专题07 书面表达（解析版）2023年中考英语一模试题分项汇编

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专题07 书面表达
一、话题作文
1．（2023·山西·校联考一模）刚刚过去的一年给我们留下了难以磨灭的记忆，大到冬奥会成功举办、中国空间站顺利建成；小到居家学习、与好友重逢……总有一些瞬间值得记忆，它们能够触动人心，使人备受鼓舞，倍感温暖。
某英语报社开展了以“The Most Unforgettable Moment”为主题的征文比赛，请你写一篇英语短文，分享你最难忘的瞬间。
内容包括：
·the most unforgettable moment for you
·what you have learned from it
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词；
2. 参考词汇仅供参考；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
Word Bank
inspire  v. 鼓舞
the Winter Olympics 冬奥会
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【答案】例文
Life is full of unforgettable moments. These moments always touch us and bring us senses of warmth, pride and even achievement.
When it comes to the most unforgettable moment, a story enters my mind. One day, I visited the art museum. After listening to the story of Chinese embroidery art, I began to learn to make embroidery works. The artist taught me carefully and I practiced many times. To my joy, the patterns I made in embroidery were simple but beautiful. The moment I saw my work, a sense of achievement rose from the bottom of my heart.
From this experience, I have realized that only when you make an effort to do something can you bring out the best in you and then you will enjoy more unforgettable moments.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；
③ 提示：写作内容要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引入话题；
第二步，具体叙述“难忘的瞬间”；
第三步，表达自己的感受和从经历中学到的内容。
[亮点词汇]
① be full of 充满，装满
② to one’s joy 让某人高兴的是
③ rise from 升起
[高分句型]
① When it comes to the most unforgettable moment, a story enters my mind. （when引导的时间状语从句）
② From this experience, I have realized that only when you make an effort to do something can you bring out the best in you and then you will enjoy more unforgettable moments. （倒装句）
二、材料作文
2．（2023·浙江温州·统考一模）假如你是Daming，你的同学Betty和Tony毕业后即将回国。学校向同学们征集Leavers’ Party的设计方案。请你完善你们小组以“中国风”为主题（Chinese-themed）的方案内容，写一篇英文短文，在学校英语拓展课上分享方案内容及设计理由。
注意：
1. 词数约110词；
2. 文章中不得出现真实的个人信息。

Our Party Plan
Activities: Chinese Kungfu,
Beijing Opera,
________
Food: Tea, jiaozi,
________
Gifts: ________



参考词汇：Chinese knots中国结；Chinese calligraphy书法Hello, everyone. It’s my honor to share our Chinese-themed Plan with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. It’s my honor to share our Chinese-Themed Plan with you.
We will prepare some Chinese traditional food, such as Chinese Longjing tea, jiaozi and Zongzi. Sharing our Chinese food with our foreign friends is a good way to leave them a deep impression of our country.
We are also going to have some activities. Chinese Kungfu and Beijing Opera are amazing to the world. Students from these two clubs will make a great performance for us. Another program is that students will write Chinese words like “Fu” on red paper. “Fu” shows our best luck to our foreign friends.
We plan to prepare Chinese fans as gifts which are really meaningful. Hongbao is another good choice. They’ll be very happy to receive them.
Do you like our plan? Your advice is welcome.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括方案内容和设计理由。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍将要准备的食物；
第二步，介绍将要举办的活动；
第三步，最后是叙述准备的礼物。
[亮点词汇]
① such as 例如
② share sth with sb 和某人分享某物
③ plan to do sth 计划做某事
[高分句型]
① Sharing our Chinese food with our foreign friends is a good way to leave them a deep impression of our country.（动名词作主语，动词不定式作后置定语）
② We plan to prepare Chinese fans as gifts which are really meaningful.（which引导的定语从句）
3．（2023·辽宁鞍山·统考一模）现在智能手机运用越来越普遍，上周你们班举行了一次以“初中生使用微信的利与弊”为主题的班会，同学们各抒已见。你针对同学们的不同意见， 做了以下记录。请根据表格内容以“The Opinions of Using WeChat”为题写一篇短文。
利
弊
1. 提供交流的平台，可以上网课
1. 过度使用、影响学习
2. 能认识更多的朋友， 方便联系
2. 交友不慎、容易受骗
3. 能学习更多的东西，增加兴趣
3. 长时间看手机对眼睛有害
……
……

注意： 1. 词数80字以上。
2. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
提示： platform平台；rick欺骗； be convenient for对……方便； 网课online class
The Opinions of Using WeChat
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【答案】例文
The Opinions of Using WeChat
More and more middle school students use WeChat. Different students have different opinions about using it.
Some students think WeChat is a very useful tool. It can provide a platform to communicate with their friends. And they can make more friends and learn more knowledge by WeChat. They also attend online classes by WeChat. WeChat is convenient for them to connect.
However, some students think WeChat will affect their study if they spend too much time using it. And they may be tricked by strange net friends. Last but not least, it will also affect their vision if they use WeChat for a long time. In my opinion, we should use WeChat properly by not using it more than two hours a day, and make sure that we don’t use it when we are studying.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的时态是一般现在时；
③提示：微信利与弊的大部分要点已给出，适当地补充一些自己的观点。人称以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述不同的人对使用微信有着不同的观点；
第二步，具体阐述同学们利与弊的观点；
第三步，以自己的观点做个总结。
[亮点词汇]
provide a platform提供一个平台
attend online classes上网课
affect their study影响他们的学习
[高分句型]
However, some students think WeChat will affect their study if they spend too much time using it. （if引导的条件状语从句）
4．（2023·山东泰安·统考一模）历时29天的2022年卡塔尔世界杯于12月18日落下帷幕，四年一届的世界杯，除了给我们留下一个个精彩的瞬间，带给我们更多的是启示与思考：

1. 坚持——为了实现自己的理想，永不放弃；
2. 团结——齐心协力，共同成就；
3. 勇气——欢呼不只属于胜利者，为梦想勇于拼搏的人都值得点赞（a thumbs-up）；
4. 人生就是一届又一届“世界杯”，充满了意想不到与无限可能，你的梦想是什么？你打算如何去实现它？
请根据以上提示，以“Anyone With a Dream is Great”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的想法。
要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，词数80—100；（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
     2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。
                     Anyone With a Dream is Great
The 2022 World Cup in Qatar ended on December, 18th. It left people lots of wonderful moments.
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【答案】例文：
Anyone With a Dream is Great
  The 2022 World Cup in Qatar ended on December, 18th. It left people lots of wonderful moments. It also gave us something to think about. First of all, in order to achieve our goals, we should never give up. Secondly, teamwork is necessary, and we should work together to achieve common success. What’s more, courage is more important. Cheers are not only for winners, but also for those who have the courage to fight for their dreams. They all deserve a thumbs-up.
Life is one “World Cup” after another, full of surprise and possibilities. My dream is to become an astronaut and explore outer space. In order to realize my dream, I will make efforts to learn knowledge and improve physical fitness. I may meet many difficulties, but I won’t give up.
I believe that anyone with a dream is great. So let’s dream big and work hard to make it come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给提示中“你的梦想是什么”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，谈论“世界杯”带来的启示；
第二步，陈述自己的梦想，并说明如何实现它；
第三步，总结全文，鼓励读者去实现梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②give up放弃
③not only…but also…不仅……而且……
④make efforts付出努力
[高分句型]
①Cheers are not only for winners, but also for those who have the courage to fight for their dreams.（定语从句）
②I believe that anyone with a dream is great.（宾语从句）
5．（2023·广东深圳·深圳中学校联考一模）深圳是一座有温度的城市。3月是学雷锋月，假如你是学生李华，是深圳市某国际学校的一名学生。下周你所在的学校将举行一系列“学雷锋”活动，请根据以下提示，写一个倡议书，介绍此次活动并号召学校的同学们积极参加，
要点：
1．目的：培养社会责任感，提高交流技巧，帮助有需要的人
2．内容：①看望敬老院老人 ②帮助照顾流浪动物 ③……（补充一点）
3．你的号召与倡议
要求：1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
参考词汇：social 社会的
Dear friends,
Shenzhen is a city which can bring people love and warmth. In March, there will be a great event called “Learning from Leifeng”.
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】例文
Dear friends,
Shenzhen is a city which can bring people love and warmth. In March, there will be a great event called “Learning from Leifeng”. The following is some detailed information about it.
This event will be held in order to develop students’ sense of social responsibility. At the same time, students can improve their communication skills and help people in need.
There are a series activities during the event. Firstly, we will go to old people’s homes and help them clean their rooms. Secondly, some of us will go to take care of homeless animals. We can feed them or play with them. Thirdly, we will hold a book fair to raise money for the poor. Each student need to bring some books that they don’t need any more.
I think this event will be really educational and meaningful. With every effort we make, we can make a big difference! Hope everyone can take part in it!
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇倡议书；
②时态：时态为“一般将来”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动的目的；
第二步，介绍活动的内容。
[亮点词汇]
①at the same time同时
②make a big difference有很大的影响
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①This event will be held in order to develop students’ sense of social responsibility.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②I think this event will be really educational and meaningfuls.（省略that的宾语从句）
6．（2023·天津红桥·统考模拟预测）初中阶段的学习生活即将结束。假如你是李华，回想自己在老师们的关爱和帮助下的成长过程，想必心中充满感恩之情。请根据以下提示，给你的体育何老师写一封信，表达你的谢意。
1. 三年前入校时，你有点儿胖；
2. 第一节体育课，所有同学参加1000米长跑，你跑在最后，曾想放弃；
3. 何老师为你制定训练计划并监督你完成；
4. 三年来你坚持训练；
5. 你感谢……
要求：（1）词数：80~100词；
（2）短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：1000米长跑    1000-meter race
监督某人做某事  supervise sb. doing sth.
训练计划  training plan
Dear Miss He,
How are you getting on with your life and work? I’m writing to express my sincere thanks for you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
You have truly been a friend.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version
Dear Miss He,
How are you getting on with your life and work? I’m writing to express my sincere thanks for you. I was a little fat when I came to our school 3 years ago. I didn’t often take exercise when I was in primary school. One thing that I can’t forget is the first outdoor PE class in our school. All the students took part in 1000-meter race in that class. I finished last and just wanted to give up. It was you who ran along with me and encouraged me to insist. After that, you also helped me to make a personal training plan. You also supervised me finishing training every PE class. I have kept training for nearly 3 years. Now, I’m not only healthier but also energetic.
As far as I’m concerned, you are the kindest teacher that I have ever met. I really thank you from the bottom of my heart. Thank you, Miss He. You have taught me to try my best and not to give up whatever I do.
You have truly been a friend.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点，例如，发生的具体事情，以及自己的感谢，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，自己感谢何老师；
第二步，具体阐述感谢何老师的事件；
第三步，表达如何感谢何老师。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②keep doing sth一直做某事
③ try one’s best to do sth尽最大努力做某事
[高分句型]
① It was you who ran along with me and encouraged me to insist. （定语从句）
② I didn’t often take exercise when I was in primary school.（时间状语从句）
7．（2023·广西南宁·广西大学附属中学校联考一模）国家提出了将劳动教育（Labor Education）纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此，你校校报英语栏目English World就开展劳动教育的意义，以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育，发起征文。请你以“Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School”为题，写一篇短文参赛。
写作要点：
1.劳动教育的意义（学习生活技能、养成良好习惯……）
2.校内劳动教育建议（开设种植课、组织做蛋糕比赛……）
3.……
写作要求：
1.内容必须包含给出的所有信息；
2.结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯；
3.使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构，书写规范；
4.文中不得透露个人信息，否则不予评分；
5.词数80左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。
Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School
It’s reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools.
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【答案】例文：
Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School
It’s reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools. I think it’s important. We can learn some life skills and form good habits. Both will help us a lot in the future.
As for how to run the course in our school, I have some ideas. The school can offer classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants. What’s more, the school can set up some clubs, such as cooking club and paper-cutting club. The school can also hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes. Such activities will make our school life more colorful and meaningful.
I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. I believe I will do well in it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为说明文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：写作提示已经给出，校内劳动教育的建议是本文的写作重点，需要细化，且可以适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达劳动教育的意义；
第二步，表达校内劳动教育建议，这是写作重点，细化具体建议；
第三步，表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②offer classes to teach us how to... 提供课程教我们如何……
③make our school life more colorful and meaningful让我们的学校生活更加丰富多彩和有意义
④look forward to期盼
[高分句型]
The school can also hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes.（宾语从句）
8．（2023·陕西西安·西安市铁一中学校考一模）初中生活即将过去，回顾初中三年的学校生活，有满意的地方也有不满意的地方，请对自己三年的学习生活进行反思，以助自己未来成长。要点如下：
对自己满意的方面
努力学习，养成了良好的学习习惯
学会跟同学和睦相处，并乐于帮助同学，是一个很好的倾听者
……
对自己不满意的方面
由于学习繁忙，锻炼身体较少
帮助父母做家务活不够
……

要求：
1．短文必须包括所有提示要点，可适当添加发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
2．不得少于70 词。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
3．参考词汇：养成form/develop；倾听者 listener；学业繁忙 busy schoolwork；满意的 happy/satisfied
How time flies and I will graduate from school soon.
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【答案】例文：
How time flies and I will graduate from school soon. Thinking back to the three years, I’ve learned a lot.
Firstly, I spent most of my time studying and I formed a good study habit. Secondly, I learned how to get on well with my classmates. If they were in trouble, I would give them a hand and be a good listener. Thirdly, I met a lot of new friends. We would help each other in life as well as study. However, I took less exercise because of my busy schoolwork. And I didn’t do any housework. So I have decided to do more exercise and help my parents with some housework.
All in all, I suggest we should rethink what we did in the past, and make a conclusion about advantages and disadvantages, which is good for our improvement.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要有遗漏，主要包括对自己满意和不满意的地方。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己在过去的三年学到了很多；
第二步，具体介绍对自己满意和不满意的地方有哪些并如何改进；
第三步，最后建议大家都应该进行反思和总结。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing sth.花时间做某事
②get on well with sb.与某人和睦相处
③be in trouble处于困境中
④help sb. with sth.在某事上帮助某人
[高分句型]
①If they were in trouble, I would give them a hand and be a good listener.（if引导条件状语从句）
②I suggest we should rethink what we did in the past, and make a conclusion about advantages and disadvantages, which is good for our improvement.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
9．（2023·浙江杭州·统考一模）假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件，接受邀请并回复。词数 80 左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
俗语说：一寸光阴一寸金。你校英语社团将举办 “Save Time, Enjoy Life”为主题的征文活动，请写一篇英语短文，介绍在日常生活中你是如何珍惜时间的，并阐述你对节约时间的看法。
要求：
1.短文应包括两个要点（如何珍惜时间和对节约时间的看法），可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用；
2.短文不能出现真实的人名和校名；
3.词数：90~110。
参考词汇：cherish(珍惜)，efficiency(效率)，wealth, valuable
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【答案】例文
Save Time, Enjoy Life
As the saying goes: Time is money. Time never goes back. We should cherish time and make full use of it.
When I am studying, I usually arrange the time reasonably. On weekdays, I usually finish homework in advance. Therefore, I can have more time to read and do other activities. I always do my homework carefully to avoid making mistakes. So I save time to correct these mistakes. In class, I listen to the teachers carefully and take notes. I follow what the teachers say so that I can save time to join in other clubs.
From now on, we should cherish the time, study hard and be a useful person to the society in the future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍在日常生活中你是如何珍惜时间的；
第二步，介绍对节约时间的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①make full use of充分利用
②in advance提前
③join in加入
[高分句型]
①When I am studying, I usually arrange the time reasonably.（when引导时间状语从句）
②I follow what the teachers say so that I can save time to join in other clubs.（so that引导目的状语从句）
10．（2023·安徽池州·校联考一模）体育在中小学教学中越来越重视，为此更多的青少年成为了运动爱好者。假设你们学校英语报的Sports栏目正在以“My favorite sport”为题进行征稿，请你根据以下内容提示写一篇英语短文进行投稿，讲述你与运动的不解之缘。
提示：
1．你最喜欢什么运动？
2．你如何喜欢上这项运动的？
3．你为什么喜欢这项运动？
要求：
1．要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．词数80～100。
My favorite sport
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【答案】One possible version:
My favorite sport
My favorite sport is table tennis. I played it for the first time when I was very young, but I didn’t fall in love with it until 2021. During the Tokyo Olympic Games, I saw an amazing table tennis competition on TV. It was very exciting and two Chinese players won at last. Then I started to take table tennis lessons. Soon, I found what I needed most was practice. My parents offered to play it with me. Now we often play table tennis in our free time. We all enjoy ourselves when we play it. For me, table tennis not only keeps me healthy, but also provides me with a good chance to spend time with my family. That’s why I love it so much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章标题以及写作要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，说明最喜欢的运动是什么；
第二步，讲述在何种情况下喜欢上这项运动，与这项运动结缘，要列举具体的事例；
第三步，说明喜欢这项运动的原因并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①fall in love with爱上……
②offer to do sth主动提供做某事
③provide sb with sth给某人提供某物
④not only…but also不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①I played it for the first time when I was very young, but I didn’t fall in love with it until 2021.（but连接两个并列分句，第一个并列分句中含有when引导的时间状语从句）
②Soon, I found what I needed most was practice.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句，宾语从句中含有what引导的主语从句）
③That’s why I love it so much.（why引导的表语从句）

三、书信作文
11．（2023·安徽阜阳·统考一模）假如你是Jim。前段时间你的朋友李华一直在帮助你学习中文歌和了解中华文化。现在你已经回国，请你根据以下要点给他写一封感谢信。要点包括：
1. 表达感激之情；
2. 回忆各种收获；
3. 发出邀请。
注意：
1. 必须包含所有要点，词数80-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和学校的名称。
Dear Li Hua,
How are you doing these days?
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Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Jim
【答案】例文：
Dear Li Hua,
How are you doing these days?
I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in your country, without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed it so much.
Guided by you, I had a chance to visit some places of interest in China and experience such unique culture as well as beautiful scenery. Thanks to your generous help, I do believe that I have a better understanding of your country and culture. What’s more, I learned some Chinese songs with your help.
I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness. I will show you around my country.
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Jim
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点中的关键信息，写感谢信感谢李华的帮助并邀请他到自己的国家。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明写信的目的是表示感谢；
第二步，回忆自己的收获；
第三步，邀请对方到自己的国家。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest 名胜古迹
②thanks to 多亏了
[高分句型]
①I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in your country, without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed it so much.（“介词+which”引导定语从句）
②I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness.（if引导的条件状语从句）
12．（2023·河南焦作·统考一模）假设你是某校初三学生李华，你的英国朋友Lucy在给你的邮件中提到她对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你根据以下要点和要求，给Lucy写封回信。
1. 要点：1）该人物是谁；
2）该人物的主要事迹；
3）该人物对你的影响。
2. 要求：1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2）词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Lucy,
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Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Lucy,
    It’s a great pleasure to know that you take an interest in Chinese history, and I just can’t wait to share my favorite historical figure with you!
    Li Shizhen, a scholar and doctor of the Ming dynasty, is one of the most influential figures in China’s medical community. His famous book, Bencao Gangmu, which cost him years of effort, has been regarded as the most complete and comprehensive medical work in the history of Chinese medicine. It is the very book that has lifted Chinese medicine science to a new level. Hadn’t it been for his work, many previous errors wouldn’t have been corrected and many more people’s lives could have been saved.
    What impressed me most are this immortal’s perseverance and kindness shown in his career. Encouraged by him, I’m determined to work harder for my dream.
    Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.                                                                        
Yours,
                                                                         Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为介绍信。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，同学们应注意结合要点主要在要点二增添细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。表明很高兴Lucy对中国历史感兴趣，并直接点出想要介绍的历史人物为李时珍。
第二步，具体介绍李时珍具体事迹。首先进行身份介绍，其次从他的两点主要贡献入手进行详细介绍。
第三步，书写结语。总结李时珍对我的激励作用。
[亮点词汇]
① take an interest in 对……感兴趣
② the most influential figures 最有影响力的人物
③ cost him years of effort 花费了他多年的努力
④ perseverance 坚持
[高分句型]
① His famous book, Bencao Gangmu, which cost him years of effort, has been regarded as the most complete and comprehensive medical work in the history of Chinese medicine. （which引导非限制性定语从句）
② Hadn’t it been for his work, many previous errors wouldn't have been corrected and many more people’s lives could have been saved. （对过去情况进行虚拟）
③ What impressed me most are this immortal’s perseverance and kindness shown in his career. （what引导主语从句）

四、讲稿
13．（2023·江苏无锡·江苏省锡山高级中学实验学校校考一模）伟大音乐家贝多芬说：“涓滴之水终可以磨损大石，不是由于它力量强大，而是由于昼夜不舍的滴坠。”坚持做好一件事情，成就更好自己，请根据下图提示，以“One Thing I Keep Doing”为题，用英语写一篇发言稿，参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。

注意事项：
1. 短文须根据思维导图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.省略号部分必须用适当信息补充完整；
3.词数在100个左右，短文开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4.短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息：
参考词汇：call on号召
Good morning, everyone!
I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic is “One Thing I Keep Doing”.
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That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【答案】例文：
Good morning, everyone!
I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic is “One Thing I Keep Doing”.
As we know, what we keep doing every day is very important for us to achieve our goals. That’s why I keep reading every day no matter how busy I am. I usually spend about one hour a day reading my favorite books and I often share what I read with my friends. Honestly speaking, reading not only brings me knowledge, but also teaches me how to get on well with others and how to be a better person.
Keeping reading helps me open my eyes to the outside world. The more I read, the wiser I will be.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇英文演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出提示，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中关于“坚持做好一件事情，成就更好的自己”的相关内容，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点，句子语法要正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“演讲”来直接引出重点介绍的话题，表明“我”坚持的事情是每天阅读；
第二步，具体描述演讲内容。从“坚持阅读的理由、阅读带来的影响等”几个方面介绍“我”每天坚持阅读的原因及益处；
第三步，书写结语。表达感谢聆听。
[亮点词汇]
①make a speech演讲
②keep doing坚持做某事
③no matter不管
④share ... with与……分享
⑤not only ... but also不仅……而且
[高分句型]
①As we know, what we keep doing every day is very important for us to achieve our goals.（what引导的主语从句）
②That’s why I keep reading every day no matter how busy I am.（why引导的表语从句）
③The more I read, the wiser I will be.（the+比较级，the+比较级）