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专题13：书面表达（名校期末真题专练）
1． （2022春·河北邯郸·八年级统考期末）
何其有幸，生于华夏。我们每一个中国人都为伟大祖国骄傲自豪。假如你是李雷，请根据提示，给你在美国的笔友Dave写封信，向他介绍你的祖国。
提示：
1. What do you know about China?
2. What are the Chinese people like?
3. ...
要求：
1.短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，并适当发挥。
2.短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3.词数80个左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Dave,
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Yours,
Li Lei
【答案】例文：
Dear Dave,
I’m happy to be your pen pal. I’d like to tell you something about China.
China is the biggest country in Asia. China has a population of more than 1.3 billion in the world. The Yangtze River is one of the longest rivers in the world. China has a long history of over 5,000 years. The Chinese people are hard-working and friendly. China has a much longer history than the United States. There are also many places of interest and delicious food in China.
I love China very much. Welcome to China and play with me.
Yours,
Li Lei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，形式为书信；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句的通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，以“我想告诉你一些关于中国的事情”引出下文；
第二步，按照要点提示，介绍自己对中国的了解，如人口、地理位置等；接着介绍中国人民的特点，然后适当补充介绍更多关于中国的信息，如历史，风光等；
第三步，结尾总结，表达自己对祖国的爱，并欢迎对方来中国。
[亮点词汇]
①more than 超过
②one of the longest rivers 最长的河流之一
③places of interest 名胜古迹
[高分句型]
①There are also many places of interest and delicious food in China.（there be句型）
②The Yangtze River is one of the longest rivers in the world.（“one of+the+形容词最高级+名词复数”）
2． （2022春·江苏镇江·八年级统考期末）
八年级的学习生活即将结束，学校正在进行共青团员（Communist Youth League member）选拔，假如你是Li Hua，请你代表你们班推荐Xiao Ming作为共青团员候选人。根据以下信息，写一封推荐信给学校团支部。
姓名
Xiao Ming
良好品质
¿善良¿乐于助人，参加志愿者活动，……
¿慷慨大方
¿……
行为习惯
¿在公共场合举止文明，……
生活方式
¿垃圾分类，将旧衣服送给回收机构¿呼吁我们采取行动保护环境，……
要求：
1.所写内容必须包括表格中所有要点，可适当发挥；
2.文章不少于85个词，注意推荐信格式；
3.语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear chairperson,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear chairperson,
I would like to recommend Xiao Ming as Communist Youth League candidate. He is the monitor in our class. He is very kind and always ready to help others. He always takes part in some volunteer activities, such as being a volunteer in protecting the environment, helping old people and so on. He is also generous to others. In public, he follows the rules, especially the traffic rules.
He loves our environment. Now the environmental problem is getting worse. So he usually sorts the garbage before throwing it away and gives old clothes to the recycling agency. He hopes that everyone takes action together to protect the environment.
I think Xiao Ming is a good candidate for Communist Youth League. I hope you agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文，为推荐信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当发挥，注意语句通顺，条理清楚。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍想推荐谁为候选人；
第二步，从品质，行为习惯及生活方式等方面介绍想推荐的人；
第三步，书写结语，希望对方能够同意。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to do sth准备好做某事
②take part in参加
③take action采取行动
④and so on等等
[高分句型]
①He hopes that everyone takes action together to protect the environment.（that引导宾语从句）
②So he usually sorts the garbage before throwing it away and gives old clothes to the recycling agency.（and连接的并列结构）
3． （2022春·河北保定·八年级统考期末）
随着阳光体育运动在全国的开展，“每天锻炼一小时，健康工作五十年，幸福生活一辈子”的理念深入人心。校园里出现了可喜的变化：运动时间延长了，运动项目增加了，学生体质增强了，校园生活丰富了。请以“Sports in Our School”为题给校刊写一篇报道。
要求：
1. 80词左右，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Sports in Our School
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【答案】范文：
Sports in Our School
Sports in our school have changed a lot. Now we have more than three P.E. classes a week, and we spend at least one hour exercising every day.
Students are so excited at these changes. More and more students take an active part in the ball games, running and jumping on the playground.
Our school life is becoming more wonderful. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep healthy. What’s more, a strong body can help us study better and live a happier life.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已在题干中给出，考生应紧扣“学校运动的变化”为主题展开写作，适当增添细节，完善作文，注意正确拼写单词，避免出现语法错误，表达要流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明报道的主题——学校运动的变化，并讲述所发生的变化有哪些；
第二步，讲述学生对于这些变化的感受及表现；
第三步，表达个人对运动的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① more than 多于，超出
② more and more 越多越多
③ take an active part in 积极参与
④ what’s more 此外
[高分句型]
① Now we have more than three P.E. classes a week, and we spend at least one hour exercising every day.（“spend time doing sth.”句型）
② Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep healthy.（动名词作主语）
4．（2023春·全国·八年级期末）
健康是生活的基石，尤其是青少年的健康，更加受到家庭、学校乃至全社会的关注。假如你是你们学校的健康达人，应校英语俱乐部的邀请，你将给全校同学作一个主题为“The Importance and Secret of Keeping Healthy”的报告。请参考下面的提示完成报告。
要求：
1. 100词左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 所给提示仅供参考，可适当发挥。
提示：a balanced diet；enough exercise；be happy
Dear friends,
It’s a great honor to speak here. My topic is “The Importance and Secret of Keeping Healthy”.
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Thanks for listening!
【答案】例文
Dear friends,
It’s a great honor to speak here. My topic is “The Importance and Secret of Keeping Healthy”.
I’m so glad you care about health like me. Keeping healthy is really important.
As for the secret of keeping healthy, I think different people have different answers. In my opinion, having a healthy lifestyle is the most important. First, it’s helpful to have enough sleep and a balanced diet. Second, enough exercise is necessary for a healthy body. Also, everyone should develop a sense of humor and always be a happy person.
I hope you can pay attention to your health from now on and live a happy and healthy life forever!
     Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示，以“The Importance and Secret of Keeping Healthy”为题，写一篇作文。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍保持健康的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述如何保持健康；
第三步，最后表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①the secret of……的秘诀
②in my opinion在我看来
③a sense of humor幽默感
④pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
①I think different people have different answers.（省略that的宾语从句）
②having a healthy lifestyle is the most important.（动名词作主语）
5.（2023春·上海·八年级期末）
Write at least 60 words on the topic “A Gift to My Mother”, using the following questions for reference.（请根据提示问题，以“给我妈妈的一件礼物”为题，写一篇短文，不少于60个词， 标点符号不占格）
Suggested questions:
（1）What are you going to give your mother?
（2）When are you going to give it to her?
（3）Is it special? Why?
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【答案】例文：
A Gift to My Mother
Mother’s Day is coming. I want to give my mother a surprise. I’ll buy a special gift for her. I know she likes listening to music. But she is too busy every day. She is busy working and taking care of her family, and she has no time to do what she likes. So I want to buy an MP4 for her with my lucky money. I hope she won’t be so tired. She can listen to music after work to relax herself. I think it’s the best gift for her.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据所给提示内容介绍给妈妈的一件礼物。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明在即将来临的母亲节要送母亲一份礼物。
第二步，介绍要送的礼物及原因。
第三步，总结母亲一定会喜欢这个礼物的。
[亮点词汇]
①give my mother a surprise给母亲一个惊喜
②be busy doing忙于做某事
③take care of 照顾
[高分句型]
①She is busy working and taking care of her family（and并列了两个动名词作宾语）
②I hope she won’t be so tired.（省略that的宾语从句）
6． （2022春·云南红河·八年级统考期末）
提示:我们读过或听过的许多故事，会在生活和学习中带给我们重要启示，帮助我们成长。请以“What I have learned from the story”为题，写一篇英语短文，讲述一个故事，谈谈你从故事中学到了什么。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
What I have learned from the story
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【答案】例文
What I have learned from the story
I have read and heard of a lot of wonderful stories. Among them, there is one story called “Yu Gong Moves the Mountains”. I love it and learn a lot from it.
Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yu Gong. There were two mountains near his house. They were so high and big that it took a long time to walk to the other side. So Yu Gong and his children tried to move the mountains. He thought that the mountains would become smaller and smaller as long as they kept trying. The gods were moved by Yu Gong’s act and helped him move the mountains.
What I have learned from the story is: We can never know what’s possible unless we try to make it happen. As long as we work hard, we can solve most of the problems.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中从故事中学了什么。注意动词时态的变换。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题。介绍我很喜欢“愚公移山”这个故事；
第二步，具体介绍“愚公移山”这个故事的内容；
第三步，我从“愚公移山”这个故事中学到的东西。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of大量的，许多的
②once upon a time从前
③so...that...太……以至于……
④as long as只要
[高分句型]
①Among them, there is one story called “Yu Gong Moves the Mountains”.（There be句型）
②They were so high and big that it took a long time to walk to the other side.（that引导状语从句）
③He thought that the mountains would become smaller and smaller as long as they kept trying.（that引导宾语从句）
④We can never know what’s possible unless we try to make it happen.（what引导宾语从句；unless引导状语从句）
7． （2023春·全国·八年级期末）
根据内容提要和提示词，以第一人称形式写一篇关于你所经历的 “The First Food Festival” 的短文。短文的开头已给出。
内容提要：许多人来参加，一些人要北京烤鸭，一些人要印度咖喱等等。所有这些食物很可口。你工作最认真，卖了最多的炒饭，这一天很有趣。
要求：1. 内容可适当增加；2. 词数：60~80。
提示词：many different kinds of, order, would like, and so on, smell nice, sell, carefully, fried rice, interesting day, Indian curries
The First Food Festival
Today was the first Food Festival. Many different kinds of people came for it.
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【答案】例文
The First Food Festival
Today was the first Food Festival. Many different kinds of people came for it. Some people ordered Beijing Roast Duck. Some people would like Indian curries, and so on. All the foods smelt nice and tasted nice, too. I worked very hard. I sold the most bowls of fried rice. What an interesting day it was! Though I was very tired, I was very happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰，无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍第一次美食节的盛况；
第二步，谈谈自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① different kinds of 不同种类的
② would like 想要
[高分句型]
① What an interesting day it was!（what引导的感叹句）
② Though I was very tired, I was very happy.（though引导的让步状语从句）
8．（2022春·四川乐山·八年级统考期末）
近年来我市积极倡导“践行十爱，德耀嘉州”，你校正以“爱学习、爱劳动、爱健康”为主题开展榜样人物英文征稿活动。假设你的朋友李雷（14岁）符合要求，请你讲述一下他的故事，内容包括：
1. 热爱学习，不惧困难；
2. 热爱劳动，做力所能及的事；
3. 热爱运动，比如打篮球等；
4. 你对他的看法。
注意：
1. 词数80词左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
My Best Friend—Li Lei
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【答案】例文
My Best Friend—Li Lei
My best friend is called Li Lei. He is a 14-year-old boy. I think he is really a good example for me. Here are some reasons.
First of all, he enjoys learning and really works hard. Whenever he meets something difficult, he never gives up. And at home, he always offers to do some housework. What’s more, he keeps doing exercise to stay healthy, such as playing basketball.
In my opinion, Li Lei is a kind and nice boy. From him, I can learn something good and make myself better.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，简单介绍一位榜样人物；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意每点需要适当添加一些细节，描述需积极向上，突出榜样人物的特点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出需要介绍的榜样人物并做简单介绍；        
第二步，分别从学习，劳动，体育三个方面，展开详细描写；
第三步，文章结尾，表达自己对榜样的观点，强调其对自己的榜样作用。        
[亮点词汇]
① first all of首先
② offer to do sth.主动做某事
③ what’s more此外
[高分句型]
① Whenever he meets something difficult, he never gives up.（whenever引导的让步状语从句）
② From him, I can learn something good and make myself better.（and连接的并列句）
9．（2022春·河北承德·八年级统考期末）
根据下面的文字说明及要点提示写一篇80词左右的英语作文。
某中学校报的英语专刊就“中学生能否在学校使用智能手机(smartphone)的问题”向学生征稿。请你根据同学们的不同观点，写一篇作文，谈谈自己的看法。要点提示如下：
赞成
1. 可以和父母联系contact；2. 可以利用手机查look up生词和浏览新闻；
3. ……
反对
1. 在学校用手机浪费时间；2. 玩手机游戏不利于学习；
3. ……
你的观点及建议
……
要求：
1.文中必须包括表格中的内容，可适当发挥；
2.80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Nowadays, smartphones are popular among the students. Should they be allowed to use smartphones at school or not? Our students have different opinions. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Nowadays, smartphones are popular among the students. Should they be allowed to use smartphones at school or not? Our students have different opinions.
Some students think they can use smartphones at school. First, it’s convenient for them to call their parents, teachers or friends when they have problems. Second, they can search what they need on smartphones. For example, they can look up new words and look through news.
However, some students disagree. They think using smartphones at school is a waste of time. Many students spend too much time on games and QQ. It does harm to students’ study. And it’s unhealthy for the mind and the body.
In my opinion, students can’t use smartphones at school. Students should spend more time doing sports or having fun with friends. They should also pay more attention to their study. If they do, they’ll be happier and healthier.
【详解】[总体分析]：
①题材：本文是一篇议论文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：作文开头以及写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，并适当增加内容，使文章通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步：总起全文，引出话题“手机”。
第二步：具体阐述赞成方和反对方的观点以及理由。
第三步：得出结论，叙述自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①be allowed to do被允许做某事
②look up查阅
③pay attention to集中注意力于
[高分句型]
①Second, they can search what they need on smartphones.（what引导的宾语从句）
②If they do, they’ll be happier and healthier.（if引导的条件状语从句）
10． （2022春·河北石家庄·八年级统考期末）
暑假快到了，学校将开展社会实践活动，请根据提示要点写一篇英语短文，描述一下你的同学Lucy、Lisa以及你的选择及其原因。
提示：
Students
Social Practical Activities
Reasons
Lucy
Visit Hebei Museum
Learn more about…
Lisa
Volunteer to sell old things for charity
Raise money for…
You
…
…
要求：
1. 文章必须包括表中全部内容，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名；
3. 词数：80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
During this coming holiday, my classmates want to take part in different social activities.
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【答案】例文
During this coming holiday, my classmates want to take part in different social activities. Lucy is going to visit Hebei Museum because she likes history very much. She wants to learnt more about history knowledge that is not found in books. Lisa is going to volunteer to sell old things for charity. She wants to raise money for the children in those poor areas. I will go to the old people’s home and chat with them. These old people are so lonely that they need love.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：要求根据表格内容描述一下你的同学Lucy、Lisa以及你的社会实践活动及其原因。学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先通过介绍同学们在这个即将到来的假期里想参加不同的社交活动来引出话题；
第二步，具体同学Lucy、Lisa选择及其原因；
第三步，谈谈自己的选择及其原因。
[亮点词汇]
①want to do sth想做某事
②volunteer to do sth自愿做某事
③chat with sb与某人聊天
[高分句型]
①Lucy is going to visit Hebei Museum because she likes history very much.（原因状语从句）
②These old people are so lonely that they need love.（结果状语从句）
11． （2023春·全国·八年级期末）
假设上周你们全家去黄山湖公园游玩。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文参加以“How to behave politely”为主题的征文比赛，并适当加以评论。要点提示如下：
亲身经历
1. 我们玩得正开心，不文明的一幕发生了：一位女士满不在乎地将垃圾扔在地上；2. 我试图阻止，但她拒绝听我的；
3. 我将垃圾捡起来并放进垃圾桶；
我的观点
4. 人人都应该学习一些有关礼仪方面的知识；5. 良好的礼仪很重要。比如……（列举不同场合该有的文明行为）
6. 对我们来说，提升礼仪是必需的。
注意：1. 征文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 第5点须用2—3句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥；
3. 词数80左右，短文标题和开头已在答题卷上给出，不计入总词数。
How to behave politely
Last week, all my family visited Huangshanhu Park.
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【答案】One possible version：
How to behave politely
Last week, all my family visited Huangshanhu Park. We were enjoying ourselves when something impolite happened. A lady dropped some litter carelessly on the ground. I tried to stop her, but she refused to listen to me. I picked it up and put it into the bin/dustbin. I think everyone should learn something about manners. Good manners are important. When we are in the library, we should keep quiet. When we cross the road, we should obey traffic rules. (Before we get on a bus, we should queue for our turn.) It’s necessary for us to improve our manners.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：描述经历时，时态以“一般过去时”为主，描写自己的观点，时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意包含要点提示中的内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述亲身经历，一位女士随地扔垃圾这一事件引起作者的注意；
第二步，根据亲身经历表达自己的观点，呼吁人们要学习礼仪，并在生活中要讲礼仪。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy oneself玩得开心
②try to do sth.尝试做某事
③pick up捡起
[高分句型]
①We were enjoying ourselves when something impolite happened.（when引导时间状语从句）
②It’s necessary for us to improve our manners.（动词不定式作主语）
12． （2023春·上海·八年级期末）
Write at least 60 words on the topic “Energy saving”, using the following questions for reference. (请根据提示问题，以“节约能源”为题，写一篇短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格)
Suggested questions:
(1) What do you think of the energy crisis (能源危机) nowadays?
(2) Would you give two examples of the energy crisis?
(3) What can you do to save energy, could you give two suggestions for doing so?
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【答案】例文
Energy saving
Nowadays, the whole world is facing the big problem of energy shortages. Saving the energy is very important. As a student, we can do a lot in our daily life.
For example, we should keep the light off when we don’t use it. We should take a shower instead of bath to save water. Don’t keep the tap running when you wash your face or brush your teeth. When we go shopping, we can take cloth bags instead of using plastic bags. Many people write on only one side of their paper. Why not try using both? To save the energy, we should also reduce pollution. Recycling old newspapers, glasses, cans and waste paper is also a good idea.
Let’s work hard together to save the energy!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要用第一人称叙述，不要遗漏“提示信息”中你认为目前的能源危机是什么，举两个节能的例子，对于节能你能做什么，给出两个建议，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“如今，全世界都面临着能源短缺的大问题。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“你对当今的能源危机的看法；举出两个节能的例子；给出两个关于节能的好的建议”几方面重点介绍节约能源的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“让我们一起努力节约能源！”的强烈愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①take a shower洗澡
②instead of代替
[高分句型]
① When we go shopping, we can take cloth bags instead of using plastic bags. （when引导的时间状语从句）
②Why not try using both? （why not...?表示“为什么不……呢？”）
13． （2022春·吉林长春·八年级统考期末）
回忆小时候令你最难忘的一件东西，它可能是一本书、一顶帽子，也可能是一个玩具……，请参考所给问题自拟题目写一篇短文，通过具体的事例谈一谈它带给你的意义。可适当发挥。不少于80词。
提示：
How long have you had it?
How did you get it? Did someone give it to you? Who?
Why do you like it so much? Why is it special?
Can you say anything more about it?
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【答案】例文：
A Story Book
     When I was 6 years old, my mother gave a story book to me as a present of my birthday. I keep it till now because it can bring back many sweet memories. That is the first gift I ever got, so it is greatly special for me. And it also made me see an interesting world. Once I was so sad, it would remind me to be positive and go out to a new day. I really like it and will keep it well in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中“通过具体的事例谈一谈它带给你的意义”，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据要点提示，首先自拟题目“A Story Book”。
第二步，根据问题提示，介绍物品获得途径、原因和时间，以及它对自己的特殊意义。
第三步，总结对它的喜爱，并会和它一起走向未来。
[亮点词汇]
①bring back 想起
②remind sb. to do sth. 提醒某人做某事
[高分句型]
I keep it till now because it can bring back many sweet memories.(because引导的原因状语从句)
14． （2022春·浙江杭州·八年级期末）
假如你是Daming，以下是你的美国笔友Tony发给你的一封电子邮件。请根据该邮件的内容给他回复一封邮件。
Hi, Daming,
  Long time no see. I will spend a long time with my family this summer holiday. I have a deep feeling of their love, and I want to do something for them, but I have no idea about it.
What do you often do to show your love to your family? And what’s the best way to spend time together? Hope to get your reply soon!
Yours,
Tony
要求：1.邮件必须包含所提问题的回复，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3.词数80左右。
Hi, Tony,
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Yours,
Daming
【答案】例文
Hi Tony,
I’m glad that we both have a wonderful family time these days. Deeply touched by their love, I try to do something to show my love, too. As you know, I’m a lazy boy. But now, things change a lot. I often help Mom with housework, such as sweeping, washing and so on. Can you believe I can cook now? My parents are proud to see I’m growing.
As for the common time with the family together, I think the best way is to do something alike. Last time Dad and I enjoyed a wonderful film together, and then shared our feelings. What a good time!
Hope this works!
Yours,
Daming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据邮件的内容给对方提出相应的建议，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示自己会做一些事情表达自己对家人的爱；
第二步，详细介绍作者做了什么事情表达自己对家人的爱；
第三步，介绍共度时光的最佳方式；
第四步，书写结语，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事
②such as例如
③as for至于
[高分句型]
①Deeply touched by their love, I try to do something to show my love, too.(过去分词作状语)
②I think the best way is to do something alike.(动词不定式作表语)
③What a good time!(感叹句)