple English. They like to communicate with you in English to practice their spoken English.

拓展句：If you can’t speak Chinese, you may speak simple English because they like to communicate with you in English to practice their spoken English.

【点睛】[高分句型1] When introduced, you may shake hands with them and say “Nihao” in Chinese. (运用了省略句)

[高分句型2] If you can’t speak Chinese, you may speak simple English. (运用了条件状语从句)

5．Dear Headmaster,

We have been asked about our opinions on opening iPad classrooms. I am in favor of this plan for the following reasons. To begin with, everyone learns differently. IPad can provide rich materials that fit their personal level and learning style to meet different students’ different needs. Moreover, when connected to the Internet, students can interact with teachers and classmates about what they learn more conveniently. For the sake of environmental protection, opening iPad classrooms is a good way to save trees that we have been cutting down for paper. Most importantly, I believe students will develop their interests in the subjects by enjoying a new way of learning.

I hope you would take my ideas into consideration and we look forward to attending an iPad class.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours sincerely,

                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校是否开设iPad课堂给校长写一封建议信。在信中要陈述自己的观点，介绍iPad课堂的优势，同时提出希望和祝愿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

支持：be in favor of→ support

提供：provide → offer

此外：moreover→ in addition

方式：way→approach

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I am in favor of this plan for the following reasons.

拓展句：The reasons why I am in favor of this plan for the following are as follows.

【点睛】【高分句型1】IPad can provide rich materials that fit their personal level and learning style to meet different students’ different needs.（运用了that引导的定语从句）

【高分句型2】Moreover, when connected to the Internet, students can interact with teachers and classmates about what they learn more conveniently.（运用了状语从句的省略结构）

6．Dear Chris,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you.

To begin with, it is a good idea to take a Chinese course, where you can follow the teacher and get help from your classmates. Next, reading some Chinese books and magazines will help you to improve your reading ability. You can also watch some Chinese programs on TV, which will improve your listening ability. To make sure that learning Chinese isn’t too dull, it would be a good idea to learn to sing some Chinese songs. Last but not least, if possible, make some Chinese friends, so that you can learn languages from each other.

I hope you will find my suggestions beneficial and make great progress in Chinese. Looking forward to receiving your letter written in Chinese.

Yours,

Li Jin

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李津，你的美国朋友Chris来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你给他回信。

【详解】1.建议：advice→suggestion

 有帮助的：be of help→be useful

 枯燥的：dull→tiresome

 有益的：beneficial→advantageous

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

拓展句：I’m glad to receive your letter where you ask for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you.（运用了which引导定语从句）

【高分句型2】To begin with, it is a good idea to take a Chinese course, where you can follow the teacher and get help from your classmates.（运用了不定式作主语，where引导非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型3】Last but not least, if possible, make some Chinese friends, so that you can learn languages from each other.（运用了so that引导状语从句）

7．Dear Mike,

Hardly could I contain my excitement when I was informed that many English people wanted to learn more about China after the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics. You said in your letter that you would come to Beijing to travel. Since your customs are quite different from ours, I’d like to give you some advice to make your stay here safe and comfortable.

    First, it is quite cold here in winter, so you’d better wear heavy clothes when you are out. Second, pay special attention to the traffic. In China, we drive on the right compared with the situation in your country. So be sure to keep it in mind when you have got a chance to drive a car. Besides, the Spring Festival is the most ceremonious traditional festival of the Chinese nation. Celebrations include sticking couplets, setting off firecrackers, making dumplings, watching the Spring Festival Gala, and so on.

Looking forward to seeing you. Hope you will enjoy your stay here．

                                                 Yours,

Li Jin

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友迈克写信，就他寒假要到北京旅游一事给与建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

抑制：contain→hold back

建议：advice→suggestion

牢记：keep in mind→bear in mind

隆重的：ceremonious→formal

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Besides, the Spring Festival is the most ceremonious traditional festival of the Chinese nation. Celebrations include sticking couplets, setting off firecrackers, making dumplings, watching the Spring Festival Gala, and so on.

拓展句：Besides, the Spring Festival is the most ceremonious traditional festival of the Chinese nation, whose celebrations include sticking couplets, setting off firecrackers, making dumplings, watching the Spring Festival Gala, and so on.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Hardly could I contain my excitement when I was informed that many English people wanted to learn more about China after the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics. (否定含义词hardly置于句首，句子使用部分倒装和when引导的时间状语从句)

【高分句型2】You said in your letter that you would come to Beijing to travel. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

8．March 23, 2022

By Li Jin

Delighted to know a new column will be added in Official WeChat of our English Club, I offer my recommendation as follows.

Among the three columns “Career Planning”, “Our Students” and “Campus Culture”, I would like to choose “Career Planning” to be the one to be added, based on the original two columns “School Profile” and “Study Life”. I know that right now a large number of students still have absolutely no idea about what they truly want to become in the future, so it’s quite urgent and necessary to give students basic understanding of what different kinds of jobs are like and what kinds of qualities are required for different jobs. This may help us gain a better understanding of our strengths and weakness so that we can figure out our goals. To me, it’s much more meaningful than “Our Students” or “Campus Culture”.

Dear classmates, what’s your recommendations? Would you like to share among us?

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英语社团的微信公众号发帖，谈论自己对备选的栏目的建议和看法。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：delighted→pleased

加入，包含：added→involved

提供：offer→provide

要求，需要：request→require

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：This may help us gain a better understanding of our strengths and weakness so that we can figure out our goals.

拓展句：Now that it may help us gain a better understanding of our strengths and weakness, we can figure out our goals.

【点睛】[高分句型1]I would like to choose “Career Planning” to be the one to be added, based on the original two columns “School Profile” and “Study Life”. (运用了过去分词作状语)

[高分句型2]I know that right now a large number of students still have absolutely no idea about what they truly want to become in the future, so it’s quite urgent and necessary to give students basic understanding of what different kinds of jobs are like and what kinds of qualities are required for different jobs.(运用了宾语从句、it作形式主语)

9．Dear Chris,

Hearing that you won the first prize in the poetry recitation contest Chinese Bridge hosted by local Confucius Institute, I am so glad and sincerely sending my congratulations to you.

As to the suggestions on how to further learn Chinese, it’s advisable that you should be exposed to Chinese literature, which helps you build a good sense of Chinese language. What’s more, you might as well try keeping a diary in Chinese in that more practice contributes to better mastery. Last but not least, how about finding a Chinese language partner with whom you can communicate if you would like to improve your Chinese fluency?

Hope my advice is worth taking. Meanwhile, I’d love to invite you to learn and exchange in China one day.

Yours,

Li Jin

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Chris回复邮件，就如何深入学习中文给出建议并表达祝贺，同时邀请对方来中国学习交流。

【详解】1.词汇积累

举办：host→hold

真诚地：sincerely→genuinely

有助于：contribute to→make for

提升：improve→advance

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Hearing that you won the first prize in the poetry recitation contest Chinese Bridge hosted by local Confucius Institute, I am so glad and sincerely sending my congratulations to you.

拓展句：Since I hear that you won the first prize in the poetry recitation contest Chinese Bridge hosted by local Confucius Institute, I am so glad and sincerely sending my congratulations to you.

【点睛】【高分句型1】As to the suggestions on how to further learn Chinese, it’s advisable that you should be exposed to Chinese literature, which helps you build a good sense of Chinese language. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和it作形式主语，that引导的主语从句）

【高分句型2】What’s more, you might as well try keeping a diary in Chinese in that more practice contributes to better mastery.（运用了in that引导的状语从句）

10．One possible version:

Dear editor,

I’m so glad to give my personal opinions on my favorite newspaper English Monthly set up by the Student Union. I’m a high school student who is enthusiastic about reading newspapers and I want to learn something from them. I think English Monthly has many advantages. For one thing, it’s rich in content, ranging from economy to civilization. For another, it’s a guide to English learning. Through it, I can have a good knowledge of what’s going on at home and abroad and I’ve improved my English reading skill. If only you could introduce some more about Chinese traditional culture and inspirational stories in the culture column.

Here I really hope English Monthly will attract more readers.

Yours,

Li Jin

【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇建议信。文章要求高考给学校编辑写一封关于《英语月报》的看法，并且提出自己建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad → pleased

个人的：personal → individual

观点：opinion → viewpoint

建立：set up → establish

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：It’s rich in content, ranging from economy to civilization.

拓展句：It’s rich in content, which ranges from economy to civilization.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m a high school student who is enthusiastic about reading newspapers and I want to learn something from them.（运用了定语从句。）

【高分句型2】If only you could introduce some more about Chinese traditional culture and inspirational stories in the culture column.（运用了if only的虚拟语气）