06 多彩社团与课外活动中考英语满分作文赏析

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06 多彩社团与课外活动 NO.1 （2022·湖南长沙·中考真题）新学期来了，学生社团又要招新啦！假如你是社团招新工作负责人，请根据以下内容和要求写一篇短文，为同学们介绍社团的情况（包括名称、活动及目的）。要求：（1）介绍下表中第1和第2两个社团，并联系实际或发挥想象，补充介绍第3个社团；（2）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。1. Public SpeakersActivities:practice speaking in public and give speeches; …Purposes:to voice opinions clearly and confidently; to overcome fear and shyness; …2. Cool CooksActivities:design（设计）healthy menus and learn how to cook; …Purposes:to have balanced（均衡的）and healthy eating; to enjoy life; …3. ____Sports____Activities:choose your own favourite sports and do exercise with friends;…Purposes:to keep fit and lose weight; to make more friends;… Clubs Are Calling!The new term is here. Are you ready for an interesting and colorful school life? Now I’d like to introduce some of our clubs.In the club of Public Speakers, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【满分作文赏析】      Clubs Are Calling!The new term is here. Are you ready for an interesting and colorful school life? Now I’d like to introduce some of our clubs.In the club of Public Speakers, you will practice speaking in public and give speeches. The purpose is to voice opinions clearly and confidently. By joining this club, you can overcome your fear and shyness and become more out-going. The Cool Cooks club is really cool. It holds activities such as designing healthy menus and learning how to cook. You can taste different food and develop a balanced and healthy eating habit. It will make your life more enjoyable. If you want to lose weight or just keep fit, the Sports Club is your best choice. There are many kinds of sports in this club. You can choose your own favourite sports and do exercise with friends and other students. So you will make more friends at the same time.You can choose more than one club, depending on your interest and time. I believe these clubs will make your school life full of surprises. Join us now!【解析】1.题干解读：题干要求根据表格中所给的两个社团的信息，并补充第三个社团信息，介绍这三个社团，包括它们的名称、活动内容和目的。2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现时和一般将来时，以第三人称介绍俱乐部。写作时承接所给开头，对三个俱乐部的活动和目的分别进行描述，最后另起一段表达期望并呼吁同学们加入。注意保持主谓的一致性，做到无标点和语法错误。  NO.2 （2022·贵州铜仁·中考真题）你校广播站面向全校学生举办一场以“丰富的课外活动”为主题的英语征文活动。假设你是李华，请撰文投稿，分享学校的课外活动情况及体会。要求：（1）短文必须包括左图所有信息，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。（2）80词左右（文章开头句已给出，不计入总词数）。（3）文章不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。（4）书写正确规范，卷面整洁。提示词：labor practice base（劳动实践基地）digging the land（松土）；respect（尊重）。Colorful After-School ActivitiesI’m Li Hua. Glad to share the colorful after-school activities of our school. In our school, we can choose what we are interested in.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分作文赏析】Colorful After-School ActivitiesI’m Li Hua. Glad to share the colorful after-school activities of our school. In our school, we can choose what we are interested in.If you want to improve your oral English, you can choose English Club. You can learn about how to recite here. If you are good at drawing, you can join Drawing Club. You can also learn about paper-cutting. If you are interested in growing vegetables and planting, you can join Labour Practice. If you want to keep healthy, you can join Sports Club. You can learn how to swim, play football and so on.These after-school activities not only enrich our after-school lives, but also teach us some basic skills.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“丰富的课外活动”写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题，文章开头已给出；第二段根据提示材料介绍学校不同的课外活动，以及参加这些课外活动的好处；最后一段表达自己对这些课外活动的体会。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 NO.3 （2022·四川泸州·中考真题）开展丰富多彩的课外活动对我们很有好处。请以“Free-time Activities”为题，用英语写一篇短文介绍你及朋友们的课外活动开展情况。要点提示： 1. 内容：体育，如跑步；艺术，如唱歌绘画；劳动，如做家务、参加志愿者活动；其它，如阅读……。2. 好处：休息放松，学习新知识，学会新技能，结交新朋友等。3. 个人观点：……。要求： 1. 词数110词左右（首句已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容；3. 不用真实姓名、校名、地名。参考词语： volunteer， relax， knowledge， skillFree-time ActivitiesFree-time activities are good for us teenagers. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分作文赏析】Free-time ActivitiesFree-time activities are good for us teenagers. My friends and I have a variety of free-time activities. First, we often run for an hour on weekends and we always play football after class because we all like playing it. If we have time, we will draw some beautiful pictures to decorate our school. What’s more, we often help our parents do the housework. Even some of us do some volunteer work, such as cleaning the park and visiting the old. And we also read some interesting books and share our ideas together.Free-time activities are beneficial to us. We can not only relax, but also we can learn some knowledge that can’t be learnt in class. Besides, we can learn some skills that are important to our life. The most important is that we can make many friends who have the same interest.In my opinion, we should spare some time to do free-time activities in order to grow up healthily.【解析】1.题干解读：本文以“Free-time Activities”为题，并根据题干中的提示写一篇文章，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段从不同方面介绍自己和朋友的课外活动；第三段介绍课外活动的好处；最后一段发表自己的观点。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。NO.4 （2022·浙江丽水·中考真题）假如你是李明，你的美国朋友David 向你了解暑假社会实践活动的计划，请结合下表内容写一封邮件向他介绍你的计划。Social Practice PlanWhat to doWhy to do so●volunteer to do...●make a survey about...●have a graduation trip to...●…●be helpful...●learn more about...●open one’s eyes...●… 注意：1）文中必须包含至少两项活动的内容要点，可适当发挥；2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；3）词数：80~ 100；邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear David,Glad to share my social practice plan with you._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to your reply. Yours,Li Ming 【满分作文赏析】Dear David,Glad to share my social practice plan with you.As it will be the last summer holiday in junior school, some classmates and I plan to go on a graduation trip to Hangzhou, the capital city of Zhejiang. By enjoying the beautiful scenery and colorful cultures there, we can open our eyes and bring some unforgettable memories. After the trip, I will volunteer to help in our city library, sorting out books, guiding readers to the right bookshelves, and of course, communicating with different people. I’m sure this experience can not only enrich my life but help me understand the true meaning of learning by doing.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一封邮件作文。向David介绍自己的暑假社会实践活动计划。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般将来时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段根据材料提示内容介绍自己的计划；最后一段表达期待对方的回信。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。NO.5 （2022·山东枣庄·中考真题）读下面的文章。请根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结。词数不少于60，不多于80。Do you feel tired of the same everyday life? “Survival(生存) Holidays” is for children to go into the lonely place for exciting activities. About 1,100 schools will take children into the great outdoors without their parents this summer. Why do people like “Survival Holidays”? Because they think being close to nature is good for children. Many children in big cities spend all time watching TV and playing computer games. “Survival Holidays” gives them an important change. Is “Survival Holidays” a wonderful idea? It is. Children will have more free time to play and learn to face danger. They don’t know what to do when they are in danger. Even something like crossing a small river seems to be a hard challenge. Children are not comfortable with danger. Even small danger like getting their feet wet or falling down seems very terrible to them. Many people think the survival activities are good for children. Even years later, they will still remember what they have learned. Some have learned to stay clam in difficult times. Some have learned how to keep safe. Others have learned how to work in a team. All these skills will help them a lot in their lives. 1. What is “Survival Holidays”? 2. Why do people like “Survival Holidays”? 3. Is “Survival Holidays” a wonderful idea? Why or why not? 4. What are the good points of the survival activities? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【满分作文赏析】“Survival Holidays” is for children to go into the lonely place for exciting activities. People like it because they think being close to nature is good for children. It also gives them an important change. “Survival Holidays” is a wonderful idea because children will have more free time to play and learn to face danger. What’s more, they can learn to stay clam, keep safe and work in a team.【解析】1.题干解读：短文主要讲述了人们为什么喜欢“生存假期”以及它的好处。根据问题提示，按照题目要求，概括文章大意。2.写作指导：写作时首先需要阅读全文，理解文章大意，然后根据文章给出的四个问题，在原文中找出对应的内容，最后用自己的话总结出大意。注意上下文连贯，使用适当的连词连接句子，保证语句通顺，无单词语法错误。