高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信

这是一份高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信，共15页。
感谢信/祝贺信1．假定你是学生李华，你在学校组织的第三届用英语讲中国故事挑战赛(“Stories of China Retold in English”Challenge)中获得冠军。请撰写一封英语邮件给外教David，分享这一喜讯并感谢他在赛前给予你的帮助。内容包括：1. 告知喜讯;2. 回忆外教提供的帮助并表达感谢。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear David, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua2．假定你是学生会主席李华，学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动(Work Creates a Better Life)得到了外教Patrick的大力支持。活动已经圆满结束，请你给他写一封感谢信。内容包括：1. 表示感谢；2. 外教的帮助；3. 活动的反响。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Patrick,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua3．假定你是李华，在你们班英国交换生 Chris 的帮助下你获得了学校举办的“温暖春日”主题摄影竞赛活动的一 等奖。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 表示感谢;2. 回顾他对你的帮助;3. 邀请他参加下次摄影展。注意：写作词数应为 100 左右。Dear Chris, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua4．假定你是李华，你的美国好友Jack在学校篮球比赛中被评为MVP，请你给他写封祝贺信。 要点如下：1. 表示祝贺；2. 肯定他的付出；3. 希望学习他的篮球技术。注意：1. 写作词数应为 80词左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假定你是李华，昨天在学校不慎丢失钱包。今天你接到学校学生会的电话，称外教Mr. Smith捡到你的钱包并上交学校，让你速去认领。请你给Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件表示感谢，内容包括：1．表示感谢的原因；2．丢失的过程和物品；3．对Mr. Smith作出评价。注意：1．词数100左右，邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mr. Smith,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua6．假定你叫李华，你和你的团队即将结束在新西兰某中学的文化交流活动。请代表团队准备一篇答谢辞在答谢会上致辞，内容包括：1. 感谢；2. 收获；3. 愿望。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．毕业之际，请你根据以下要点用英语给你的一位老师写封信，感谢他多年来给予你的教育和帮助。要点包括：1．写作的目的；2．老师给予你的教育和帮助；3．你所取得的成绩。注意：1．词数100左右；2．信件的开头和结尾已经给出，请接着往下写；3．可适当增加细节，使文章过渡自然。Dear Mr. Li,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua8．假如你是李华，目前在爱尔兰进行交流学习。上周末你受当地学生Chris邀请参加了“爱尔兰传统音乐节”活动。 请你写一封邮件给Chris，内容包括：1) 感谢邀请；2) 分享你的活动收获；3) 表示期待。注意：1. 词数80个左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假如你是班长李华，你们班举办了以“Protect Our Earth”为主题的班会活动，并邀请了王教授给同学们做了讲座，请你在活动结束后给王教授写一封信表示感谢。内容包括：1. 表达感谢；2. 活动的反响和同学们的收获；3. 再次表达感谢。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Professor Wang,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Alex给你推荐了一部英文电影。你观看后收获很大，因此想给他写一封信表示感谢，内容包括：1．表示感谢；2．介绍你的收获；3．希望获得更多推荐。注意：1．词数应为100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1．One Possible Version:Dear David,Full of joy, I can’t wait to share with you this exciting news! I have been crowned with the championship in the third “Stories of China Retold in English” Challenge in my school. My gratitude for you is beyond description. When I was racking my brains for the draft, it was you who helped me polish it and correct grammar mistakes carefully. With the draft completed, it was you who helped me rehearse the speech and kindly pointed out how to pause and articulate in a better way. In the tryout, when I stuttered due to extreme anxiety, it was you who encouraged me to continue. Without your constant encouragement, my morale would have been dampened. Thanks again for your generous help and wish you all the best. Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生撰写一封英语邮件给外教David，分享自己获得学校组织的中国故事挑战赛的冠军这一喜讯并感谢他在赛前给予你的帮助。【详解】1.词汇积累令人激动的：exciting→thrilling感激：gratitude→appreciation初稿： draft→sketch完成：complete→accomplish2.句式拓展同义句原句：With the draft completed, it was you who helped me rehearse the speech and kindly pointed out how to pause and articulate in a better way. 拓展句：When the draft was completed, it was you who helped me rehearse the speech and kindly pointed out how to pause and articulate in a better way. 【点睛】【高分句型1】When I was racking my brains for the draft, it was you who helped me polish it and correct grammar mistakes carefully.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句和强调句式)【高分句型2】With the draft completed, it was you who helped me rehearse the speech and kindly pointed out how to pause and articulate in a better way.(运用了with的复合结构和强调句式)2．Dear Patrick,I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in the Work Creates a Better Life, which has turned out to be an amazing success.It is so nice of you to have offered us a variety of presentation skills and creative suggestions on our show. It was under your professional guidance that the participants showed their skills of cooking, gardening, etc. Their impressive performances definitely fueled their passion for daily life skills. Most importantly, this activity helped students receive wide admiration and gain their tremendous confidence.Many thanks for your time and support.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封感谢信，感谢外教Patrick对学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动的大力支持。【详解】1. 词汇积累衷心的：sincere→heartfelt感激：gratitude→appreciation惊人的：amazing→fascinating提供：offer→provide2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Their impressive performances definitely fueled their passion for daily life skills.拓展句：Their performances which impressed prople definitely fueled their passion for daily life skills.【点睛】[高分句型1]I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in the Work Creates a Better Life, which has turned out to be an amazing success.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]It was under your professional guidance that the participants showed their skills of cooking, gardening, etc.(it is...that强调句型)3．Dear Chris,I’m glad to tell you that I have won first place in cur school’s “Warm Spring” Photography Competition. I’m writing to express my gratitude for your help.While I was preparing for the competition, you taught me what makes a good photo. Besides, I learned how to adjust the shooting modes and choose the best settings for a good photo from the short videos you recommended to me. As a result, I won the competition.I hope you can take part in the next photography competition. I believe you will definitely be the winner.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国交换生 Chris写一封邮件，感谢他对自己参加摄影竞赛活动的帮助。内容包括：1. 表示感谢；2. 回顾他对你的帮助；3. 邀请他参加下次摄影展。【详解】1.词汇积累感谢：gratitude→thanks为……做准备：prepare for→make preparations for此外：besides → what’s more参加：take part in→ participate in2.句式拓展运用形容词作状语合并句子原句：I’m glad to tell you that I have won first place in cur school’s “Warm Spring” Photography Competition. I’m writing to express my gratitude for your help.拓展句：Glad to tell you that I have won first place in cur school’s “Warm Spring” Photography Competition, I’m writing to express my gratitude for your help.【点睛】【高分句型1】While I was preparing for the competition, you taught me what makes a good photo.（运用了while引导的时间状语从句以及what引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】I learned how to adjust the shooting modes and choose the best settings for a good photo from the short videos you recommended to me.（运用了“疑问词how +动词不定式”作宾语）4．参考范文：Dear Jack,I’m very excited to know the news that you were awarded MVP in the basketball match held in school last Sunday.I show my congratulations sincerely. This is a good evidence to show what hard work you’ve devoted to practicing and improving your skills. When you first learned to play basketball, you were at a loss about the basic skills and felt embarrassed. But it wasn’t long before you caught up and became an excellent player. That you were awarded MVP shows your great determination and painstaking efforts in practising basketball. I hope that one day we can have a game of basketball, so that I can learn from you.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国好友Jack写一封祝贺信，祝贺他在学校篮球比赛中被评为MVP。【详解】1.词汇积累兴奋的、激动的：excited → thrilled表达祝贺：show congratulations → express congratulations / extend congratulations致力于：devoted to → committed to提高：improve → enhance2.句式拓展同义句原句：That you were awarded MVP shows your great determination and painstaking efforts in practising basketball.拓展句：The fact that you were awarded MVP shows your great determination and painstaking efforts in practising basketball.【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m very excited to know the news that you were awarded MVP in the basketball match held in school last Sunday.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)【高分句型2】I hope that one day we can have a game of basketball, so that I can learn from you.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和so that引导的目的状语从句)5．Dear Mr. Smith,I’m Li Hua, a student of No. 2 High School. I take this opportunity to express my appreciation for your returning my wallet.Here are some details. First and foremost, on my way home to the school dining hall, I lost my wallet due to my carelessness yesterday. In the wallet there was some money, my ID card and student card. As you know, my ID card and student card are very important to me. I was very worried and even sleepless. Moreover, I was still feeling anxious today when I was informed to go to the Student Union and take back what I had lost, where I learned that it was you who picked up my wallet and kindly handed it in timely.It was such a pleasant surprise that I’d like to express my thanks to you. What a good example you have set to me to learn from! Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Hua【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写一封感谢信，感谢他捡到你的钱包。【详解】1.词汇积累机会：opportunity→chance感谢：appreciation→thanks归还：return→give back而且：Moreover→what’s more2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：First and foremost, on my way home to the school dining hall, I lost my wallet due to my carelessness yesterday.拓展句：First and foremost, when I was on my way home to the school dining hall, I lost my wallet due to my carelessness yesterday.【点睛】【高分句型1】As you know, my ID card and student card are very important to me.（由As引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Moreover, I was still feeling anxious today when I was informed to go to the Student Union and take back what I had lost, where I learned that it was you who picked up my wallet and kindly handed it in timely.（由when引导的时间状语从句，what引导的宾语从句，where引导的定语从句，that引导的宾语从句和who引导的强调句型结构）6．One Possible Version:Good evening! Dear friends, I’m very pleased to stand here on behalf of my team to address you. Firstly, I’d like to express our sincere gratitude to you for your thoughtful care of us. Your kindness has left a deep and beautiful impression on us. Secondly, from the cultural exchange activities, each of us has gained a lot. We’re here to spread our traditional Chinese culture, such as Peking Opera, and you’re fond of them, which makes us extremely proud. Meanwhile, you’ve also showcased us your excellent culture, which has broadened our horizons. Finally, I hope our friendship will last forever. I also sincerely invite you to China and once again experience our excellent culture. Thank you all!【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你叫李华，你和你的团队即将结束在新西兰某中学的文化交流活动。请代表团队准备一篇答谢辞在答谢会上致辞。【详解】1.词汇积累代表：on behalf of→ represent首先：Firstly → First of all喜欢：be fond of→ be keen on极好的：excellent→ wonderful2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I also sincerely invite you to China and once again experience our excellent culture. 拓展句：I also sincerely invite you to China, where you can experience our excellent culture again.【点睛】【高分句型1】We’re here to spread our traditional Chinese culture, such as Peking Opera, and you’re fond of them, which makes us extremely proud.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Meanwhile, you’ve also showcased us your excellent culture, which has broadened our horizons. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）7．One possible version:Dear Mr. Li,I’m going to leave this school soon. So I’m writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for what you have done for me in the past three years.When I first came to this school, I was poor in my English. With your patient teaching and timely guidance, I have become one of the top three students in English in the class. What’s more, I even got the first prize in the English speech contest in the city last term. Without your help, I wouldn’t have made such great progress.Thank you again for what you have done for me. Best wishes.  Yours，Li Hua【导语】本文是应用文写作。要求考生用英语给自己的一位老师写封信，感谢他多年来的教育和帮助。【详解】1. 词汇积累表达：express→extend衷心的：heartfelt→sincere在……不好：be poor in→be weak in另外：what’s more→in addition2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：What’s more, I even got the first prize in the English speech contest in the city last term.拓展句：What’s more, I even got the first prize in the English speech contest which was held by the city last term.【点睛】[高分句型1]So I’m writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for what you have done for me in the past three years.(运用了what引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]When I first came to this school, I was poor in my English.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)8．Dear Chris,Thank you for inviting me to the Irish Traditional Music Festival last weekend. It was an amazing experience and I thoroughly enjoyed spending time with you.The festival left me with a deeper appreciation for Irish music and culture. What impressed me most were the talent of the musicians and the lively atmosphere of the event. Old Irish melodies gently touched my soul, my pressure melting away.I am so grateful for the chance to have a close taste of the local culture. And I am looking forward to more opportunities to explore Ireland with you in future.Best regards,Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给爱尔兰当地学生Chris写信感谢他邀请你参加了“爱尔兰传统音乐节”活动并分享收获。【详解】1.词汇积累令人惊讶的：amazing→ surprising活泼的、生动的：lively→ vivid感激：be grateful for→ be thankful for期盼：look forward to→ expect2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：And I am looking forward to more opportunities to explore Ireland with you in future.拓展句：And I am looking forward to more opportunities that can help to explore Ireland with you in future【点睛】【高分句型1】What impressed me most were the talent of the musicians and the lively atmosphere of the event.（运用了what引导的主语从句）【高分句型2】I am so grateful for the chance to have a close taste of the local culture.（运用了不定式作后置定语）9．Dear Professor Wang,I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in our class meeting “Protect Our Earth”.Your lecture is such a great success that we are deeply impressed by it. The activity has fueled our passion for our earth, and raised our awareness of protecting the environment. Realising the great harm caused by the smog and the importance of the environment, many of our students have taken immediate action such as planting more trees and volunteering to educate the public to learn recycling to protect the earth.Many thanks for your time and support, and we’ll do our part to make our earth beautiful.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给王教授写一封感谢信，并告知活动的反响和同学们的收获。【详解】1.词汇积累真诚的：sincere → honest/frank/earnest增强：fuel → enhance/strengthen伤害：harm → damage美丽：beautiful→pretty2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：The activity has fueled our passion for our earth, and raised our awareness of protecting the environment.拓展句：Not only the activity has fueled our passion for our earth, but also raised our awareness of protecting the environment.【高分句型1】Your lecture is such a great success that we are deeply impressed by it.（运用了such… that引导结果状语从句）【高分句型2】Realising the great harm caused by the smog and the importance of the environment, many of our students have taken immediate action such as planting more trees and volunteering to educate the public to learn recycling to protect the earth.（运用了现在分词、不定式短语作状语）10．Dear Alex,How are you doing? I’m writing to express my sincere appreciation to you for recommending me the English movie. The recommended movie, which is suitable for an English learner like me, has brought me many unexpected benefits. Having finished watching it, I have acquired more practical and commonly used expressions, which contributes a lot to my spoken English. Besides, the idea the movie conveys is so inspiring for me that I have regarded it as the wisdom to guide me in my life. Please accept my thanks once again. I really hope you can recommend me more excellent English movies. Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的外国朋友Alex给你推荐了一部英文电影，你观看后收获很大这一情况，给他写一封信表示感谢。【详解】1.词汇积累感谢：appreciation→ thanks此外：besides → what’s more优秀的，极好的：excellent→ wonderful获得：acquire→ attain2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I’m writing to express my sincere appreciation to you for recommending me the English movie. 拓展句：Because you recommend me the English movie, I’m writing to express my sincere appreciation to you.【点睛】【高分句型1】The recommended movie, which is suitable for an English learner like me, has brought me many unexpected benefits.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Having finished watching it, I have acquired more practical and commonly used expressions, which contributes a lot to my spoken English.(运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句)