手机进校园热点02 -备战中考英语高分作文（江苏专用版）

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备战中考英语高分作文热点02 手机进校园 一、材料作文1．现在智能手机运用越来越普遍，上周你们班举行了一次以“初中生使用微信的利与弊”为主题的班会，同学们各抒已见。你针对同学们的不同意见， 做了以下记录。请根据表格内容以“The Opinions of Using WeChat”为题写一篇短文。利弊1. 提供交流的平台，可以上网课1. 过度使用、影响学习2. 能认识更多的朋友， 方便联系2. 交友不慎、容易受骗3. 能学习更多的东西，增加兴趣3. 长时间看手机对眼睛有害………… 注意： 1. 词数80字以上。2. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。提示： platform平台；rick欺骗； be convenient for对……方便； 网课online classThe Opinions of Using WeChat____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】The Opinions of Using WeChatMore and more middle school students use WeChat. Different students have different opinions about using it.Some students think WeChat is a very useful tool. It can provide a platform to communicate with their friends. And they can make more friends and learn more knowledge by WeChat. They also attend online classes by WeChat. WeChat is convenient for them to connect. However, some students think WeChat will affect their study if they spend too much time using it. And they may be tricked by strange net friends. Last but not least, it will also affect their vision if they use WeChat for a long time. In my opinion, we should use WeChat properly by not using it more than two hours a day, and make sure that we don’t use it when we are studying.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：本文的时态是一般现在时；③提示：微信利与弊的大部分要点已给出，适当地补充一些自己的观点。人称以第三人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步，总述不同的人对使用微信有着不同的观点；第二步，具体阐述同学们利与弊的观点；第三步，以自己的观点做个总结。[亮点词汇]provide a platform提供一个平台attend online classes上网课affect their study影响他们的学习[高分句型]However, some students think WeChat will affect their study if they spend too much time using it. （if引导的条件状语从句）2．一场波及全球的疫情，让人们深深懂得了生命的价值。作为中学生，我们更应该懂得珍爱我们年轻的生命。请你根据下面的提示，以“Treasure Our Lives”为题，用英语写一篇有关如何珍爱生命的短文。要点：1.遵守交通规则，注意食品安全，防止意外溺水。2.交友谨慎，不沉迷于手机及游戏，提高安全意识。3.倡议：拥有快乐、充实、健康的生活方式……要求：1.短文应包括所有要点，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；2.语言表达准确，条理清晰，书写工整，句式规范；3.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；参考词汇：drown溺水V.Treasure Our LivesEach person only lives once, so we must treasure our lives. What should we do? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Treasure Our LivesEach person only lives once, so we must treasure our lives. What should we do?First of all, we should eat healthy and safe food instead of fast food or junk food every day. When we go out, we must obey the traffic rules. If we want to go swimming, we are supposed to go somewhere safe so that we can avoid drowning. And we should follow the school rules, don’t run in the hallways and be careful when we do sports.Besides, we must be careful in choosing our friends and keep away from dangerous people. We shouldn’t play phones or computer games for a long time. What’s more, we can’t go to Net Bar or chat with strangers online and we shouldn’t stay out too long especially at night. Life is valuable, we should take it seriously. We’d better live a happy, colorful and healthy life. Then we will study better and make our dreams come true.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，根据下面的提示，以“Treasure Our Lives”为题，用英语写一篇有关如何珍爱生命的短文。[写作步骤]第一步，开头已给出，点名我们要珍惜我们的生命；第二步，具体阐述我们应该怎么做；第三步，总结，表明自己对生命的看法。[亮点词汇]①first of all首先②instead of而不是③be supposed to应该做某事④keep away from远离⑤come true实现[高分句型]①If we want to go swimming, we are supposed to go somewhere safe so that we can avoid drowning. （if引导的条件状语从句；so that引导的目的状语从句）3．英语校刊TEENS 正在进行 “手机是否可以带入校园”的问卷调查。请根据下列调查表的内容做出自己的选择，并依据你的选择用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。A survey on mobile phonesShould we bring mobile phones to school?ChoiceYES          £NO            £Reasons1.contact with parents2.…1.use in a wrong way2....AdviceThough mobile phones can be used in school, I think …Though mobile phones can’t be used in school, I hope ..  注意：1. 内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。2. 词数80左右（已给出文章开头不计入总词数）。3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Should we bring mobile phones to school?A survey on teenage mobile phone use at school is carried out by TEENS. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Should we bring mobile phones to school?A survey on teenage mobile phone use at school is carried out by TEENS. Are middle school students allowed to bring them to school?Some students think we can bring mobile phones to school because it’s convenient for parents to contact us. When we have difficulty in study, mobile phones can be our teacher and help us with our problems.Every coin has two sides. Some students use mobile phones in a wrong way. They spend a lot of time chatting online, as a result, they can’t focus on study. And too much time on screens does harm to our eyes. More and more students have poor eyesight.In my opinion, I agree to bring smart phones to school. Though mobile phones can be used in school, I think I won’t turn it on until class is over. Since there are lots of useful websites for English learning, I will go there to practice my English.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇议论文。根据表格介绍支持和反对人的原因和建议。客观介绍人们对学生带手机这一现象的看法，并表达自己的观点。2.写作指导：本文以第三人称和第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时为主。分成四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍支持者的看法；第三段介绍反对者的看法；第四段介绍自己的观点。不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观、注意行文的连贯性。4．某学校英语月刊第4月期刊，将以“禁止中小学生带手机进校园”为主题进行英文征稿，请你就相关话题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：（1）谈谈限制中学生带手机进校园的必要性（至少两点）；（2）对中学生在家里如何合理使用手机提出一些建议（至少两点）；（3）号召同学们合理使用手机。作文要求：1.作文中不得出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。As for limiting students’ mobile phone use on campus, I have something to share. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】As for limiting students’ mobile phone use on campus, I have something to share. It’s important to stop students from bringing cellphones into school. Here are the reasons. We students will focus more on the study without cellphones. Besides, we can make more true friends at school by exercising or sharing instead of playing cellphone games.Limiting the cellphones at school doesn’t mean we cannot use them at all at home, as long as we make proper use of them. First, we had better use the cellphones less than 1 hour a day, or we may harm our eyes and back. Second, we are supposed to keep away from the information which does harm to us. Let’s make proper use of cellphones.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意围绕主题进行写作。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍限制中学生带手机进校园的必要性，介绍2点；第二步，介绍学生如何在家使用手机，介绍2点；第三步，书写结束语，号召同学们合理使用手机。[亮点词汇]①bring...into...把……带入②be supposed to应该[高分句型]①Second, we are supposed to keep away from the information which does harm to us.（which引导的定语从句）②Let’s make proper use of cellphones.（祈使句）5．2021年1月15日，教育部印发了《关于加强中小学生手机管理工作的通知》，原则上禁止中小学生带手机进校园，该通知引发了强烈的社会反响。作为一名中学生，请你写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的看法。要点：1. 你对该通知的态度及理由；2. 举例说明手机进校园的危害；3. 呼吁所有中小学生积极响应。要求：1. 思路清晰，语句通顺，根据要点提示可以适当发挥，书写规范；2. 文中不得出现与考生本人相关校名和姓名等真实信息；3. 词数：80词左右的短文（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。According to a notice from the Ministry of Education, all primary and secondary school students in China, in principle, will not be allowed to bring mobile phones to school. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】According to a notice from the Ministry of Education, all primary and secondary school students in China, in principle, will not be allowed to bring mobile phones to school. I think it is necessary to limit students’ mobile phone use at school. Bringing mobile phones to school will not only distract the students’ attention from their studies, but also do harm to their eyesight. For those students who are addicted to mobile phones, I suggest that they can spend more time doing something more interesting, such as doing sports or reading an interesting book. As the saying goes, no rules no standards. I call on all the schools limit students’ mobile phone use at school.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点中已给出的关键信息，写短文谈谈你对禁止中小学生带手机进校园这一通知的看法。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍这则通知；第二步，介绍手机的危害，表明自己的态度及理由；第三步，呼吁大家积极相应则一通知。[亮点词汇]①not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且……②do harm to 对……有害③be addicted to sth. 对某事上瘾④as the saying goes 俗话说[高分句型]For those students who are addicted to mobile phones, I suggest that they can spend more time doing something more interesting, such as doing sports or reading an interesting book.（who引导定语从句；that引导宾语从句）6．随着手机使用的日益广泛，“作业帮”等手机运用软件的出现，现在手机又有了新的用途——随时查找作业参考范文。部分学生认为：有时作业太多、太难，不得不向手机求助。观点：1. 抄写参考范文不能提高学生的学习能力，只能阻止学生思考；2. 恰当运用网络，不依赖网络。注意：1.文中应包括提示观点，可以适当发挥，增加自己的看法，使内容更连贯，更合理；         2.词数约80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。(参考词汇：the students’ abilities, make proper use of)Some students now have a new use for the Internet—___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：Some students now have a new use for the Internet—use mobile phones to find out the answers to their homework. But different people have different ideas about it. Some students say (think) that they have so much homework every day that they don’t have enough time. And some of the problems are too hard for them to work out. So they have to use mobile phones to find out the answers.However, I think copying the answers can’t improve the students’ abilities, and may make them stop thinking. In my opinion, we can make proper use of the Internet and can’t depend on it. Studying online can be a way to help study, but the best way is studying (to study) by ourselves.【详解】[总体分析]① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，要求针对学生使用手机软件抄参考范文一事提出自己的观点和看法；② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；③ 提示：题目中的要点已经给出，写作时注意围绕所给要点进行写作，并可以适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步：承接文章开头，指出学生利用手机抄参考范文这一现象；第二步：按照题目提示，指出一部分学生的观点；第三步：按照题目提示提出自己的观点。[亮点词汇]① improve 提高改善② work out 解决出③ in my opinion 以我看④ depend on 取决于[高分句型]① But different people have different ideas about it.（用来提出不同的观点）② However, I think copying the answers can’t improve the students’ abilities, and may make them stop thinking.（think后使用宾语从句，并且从句用动名词作主语）7．随着手机在日常生活中的广泛使用，中学生也越来越多的接触到了手机。但由于自控力较差，用手机打游戏、上网聊天的情况时有发生，严重影响了他们学习的积极性；有的学生熬夜看手机，导致视力下降，影响身体健康。因此，教育部办公厅印发《关于加强中小学生手机管理工作的通知》，规定中小学生原则上不得将个人手机带入校园。请根据要求写一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈你对学生使用手机的看法。要求：1.80 — 120 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考提示：1.中学生在校滥用手机的危害(妨碍学业、影响课堂、有害健康……)2.在家适度使用手机的建议(控制使用时间，避免使用手机搜索作业……)Mobile phones were invented to make our life convenient, but nowadays they may do the opposite. For the middle school students, mobile phones are the last things they should put in their schoolbags. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：Mobile phones were invented to make our life convenient, but nowadays they may do the opposite. For the middle school students, mobile phones are the last things they should put in their schoolbags.Today, more and more students are using the APPs on their mobile phones to help with their homework. When students bring mobile phones to school, mobile phones will hinder their studies. When students are having classes, their mobile phones ring, which will affect the class. Long time use of mobile phones is harmful to their health. I don’t think we should take mobile phones to school. We should use mobile phones at home. When we use mobile phones, we should control the time. We should avoid using mobile phones to search for homework, and we should think independently to complete homework.【详解】[总体分析]① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，是一篇议论文；② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括现在使用手机的现状与自己的建议等。[写作步骤]第一步，总体指出中学生不应该把手机带进学校；第二步，具体阐述学生使用手机的一些弊端；第三步，最后阐述自己的观点和看法。[亮点词汇]① help with帮忙② be harmful to对……有害③ avoid doing sth避免做某事[高分句型]① When we use mobile phones, we should control the time.（when引导的时间状语从句）② I don’t think we should take mobile phones to school.（宾语从句的否定转移） 二、看图作文8．学校禁止中小学生将个人手机带入校园，你班学生就“学生是否应该将个人手机带入校园”展开激烈的讨论。请你根据提示写一篇短文，汇报讨论结果，并谈谈你的观点。要求：（1）语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；（2）补充至少一条你自己的观点；（3）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；（4）100词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. And the Ministry of Education requires primary and secondary school students not to bring personal mobile phones into the school. Students in our class have different ideas about this. Some students agree to the request. They think_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】：Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. And the Ministry of Education requires primary and secondary school students not to bring personal mobile phones into the school. Students in our class have different ideas about this.Some students agree to the request. They think it’s bad for their eyes and they won’t study carefully in class if students spend much time playing games on the mobile phone. Sometimes some garbage websites appear, and they are harmful to the students. What’s worse, it is common for students to get addicted to mobile phone games.But others don’t agree to this request. They think it’s not so bad to take the mobile phones to school because they can keep in touch with their parents or classmates, search for some useful information. When they are free, they can also listen to music to relax themselves. In my opinion, it’s very important for us to use the mobile phones in a right way. We should use the mobile phone to help and improve our study. And at school, we have teachers and other students to help us with our study, so we needn’t take the mobiles phone to school.【详解】[总体分析]① 题材：本文是一篇看图作文，为议论文；② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③ 提示：写作要求已给出，考生应注意根据图片的提示，表明赞同方和反对方的观点，此时应采用第三人称。并根据要求补充一点自己的观点，此时注意采用第一人称。[写作步骤]第一步，表明话题的背景信息，引出“学生是否应该将个人手机带入校园”的话题；第二步，阐述针对该话题产生的两种不同的意见，根据图片的提示有理有据地说明赞同以及反对的理由；第三步，表明自己的态度以及原因。[亮点词汇]① more and more popular越来越受欢迎② bring.....into把……带进……③ keep in touch with与……保持联系[高分句型]① Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. (more and more popular形容词比较级的用法）② They think it’s bad for their eyes and they won’t study carefully in class if students spend much time playing games on the mobile phone. （if引导的条件状语从句）③ They think it’s not so bad to take the mobile phones to school because they can keep in touch with their parents or classmates, search for some useful information. （宾语从句；it is+形容词+(for sb)to do sth句型；because引导的原因状语从句） 三、书信作文9．为了促进中小学生健康成长，近日教育部印发了《中小学生减负措施》（减负三十条）。假如你是李华，请你从以下几个方面向你的笔友Bob简单介绍减负的相关情况，并谈谈你自己的看法。要点：1.作业方面：过去每天都有很多家庭作业，每个学科都有不同的作业，需要几个小时才能完成。现在每天的家庭作业不超过90分钟；有更多时间参加课外活动（跳舞、画画、下棋等）和锻炼身体；有更充足的睡眠……2.电子产品方面：养成良好的用眼卫生习惯；严禁学生将手机带入课堂（过去花大量时间玩电脑游戏和看电视，对眼睛有害；现在不得不控制玩电脑、看电视的时间，花更多时间读书）。3.习惯方面：上课专心听讲，课后主动复习；鼓励同学间互帮互助、共同成长。4.你的看法……要求：1. 包含以上要点；2. 词数：80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥；3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。Dear Bob,In order to improve students’ health, our country carried out 30 rules to reduce（减少） students’ pressure（压力）. Let me tell you something about them. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】：Dear Bob,In order to improve students’ health, our country carried out 30 rules to reduce（减少） students’ pressure（压力）. Let me tell you something about them.Generally, it falls into four parts. And I will introduce to you three of them which are close to us students.Firstly, homework for middle school students should be taken no more than 90 minutes so that we will have more time to relax.Secondly, mobile phones shouldn’t be allowed to appear in class because we are easily absent-minded from the lesson.Thirdly, students are expected to listen carefully and go over lessons in time so that they can master the right method of learning.In my opinion, these rules are helpful to us students. If we follow them, we can improve our study as well as health.Do you have such rules? Hope for your reply.Yours,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给的介绍要点谈谈减负的相关情况，以及自己的看法，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，文章开头已给出，引出要介绍的具体内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“作业方面、电子产品方面、习惯方面”重点介绍有关减负的具体情况；第三步，反问对方，并期望对方的回复。[亮点词汇]①carry out实行②fall into分成③be close to接近④absent-minded心不在焉的⑤go over lessons in time及时复习功课⑥be helpful to对……有用[高分句型]①And I will introduce to you three of them which are close to us students.（which引导的定语从句）②homework for middle school students should be taken no more than 90 minutes so that we will have more time to relax.（so that引导的目的状语从句）③mobile phones shouldn’t be allowed to appear in class because we are easily absent-minded from the lesson.（被动语态；because引导的原因状语从句）④If we follow them, we can improve our study as well as health.（if引导的条件状语从句）