方法与策略 热点07-备战中考英语高分作文（浙江专用版）

备战中考英语高分作文

热点07 方法与策略

一、话题作文

1．某英语网站开展关于“How to Improve Myself”的征稿活动，倡导同学们提升自我，努力成为“终生运动者，责任担当者，问题解决者，优雅生活者”，请根据以下图示内容积极投稿。

要求：

1.词数80~100；

2.请根据以上提示信息，结合实际情况叙述，可适当发挥；

3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名；

4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。

How to Improve Myself

Life is really a long lesson, so I have to improve myself.

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How to Improve Myself

Life is really a long lesson, so I have to improve myself.

First, I need to exercise one hour every day. It is bad to stay at home and play games for a long time. Second, I should be responsible for myself and my family. I should be independent instead of depending on my parents too often. Third, in face of the problems, I have to take up the challenges and work them out rather than run away from them. Next, I will develop my interest in many things, such as playing basketball, and knitting, instead of being interested in nothing. Last but not least, I will communicate with others and be a good team player.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述运动，责任担当，问题解决和兴趣爱好方面提升自己的方法。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述提升自己的方法，要叙述完整，条理清晰。

2．你校英语社团面向毕业生举行以“成为更好的自己”为主题的征文活动，请你结合自身经历，从“make friends”, “have a healthy lifestyle”, “develop good study habits”, “take up a new hobby”, “be independent” 五个方面任选一至两项，写一篇英语短文投稿。

要求：

1. 词数80-100(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。

At the beginning of a new life, I’m going to make myself better. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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At the beginning of a new life, I’m going to make myself better.

Firstly, developing good study habits is of great importance. I can ask not only my teacher, but also my classmates. And I should learn from mistakes instead of being afraid of making mistakes. Secondly, I should make friends with people around myself. As the saying goes, “Friends are the families we choose”. We are happier when we are with friends.

All in all, as long as I work hard at anything, I will make myself better.

【详解】题干解读：题目要求以“成为更好的自己”为主题写一篇英语短文；要求包含一至两项提示内容，字数80-100左右。

写作指导：此作文时态宜用一般现在时，采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用3段落格式，第一段：点明主题，想要成为更好的自己；第二段：从学习习惯、结交朋友两方面说明如何成为更好的自己；第三段：总结全文，只要努力，就能使自己变得更好。

二、材料作文

3．2022年4月21日，国家发布《义务教育课程方案（2022年版）》，将劳动课程列入国家课程，让学生要学会家务劳动，参与社会实践劳动，志愿服务劳动等。作为一名中学生，请你结合实际，以“How Can We Develop Working Spirit?”为题，写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。

参考词汇：working class      living skill       social activity

要求：1. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校等个人信息。

2. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

How Can We Develop Working Spirit?

It’s pretty important for teenagers to develop working spirit. As a middle school student,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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How Can We Develop Working Spirit?

It’s pretty important for teenagers to develop working spirit. As a middle school student, I welcome it warmly.

First, we should have working classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. Secondly, we can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting tress or growing vegetables to enrich our real-world work experience. Also, we need try to do some chores at home, like tidying rooms, washing clothes or doing some dishes. Above all, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience.

In a word, the hardworking spirit educations is necessary and it helps to build us up.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文。

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：以“How Can We Develop Working Spirit”为题介绍如何培养劳动精神的方法。

[写作步骤]

第一步，开头已给出，并表达自己的看法。

第二步，介绍培养劳动精神的方法。

第三步，总结概括。

[亮点词汇]

① take part in 参加

② such as 例如

③ in a word 总之

[高分句型]

① It’s pretty important for teenagers to develop working spirit（“it’s+形容词+for sb+to do sth”的句型）

② Also, we need try to do some chores at home, like tidying rooms, washing clothes or doing some dishes.（动词不定式作宾语）

4．在丰富多彩的初中学习生活中，你一定积累了很多学习方法和经验吧！现校刊英文专栏以 “Learning to learn”为主题征稿。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。

写作要点：

1. 一个科目名称；

2. 此科目的学习方法（至少两个）；

3. 此科目的学习感受或期望。

写作要求：

1. 将标题和首句补充完整；

2. 包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 文中不得透露个人信息；

4. 词数80左右。

Methods of learning ________

Here are my methods of learning ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

Methods of learning English

Here are my methods of learning English. First, I usually watch English movies and listen to English songs. I think it’s a relaxing way to learn the correct pronunciation and proper expressions. Second, reading passages on the same topic helps a lot in learning new words. In this way, the new words can be repeated and I can understand their meanings better. What’s more, it’s a good habit to keep a diary in English. That helps me think in English and improve my writing skills as well.

English is a bridge which connects the world and us. It’s interesting to learn it. I hope I can make greater progress in the future.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“学会学习”为题写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段先介绍自己学习英语的方法；第二段表达学习英语的感受或期望。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误 。

5．2022年令世人瞩目，在过去的半年里，涌现出了很多为了梦想拼搏奋斗的人物。例如，圆梦航天，胜利返航的神舟十三的3名宇航员；开场失利，永不言弃，最终夺得亚洲杯冠军的中国女足运动员……正是这种对梦想执着追求的精神，使得他们为祖国做出了突出贡献。作为新时代的青少年，你的梦想是什么？请以“My Dream”为题，写一篇短文。

要点：1.你的梦想是什么？

2.原因是什么？

3.为此你会怎么做？

注意：1.词数90左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.文中不允许出现自己的真实姓名和学校。

My Dream

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【参考范文】

My Dream

Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I am very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger. To be a doctor is really good. I think my dream will come true one day.

【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于材料作文写作，要求以“My Dream”为题，介绍自己的梦想，以及拥有这个梦想的原因，和为此会做些什么。写作时按说明文的格式来写。

2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来写。写作时，说明“梦想是什么”这一部分应用一般现在时；讲述拥有这个梦想的事件时，应用一般过去时；而在讲述为了实现梦想，“会做什么事”这一部分应用一般将来时。按照题目要求，先介绍“我”的梦想，再讲述拥有这一梦想的事件过程，最后列举为了实现梦想会做的事情并结尾。写作时注意三种时态的正确使用方法。

6．中国共产主义青年团已经走过了百年历程。作为新时代青年中的一员，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，奋斗的青春更美丽。请以“How to Make Myself Better”为题，谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己。

要求：1.字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚，语法正确，行文连贯；

2.思维导图中的提示词仅供参考，可适当发挥；

3.词数：80-100词。

How to Make Myself Better

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【参考范文】

How to Make Myself Better

As a teenager, I think I should work harder to make myself better.

First of all, it is important to live healthily. I will eat more fruit and vegetables. I will also take exercise every day and get enough sleep. What’s more, I should work hard at all my subjects. I’ll not be afraid to face challenges any more and try my best to solve the problems. Besides, it is necessary to have a good relationship with family and friends. Last but not least, it’s our responsibility to take care of our parents. I’ll also do what I can to help other people.

By doing these, I will make myself better and better.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“How to Make Myself Better”并结合思维导图中的提示词写一篇文章，介绍如何成为更好的自己。

2.写作指导：本文以一般将来时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段从不同的方面介绍如何成为更好的自己；第三段进行总结。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

7．随着“双减”政策的实施，同学们有更多的课余时间来培养自己的兴趣爱好，把生活过成自己喜欢的样子。亲爱的同学，你想做一个快乐的人吗？

请你以“How to Be a Happy Student”为题，写一篇英语短文。

要求：(1)根据右边的图文信息，选择至少两个方面的内容行文，可适当发挥；

(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名等个人信息；

(3)字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，条理清楚；

(4)词数不少于80。

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【参考范文】

How to Be a Happy Student

Everyone wants to be happy. As a student, what can we do to be happy? Here is my advice.

It’s necessary for us to have learning goals. The goals can make us be clear about what to do every day and live a busy and meaningful life. To be healthy is to be happy. So remember to have good life habits and do more exercise. We can do some sports, such as running or playing basketball. Also, we should be ready to help others. When we help those in trouble, we can get much happiness. Besides, the most important for us is to stay in a good mood. If we are in good spirits, we can study better. We should have a positive attitude and be ready to help others.

I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“How to Be a Happy Student”为题，结合图文信息进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从健康，爱好，情绪和习惯几方面进行阐述；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

8．最近，你校开展了“巧手制书签，书香满校园”主题活动，请你以“A DIY bookmark for my favourite book”为题，根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向学校英文报的读书专栏投稿，介绍制作书签的目的和过程，并分享制作心得。

要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；

（3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。A DIY bookmark for my favourite book

Last week I took part in our school’s Reading & Bookmark-making activity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】：

A DIY bookmark for my favourite book

Last week I took part in our school’s Reading & Bookmark-making activity. Its purpose was to help us enjoy reading our favourite book. My favorite book is the classic novel Journey to the West, one of the Four Great Classical Novels. I like Monkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.

In order to make a bookmark, I prepared a card, scissors, glue and so on. First, I cut the card into long strips. And then I drew a picture of a monkey on the left and wrote a famous saying “Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.” on the right to encourage me not to give up when facing difficulties. At last, I glued it to a thin piece of wood.

Although I met some difficulties in this process, I never gave up and I am proud of myself.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“A DIY bookmark for my favourite book”为题，并结合表格中的内容，描述制作书签的目的和过程，可适当增加细节。

2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；人称以第一人称为主。第一段介绍制作书签的目的，以及最喜欢的书的类型和最喜欢这本书的什么地方；第二段重点描述制作书签需要的材料和工具以及制作书签的过程；第三段描述自己的感想。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

三、讲稿

9．假定你是李华，来自光明学校，将代表你校参加全市中学生“学会学习”主题分享会。请以 “Learning to Learn” 为题，根据提示问题和写作要求，写一篇英语发言稿。

提示问题：1. What subject are you interested in?

2. How do you deal with the difficulties in learning?

3. Do you often make any plans for your study?

4. What methods do you usually use to learn?

5. Do you use other good learning materials?

写作要求：1.请作简要的自我介绍；

2.至少选择三个提示问题展开写作；

3.词数不少于80词；

4.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。

Learning to Learn

Dear teachers and students,

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【参考范文】

Learning to Learn

Dear teachers and students,

      My name is Li Hua. I come from Guangming School. Today my topic is “Learn to learn”.

      First of all, my favorite subject is English. In fact, at the beginning, my English was not good, but I was still very interested in it. In order to improve my English, I often ask my teacher for help and recite words at home by myself every day. Slowly, my English improved. Besides, I also make plans for my study. For example, I have to memorize English words when I have breakfast in the morning. And I review what I learn every day before I go to bed at night.

      That’s all. Thank you!

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：根据所给英文提示以 “Learning to Learn” 为题写一篇作文，介绍“学会学习”。

[写作步骤]

第一步，可以从所给提示问题选出两个来叙述；

第二步，再从剩下的问题中选择一个展开描述。

[亮点词汇]

①be interested in对……感兴趣

②in order to 为了

③for example比如

[高分句型]

①I have to memorize English words when I have breakfast in the morning.（when引导的时间状语从句）

②And I review what I learn every day before I go to bed at night.（what引导的宾语从句）

10．今年6月6日是第27个全国爱眼日，爱护眼睛很重要，请用英语写一篇关于保护眼睛的演讲稿，在班会上发言。

提示：1. 爱护眼睛的重要性；

2. 保护视力的方法：保持饮食均衡、勤做眼保健操、控制屏幕使用时间、养成良好的生活习惯；

3. ……

注意：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；

2. 文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

3. 80词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。

参考词汇：eyesight(视力)

have/keep a balanced diet (保持饮食均衡)

control the screen time (控制屏幕使用时间)

Good morning, everyone! My topic today is “Protecting Our Eyes”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all. Thanks for your listening!

【参考范文】    

 Good morning, everyone! My topic today is “Protecting Our Eyes”.

     Nowadays more and more students are nearsighted. As we all know, the eyes are the windows to the soul. If there is a problem with the eyes, there will be a lot of trouble in life and study. So we should try our best to protect our eyes. Here are some suggestions.

     First, we should keep a balanced diet. Second, we should do eye exercises frequently. Third, we should control screen time. Finally, we also need to form good living habits.

     In a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy.

     That’s all. Thanks for your listening!

【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求写一篇演讲稿。根据内容提示，写一篇作文关于保护眼睛。

2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。除去所给的开头和结尾，文章可再分为三段，第一段介绍爱护眼睛的重要性；第二段给出保护视力的方法；最后一段做总结。行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。