08 短文改错（全国卷专用）20篇——2022-2023学年高一年级英语下学期期末考试真题汇编（全国通用）

专题08 短文改错20篇

1．（2022秋·甘肃定西·高一定西市第一中学校考期末）

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Alice is my best friend, that is a hardworking and caring girl. She devotes many energy to her lessons. She is always one of the top student in our class. She loves music so very much that she made it a rule to enjoy songs in her spare time. Alice is always helping others, and she often helps us with our lessons. Like a volunteer, she has successful organized some voluntary activities. We paid a visit a nursing home last month, so we picked up rubbish near our school. That we did was warmly welcomed. Win honor for our school, Alice is well known to our classmates.

2．（2022春·陕西西安·高一西安市第八十九中学校考期末）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文章共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、剧除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(人)并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横钱，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

1.每处错误及其修改词均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从11 处起)不记分。

Last Friday, the evening fell, but my paremts hadn't come back home yet. I stopped doing my homework but decided to make a meal for my family instead of just wait. It was my first cooking. I went online to find information on how cook home-style dishes. With the step-by-step direction, I managed to make a dish. Then I tried to cook other. When my parents got home, they were amazed to see the taste dishes I made. Immediately my mum took pictures for them and my dad gave me a big hug. I real enjoyed a meal that evening.

3．（2022春·四川资阳·高一统考期末）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

One year ago, I was in great trouble. I work hard at English and devoted all my spare time to practise it. But I failed to pass the mid-term exam, which made me great disappointed. So I asked my grandpa for suggestions when I got to home. Hear what I told him, he said, “Exam results are sometime unexpected. You can’t judge your progress by one examination.” He encouraged myself to work hard for long time to check my results. I took my grandpa’s advices. Now I realize that the process of learning is more important and my English is good than before. From my experience, I feel that we should listen to opinions from old people.

4．（2022春·陕西榆林·高一校考期末）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The Moments section of WeChat has become the popular part of the social networking platform. We can share everything about your life on it with our friend. Many teenagers, however, chose to keep their parents out their Moments. They argue that if their parents get involved, and they will feel upset. As far as I am concerning, I feel happily when my parents comment on my posts in my Moments. It shows their love and care for me. What’s more, shut them off may make the generation gap bigger and bigger, while inviting them in would helping us communicate better and feel closer to each other than before.

5．（2022春·陕西榆林·高一榆林市第一中学校考期末）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Our school is going to organize the students to take part a social practice activity next Saturday, when we think is interesting and instructive. The purpose is to helping our students realize the value of labor and experience the happiness of harvesting food. But we are planning to pick apples on a farm located in the suburb of our city. We will set off at 8:30 a.m. at the school gate and go by a bus. Upon arrive, a farmer will show us how to pick apples and stay safely. We will have a picnic lunch here and return at 4:00 p.m. We’ll wear a hat to protect yourself from the sun. We are supposing to bring a picnic lunch.

6．（2022春·河南信阳·高一统考期末）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Many teachers are talking about the importance of the after-class activity, that is believed to bring more creativity to the class. Actually, the traditional class pays much attention to the knowledges from the books all the time, and it is easy let students feel bored. As a result, every student is so exciting about the PE class, so they can enjoy the freedom in it. The after-class activity offers students in a different way to broaden their mind and inspire their creativity. Students feeling relaxed and can think in an actively way. Many great people get his idea from nature, so if teachers wanted to improve students’ interest, the good learning place should not be limited in the classroom.

7．（2022春·陕西西安·高一西安中学校考期末）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

No body language can be attractive than smiling. Not only can a beautiful smile makes us happy, but also it enables us to feel delighted. Sometimes a smile is too powerful that it gives people suffered from disasters great courage.

A little boy called Lang Zheng, for example, impressed and encouraged a plenty of people when a serious earthquake happened in Wenchuan. Right after he is rescued by the soldiers from the ruin, he saluted and smiled to them. Her smile was like sunshine, that warmed people who were in sorrow.

It is safe to say that without smiles, our life would be colorless and difficult. Smile now, or you will find that life is full of wonders.

8．（2022春·陕西渭南·高一统考期末）

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（—），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

There is a tradition in my family. On New Year's Eve, all my relative will come to our house for the feast. As matter of fact, it isn't the food that bring us together but the sense of belonging does. Making dumplings was always of great fun. We put a coin into one of the dumplings. Everybody expects to eat the one with the coin inside, because it is said that whomever gets the coin will have good fortune in the followed year. When my mom serves the dumplings, we help us immediately, hoping to get the good luck of our entirely year. The coin never comes to me and I am pretty sure of that the luck is always there.

9．（2022春·陕西西安·高一统考期末）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I was six years old, my grandpa brought home colorful schoolbag for me. I carry the new bag on his shoulders for an hour. When I put it on the table, I heard of a loud sound from the inside. I searched every corner when something might hide, eventually see a little toy car and a red fish. Today my tiny red fish are unable to swim in water anymore. The toy car can't moved in funny circles, either. And I can still feel the great joy of receiving the gifts in the schoolbag. Thank you, Grandpa, for bringing me so an impressive memory!

10．（2022春·陕西汉中·高一统考期末）

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

You cannot imagined how excited we were, when we had such a precious chance to do some picking on local farm. We have expected it for a long time. The farm, which is about one hour’s drive from our school, cover an area of 6 times the size of our school. We devoted the first 2 hours to collecting tomatoes as well as eggplants but spent another 2 hours gather strawberries. And at dinnertime, the food materials gathered by us became a wonderful meal, much to us surprise. This activity not only enriches our knowledges, but also lets us to get so close to nature. I look forward to enjoying more interested activities in the future.

11．（2022春·四川·高一射洪中学校考期末）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加∶在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除∶把多余的词用斜线（\））划掉。

修改∶在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last summer, I went on the trip to Qingdao, where I stayed for seven days and enjoyed myself. Before leave Qingdao, I went fishing on a beautiful lake. Unlucky, I didn't catch any fishes, and I got boring. I decided to go swimming. When I stood up, my wallet with all my money in fell into the water. I jump into the deep lake to look for it, so I found nothing. The next morning, I wasn't able to leave the hotel because of I had no money to pay for anything. I had no choice but call my parents and asked for help. They sent myself some money by WeChat. How an embarrassing trip!

12．（2022秋·陕西咸阳·高一统考期末）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有1处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Once I was praised because of I did something meaningful with my pocket money. One day, I happened to knowing some students in a far-away school were hungry for knowledges because they didn’t have enough books. I decide to offer my help. With both the pocket money I saved, I bought some books online, and gave it away to the school. My parents were very happily and praised me greatly when they heard about it. They said I did good thing. I believe that every little bit makes a different. I will continue to help those people who is in trouble.

13．（2022春·四川宜宾·高一统考期末）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I went home by bus as usually this afternoon. I was listening music when I suddenly noticed the bus station which I should get off. I hurried off the bus. But on arriving home, I found my wallet losing with several important card and some money in it. Eager to getting the wallet back, I rushed to the bus company for help. Fortunately, at the Lost and Found office, I see my wallet. I felt such excited that I wanted to thank the person who had returned it back. To my surprise, the man hadn’t left his name. How a great man!

14．（2022春·河南安阳·高一统考期末）

My grandmother had been suffering from Alzheimer’s so she lived alone for a long time. She’d moved out with our family when we realized it wasn’t safely for her to live alone. Even if she forgot the names of her grandchildren which she saw daily for almost three years ago, she never forgot about his friend Margaret. She was always eager to share these memory with anyone who would listen. When she seemed a little down, I would encourage her, “Telling me about your best friend Margaret.” She would smile. “We used to get into all sorts difficulties. Did I ever tell you about our double date?” “Why didn’t you tell me now?”

15．（2022春·河南洛阳·高一洛宁县第一高级中学统考期末）

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I travelled to Baiyun Mountain last summer. I went hiking with a couple friends. It was a good trip at the beginning and something unexpected happen on the way. While we were climbing a long flight of stair, one of my friends suddenly felt a terribly pain in his stomach. Luckily we brought a tent with us. We had put up the tent, that he had a good rest. He took some medicine with some water and lying down for a rest. After the while, he felt better and we walked on. We all enjoyed us at the top of the mountain.

16．（2022春·河南平顶山·高一统考期末）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Today I went shopping. I bought lots of eggs, some meat, and vegetable. When I checked out, the owner told me that a total price was 40.1 yuan. He told me to pay off only 40 yuan. After that, he scanned (扫描) my phone but then I left the store. On the way home, I cheeked my payment. It turns out that only 0.1 yuan was charged. I went back the shop at once and asked the owner how many he had charged me. Seeing the puzzling look on his face, I told him he had only charged 0.1 yuan. The owner realized his mistake and he repaid 40 yuan. It was obviously that the owner appreciated my behavior.

17．（2022春·河南安阳·高一统考期末）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I, together with my parents, took the trip to Hangzhou to get relaxing. Shortly after we arrived at there, we went to the West Lake. The scenery there was so beautiful that it simply took their breath away. Then we pay a visit to Xixi National Wetland Park, what is China’s first national wetland park. With its clear water and peaceful environment, it attracts million of tourists from all over the world every year. How an unforgettable trip! Not only did it offer me a chance to get closely to nature, but it also enabled me learn some new knowledge.

18．（2022春·四川成都·高一校联考期末）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last summer, I went the Three Gorges to spend my summer holiday. Although the weather was much hotter than that in my hometown, but I got used to it. Every morning, I got up early and go for breakfast ahead of time. Then I went to visit some interested places with Mary who was my new friend and I came across him on my first morning there. She seemed to be very familiarly with the places and acted for my guide (导游). During the trip, we had great fun and became very good friend. We have kept write to each other since then. How an unforgettable experience it was!

19．（2022春·山西太原·高一统考期末）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last week, an art exhibition held in our school library. I was fascinated by Chinese paintings, which also attract many foreign students. We noticed a vivid painting of a horse what seemed to gallop off the paper! Surprising, it was painted by a eighth grader. All the works were created by the students, who put our spare time into studying art despite of great academic pressure. The art exhibition brought us a lot of fun but helped us better understanding Chinese culture. How an amazing exhibition!

20．（2022秋·河南漯河·高一统考期末）

下面是一段短文，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

How is everything going? I’m going to tell you some good informations. A jogging club has been establishing in our school, which aim is to enrich our after-class life. Since you are crazily about jogging, I’d like to invite you to join in us. Club members met every Friday afternoon for mass learning. Regular courses are provided on how to strengthen body by jogging. And chances are also available for various exchange activities. Unless you are interested, please turn to the Student Union office, which is located at the east end on the five floor of the office building. It opens from 3:00 to 6:30 on weekdays.

I’m looking forward to you quick reply.