02 初中生活回顾与高中生活展望 中考英语满分作文赏析

02 初中生活回顾与高中生活展望

NO.1

（2022·新疆·中考真题）初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，回想三年的学习和生活，一定有许多事情给你留下美好的记忆，请选择一件你最难忘的事情写一篇短文。

例如：1.一次难忘的旅行

2.一次难忘的比赛

3.一次难忘的志愿服务

……

要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；

2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名：

3.词数：80-120，开头已给出，开头及标点符号不计入总词数。

Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories…

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【满分作文赏析】

Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories.

Last summer vacation, I decided to learn to swim. At first, I was afraid of swimming in the water. I didn’t feel good in the water. But the coach said he would protect me. Then I started swimming, but I couldn’t swim forward at all. With the coach’s help, I knew how to move and swim with my hands and legs. A few days later, I could swim by myself. I was very excited and proud of myself.

What I learn from this experience is that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it and try to do it bravely.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文主要讲述一件令你最难忘的事情，可适当增加细节。

2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段主要讲述令你难忘的事情是什么；最后一段讲述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

NO.2

（2022·江苏泰州·中考真题）我们在变化中成长，成长让我们的人生充满意义。回首三年初中时光，我们在学习、思想、性格、生活等方面发生了很多变化。你所在学校公众号的英语写作栏目正在开展“我的成长”征文活动，请分享你初中三年中的成长故事，具体讲述其中一个变化。

要点如下：

1.变化是什么？

2.变化过程是什么？

3.你从中得到了什么启发？

要求：

1.必须含有所有要点，并适当拓展；

2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；

3.词数100左右。

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【满分作文赏析】

We grow up in change. Growth makes our life full of meaning. Looking back on the three years of junior high school, I have experienced many changes in my study, thoughts, personality, life and so on. The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.

When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me books. Gradually, I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to enjoy my free time.

Books are my friends. And they will benefit me a lot.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示问题，分享自己初中生活以来的一个变化，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍变化是什么；第二段介绍变化过程是什么；第三段介绍从中得到了什么启发。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

NO.3

（2022·浙江金华·中考真题）假如你是Li Hua，你的外国好友Frank来信告知他将成为你校七年级新生。请根据下列表格中的内容，结合自己初中阶段学习、生活等方面的经历，回一封邮件，供他参考。

注意：1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；参考词汇供选择使用；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；

3. 词数：80~100；

4. 邮件的格式及正文首句已给出，不计入总词数；正文首句仅供选择使用。

正文首句： I’m glad to know you’re coming to study in our school.

Dear Frank,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【满分作文赏析】

Dear Frank,

I’m glad to know you’re coming to study in our school. Here is something I’d like to share.

To begin with, you need to prepare some notebooks and dictionaries, especially a Chinese one, because you will often need them in your study. As a student, you have to work hard. But whatever happens, stay active, even when you fail.

And respect the teachers as it’s a Chinese tradition. Besides, you will be happier if you get on well with your classmates. Lastly, it is a good idea to develop some hobbies to make your life better and more colourful.

I hope my advice will work. Looking forward to seeing you!

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文要求根据题干表格中的内容给Frank写封邮件，告知他在中国学习的一些注意事项，可适当增加细节。

2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段和第三段根据表格中的提示详细告知他在中国学习时需要注意的事项；第四段表达自己的希望。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

NO.4

（2022·湖北十堰·中考真题）假设你叫李华，即将从初中毕业。请你根据下面表格中的信息给校长写一封信，谈谈你对学校的一些看法。

提示词：schoolyard校园

要求：1.短文应涵盖上述所有内容，可适当发挥。

2.行文连贯，条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范。

3.不得在文中出现学校名称和人名。

4.词数80-100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。

Dear Mr./Ms. Headmaster,I am writing to show my sincere gratitude to you for the progress I have made in the past three years. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【满分作文赏析】

Dear Mr./Ms. Headmaster,

I am writing to show my sincere gratitude to you for the progress I have made in the past three years. I am writing to tell you some things that have affected our school life.

There are many advantages in our school. We have excellent teachers and friendly classmates. Our schoolyard is beautiful and big. But there are still some problems. First of all, we are faced with endless homework every day. Some students have to stay up very late to deal with it, which makes us have less rest time. Secondly, as we all know, colorful out-of-class activities are of great importance to our healthy growth, but we can hardly spare time to participate in them.

In my opinion, we should have more free time to balance our study and life. We should have more colorful and meaningful activities.

Best wishes.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容，写信给校长谈谈学校的优点与不足，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段，首尾两端已给出；第二段介绍学校的优点与不足；第三段给出建议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

NO.5

（2022·四川达州·中考真题）初中生活已近尾声，我们即将迎来崭新的高中生活。请以“My Plans for Senior High School Life”为题，从以下五个方面谈谈你的打算：

1.尽快适应新环境；

2.合理利用时间，保证充足睡眠；

3.认真对待学习，取得进步；

4.积极加入社团，交更多的朋友；

5.……

写作要求：

（1）内容包括提示信息并适当发挥，文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。

（2）全文字数不少于90词。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）卷面整洁，书写工整，条理清楚，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。

参考词汇：adjust to 适应

My Plans for Senior High School Life

My junior high school days are coming to an end. And now I am looking forward to my life in senior high school. To better prepare for it, I’ve made some plans.

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【满分作文赏析】

My Plans for Senior High School Life

My junior high school days are coming to an end. And now I am looking forward to my life in senior high school. To better prepare for it, I’ve made some plans.

Firstly, I’m going to adapt to the new environment as soon as possible. Secondly, I plan to make good use of time and get enough sleep. Thirdly, I will take study seriously and make progress. Fourthly, I will join clubs actively and make more friends. Lastly, I’m ready to take up my hobby of playing basketball in my free time to not only keep healthy but also keep my mind clear by playing basketball.

All in all, my plans will not be achieved if I just talk, so I’ll put in more efforts to make them come true.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“My Plans for Senior High School Life”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般将来时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己详细的计划；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。