辽宁高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份辽宁高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共20页。
建议信
1．假定你是李华，你所在学校要举办英语戏剧节（The English Drama Festival）。你们想邀请外教John参加。请你给他写一封信，要点如下：
1. 介绍活动内容；
2. 邀请他表演节目；
3. 请他提出活动建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2．假定你是李华，正在负责策划“绿色校园”活动（Green Campus Campaign），请给你的英国笔友Henry写一封邮件，向他介绍此次活动的目的、内容，并征求他的建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Henry,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3．假设你是李华，你收到英国笔友Tom发来的一封邮件，得知他最近转入了一所新学校，在新学校里他没有朋友感到很孤单。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 帮他分析原因；2. 给他提出建议（至少两条）；3. 美好祝愿。
注意：1. 词数不少于 80；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．某英文杂志在其“互动栏目（Q&A）”刊出Peter的来信，欢迎读者就信中提到的问题进行分析并提出建议。假定你是读者李华，请给 Peter回信。
Dear editorI’m a senior high student. Because of the outbreak of COVID-19, I have to stay at home. Those are really frustrating days. I feel my normal life ruined and I was nearly driven crazy. What should I do?
Thanks a lot.
Peter
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友 Max 给你写了一封信，针对美国疫情严重的情况，征求你的建议。请你给他回封信，要点如下：
1. 合理安排居家学习生活；
2.做好个人防护措施；
3.调整好心态。
参考词汇：novel coronavirus 新冠状病毒
注意：1. 词数 100 左右，格式已给出；
2. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Max,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，为迎接5月31日“世界无烟日”（World No Tobacco Day），你校学生会将办英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要求写一则英文通知，内容包括：
1. 比赛的时间和地点；
2. 演讲内容（吸烟的害处，摆脱烟瘾的建议……）
3. 演讲时长报名方式及截止日期。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Notice
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7．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jamie来信说他对中国传统文学非常感兴趣，但在阅读时遇到了困难，比如很多汉字不认识，读不懂文章的意思等，希望得到你的帮助。请给他回信，内容包括：
1. 表示理解并给予安慰；
2. 提出建议。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：中国传统文学traditional Chinese literature；汉字Chinese characters
Dear Jamie,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
8．假定你是李华，星期六晚上学校要放映电影《丝绸之路》(The Silk Road)，你想请在学校学习的外国朋友Peter一起观看。请给他写一封邀请函。内容包括:
要点: 1.时间和地点;
2.简单介绍丝绸之路:
3.建议他先了解相关的历史。
注意: 1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
2.词数100词左右:
3.信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing recently?
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．春季是充满希望的季节，但也是各种传染病多发的季节。假定你是校学生会主席李华，请代表学生会给你校英语报“青少年健康”栏目写一封主题为“健康生活.远离病毒”的倡议书，内容包括：
1.简述倡议目的；
2.提出防范措施；
3.倡议共同行动。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数。
（相关词汇：传染病infectious diseases；口罩：mask：病毒：virus）
Dear fellow students,
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The Student Union
10．假如你是李华，你的朋友Smith是一位独自在国际部学习的英国交换生，正在准备汉语的HSK考试，感到压力很大，想得到你的建议。请按以下内容要点给他回信。
要点：1. 如何应对压力
2. 如何准备汉语考试
3. 给他鼓励和安慰
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Smith,
I’m glad to have heard from you.
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Yours,
Li Hua












1．Dear John,
The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week. Knowing that you are interested in English drama, I am writing to invite you to participate in it.
A variety of activities will be included in the festival, such as singing, crosstalk and so on. You are expected to put on a performance with us. Besides, since it is the first time that we have organized the English Drama Festival, we really hope you can give us some valuable advice.
Looking forward to your coming.
Sincerely Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。假定你是李华，你所在学校要举办英语戏剧节（The English Drama Festival）。你们想邀请外教John参加。请你给他写一封信。
【详解】假定你是李华，你所在学校要举办英语戏剧节（The English Drama Festival）。你们想邀请外教John参加。请你给他写一封信，要点如下：1. 介绍活动内容；2. 邀请他表演节目；3. 请他提出活动建议。分析可知，应该以第一人称和第二人称为主，一般将来时和一般现在时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。Knowing that you are interested in English drama, I am writing to invite you to participate in it.宾语从句的运用；Besides, since it is the first time that we have organized the English Drama Festival, we really hope you can give us some valuable advice.原因状语从句和宾语从句的运用。
2．Dear Henry,
How are you doing? I’m writing to seek your help, because we are to start a Green Campus Campaign to arouse students’ awareness of environmental protection.
We plan to organize this campaign like this. First, a series of lectures will be given, introducing ways to build a low-carbon school life. This will be followed by a discussion about ways of saving water, paper, and electricity at school. But how can we put them into practice and make them our daily routine? I wonder if you could give me some practical advice as I know you’ve organized such activities.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件给你的英国笔友Henry，向他介绍“绿色校园”活动的目的、内容，并征求他的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分法
    总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 介绍“绿色校园”活动的目的、内容；
2. 寻求建议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
seek sb.’s help；arouse awareness of；environmental protection；plan to do sth.；a series of；put …into practice；daily routine
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing to seek your help, because we are to start a Green Campus Campaign to arouse students’ awareness of environmental protection.
2. We plan to organize this campaign like this.
3. a series of lectures will be given,
4. But how can we put them into practice and make them our daily routine?
(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…，or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如I wonder if you could give me some practical advice这句话中用了if引导的宾语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如arouse awareness of，a series of，put …into practice，daily routine等，为文章增色不少。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear Tom,
I am sorry to hear that you feel lonely in your new school. As a new student, it is natural for you to find it difficult to get along well with the other students in class and don’t know how to adapt to new environment in the beginning.
Here are some suggestions that I hope can help you. First, don’t worry. Although you are not familiar with the other students there, time and patience will make you feel at home. Second, perhaps you are just not used to the lifestyle there at this moment, so you should try to adapt yourself to the new environment. Third, go out and get actively involved in some after-school activities, where you can find some students who share your interests. I believe you will make good friends soon. Last, communicate with your classmates actively, and let them know more about you.
May you make new friends soon./Wish to hear your good news soon.
Yours,
Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件给英国笔友Tom，帮他分析没有朋友感到孤单的原因并提出相关的建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分法
    总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 帮他分析原因；
2. 给他提出建议（至少两条）；
3. 美好祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
get along well with；adapt to；in the beginning；be familiar with；feel at home；be used to；get involved in；after-school activities；communicate with
第三步：连词成句
1. it is natural for you to find it difficult to get along well with the other students in class and don’t know how to adapt to new environment in the beginning.
2. Although you are not familiar with the other students there, time and patience will make you feel at home.
3. perhaps you are just not used to the lifestyle there at this moment,
4. go out and get actively involved in some after-school activities,
5. communicate with your classmates actively, and let them know more about you.
(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…，or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如Although you are not familiar with the other students there这句话中用了Although引导的让步状语从句，如Third, go out and get actively involved in some after-school activities, where you can find some students who share your interests.这句话中用了where引导的非限制性定语从句和who引导的定语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如get along well with，adapt to，be familiar with，get involved in，communicate with等，为文章增色不少；并注意了句子的衔接，如First，Second，Third，Last。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．Dear Peter,
I am very sorry to hear that you had to stay at home to prevent COVID-19 spreading. It is frustrating and hard to adapt to such a situation. Here are some suggestions I want to offer you.
To begin with, I strongly suggest that you choose some books you really want to read because reading can teach you some wisdom and broaden your horizons. In addition, it is also a good idea to find some hands-on activities, for example, cooking food for your family or do some painting, which will certainly strengthen your family bond and arouse your creativity. Most importantly, you are supposed to take a positive attitude to life and believe everything will pick up soon.
I sincerely hope my suggestions are of some help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回信，就信中提到的问题进行分析并提出建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.分析问题
      2.提出建议
      1）读书。（reading books）
      2）实际操作。（hands-on activities）
      3）积极的态度。（a positive attitude）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
adapt to; suggestions; To begin with; for example; do some painting; certainly; be supposed to do; pick up; be of some help
第三步：连词成句
1. It is frustrating and hard to adapt to such a situation.
2. Here are some suggestions I want to offer you.
3. To begin with, I strongly suggest that you choose some books you really want to read
4. for example, cooking food for your family or do some painting, which will certainly strengthen your family bond and arouse your creativity.
5. you are supposed to take a positive attitude to life and believe everything will pick up soon.
6. I sincerely hope my suggestions are of some help to you.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：In addition, it is also a good idea to find some hands-on activities, for example, cooking food for your family or do some painting, which will certainly strengthen your family bond and arouse your creativity.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；也使用了一些固定词组，如To begin with; for example; be supposed to do等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
5．Dear Max,
Sorry to learn that the spread of the novel coronavirus in the USA is becoming increasingly serious. Now, I’m writing to share with you what we have done.
Firstly, try to stay at home as much as possible, avoiding connect ing with others. With advanced technology especially the availability of the internet, we can still study, work, socialize, exercise and entertain while staying in. Secondly, once going out can’t be avoided, make sure you wear a mask, which is essential and vital. Most importantly, keep a positive attitude and a good state of mind, believing the spring is to come.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的美国笔友 Max 给你写了一封信，针对美国疫情严重的情况，征求你的建议。请你给他回封信，要点如下：1. 合理安排居家学习生活；2.做好个人防护措施；3.调整好心态。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：novel coronavirus (新冠状病毒)；increasingly (越来越)；share with (分享)；stay at home(待在家里迟)；make sure (确保)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Sorry to learn that the spread of the novel coronavirus in the USA is becoming increasingly serious.运用了宾语从句；Secondly, once going out can’t be avoided, make sure you wear a mask, which is essential and vital.运用了非限定性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Notice
As the World No Tobacco Day is drawing near, which falls on May 31st every year, an English speech will be held in the reporting hall of our school at three o'clock on April 21st. It aims to call on people to stay away from tobacco.
The content should include the harm of smoking, especially the harm to the teenagers. Please offer some practical advice on how to get rid of the habit of smoking. Every contestant should limit his or her speech within 5 minutes. After the speech, we'll hold a prize ceremony.
We do hope you can be active to take part in the speech contest. If you are interested, please sign up before the deadline---April 16th! You can send an email to us at info@qq.com.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一则英文通知，通知英语演讲比赛的相关情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
要求：1.比赛的时间和地点；
2. 演讲内容（吸烟的害处，摆脱烟瘾的建议……）
3. 演讲时长报名方式及截止日期。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
draw near; fall on; the reporting hall; aim to do; call on sb. to do sth.; stay away from; content; the harm of; offer; practical; get rid of; the habit of; contestant; limit; hold ceremony; be active to do sth.; take part in; sign up; deadline; send sth. to sb.;
第三步：连词成句
1.As the World No Tobacco Day is drawing near, which falls on May 31st every year, an English speech will be held in the reporting hall of our school at three o'clock on April 21st.
2.It aims to call on people to stay away from tobacco.
3.The content should include the harm of smoking, especially the harm to the teenagers.
4.Please offer some practical advice on how to get rid of the habit of smoking.
5.Every contestant should limit his or her speech within 5 minutes.
6.After the speech, we’ll hold a prize ceremony.
7.We do hope you can be active to take part in the speech contest.
8.If you are interested, please sign up before the deadline---April 16th!
9.You can send an email to us at info@qq.com.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：As the World No Tobacco Day is drawing near, which falls on May 31st every year, an English speech will be held in the reporting hall of our school at three o'clock on April 21st. 这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如draw near; fall on; aim to do; call on sb. to do sth.等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．Dear Jamie,
I am more than glad to know that you are interested in the traditional Chinese literature. It’s never easy to learn Chinese characters and essays. Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well, so you don’t have to feel upset. Here are some useful tips.
First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters. Second, you can learn from Chinese people around and I’m always here to help. But the most important is to keep on learning and reading. You are sure to make progress!
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本文为应用文。你的美国朋友Jamie来信说他对中国传统文学非常感兴趣，但在阅读时遇到了困难，比如很多汉字不认识，读不懂文章的意思等，希望得到你的帮助。请给他回信，内容包括：表示理解并给予安慰；提出建议。
【详解】本文为书信体作文。文章主要分为三个部分。第一部分叙述写信的原因。作者的美国朋友Jamie来信说他对中国传统文学非常感兴趣，但在阅读时遇到了困难。第二部分叙述信的主要内容。作者的朋友在阅读时遇到了困难，比如很多汉字不认识，读不懂文章的意思等，希望得到你的帮助。请给他回信，内容包括：表示理解并给予安慰；提出建议。最后表达自己期待对方的回信。写完后要检查是否有拼写错误，时态及人称是否一致等。
【点睛】文章内容完整，结构合理。文中运用了许多高级词汇，如more than glad be interested in...; feel upset; turn to the Internet for help ... learn from; keep on learning and reading; make progress。以及运用了First, Second等顺序连词。文章中运用了宾语从句I am more than glad to know that you are interested in the traditional Chinese literature；并列句Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well, so you don’t have to feel upset.；由where引导的定语从句turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters以及并列句you can learn from Chinese people around and I’m always here to help等，这些句式的运用提高了文章的档次。
8．Dear Peter,
How are you doing recently? I’m glad to tell you that a film named The Silk Road will be shown at eight p.m. in our school hall this Saturday, so I’m writing to invite you to join us.
The Silk Road, dating back to the Han Dynasty, was the most famous trade route connecting China and the western world. It not only promoted the trade of goods but also spread religions and technology between countries. Undoubtedly, it’s a good opportunity to learn about Chinese history.
Given that the film is open to the whole school, I advise you to get there earlier and read some relevant history books about it so that you can understand it better. See you then.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生邀请Peter一起观看星期六晚上学校放映的电影《丝绸之路》。
【详解】第一步: 审题
体裁: 应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构: 总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.时间和地点;
2.简单介绍丝绸之路:
3.建议他先了解相关的历史。
第二步: 列提纲 (重点词组)
be glad to；invite to；date back to；advise sb to do
第三步: 连词成句
I’m glad to tell you that a film named The Silk Road will be shown at eight p.m. in our school hall this Saturday, so I’m writing to invite you to join us.
The Silk Road, dating back to the Han Dynasty, was the most famous trade route connecting China and the western world.
It not only promoted the trade of goods but also spread religions and technology between countries.
Undoubtedly, it’s a good opportunity to learn about Chinese history.
Given that the film is open to the whole school, I advise you to get there earlier and read some relevant history books about it so that you can understand it better.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步: 连句成篇 (衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand,while,as for
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步: 润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了not only…but also…的固定句型，如：It not only promoted the trade of goods but also spread religions and technology between countries.使用了not only…but also…的固定句型，意为“它不仅促进了商品贸易，而且促进了各国之间宗教和技术的传播。”。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9．Dear fellow students，
Spring is coming! It brings us hope as well as a lot of infectious diseases. Some measures are supposed to be taken to protect us from the virus.
First of all people with cold or flu-like symptoms should wear masks to prevent viruses spreading from person to person. Of course, don't forget to wash your hands properly before eating or after using the toilet. Regular exercise is also one of the most important ways to help you stay away from catching any disease. If possible, avoid going to crowded public places such as cinemas, shopping malls and internet bars etc.
A healthy body results from good healthy habits, so let's act together to fight against diseases and create a better lite!
The Student Union
【分析】本文为应用文。春季是充满希望的季节，但也是各种传染病多发的季节。假定你是校学生会主席李华，请代表学生会给你校英语报“青少年健康”栏目写一封主题为“健康生活，远离病毒”的倡议书，内容包括：简述倡议目的；提出防范措施；倡议共同行动。
【详解】倡议书属于应用文的一种，由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。一般用将来时或一般现在时。第一部分引出倡议目的：提倡开展某项有意义的活动，推行某种行之有效的作法。第二段列举倡议内容和要求，并提出防范措施。倡议其实就是提建议，倡议书中所倡导的活动具有其广泛性和推广性。因此，可用be supposed to（应该），it is suggested that...（建议），it would be better if...（如果......，那就更好了）等。倡议的内容通常都不只一个，因此可用in addition，besides，additionally，what’s more，furthermore，moreover来列举这些内容。第三部分即结束语，要表示倡议者的决心和希望，倡议共同行动。写倡议书时，尽量使用具有感召力的语言，如名人名句，警句，以及对偶，排比等，提高语言的表达效果。
【点睛】本文要点完整，结构紧凑。语言具有鼓动性和感召力。文中运用了大量的高级词汇如as well as ;be supposed to do; protect ...from ... First of all , of course; stay away from; results from; act together to fight against diseases等。同时文中的句式非常灵活，文章以简单句为主。如祈使句don't forget to wash your hands properly before eating or after using the toilet.省略句如If possible, avoid going to crowded public places such as cinemas, shopping malls and internet bars etc.以及并列句A healthy body results from good healthy habits, so let's act together to fight against diseases and create a better lite!，这些句式的运用使得文章通俗易懂，具有很高的感召力。
10．Dear Smith,
I'm glad to have heard from you. Knowing that you are under great pressure recently, I'm writing the letter to give you some suggestions, which I hope will be helpful to you.
With an importance exam approaching myself, I can relate to your feeling. I believe working out a study plan helps to motivate you to work efficiently and thus increase your confidence. Additionally, it's a good idea to do some physical exercise to build up your body and relieve your pressure.
According to my experience, to prepare for an exam is to review your lessons step by step. It's advisable to refer to your notes and consult your Chinese teacher if necessary.
With your hard work and strong will, I'm convinced that you'll pass the exam and cheer up again.    
Yours，
Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给Smith写信，给他关于如何准备HSK考试的建议。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1. 如何应对压力
2. 如何准备汉语考试
3. 给他鼓励和安慰
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
offer sb sth./ under pressure/ deal with/ help sb. do sth./ make preparations for/ step by step/ pass the test/ fail to do sth./refer to/take notes
第三步：连词成句
Knowing that you are under great pressure recently, I'm writing to give you some suggestions, which I hope will be helpful to you.
I can understand your feeling, because I also have an important exam to take.
Working out a study plan helps to motivate you to work efficiently and thus increase your confidence.
It's a good idea to do some physical exercise to build up your body and relieve your pressure.
According to my experience, to prepare for an exam is to review your lessons step by step.
It's advised that you should refer to your notes and consult your Chinese teacher when necessary.
With your hard work and strong will, I believe that you'll pass the exam and feel relaxed.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：Knowing that you are under great pressure recently, I'm writing the letter to give you some suggestions, which I hope will be helpful to you.中that引导宾语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句；It's advisable to refer to your notes and consult your Chinese teacher if necessary. 中if引导省略的条件状语从句。这些从句的使用为文章增色不少。