探索火星 热点06 -备战中考英语高分作文（全国通用版）

备战中考英语高分作文

热点06 探索火星

一、材料作文

1．由于地球愈来愈拥挤，将来我们有可能移居火星。请根据要点提示以“Life on Mars in the future”为题，写一篇短文来描述将来在火星上的生活情况。

要点：

1. 因为火星重力只有地球重力的八分之三，所以人们出去不得不穿特制的靴子以免他们飘浮进入太空；

2. 人们将有更多空间，他们将住在大而舒服的房间里；

3. 人们能有更多的时间放松，因为机器人做了大部分工作；

4. 火星上的食物将是药片的形式，没有地球上的食物可口；

5. 火星上没有学校，每个学生将有一台和星际网络相连的电脑，他们将在网络学校和电子老师一起学习；

6. 航天飞机速度很快，但不是很舒服。

要求：

1. 语意连贯，层次清晰，书写清楚；

2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；

3. 词数：90左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Life on Mars in the future

In the future, people would move to other planets including Mars because the Earth is becoming more and more crowded and polluted. What would life on Mars be like? Let’s go and have a look.

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【参考范文】

Life on Mars in the future

In the future, people would move to other planets including Mars because the Earth is becoming more and more crowded and polluted. What would life on Mars be like? Let’s go and have a look.

The gravity on Mars is only about three-eighths of that on the Earth, so people would have to wear special boots to keep themselves from floating off into space when they go out. People would have more space and they would live in big, comfortable rooms. What’s more, people could have more time to relax because robots would do most of the work. The food on Mars would be in the form of pills. It would not be as tasty as that on the Earth.

There would be no schools on Mars. Every student would have a computer at home connected to an interplanetary network. They would study at online school with e-teachers. The spacecraft would travel very fast, but it is not very comfortable.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文为说明文，是一篇材料作文。

②时态：本文要用一般现在时。

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

①第一步，开头已给出，交代了写作背景和写作目的：介绍未来火星上的生活。

②第二步，介绍火星上的生活，根据所给要点，适当发挥想象，增加细节。

[亮点词汇]

①gravity 重力

②keep…from doing sth. 阻止……做某事

③what’s more 另外

④in the form of… 以……的形式

⑤as…as 和……一样

[高分句型]

①people would have to wear special boots to keep themselves from floating off into space when they go out. (when引导时间状语从句)

②people could have more time to relax because robots would do most of the work. (because引导原因状语从句)

2．书面表达

目前，地球正面临着前所未有的危机，人口增多，能源减少，到太空生活成了热门话题。Daniel和他的同学讨论了在火星上生活的利弊，请根据讨论结果并加上自己的观点写一篇报道。

Life on Mars

Life on Mars is different from that on Earth. Some students think it is better to live on Mars than on earth because ______________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

Life on Mars

Life on Mars is different from that on Earth. Some students think it is better to live on Mars than on earth because living on Mars has some advantages. It’s really wonderful to live on Mars. Life on Mars is more interesting and more comfortable than that on earth .We can go to online schools instead of real ones. We can also have more space. We have robots at home and they do work for us. The things on Mars are cheap.

But there are also some disadvantages. We will not be used to living there so we may get ill from living there. And it’s very far from the Earth. There is no food, water or oxygen on Mars. We will meet some dangerous aliens and it’s easy to float away on Mars.

What do you think of living on Mars?

【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，同学们讨论在火星上生活的利弊。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Life on Mars is…….，Some students think…….，It’s really wonderful to…….，Mars is…….，But there are……,What do you think of sth?等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了有些同学认为在火星上生活比在地球上更好，接下来介绍有些同学认为在火星上生活有一些弊端，最后引发思考在火星上生活怎么样。此处be different from, instead of, at home, be used to doing sth, get ill, far from, float away, think of等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

3．请你用英语写一个火星生活指南，具体介绍一下火星上的情况。

注意事项：

1. 火星生活指南须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2. 须展开充分想象，作适当发挥，不要逐字翻译；

3. 词数90左右，火星生活指南的开关和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Here is a guide to living on Mars.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Welcome to Mars!

【参考范文】：

Here is a guide to living on Mars. On Mars, there is no water or oxygen. So we have to wear special helmets. We have both water and food in the form of pills. Isn’t that interesting? But they are strange and not as tasty as the food on the Earth. We use electronic dollars and they’re stored in the Mars Bank. We can shop online. We travel by spacecraft or on foot. But we must wear special boots because of the low gravity. We have more space and time to relax. Low-gravity basketball games are really amazing. Welcome to Mars!

【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点写一个火星生活指南，要包括环境、出行、货币、娱乐等方面，要展开充分想象，作适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要承接已给出的首尾，时态采用一般现在时，人称以一、三人称为主。要在指南中写清楚在火星生活的各方面信息，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

4．假设《21世纪报》向中学生征稿，主题是关于未来生活。请你以“Life on Mars”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下你想象中的火星生活。

内容要点：

1. 交通工具是航天飞机，其速度达到光速

2. 随着科学的发展，在火星上植物能生产食物、氧气和水；

3. 火星重力只有地球的3/8，人们通过穿特制的靴子来解决火星上重力的问题；

4. 人们有更多的空间和休闲时间；

5. 生活的许多方面很美好，但也有一些不利条件，如……

注意事项：

1. 短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2. 第5要点须用2—3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；

3. 词数90左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Life on Mars

In the future, our planet will be more and more crowded and polluted. Maybe we can live on Mars. Here is a guide to living on Mars.

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【参考范文】

Life on Mars

In the future, our planet will be more and more crowded and polluted. Maybe we can live on Mars. Here is a guide to living on Mars.

We can travel to Mars in spacecraft which travel at the speed of light. With the development of science, plants can produce food, oxygen and water on Mars. The gravity on Mars is only three-eighths of that on the Earth, so we should wear special boots to make ourselves heavier. People have more space and time to relax. Life is really good in many ways. But there are also some disadvantages. For example, the food will not be very tasty, and the journey to Mars will probably be very uncomfortable.

【详解】1.题干解析：本文是一篇材料写作。要求以“life on Mars”为题写一篇90词左右的英语短文。文章内容要点已给出，需要全部包含在内。并且需要结合第5个要点展开适当的想象，把内容补充完整。文章开头已给出，注意上下文衔接。

2.写作指导：本文时态主要采用一般现在时和一般将来时。人称使用第一人称和第三人称。文章第一段已给出，第二段 介绍火星上的生活时，需要按照给出的要点进行书写，适当使用短语或句型，增加文章亮点。可以结合自己的想象补充内容，注意不要出现单词和语法错误。