第12斩 单元话题满分写作精练精析20篇-七年级英语下学期期末复习挑战满分百题斩（牛津译林版）

这是一份第12斩 单元话题满分写作精练精析20篇-七年级英语下学期期末复习挑战满分百题斩（牛津译林版），共26页。试卷主要包含了你的笔友Amy想要来你家乡参观，招募学生志愿者，要求如下等内容，欢迎下载使用。

七年级英语下学期期末复习挑战满分百题斩（牛津译林版）
第12斩 单元话题满分写作精练精析20篇
1．（2021·江苏徐州·七年级期中）China Daily报社正在举行题为“My Dream Home”的征文活动，请根据下面的思维导图描述你的梦想家园。要求必须包括所有要点提示，并作适当发挥；词数：80词左右；不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
Where is it?
What’s around it?
What’s in it?
What can you do in it?
My Dream Home
What are your neighbours like?
(Give an example)
How far is it from the city centre?
How can people get there?

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2．（2022·河南平顶山·七年级期中）家是温馨的港湾，你理想的家是什么样子？请以My Ideal Home为题目写一篇短文。
要点：1.周围环境如何?
2.家中家具有哪些?
3.家庭成员的关系如何?
要求：1.70词左右，可适当发挥。
2.请将答案写在答题卡相应的位置上。
My Ideal Home
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3．（2021·江苏·镇江市外国语学校七年级单元测试）请根据以下提示，以“My Neighborhood”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍你的社区情况。
提示：
1. 不大，但非常漂亮；
2. 有个大型游泳池，我每周游泳两次；a big swimming pool        twice a week
3. 有个篮球场，经常举办篮球比赛； have basketball matches
4. 有个大型购物中心，可以买到各种各样的东西； many kinds of things
5. 人们很友好，彼此相互帮助。be friendly to each other
My Neighborhood
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4．俗话说“远亲不如近邻”, 邻居对我们的生活非常重要。请你根据下面的提示, 以“My Neighbour”为题，写一篇作文。要点如下：
1. 我是Jim，我有一个新邻居叫Peter。我和他住同一栋楼，他住在五楼。
2. 他是一名导游 (tour guide)，他喜欢带领游客游览不同的城市。在未来，他打算环游世界；
3. 他非常乐于助人，当人们遇到各种问题时，都向他求助；
4. 我的感受……(2-3句)
5．（2022·江苏·江阴市教师发展中心七年级期中）你的笔友Amy想要来你家乡参观。请你按照下面提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的文章，向她介绍你的家乡。
要点：
1.我的家乡是一个离江阴不远的小镇。每天都有去市中心的公交车。
2.当地人乐意随时帮助别人，一些人可以帮忙设计家，另一些人可以帮忙修理洗衣机或者冰箱。
3.沿着街道走，在第二个十字路口，有一个美丽的公园，公园里鸟语花香，我们……
4.每年有许多游客来参观我的家乡。我期盼着……
要求：
1.文章内容必须包括所有要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，词数在80个左右。
2. 对第3, 4要点的省略号部分作1—2句话的合理发挥；
3.作文内容必须写在答题卷指定的位置，写在试卷上其他位置无效。
Hi, Amy, I’m glad to hear that you like my hometown.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

6．根据下面的提示以"Amazing animals"为题写一篇短文。词数在80左右。
1.世界上最大的动物不是大象，是蓝鲸(blue whale) ;
2.世界上最大的动物在海洋里，但不是鱼;
3.它们很久以前就生活在地球上;
3.它们通常有30米长，重1000千克。
4.它们是世界上最聪明的动物之一，它们可以相互交谈。当然，我们是听不懂的。
Amazing animals





7．（2021·江苏·镇江第一外国语学校七年级单元测试）假设你是李雷，今天早上，你们班去参观了神奇博物馆(Amazing Museum)。回来后，你写了一篇文章记叙这次神奇之旅。旅游经过及感受如下：
1. 早上8点，在校门口集合，乘公共汽车前往神奇博物馆。
2. 在神奇博物馆，你了解了很多神奇的事情，知道了谁发明了电视，了解了三明治的历史。导游向你们介绍了一些神奇的动物，如：金鱼记事情只有三秒钟，大象靠脚趾走路。
3. 你们玩得非常快乐。你感觉这个世界真是太神奇了。
要求：
1. 注意人称和时态。
2. 不要逐字翻译，词数80左右。
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8．
请根据下面表格提示，以“A camp”为题写一篇英语短文。介绍三班上周野营的相关情况。
要求：
1. 短文应包括表格提示的所有内容，可适当发挥；
2. 词数60词左右。
参加人员
三班的全体师生
活动内容
去黄山旅游并野营，自带食品和饮料
出发时间
上星期六早晨7:30
集合地点
学校门口
交通工具
公交车
感受
......

A camp
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9．（2021·山东济南·七年级期中）       五一劳动节之际，儿童之家（Children’s Home）招募学生志愿者，要求如下：
1. 擅长唱歌；2. 会一门乐器；3.周末有空，可以教小朋友英语，和他们做游戏。
假如你是本校初一学生李华，想去当一名志愿者，请根据招聘要求写一封自荐信。
要求：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可进行适当发挥；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇：志愿者volunteer
Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua. I want to be a volunteer at the Children’s Home. __________________________
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       Thank you for your reading.
Yours,
Li Hua

10．（2021·山东青岛·七年级期末）近日西双版纳（Xishuangbanna）象群北迁引发广泛关注，请写一下你对这一事情的看法。

要点及关键词
大象的基本情况
What elephants look like and what they usually eat?
Where they come from?
事情进展
How they are moving?
Where they are going?
起因猜测
Maybe, be short of, in danger…
我的想法
What we can do:
1. Be friends
2. Guide them to go home
…

要求：1. 词数：70（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
2. 文章需包含以上表格中的要点，并可适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。Elephants are the biggest animals on land. They ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

11．你的远方朋友Kathy想从北京到你所在的海滨城市玩几天。
请根据以下要点给她写一封信，告诉她怎样到你家等内容。
1.出火车站乘9路公交车至迎宾路社区；
2.你家在社区中心，即在公交站后边；
3.你家离大海不远，可以每天步行去那儿。
注意：
1.可以适当增加细节；
2.词数：80词左右，短文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Kathy，
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Yours,
Sue

12．本周日是你的15岁生日，你想邀请你的同学们来参加你的生日聚会。请你写一封80个词左右的邀请信，信中必须说明到达你家的路线。要点如下：
1.时间：本周日中午12：00开始。地点：你家。
内容：聚餐、唱歌、跳舞等各类活动。
2.路线：走出校门，向右拐，一直往前走，在第三个路口向左转。经过中国银行并穿过人民路，在路的左边有一幢高楼，你家就在504室。
Dear friends,
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Yours,
Jim

13．（2021·山东·乳山市教学研究中心七年级期中）某国际文化交流中心将于5月份组织一些英、美学生来乳山学习、交流，现正在招募志愿者。假如你是第一中学的李明，请根据以下内容提示给该项目负责人Mr. White写一封申请信，要求做一名志愿者。
内容包括：
1)       Why do you want to be a volunteer(志愿者) in this program?
2)       What volunteer job did you do in the past?
3)       When can you do the volunteer job?
4)       What will you do if you become a volunteer?
要求：   
1. 不得在作文中出现真实的学校信息和学生的真实姓名及班级等。
2. 语篇连贯，80词左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. White,
I’m Li Ming from No. 1 Middle School. I want to help out as a volunteer in your program. _________
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
                                                                                            Yours,
                                                                                            Li Ming

14．（2021·广西·崇左市江州区教研室七年级期末）市运动会将要举行，你们学校举行了志愿者推荐活动。假设你是Tom，想推荐Peter为市运动会志愿者(a volunteer of City Games)。请你根据下列要点提示，用英语写一封推荐信。
要点及提示词：
1. 各门功课学得很好，英语很突出，对我们的城市很了解。（do well in, all the subjects, know...well）
2. 喜欢运动，身体强壮。（sports, strong）
3. 对人友好，乐于助人，总是先想到他人（至少举一个例子）。（kind and helpful, think of others first）
4. 其他优势（至少一点）。
要求：
1. 推荐信的内容必须包含所给的全部要点，还可以适当发挥；
2. 60词左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’d like to recommend Peter as a volunteer of City Games.
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Yours faithfully,
Tom

15．（2021·广东·深圳市高级中学七年级期中）如今，很多家庭都养着一只宠物狗。你也想养一只，但你妈妈不同意，说养狗不卫生，而且还会耽误你学习。请根据下面的要点写一封信，尝试说服你妈妈同意让你养狗。
要求 ：80 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数，可适当扩展。
内容提示：
1 . 自拟养狗的两个好处。
2 . 你会每天给狗狗洗澡，保持清洁。
3 . 不会让狗狗影响你学习，保证完成作业后才会和狗狗玩耍。
Dear Mum,
I really want to keep a dog. ____________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Jack

16．（2022·山东青岛·七年级期末）假如你是李华，你正在参观青岛动物园，你看到很多动物，也看到了自己最喜欢的动物。写一封信给你的朋友Peter向他介绍你的参观以及你最喜欢的动物。内容包括：
你看到的动物：
老虎，狮子，大象，猴子，长颈鹿……

动物们正在做什么：
玩耍，睡觉，喝水……
你最喜欢的动物：
1.Why do you like it ?
2.What does it look like?
3.What can it do?
4.…

要求：1.内容必须包括上述要点，可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数80词左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。)
Dear Peter,
How are you? I am having a trip in Qingdao Zoo. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua

17．（2021·云南省昆明市官渡区教师进修学校七年级期末）My Favorite Animal
近期从西双版纳一路“象”北的亚洲野生象群引起了全世界的关注。你一定也见过很多种动物，你了解他们的习性和特长吗？请以“My Favorite Animal”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你最喜欢的动物以及保护（protect）它们的方法。
要求：1. 紧扣主题、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
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18．（2021·江苏·镇江市外国语学校七年级单元测试）假如你叫张华，今天是星期六，你和同学们一起去森林公园郊游，在那里度过了快乐的时光。请根据提示内容，用英语写一篇日记，70词左右。
要点：
1.天气；
2.目的地；
3.出行方式；
4.活动包括野餐、放风筝、爬山等；
5.自己的感受。
Saturday
I had a good time today. ______________________________________________________________
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19．（2021·广东·广州市白云区培英实验学校七年级阶段练习）假如你是李华，是广州某中学的学生会主席，你代表学校准备接待一群来广州旅游的美国中学生，并向他们介绍广州，请根据以下提示完成你的发言稿。内容包括：
1. 广州是一个很美丽的城市，被人们称为花城；
2. 广州有很多的名胜，比如广州塔，陈家祠；
3. 如果喜欢购物，也可以去北京路；同时可以吃到很多美味的点心；
4. 你对广州的印象。
5. 必须包含所给的提示，并作适当发挥。
Canton Tower, Chen Clan Academy, dim sum（点心）
作文要求：
1. 不得在作文中出现真实人，名校名或地名，
2. 语言连贯，字数80个左右，发言稿的开头已经给出不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
Welcome to Guangzhou! _____________________________________________________________
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20．（2021·江苏·镇江市第三中学七年级单元测试）假设你所生活的小区将在这周末举行一个互帮互助的活动，为社区居民提供一些便民服务。请你根据所学内容并适当发挥想象，帮助社区中心写一篇80词的英语书面通知。通知的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入要求词数。
Notice
We are going to have an activity called “Helping each other” at the community centre this Saturday afternoon. _____________________________________________________________________________
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Everyone is welcome!
Community Centre
January 21, 2016


参考答案：
1．
My Dream Home
My dream home is a big house at the foot of a hill. There are many trees and flowers around it. Every day, I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. It is far from the city center so people can take a bus or drive there.
There are two floors in my house. On the ground floor, there is a kitchen and a house cinema. I can have meals and watch films at the same time. On the first floor, there are six rooms. My friends can come and stay with me together at the weekend. I have many neighbours and they are friendly and helpful. They often help me with my housework.
This is my dream home. It is a good place to enjoy life.
【解析】
1. 题干解读：本文属于材料作文写作；写作时按说明文的格式来写。根据题目要求可知，这篇文章要包括至少四个要点：一、地理位置，周边环境；二、内部设施，活动内容；三、邻里关系；四、离市中心多远，如果邀请朋友来，他们来的交通方式是什么。
2. 写作指导：本文采用第一人称描写我拥有的事物和所做的事情，用第三人称描述其他事物；文章主要采用一般现在时。写作时，按照题干要点可分成三部分来写。第一部分：开篇点题，介绍我梦想中的家，包括地理位置，周边环境以及交通方式。第二部分：介绍房子的内部设施及日常活动内容以及邻里关系。第三部分：总结全文，再次点题说明我梦想中的家是一个好地方。

2．例文
My Ideal Home
My ideal home is in the country. My mother and sister like flowers. So I hope there is a beautiful garden around my house. There are lots of flowers in it. I can help them water flowers. After supper, our family can have a walk or do some sports there.
There is a big study in my home. When I am free, I read books with my family in it. There is a computer in my study, It can help me study.
We are a happy family!
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我的理想家”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。分为三段式：第一段介绍自己理想之家的周围环境；第二段介绍理想之家的家具有哪些；最后一段介绍自己有一个幸福之家。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

3．One possible version:
My Neighbourhood
My neighbourhood is not very big but beautiful. There is a swimming pool. I go swimming twice a week. There is a basketball court. We often have basketball matches there. There is also a large shopping mall. We can buy different kinds of things there. People here are very friendly. They often help each other. Welcome to my neighbourhood.
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于材料文写作，根据题干所给的社区情况，结合提示词进行描述；保证内容完整，条理清晰。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称为主；时态采用一般现在时为主，在写作时可写成一个段落，但是要分清层次；第一个层次总述社区情况；第二层次描述社区的游泳池、篮球场和购物中心；第三个层次描述社区的邻居都很友好，欢迎大家来社区。

4．范文：
My Neighbour
As the saying goes "A neighbor is better than a distant relative". Neighbors are very important in our lives.
I am Jim. I live in Sunshine Community. I have a new neighbour, Peter. We live in the same building. He lives on the fifth floor. He is a tour guide. He likes showing visitors around different cities. He is going to travel around the world in the future. He works hard. He is kind-hearted and ready to help others. When people are in trouble, they usually ask him for help. Everyone in our neighbourhood likes him. So we are lucky to have a nice neighbour.
I think we should help each other in our neighbourhood. I like our neighbors.
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时要根据汉语提示的内容来介绍自己的新邻居，包括名字、住所、职业、爱好、性格等方面，最后再写出自己的感受。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称为主来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时。在介绍时，力求语言准确，内容完整，行文连贯，保证条理清晰。

5．例文：
Hi, Amy, I’m glad to hear that you like my hometown. My hometown is a town not far away from Jiangyin. There are buses to the city center every day. Local people are ready to help others at any time. Some people can help design homes, others can help fix washing machines or fridges. Walk along the street. At the second crossing, there is a beautiful park. We can smell the flowers and hear the birds. We can row boats on the lake and fly kites. Every year, many visitors come to my hometown. I look forward to showing you around my hometown some day.
【解析】
1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，要求根据内容提示向笔友Amy介绍自己的家乡，学生需要围绕题目所给的四点提示从不同的方面展开介绍。必须要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时使用第一人称和第三人称，时态采用一般现在时。正文根据提示内容逐步展开介绍，并对第三第四点进行适当补充，同时注意选用合适的连词、短语和句型来将内容进行串联和拓展；文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。

6．One possible version
Amazing animals
     Elephants are not the biggest animals in the world. The world's biggest animals are in the sea-but not fish. They lived on the earth a long time ago.   They're usually 30 metres long and 1，000 kilos heavy. They're one of the cleverest animals in the world.   They can talk to each other, but people don't know what they are saying. What are they? They're called blue whales.
【解析】
【详解】
本文叙述了世界上最大的动物是蓝鲸，所以句子的主语应该用第三人称，叙述蓝鲸现在的情况用一般现在时，叙述它们过去住在陆地上应该用一般过去时。短文用了一些短语和句式，如：one of the cleverest animals in the world世界上最聪明的动物之一；talk to sb给某人交谈；用了what引导的宾语从句，增加了文章的亮点。

7．One possible version:
We went to Amazing Museum by bus at eight this morning. We met at the school gate.
In the Amazing Museum, we learned about many amazing things. We knew who invented TV. We also learned about the history of sandwich. The guide introduced some amazing things to us. For example, the goldfish can only remember things in three seconds. Elephants walks on tiptoe.
We had a good time in it. I think the world is full of amazing things.
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，要求根据题目所给旅游经过和感受，写一篇短文。保证内容完整，条理清晰，不要逐字翻译。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主；时态采用一般过去时为主，在写作时第一段描述出发的时间地点以及目的地；第二段描写旅游经过；第三段描述自己的感受。

8．
A camp
Last week, all the teachers and students of Class 3 visited Mount Huang to go camping. They took some food and drinks with them. They met at the school gate. At 7:30 last Saturday morning they set out and then they went to Mount Huang by bus. They climbed mountain and saw the cloud sea, enjoyed delicious food there. They all thought Mountain Huang was beautiful and they had a good time. They hope they can go there again.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，也是话题作文，以“A camp”为题写一篇英语短文。介绍三班上周野营的相关情况。首先认真审题，认真阅读提示内容。根据内容提示，可知此文时态应用一般过去时。动笔前要认真阅读材料，列好提纲，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。要注意主谓一致，不规则动词的过去式等细节问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写，语法错误（时态，主谓一致等）。（一）列提纲：Last week, all the teachers and students of Class 3, visited Mount Huang to go camping, took some food and drinks with them, met at the school gate, set out at 7:30 last Saturday morning ,by bus, climbed mountain and saw the cloud sea, enjoyed delicious food, had a good time.（二）连词成句，连句成篇。（三）再次阅读，检查是否有语法拼写错误。
点睛：（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。（2）根据内容确定短文时态，学生要运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型。（3）列好提纲和要点，及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用。   （5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等。

9．例文：
Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua. I want to be a volunteer at the Children’s Home. I am a student in grade one of junior middle school. I think I have all the qualities to be a qualified volunteer.
Firstly, I’m good at singing. Once I won the first prize in a singing competition. Secondly, I have learned to play the piano for five years, so I can play it well. Thirdly, I’m free on weekends. I think I can teach children English and play games with them.
I really hope to be a member of the volunteers at the Children’s Home, because helping others is meaningful to me.     
Thank you for your reading.
   Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读：本篇书面表达属于材料作文。要求以李华的身份写一封自荐信，应聘儿童之家的学生志愿者。内容要根据三点招聘要求展开，写作者在此基础上对每个招聘要求再进行合理地拓展，把文章写得更具体、更充实。
2.写作指导：写作时应注意以下几点：第一点：写作时应以一般现在时、第一人称为主，结合内容正确使用其他时态。注意格式规范，符合作文的语境表达。第二点：写作时要承接开头，内容要包含题目所给的提示内容，并在此基础上选用合适的连词，短语和句型来进行串联和拓展。第三点：文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。

10．例文
Elephants are the biggest animals on land. They’re heavy with long noses. They usually eat leaves and vegetables. These elephants from Xishuangbanna are moving slowly to the north. Why? Maybe their hometown is short of their food, and they are in danger.
Elephants are our friends, so we need to do something to help them. First, stay away from them to make sure both elephants and humans are safe. Second, we can guide them to go home by giving them food.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文主要针对象群北迁这一事情发表自己的看法，表格中给出了写作的细节要点，写作时可根据这些要点进行写作，也可适当增加细节，使文章更加流畅。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。第一段主要介绍大象的基本情况以及象群北迁的现象和起因；第二段讲述我们应该做的事情。写作时运用不同的句式和连接词使文章层次清晰，逻辑清楚。做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

11．例文Dear Kathy
Welcome to my hometown! Now I am happy to tell you the way to my house. After you come out of the train station，you can take the Number 9 bus to Yingbin Road Community. My home is in the centre of the community. It’s behind the bus stop. You can't miss it. By the way, my home is not far from the sea. So we can walk there every day. The sea is very beautiful. I think you will have a great time here.
Yours，
Sue
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，写信告诉Kathy怎样到我家。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Now I am happy to…，My home is…，I think…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头欢迎Kathy来我的家乡，接下来介绍怎样到我家，最后祝愿她在这里玩得高兴。此处the way to, come out of, in the centre of, by the way, have a great time等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

12．Dear friends，
This Sunday is my 15th birthday. Could you come to my party? I plan to have the party at home. It will begin at 12 o’clock this Sunday noon. We can have dinner, sing and dance. Of course, you can do many other things.
Now, let me tell you the way to my home.
First, go out of the school. Then turn right and go along the street all the time. When you see the third turning, turn left. Walk past Bank of China, and go along Renming Street. There is a high building on the left side of the street. My home is Room 504.
Yours
Jim
【解析】
这是一篇书信作文，根据材料中的相关信息写一封邀请信。所提供的材料中列举了到达你家的路线。主要从1. 时间：本周日中午12：00开始。地点：你家。内容：聚餐、唱歌、跳舞等各类活动。 2. 路线：走出校门，向右拐，一直往前走，在第三个路口向左转。经过中国银行并穿过人民路，在路的左边有一幢高楼，你家就在504室。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
When you see the third turning, turn left. 当你看到第三个转弯处时，向左转。
句子When you see the third turning是由when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
There is a high building on the left side of the street. 这条街左边有一座高楼。
该句话用there be结构来写的。

13．例文
Dear Mr. White,
I’m Li Ming from No. 1 Middle School. I want to help out as a volunteer in your program. Because I want to improve my English. Last year, I was a volunteer in the after-reading program. I helped children read after school. I had a good time there. Though I was tired, I was happy to be with children. At the same time, I learned a lot from reading. I can do this volunteer job on weekends. I will show them around our city. I will also help prepare for a welcoming party. I think I will do a good job.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
                                                                                            Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示问题，申请做志愿者。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般过去时和一般将来时。作文要分别介绍为什么想做志愿者，是否做过志愿者，什么时间方便以及成为一名志愿者会做什么。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

14．参考例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’d like to recommend Peter as a volunteer of City Games.
Peter does very well in all the subjects. He’s good at English and knows our city very well. He likes sports and looks big and strong. He’s also very kind and helpful. He always thinks of others first. One day, he met a boy on the playground. The boy was very sad because he lost his pen. Peter gave his to the boy and said nothing.
Peter has some skills about sports meeting because he took part in the last City Games.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours faitfully,
Tom
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求介绍Peter的情况，推荐他为市运动会志愿者。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时。分为四段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段介绍Peter的爱好和性格以及他的善行义举；第三段介绍他的其他优势；最后一段表达期待回信。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

15．例文
Dear Mum,
I really want to keep a dog. If I have a dog, I will give my dog a bath and keep it very clean every day. I’m sure I won’t let it do anything harmful to my study. I won’t play with it before I finish my homework. I think I can learn how to take care of others by keeping a dog. I can also exercise more by walking the dog every day. Please allow me to have a dog at home.
Yours
Jack
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据要点提示写一封信让妈妈同意养狗。
2.写作指导：本文是一般现在时。本文要介绍养狗的好处，并承诺养狗之后自己会如何做。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
16．例文：
Dear Peter,
How are you? I am having a trip in Qingdao Zoo. There are many kinds of animals here. They’re tigers, lions, elephants, monkeys, giraffes and so on. Let me tell you what they are doing now. Tigers are playing. Lions are sleeping and elephants are drinking water. Among them, I like elephants best. Because they are smart and helpful. They have a long nose and two big ears. They can do many things. They can play soccer or music. They can even draw.
What about you? What is your favorite animal? Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读：本题要求以李华的口吻写一封邮件给好友Peter，内容是关于他正在进行的动物园之旅中的见闻。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述文章内容；需要注意，题干中提到“正在参观”，故在时态采用现在进行时为主，用一般现在时表达个人感受和动物的基本能力；题目中给出的要点需要全部包含在内，注意不要遗漏，同时也要围绕主题进行自由发挥；最后，邮件写作需要注意基本格式是否符合规范以及语言是否符合英文表达习惯。

17．
My Favorite Animal
My favorite animal is a dog. I like it very much. Because it is not only very lovely, but also very helpful. It is white and small. It lives in my brother’s home. Sometimes I take it to a park for a walk. And I give it some food. At the weekend, I’ll help it take a bath. This is my favorite animal—a beautiful and lovely dog.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“My Favorite Animal”为题，写一篇作文关于自己最喜欢的动物。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。介绍自己最喜欢的动物时，还需要介绍保护它们的方法。注意语句要通顺，无标点和语法错误。

18．One possible version:
Saturday
I had a good time today. It was fine, and I got to school very early. My classmates and I took a special bus to Forest Park at 8:30. When we got there, we were very excited. The mountain was so beautiful. We could see flowers and grass here and there. The air was so fresh. The birds were singing happily. We flew kites and climbed the mountain there. At noon, we had a picnic together. Everyone took out delicious food and drinks to share. Then we danced and sang for a long time. Certainly we also took many pictures together. We all enjoyed the nature and felt very happy.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇日记。要求根据提示内容，介绍自己星期六的活动。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般过去时。日记要分别介绍天气、目的地、出行方式、活动以及感受。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

19．例文：
Dear friends,
Welcome to Guangzhou! Guangzhou is a beautiful city, and it is also called the Flower City. There are many places of interest in Guangzhou, such as Canton Tower and Chen Clan Academy. You can enjoy the whole view of Guangzhou at the top of Canton Tower. If you like shopping, you can also go to Beijing Road. You can eat lots of delicious dim sum at the same time.
Guangzhou is developing quickly these years. I like it very much. I hope you can have a good time in Guangzhou.
【解析】
1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示内容写一篇发言稿，向来旅游的美国学生介绍广州。要包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要结合具体的语境选择合适的人称，时态采用一般现在时为主。文章可分为两段式：第一段介绍广州，第二段讲自己对广州的印象并祝美国学生在广州玩得开心。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
20．One possible version:
Notice
We are going to have an activity called “Helping each other” at the community centre this Saturday afternoon.
Some volunteers will come here and help us with some problems. Mr. Zhang and Mr. Wang are good engineers. If there is something wrong with your broken TV sets, computers or fridges, you can ask them for help. Miss Yang, a good English teacher, will give children a talk on how to study English well.
There are also some doctors from the community hospital. They will help us with our health problems.
It will begin at 9:00 a.m.
Everyone is welcome!
Community Centre
January 21, 2016
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一则通知。要求结合给出的开头和结尾，根据提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态以一般将来时为主。作文要分别介绍活动的时间、内容和志愿者会分别来帮忙做什么。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。