科技改变生活 热点02 -备战中考英语高分作文（浙江专用版）

备战中考英语高分作文

热点02 科技改变生活

一、话题作文

1．科技改变生活，发明无处不在，如computers，cars，smart phones，e-books，robots，Internet…请结合自身经历，谈谈哪一项发明对你的影响最大以及它是如何改变你的生活的。

要求:

1. 词数80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。

Technology changes our life and inventions are around us. In my daily life, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】     

Technology changes our life and inventions are around us. In my daily life, the computer has become an important part . And it changed me a lot. With the help of the computer, I can search for some useful information and read different kinds of books. By receiving and sending emails, I can communicate with my friends freely. If I have some problems with my study, I can discuss them with my classmates on the Internet. If I feel stressed from time to time, I can listen to music online to relax myself. I can also buy all kinds of things online.

  But if I meet some difficult problems in my homework, I often look for answers on the Internet. This makes me lazy and too much computer work is bad for my eyes. So I think everyone should use the computer wisely.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文。

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：从题干所给的科技中选择一种，谈谈这个发明对自己的影响以及是如何改变自己的生活的。

[写作步骤]

第一步，点明主题，是哪一个发明改变了自己；

第二步，介绍这项发明是如何改变自己的生活的；

第三步，介绍自己的感受总结全文。

[亮点词汇]

①with the help of在……的帮助下

②search for寻找

③from time to time不时

[高分句型]

①If I have some problems with my study, I can discuss them with my classmates on the Internet.（if引导的条件状语从句）

②So I think everyone should use the computer wisely.（省略that的宾语从句）

2．你校课堂上引进了新科技，可以把老师的语音识别成文字，还可以生成这节课的二维码，学生随时可以观看这节课。请你根据以下提示，以A New Change in Class为题，写一篇短文。内容包括：

1. Do you agree with the new change in class? Why?

2. What do your parents think of the new change? Why?

3. What do you hope to achieve in your study with the help of the new technology?

注意：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；

2. 词数100左右。短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

A New Change in Class

A new technology is introduced into class in my school. Teachers’ voices can be turned into words. What’s more, a QR code（二维码）will be created after class for students to review the whole lesson anytime. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

A New Change in Class

A new technology is introduced into class in my school. Teachers’ voices can be turned into words. What’s more, a QR code（二维码）will be created after class for students to review the whole lesson anytime. I am strongly for the new change in class. It brings a lot of advantages to our students. First, students who are absent from school because of illness can study the lesson in time so that they won’t fall behind others. Second, because of the COVID-19, we may not go to school. With the help of it, we can learn from the Internet without worrying about the study. Last, it can make students interested in the class with the help of technology and science.

As for our parents, they seem to not agree with the change. Because they think most students can not listen carefully, which leads to failure in exams. They also think that watching computer screens too much can be harmful to our eyes.

I hope I can review what teachers taught in class to achieve more knowledge with the help of the new technology.

【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求以A New Change in Class为题，写一篇英语短文；要求包含所有提示内容。

2. 写作指导：此作文时态用一般现在时；采用第一人称和第三人称口吻；可采用3段落格式，第一段：描述自己的观点以及原因；第二段：描述父母的观点以及原因；第三段：描述自己的希望。确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

二、材料作文

3．假如你发明的“飞行单车”在学校科技节中获奖，被推荐参加一个国际青少年科技展览。请用英语介绍你的发明,内容包括下图中1-4项.

注意：

（1）参考词汇：轮子wheel太阳能solar power（2）词数80左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）。

（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

My invention is a flying bike.... _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

My invention is a flying bike．It is fast，convenient and green! The flying bike has two wheels and two wings．It has a top speed of 300km/h. You can go to farther places in a shorter time．It can run on land and fly in the air．If you shout "fly" the bike will turn into a plane in 30 seconds．Then you can fly in the air．You will be as free as a bird．It can take photos，too．Instead of petrol，the bike uses solar power，so it will not pollute the air．I will add a seat behind it so that it can carry two persons. My invention will help people live a better life in the future．

【详解】题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求介绍一项发明，题目中给出外观、用途、特点，需要作者展开想象，写出一两点改进计划。

写作指导：本文是一篇说明文，人称主要是第三人称，时态是一般现在时。注意主谓一致，介绍内容清晰，有条理。

4．世界上有很多不同种类的发明。这些发明改变了我们的生活。请根据下列表格所提供的信息，描述数码相机的发明，并简单介绍它的使用。要求：80词左右。

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

There are many different kinds of inventions in the world. All of them are very useful and have changed our lives. The digital camera is one of the most useful inventions. It was invented by Steven Sasson who was from America in 1975. It’s very popular with both young people and old people, because people can use it easily and conveniently. And people can take photos more clearly than other cameras. We can also use digital cameras to make videos. How useful they are!

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章要描述数码相机的发明，并简单介绍它的使用。写作时要包括：发明时间；发明者；数码相机可以带给使用者的功能等这几个要点，缺一不可。

2.写作指导：本文写作时注意时态要用一般现在时，并以“数码相机”为主语进行论述；写作时注意围绕主题，思路清晰，语言流畅，表达完整。

5．本届冬奥会是科技的盛会，各种高科技频繁亮相，无论是智慧餐厅还是“猎豹”摄像机，让外国媒体大呼惊艳。不仅如此，科技给我们的生活也带来了巨变。假如你是九年级一班学生王华，学校正在举办科技节，你应邀参加以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍身边的科技及其优点。

要求：1. 要点齐全，适当发挥；

2. 句子及篇章准确、连贯，书写规范；

3. 词数：80~100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

4. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其它任何个人相关信息。

Hello, everyone!

I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It’s a great honor for me to speak here.

The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

China is taking the lead in some ways. I’m really proud of my country.

That’s all for my speech. Thank you!

【参考范文】

Hello, everyone!

I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It’s a great honor for me to speak here.

The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions. The smart phone brings both convenience and pleasure to our life. We can shop online, watch movies, and have video chats through it. As for the robot, it can help us with housework, help our children with their homework and so on. It saves us a lot of time and energy. The high-speed train has greatly improved our travel speed. It travels at high speed. It’s very fast and comfortable. The electric car has also changed our life. It can not only save energy but also protect the environment to a great extent. It is convenient and green.

China is taking the lead in some ways. I’m really proud of my country.

That’s all for my speech. Thank you!

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给思维导图的提示，以“科技改变生活”为主题，写一篇作文介绍身边的科技及其优点。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。写作时思维导图的提示全部要涵盖在内，可以从四个方面介绍身边的科技：智能手机、机器人、电动汽车以及高铁。针对细节可适当发挥，行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

三、电子邮件

6．人工智能（AI）的迅速崛起无疑是新世纪以来最为重要的科技事件，而我们的生活也将因为人工智能的成熟应用迎来巨大改变。假如是李华，你校将于周六上午十点使用视频会议举办一场介绍人工智能的线上讲座。你打算邀请你校英国留学生Tom一起参加。请用英语给Tom写一封邮件，邀请他参加线上讲座（online lecture），向他说明举办讲座活动的时间、目的以及讲座的内容。

提示词语：helpful, convenient, introduce, examples, apply(应用)...to..., questions

提示问题：

●What time will the online lecture start?

●Why will the school hold this activity?

●What will the speaker talk about?

Dear Tom,

I’m writing to invite you to attend an online lecture about AI technology. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Hope you will be there on time and enjoy it. If there is anything more that you want to know, please tell me.

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Tom,

I’m writing to invite you to attend an online lecture about AI technology. It will start at 10 o’clock on Saturday morning. During the lecture, the speaker will introduce what AI is. Then, he will tell us how to use it in our daily life since it is helpful and convenient.

To attend the online lecture, you need to get your computer or your phone ready. And please make sure you can get online. It is a good idea to prepare a notebook because you will need to take down some examples and answer some questions. We can apply AI to our daily life.

Hope you will be there on time and enjoy it. If there is anything more that you want to know, please tell me.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容，给Tom写一封邮件，邀请他参加线上讲座。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第二、第三人称来行文，时态用一般将来时和一般现在时。作文要分别介绍讲座活动的时间、目的以及讲座的内容。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

四、看图作文

7．机器人Sophia的问世，引起了大家极大的兴趣。如果将来你有一个机器人，你想用它来干什么呢？为此，你们班在英语活动课上进行了热烈的讨论，请根据下面的图表，用英语写一篇短文，总结讨论的情况，并谈谈你自己的想法。

1.要点：

2.要求：

(1)文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名等；

(2)语言要通顺，表达要正确；

(3)要求包含所有要点提示，为了行文需要，可适当增加要点；

(4）词数不少于60个英语单词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

3.参考词汇：

聊天娱乐chat and play

Sophia, a robot woman, has come into the world. It caused a heated discussion in our English class. If we have a robot, what shall we ask it to do? Here are the results.

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【参考范文】

Sophia, a robot woman, has come into the world. It caused a heated discussion in our English class. If we have a robot, what shall we ask it to do? Here are the results.

Fifty percent of the students say they will ask the robot to help with the housework or help to look after old people. Thirty percent of the students say they will ask the robot to help with their study. When they’re tired, they will use the robot for chatting and playing. Twenty percent of the students will ask the robot to do more interesting things. Some of them say they will ask the robot to do volunteer work with them. And some of them say they will use the robot to pick up the litter on the street to protect our environment.

In my opinion, there are advantages of robots and trouble as well. But it is certain that our life will be better with the development of science and technology.

【详解】1.题目解读：题目要求根据所给的图表，用英文写一篇短文，叙述同学们想用机器人Sophia做的事，并谈谈你自己的想法。

2.写作指导：本文主要以第三人称写作，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。通过所给图表介绍讨论的结果，叙述每种情况所占的比例以及想要机器人做的事情。可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。