总书记寄语 热点06 -备战中考英语高分作文（全国通用版）

备战中考英语高分作文

热点06 总书记寄语

一、材料作文

1．习近平总书记同北大师生代表座谈时提出：“人才培养是育人和育才相统一的过程，育人是本，人无德不立，育人的根本在于立德，这是人才培养的辨证法。”为落实立德树人根本任务，各学校围绕德育教育举办了一系列的活动，根据下面思维导图内容提示以“Moral（德育）Education”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍如何践行德育教育。

要求：

1. 书写认真规范，词数不少于80词，开头已给出不计入总词数；

2. 短文必须包括所有要点提示，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；

3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。

Moral Education

As teenagers, we are the hope of our country. To be excellent teenagers, let me tell you how to improve our moral education.

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Moral Education

As teenagers, we are the hope of our country. To be excellent teenagers, let me tell you how to improve our moral education.

At home, we should do some housework. We also should save electricity and water when using them. As for the relationship with our parents, we should have a good communication with them. At school, we should obey the school rules. The harder we study, the better we will be in the future. What’s more, we can take part in some volunteer activities in our free time. We can plant more trees to protect the environment. Last but not least, we should love our country. We should try our best to spread our culture.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。

[写作步骤]

第一步，开头已给出，引出“如何提高德育教育”的话题；

第二步，根据提示内容分别从家里，学校，社会，感受等方面提出自己的想法。

[亮点词汇]

①as for至于

②have a good communication with与……有良好的沟通

③take part in参加

[高分句型]

①To be excellent teenagers, let me tell you how to improve our moral education.（动词不定式作目的状语）

②The harder we study, the better we will be in the future. （the+比较级，the+比较级）

2．习总书记说，实现中国梦是一场历史接力赛，当代青年要在实现民族复兴的赛道上奋勇争先。作为新时代的中国青年，实现中国梦的接力棒即将传递到你们手里，你应该从哪些方面做好准备？请你根据以下提示，以“How to Make Myself Better”为题，写一篇英语短文。

要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；

2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；

3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；

4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）

How to Make Myself Better

Every Chinese should play a part in realizing the Chinese Dream. As a teenager, I will prepare for that from the followings.

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【参考范文】：

How to Make Myself Better

Every Chinese should play a part in realizing the Chinese Dream. As a teenager, I will prepare for that from the followings.

First, I’m going to do better at school. I’m not good at English. So I am going to read it aloud every morning and keep diaries in English every day. I’m going to listen to teachers more carefully and take notes. I believe I will get good grades. Second, I plan to take up a new hobby. I am a little heavy and I never exercise. So I make a plan to run to school every day. To keep it, I will ask my good friends to run with me. I think he can help me. Third, I decide to clean my room myself, even the whole house. My parents are busy. I should do my part as a member of my family.

I will do my best to keep them. I believe I can be better.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；

③提示：根据图片中的三个提示介绍如何成为更好的自己，可适当增加细节。

[写作步骤]

第一步，引出话题；

第二步，详细介绍应如何做才能成为更好的自己；

第三步，书写结语，表达希望。

[亮点词汇]

①be good at擅长

②keep diaries记日记

③take up a hobby培养一个爱好

[高分句型]

①I believe I will get good grades.(省略that的宾语从句)

②To keep it, I will ask my good friends to run with me.(动词不定式作目的状语)

3．习近平主席在全国教育大会上强调，中学生要做德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。请你以“How to be a good student”为题，简单谈谈如何做一个新时代合格的学生。

要求：1. 爱国爱家，诚实守信，善良感恩；

2. 努力学习，做个有创造力的人；

3. 多参加体育锻炼，保持身心健康；

4. 善于发现生活中的美，热爱大自然，守护家园；

5. 积极参加校内外的各种活动。

注意：1. 书写工整、语句通顺、连贯，词数不少于80。

2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名及其他相关信息。

参考词汇：honest 诚实的，thankful 感恩的，pay attention to 关注，all in all 总之

How to be a good student

Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be good students.

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【参考范文】

How to be a good student

Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be good students. First of all, we must love our country and home. And we should also be honest and thankful to the people who help us. Secondly, we should work hard and be creative in study. Next, exercise can make us strong and confident. We should do more exercise and keep healthy. After that, we are expected to enjoy the beauty in our life. If we pay attention to nature, we will find the beauty everywhere. So we must protect the environment. Finally, in our free time, we should take an active part in different activities like planting trees.

All in all, if we show our love in our daily life, we can be anyone we want.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中善于发现生活中的美的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图。介绍如何成为一名好学生；

第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“爱国、学习、健康、发现美、参加活动”等几个方面重点介绍成为好学生的具体内容；

第三步，书写结语。表达出“呼吁大家成为好学生”的倡议。

[亮点词汇]

① be expected to 被期待做……

② pay attention to 注意……

③ in our free time 在我们空闲的时候

④ take an active part in 积极参与做……

[亮点句型]

① And we should also be honest and thankful to the people who help us.（定语从句修饰people）

② If we pay attention to nature, we will find the beauty everywhere. （if引导的条件状语从句）

4．飞天梦，强国梦！2022年4月16日，神舟十三号载人飞行任务取得圆满成功。航天任务取得成功离不开航天人的坚守与努力。习总书记深情寄语航天人：“在航天事业发展的征程上勇攀高峰、不断前行”，“你们是新时代中国航天事业无数奋斗者、攀登者的代表”……

假如你是李华，你校英语社团公众号正在做“我最崇拜的航天英雄”系列推送，请你用英语给公众号留言，推荐一位你最崇拜的航天英雄，对其作简要介绍，并说明推荐理由。

提示词语：work hard, stick to, dream, difficulty, overcome

提示问题：● Which space hero do you admire most?

● Why do you admire him/her?

【参考范文】

I am Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. All Chinese people are proud of the three astronauts, Nie Haisheng, Wang Yaping and Ye Guangfu. Among them, I admire Wang Yaping most.  

Wang Yaping is not only an astronaut but also a teacher in space. Born in 1980, Wang Yaping loved learning and was good at sports when she was in school. Her space dream started in 2003. She trained really hard and never gave up. After ten years’ effort, she joined the Shenzhou X mission and gave wonderful and lively lessons in space. Moreover, she is the first female astronaut who walked in space successfully in China.

As a student, I truly admire Wang Yaping for her great spirit of devoting herself to her space dream. Whenever I meet difficulties, I should also learn from her to keep on trying and never lose heart.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示问题介绍自己最崇拜的航天英雄。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍王亚平；第三段介绍自己钦佩王亚平什么。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

5．习主席在 2022 年新年贺词中有这样的话：“民之所忧，我必念之；民之所盼，我必行之。”这体现了国家领导人为人民尽责的态度。作为中学生的我们，现行最重要的是当好学生。请你以“How to Be a Good Student”为题写一篇 90—120 词的英语短文，从学习习惯、生活习惯、行为品质等方面谈谈我们应该怎样做，才能不负自己，不负时代赋予我们的责任。

注意：开头已给出，不计入总词数。

How to Be a Good Student

It’s my responsibility to be a good student. But how to be a good student?

As a good student,

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【参考范文】

How to Be a Good Student

     It’s my responsibility to be a good student. But how to be a good student?

     As a good student, we should form good studying habits. In class, we need to listen to teachers carfully and be active. After school, we should finish our homework on time and do some reading. What’s more, a good student needs to live a healthy life. It’s good for us to play some sports in our spare time. Fresh fruit and vegetables are some of the healthiest foods we can eat to improve our health. Last but not least, a good student must be the one who cares about his manners. For example, we should respect the old. We should be kind to others. We should follow the school rules.

     In general, to be a good student does not only mean he can get high marks in exams, but he also has a healthy body and mind. Then we’ll be able to make a contribution to making our country better.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主，可适当发挥。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍从学习习惯上我们应该怎么做；

第二步，具体阐述从生活习惯、行为品质等方面怎么做才能当一个好学生；

第三步，最后表达自己的看法。

[亮点词汇]

①what’s more此外

②last but not least最后也是最重要的

③in general总的来说

[高分句型]

①good student must be the one who cares about his manners.（who引导的定语从句）

②to be a good student does not only mean he can get high marks in exams（动词不定式作主语）

二、讲稿

6．习主席说过“有梦想，有机会，有奋斗，一切美好的东西都能够创造出来。”袁隆平院士有两个梦想：“禾下乘凉梦”、“杂交稻覆盖全球梦”，带着梦想他创造了一个又一个奇迹。女宇航员王亚平发奋努力20年，终于实现了飞天之梦。人人都有自己的梦想，你的梦想是什么？

请以“My Dream”为题写一篇英语演讲稿。

要点提示：

你的梦想是什么；

你为什么有这样的梦想；

你打算如何实现自己的梦想。

写作要求：

演讲稿内容应包含所提示的要点，围绕提示要点适当增加情节，以使意思连贯；

文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名；

演讲稿词数在90词左右。（开始和结束语已经给出）

My Dream

Dear teachers and friends,

I’m happy to be here to share my dream with you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening.

【参考范文】：

My dream

Dear teachers and friends,

I’m happy to be here to share my dream with you. Everyone has his own dream. Some want to be doctors. Others hope to be scientists. My dream is to become a teacher.

Teachers can not only teach us many things at school, but they do their best to teach us how we should learn something. Thanks to our teachers, we learn knowledge. And at the same time, we learn how to live a happy life. They spend most time on their students. They are great in my eyes. I want to be a teacher when I grow up because I admire teachers.

I know it is easier to said than done. But I have made a decision to study harder. I am sure my dream will come true one day.

That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening.

【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点以“My Dream”为题写演讲稿介绍自己的梦想，要求包含所有要点，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。演讲稿可分为三段式，第一段引出自己的梦想；第二段讲为何有此梦想；第三段讲打算如何实现自己的梦想；最后一段收尾。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

7．习主席时刻关心青少年的成长，强调要培养德、智、体、美、劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。为此，学校开展了系列主题活动。请你根据下面的思维导图，围绕“如何成为全面发展的中学生”这个话题，结合实际，以“To Be Good Students”为标题，写一篇演讲稿参加演讲比赛。

要求：1.语言表达准确，语意连贯、通顺；

2.文章应包括所给思维导图中所有提示内容，可适当发挥；

3.词数：80左右。文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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Boys and girls,

President Xi cares about teenagers. He says that teenagers are supposed to develop fully. Each of us wants to be such a good student. How can we make it?

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Let’s take action to be good students.

【参考范文】：

To Be Good Students

Boys and girls,

President Xi cares about teenagers. He says that teenagers are supposed to develop fully. Each of us wants to be such a good student. How can we make it?

First, show love and duty to our country, people and home. We must keep them in mind, work for them and serve them. Next, learn more to be wise, able and creative. We must live and learn. Then, build strong bodies and minds. Exercise every day and be brave to face difficulties in our life. Fourth, develop hobbies and interests to be able to find and enjoy the beauty in life. Last, respect labor, love labor. Learn basic living skills by sharing housework at home and taking part in labor at school.

Let’s take action to be good students.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。要求以“To Be Good Students”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从提示的几个方面给出建议；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

8．习近平主席向全世界庄严昭告了中华民族伟大复兴的“中国梦”。作为一名即将毕业的初中生，你对“中国梦”有何感想？请你按照所提示的要点，写一篇英语演讲稿。

要点：作为中国人而自豪

1.过去，“四大发明”等优秀的传统文化影响世界

2.如今，……（列举两个中国成就，例如高铁)

为实现中国梦而奋斗

1.刻苦学习，勇于实践  

2.……《补充至少一点)

要求:

1.词数80左右(短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）﹔

2．要点齐全，可适当发挥：

3．条理清晰，语句通颍，意思连贯，书写规范；

4．文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。

Dear friends,

President Xi Jinping describes the Chinese Dream as a big dream for the Chinese nation.

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That’s all. Thank you.

【参考范文】

Dear friends,

President Xi Jinping describes the Chinese Dream as a big dream for the Chinese nation. Now I’d like to share my opinions with you.

Firstly, I am proud to see the prosperity of our motherland. Our excellent traditional culture, such as the four great inventions, had a great impact on the world. Today, China has grown into a powerful country with various kinds of achievements. For instance, the high-speed rail has greatly reduced travelling time around the country. Besides, from AI to 5G robots, Chinese technology companies are in the world’s leading position.

In order to fulfill the Chinese Dream, we are supposed to work hard and take action to realize our own values. More importantly, it is significant for us to seize every possible opportunity to make our country more competitive. With dreams, hard work and opportunities, beautiful things can be created.

That’s all. Thank you.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。就“中国梦”这个题材来发表自己的感想。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时为主。分为四段式：第一段引出主题；第二段根据提示材料描述让自己引以为傲的事情；第三段描述如何为了中国梦而奋斗；最后一段表示感谢。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。