16 应用文体中考英语满分作文赏析

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16 应用文体 NO.1广告（2022·辽宁辽宁·中考真题）根据要求完成小作文。词数： 30词左右。Summer Book Store在暑假来临之际为学生推出系列图书售卖活动。活动内容有：所有故事书10元1本，一些字典5元1本，每人可以借一本名著。请你为该书店设计一则宣传广告。提示词：名著：classic（可数名词）【满分作文赏析】        Welcome to our book sale! All the story books are ten yuan for each. Some of the dictionaries are only five yuan. Everyone can borrow a classic. Come to our book store!【解析】1.题干解读：题目要求为Summer Book Store设计一则宣传广告。字数在30词左右。2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第三人称。活动需包含故事书的价格、字典的价格以及每个人可以借一本名著。文章要做到语句通顺，逻辑清晰，无单词语法错误。 NO.2 启事类77．（2022·黑龙江·中考真题）Writing(注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名，否则不得分)假如你是李华，你是一名九年(6)班的学生。6月2日下午在学校操场上拾到一个书包，内有：一本英语书、一双蓝色的运动鞋、一个篮球。电话：632-5267。请根据以上提示，用英语写一则招领启事。Found_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua【满分作文赏析】FoundI found a schoolbag on the school playground on the afternoon of June 2nd. There is an English book, a pair of blue sports shoes and a basketball in it. If it is yours, please come to Class 6, Grade 9 or call me at 632-5267.Li Hua【解析】1.题干解读：题目要求写一篇失物招领启事，要求包含所有提示内容。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。可采用一段落格式，阐述失物是什么，联系电话等。注意语句要通顺，无单词语法错误。 NO.3信件（2022·四川自贡·中考真题）假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Mike来信说他在人际交往方面感到迷茫，希望得到你的帮助。请写封回信，内容包括：1. 表示理解和安慰；2. 建议：正确认识自己的不足；处理好和父母的关系；处理好与同学、朋友之间的关系；3. 表达祝愿。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mike,How’s everything going? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【满分作文赏析】Dear Mike,How’s everything going? I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty getting along with others. It’s common to have the feeling. Take it easy. I’ll give you some advice.       First, you should get a thorough understanding of yourself: aware of your strength and shortage. Second, you should communicate with your parents. Tell them your feelings so that they will understand you better. Third, you can take part in some activities with your classmates. It will help you find more about your classmates and they can learn more about you too. Then you can become friends.       I hope these suggestions can help you.Yours,Li Hua【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。针对Mike交友方面的问题提出合理的建议。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。分为三段式：第一段表达安慰和理解；第二段根据提示材料提出合理的建议；最后一段表达祝愿。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 NO.4 讲稿（2022·四川·凉山彝族自治州教育科学研究所中考真题）习主席时刻关心青少年的成长，强调要培养德、智、体、美、劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。为此，学校开展了系列主题活动。请你根据下面的思维导图，围绕“如何成为全面发展的中学生”这个话题，结合实际，以“To Be Good Students”为标题，写一篇演讲稿参加演讲比赛。要求：1.语言表达准确，语意连贯、通顺；2.文章应包括所给思维导图中所有提示内容，可适当发挥；3.词数：80左右。文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。________________Boys and girls,President Xi cares about teenagers. He says that teenagers are supposed to develop fully. Each of us wants to be such a good student. How can we make it?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s take action to be good students.【满分作文赏析】To Be Good StudentsBoys and girls,President Xi cares about teenagers. He says that teenagers are supposed to develop fully. Each of us wants to be such a good student. How can we make it?First, show love and duty to our country, people and home. We must keep them in mind, work for them and serve them. Next, learn more to be wise, able and creative. We must live and learn. Then, build strong bodies and minds. Exercise every day and be brave to face difficulties in our life. Fourth, develop hobbies and interests to be able to find and enjoy the beauty in life. Last, respect labor, love labor. Learn basic living skills by sharing housework at home and taking part in labor at school. Let’s take action to be good students.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。要求以“To Be Good Students”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从提示的几个方面给出建议；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 NO.5讲稿（2022·江西·中考真题）学校决定开展向航天女英雄王亚平学习的英文演讲活动，请你按下面表格要求写一篇演讲稿。先简单介绍王亚平的个人信息，再谈谈你从本卷完形填空B篇中感受到的她的优秀品质（personality），最后说说你打算如何向她学习。写作要点具体内容1. Personal information●Age: 42●Birthplace: a small village in Shandong Province●Hobby: sports2. Personality根据完形填空B篇概括（不得照搬原文）3. Your plans①________②________… 要求：1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数80—120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce an astronaut hero — Wang Yaping. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you!【满分作文赏析】Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce an astronaut hero — Wang Yaping. Wang is a 2-year-old woman born in a small village in Shandong Province. She likes playing sports very much.Wang Yaping is the first female astronaut who performed spacewalk by Shenzhou XIII. She deserves our highest respect for her persistence in hard training. She loves her work and never gives up. To learn from Wang Yaping, I am going to reflect on our weak points and work hard to do better. I’m going to overcome the difficulties I meet just as Wang did. Hard work can pay off.Thank you! 【解析】1.题干解读：题目要求介绍王亚平的个人信息并结合本卷完形填空B篇中的内容谈谈她的优秀品质，在最后讲打算如何向她学习。2.写作指导：写作时要结合一、三人称，时态结合一般现在时与一般将来时。演讲稿可分为四段式：第一段介绍王亚平的个人信息；第二段谈其优秀品质；第三段讲自己的计划；最后一段收尾，感谢大家的聆听。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。