09 习惯养成与个人成长 中考英语满分作文赏析

09 习惯养成与个人成长

NO.1

（2022·贵州黔东南·中考真题）每个人都有不同的生活习惯，养成良好的生活习惯能帮助我们拥有健康的体魄和美好的生活。临近毕业，校团委正在向九年级学生征文，请结合自身实际，以How to Develop Good Living Habits为题，从日常起居，卫生习惯，健康饮食，体育锻炼，交通安全等方面进行阐述，写一篇英语短文投稿。

写作要求：

1. 意思连贯，表达准确，书写规范，适当发挥；

2. 文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名及所在地等信息；

3. 词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

How to Develop Good Living Habits

Everyone has different living habits. Good habits can help us keep healthy and have beautiful lives. As teenagers, what should we do?

In my opinion, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【满分作文赏析】

How to Develop Good Living Habits

Everyone has different living habits. Good habits can help us keep healthy and have beautiful lives. As teenagers, what should we do?

In my opinion, everyone should get up and go to bed on time every day. Don’t stay up too late. Everyone should wash hands before meals. Everyone should eat more vegetables and fruit. Don’t eat too much junk food. What’s more, everyone should do exercise. No littering and spitting. It is not allowed to play on the road. When crossing the road, everyone should obey the traffic rules.

In a word, we must develop good living habits so as to keep healthy.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“如何养成良好的生活习惯”为题写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主。分为三段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段从日常起居，卫生习惯，健康饮食，体育锻炼，交通安全等方面进行阐述；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

NO.2

（2022·黑龙江黑龙江·中考真题）转眼间，你已经是一名九年级学生了。你还记得刚升入初中时的自己是什么样子吗？这两年在你身上发生了哪些变化？请以“My changes”为题写一篇英语作文，请你根据下面的要求完成这篇作文。

要求:

1. 写你三个方面的变化，用上used to结构；

2. 紧扣作文题目、语言表达准确、语意通顺连贯；

3. 词数90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）

My changes

I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot. First, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【满分作文赏析】

My changes

I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot. First, I used to be thin, but now I am a little fatter. I used to have curly hair, but now I have short straight hair, because I am busy with my study. Second, I have made much progress in English, I used to be weak in it. But with my English teacher’s help, now I often get good scores on my English exams. What’s more, I’m more outgoing than I used to be. I used to be afraid of speaking in front of people. But now I can give a speech in public. I’ve also made many friends.

These are my changes. What about yours?

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“我的改变”写一篇短文，要求从三个方面描写自己的变化。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。本文分为两段式：第一段从身形，英语学习以及性格方面介绍自己的变化；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

NO.3

（2022·湖南岳阳·中考真题）某英语网站开展关于“How to Improve Myself”的征稿活动，倡导同学们提升自我，努力成为“终生运动者，责任担当者，问题解决者，优雅生活者”，请根据以下图示内容积极投稿。

要求：

1.词数80~100；

2.请根据以上提示信息，结合实际情况叙述，可适当发挥；

3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名；

4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。

How to Improve Myself

Life is really a long lesson, so I have to improve myself.

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【满分作文赏析】

How to Improve Myself

Life is really a long lesson, so I have to improve myself.

First, I need to exercise one hour every day. It is bad to stay at home and play games for a long time. Second, I should be responsible for myself and my family. I should be independent instead of depending on my parents too often. Third, in face of the problems, I have to take up the challenges and work them out rather than run away from them. Next, I will develop my interest in many things, such as playing basketball, and knitting, instead of being interested in nothing. Last but not least, I will communicate with others and be a good team player.

【解析】

1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述运动，责任担当，问题解决和兴趣爱好方面提升自己的方法。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述提升自己的方法，要叙述完整，条理清晰。

NO.4

（2022·吉林·中考真题）随着年龄的增长，青少年需要在生活中不断提高自我管理能力，以便在衣、食、住、行等方面更好地管理自己。请以“Learning to Manage Our Own Lives”为题，用英语写一篇短文。

内容包括：

1.结合实际，谈谈在生活中提高自我管理能力的重要性。

2.列举在生活中自我管理能力薄弱的现象(至少两个)，并提出合理化建议。

3.发出在生活中提高自我管理能力的号召。

写作要求：

1.语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥。

2.词数80-100，开头与结尾部分已经给出，不计入总词数。

3.书写规范，卷面整洁。

4.文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。

Learning to Manage Our Own Lives

These days, we Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

In short, the earlier we manage our own lives, the better it is for our future.

【满分作文赏析】

Learning to Manage Our Own Lives

These days, we Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives. we can’t deal with difficulties by ourselves. So it’s important for us to learn to manage our own lives.

I think our parents should believe in us and never do everything for us. Sometimes it’s OK to give us proper advice and they should allow us to make our own decisions. Also, I think parents should encourage us to face the problems bravely and try to solve them.

For me, I seldom did housework in the past, because I thought it is our parents’ work. This is a wrong opinion. We should learn to do housework like sweeping the floor and taking out the rubbish. I hardly cooked either. When my mother was on business, I realized I must learn to cook by myself. After that, I find that cooking is not as difficult as it seems.

In short, the earlier we manage our own lives, the better it is for our future.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“学习管理我们自己的生活”为题写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。本文分为四段式：第一段引出主题；第二段谈谈在生活中提高自我管理能力的重要性；第三段列举在生活中自我管理能力薄弱的现象；第四段发出在生活中提高自我管理能力的号召。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。