10 理想与未来 中考英语满分作文赏析

10 理想与未来

NO.1

（2022·黑龙江大庆·中考真题）2022年令世人瞩目，在过去的半年里，涌现出了很多为了梦想拼搏奋斗的人物。例如，圆梦航天，胜利返航的神舟十三的3名宇航员；开场失利，永不言弃，最终夺得亚洲杯冠军的中国女足运动员……正是这种对梦想执着追求的精神，使得他们为祖国做出了突出贡献。作为新时代的青少年，你的梦想是什么？请以“My Dream”为题，写一篇短文。

要点：1.你的梦想是什么？

2.原因是什么？

3.为此你会怎么做？

注意：1.词数90左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.文中不允许出现自己的真实姓名和学校。

My Dream

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【满分作文赏析】

My Dream

Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I am very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger. To be a doctor is really good. I think my dream will come true one day.

【解析】

1. 题干解读：本文属于材料作文写作，要求以“My Dream”为题，介绍自己的梦想，以及拥有这个梦想的原因，和为此会做些什么。写作时按说明文的格式来写。

2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来写。写作时，说明“梦想是什么”这一部分应用一般现在时；讲述拥有这个梦想的事件时，应用一般过去时；而在讲述为了实现梦想，“会做什么事”这一部分应用一般将来时。按照题目要求，先介绍“我”的梦想，再讲述拥有这一梦想的事件过程，最后列举为了实现梦想会做的事情并结尾。写作时注意三种时态的正确使用方法。

NO.2

（2022·黑龙江绥化·中考真题）每个人都是独一无二的，都会发出自身特有的光芒。结合自己的爱好、性格和生活经历，以“What I like about myself”为题，并根据写作要点和写作要求，用英语写一篇短文。

写作要点：（1）你喜欢自己的哪些方面；

（2）你喜欢的原因是什么；

写作要求：（1）文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；

（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；

（3）词数不少于80词。（文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数）

What I like about myself

Everyone is special, so am I. What I like about myself is _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【满分作文赏析】

What I like about myself

Everyone is special, so am I. What I like about myself is mainly my healthy life habits and good personality.

To begin with, I have developed healthy life habits. For example, I never stay up so that I can focus in class. Besides, running for half an hour every day helps me keep in good health. What’s more, it’s my personality that enables me to live happily. Being an outgoing girl, I can make friends easily and express my thoughts freely.

What I own has brought me lots of benefits, and I will insist on working hard to make me a better person.

【解析】

1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出喜欢自己的哪些方面以及理由，可以适当发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。

NO.3

（2022·浙江台州·中考真题）毕业之际，学校英文报将举行以“My dream job”为题的征文比赛。请你根据自己的理想，选择下表中一个职业或自行确定另一个职业写一篇英语短文，向校英文报投稿。

注意：(1)文中必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用；(2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；

(3)词数80～100。

My dream job

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【满分作文赏析】

My dream job

We all have dream jobs. As for me, I dream to be a scientist. I have always been interested in science. I want to invent new products to improve people’s life and I also hope to discover the mysteries of the world.

To be a scientist, I need to take actions right now. First, I’m going to study science really hard. Second, I plan to do scientific research. And most importantly, I’ll read as many books as possible. If I become a scientist, I will live in Beijing where I can communicate with more experts. I believe my dream will come true if I work hard.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我梦想的工作”为题写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段介绍自己梦想的工作是什么；第二段介绍自己如何让自己的梦想实现。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

NO.4

（2022·四川广元·中考真题）理想（ideal）是人生导航的灯塔，它指引我们成为对祖国和社会有用的人。近来，某英文报刊将举行以“如何做一名有理想的时代新人”为主题的征文活动。请你结合以下提示要点和自己的认识，写一篇英文稿件。

写作要点：

1. 你的理想是什么？

2. 为什么有这样的理想？（不少于两点理由）

3. 你打算怎样实现自己的理想？（不少于两点做法）

写作要求：

1. 文中须包含以上要点：

2. 文中不能提及本人的真实姓名、地名和校名：

3. 词数80左右，标题和开头语已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：ideal adj. & n. 理想的：理想

My Ideal

In the new times it’s very important for us to be a middle school student with an ideal. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【满分作文赏析】

                                                                                                                           My Ideal

In the new times it’s very important for us to be a middle school student with an ideal.

I wish to be an English teacher when I grow up. First, I like English. I want to use it often in my daily life. Secondly, I like working with students and enjoy being asked questions and answering them. Thirdly, I’m good at English. Now what I should do is to study hard and get high marks in English test, and try to practice speaking English as much as possible. Only in this way can I realize my dream of being an English teacher one day.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，根据写作要点提示，写一篇作文关于如何做一名有理想的时代新人。

2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时行文；人称以第一人称为主。写作时从三个方面，先介绍自己的理想，其次介绍原因，最后介绍如何实现自己的理想。文章要保持语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

NO.5

（2022·广西·中考真题）假设你是李雷，是建华中学一名九年级学生。市里将举行一年一度的中学生英语演讲比赛，今年演讲题目为“My Dream”。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿为此做准备。

提示：

1. What do you want to be?

2. Why do you want to be a/an …?

3. How are you going to be a /an …?

要求:

1. 需包含上述三个要点，可适当发挥；

2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁；

3. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；

4. 文中不能出现“李雷”和“建华中学”以外的人名，校名或地名。

My Dream

 Hello, everyone! I’m glad to be here to share my dream with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【满分作文赏析】

My Dream

Hello, everyone! I’m glad to be here to share my dream with you. I want to be an English teacher, and I am going to work and live in the city of Beijing.

First, English is becoming more and more useful and important and being an English teacher is exciting, too. If I am an English teacher, I can help my students with their English study. Second, I like being with children because it makes me feel young. Last, Beijing is the capital of China. I can meet many English speakers and I can improve my English by communicating with them.

To make my dream come true, I will study English hard every day and speak English as often as possible. I will do more listening in the morning. I’m sure I’ll love my job and students and be a friend of them.

No pains, no gains. I believe as long as I try my best, my dream will come true some day.

Thank you.

【解析】

1. 题干解读：本文属于演讲稿写作，要求以“My dream”为题，根据提示的三个要点进行讲述，说明你的未来职业，选择这一职业的缘由以及如何为这一职业去奋斗。

2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来写，时态以一般现在时及一般将来时为主。写作时第一段承接短文开头，并说明自己的未来职业选择是什么；第二段依次说明选择这一职业的理由，可列举三四个原因，运用表示次序的衔接词进行衔接，使内容表达更有条理性；第三段指出要实现这一职业的梦想的具体做法，时态采用一般将来时，可列举两到三条做法；第四段总结并结尾；第五段致谢。

NO.6

（2022·广西贵港·中考真题）前段时间，同学们观看了“天宫课堂”之后，纷纷表示要向三位宇航员学习，成为一名有理想、有抱负的青少年。请你根据以下的内容提示，以“How to be an excellent teenager”为主题，用英语写一篇发言稿，在下周的主题班会上发言。

内容提示：1.努力学习，积极锻炼；

2.尊敬长辈，乐于助人；

3.学会做家务；

4.热爱中国文化，培养各种兴趣爱好；

5.感想：……

写作要求：1.内容必须包含所给要点，并适当发挥；

2.语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；

3.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名；

4.词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

参考词汇： respect 尊敬

Hello, everyone! I’d like to share my ideas about how to be an excellent teenager.

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That’s all. Thank you.

【满分作文赏析】

Hello, everyone! I’d like to share my ideas about how to be an excellent teenager.

Above all, to be an excellent teenager, it is very important for us to study hard and exercise actively. When we have a healthy body and have enough knowledge, we can help others better. Next, we must respect the elderly and be willing to help others. Doing some voluntary work can make us feel happy. It’s really nice to help others. Third, we should learn to do housework when we are free. It can make our parents feel happy. Finally, we should love Chinese culture and develop all kinds of interests and hobbies. Although it is not easy for us to be an excellent teenager, we also try our best to make it. Only in this way, our country will be stronger and stronger.

That’s all. Thank you.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇发言稿。以“如何成为一个优秀的青少年”为题写一篇短文。根据内容提示完成写作，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。开头和结尾已给出，第二段介绍成为一个优秀的青少年的具体的做法，最后表达自己的感想。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。