高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．近来抖音视频在青少年中间颇为流行，有些青少午甚至看抖音视频着迷，耽误了学习，荒废了学业。假定你是某国际高中的学生会主席，请你准备一篇发言稿，在学生会的例会上致辞。内容包括;

1. 抖音视频(Tik Tok Short Video) 的流行；

2. 抖音对青少年成长的危害；

3,可以发展哪些更有益身心的爱好。

注意：1.词数100-120左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Good afternoon, everyone!

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Thank you for your listening!

2．假如你是某初中英语教师Mr. Wang，你以前的学生李华进入高中之后，觉得英语学起来比较费劲，苦恼之余向你写信求助。请你给他写一封回信，给他提供一些英语学习方面的建议。

提示如下：

1.学习英语的必要性；

2.介绍日常学习生活中能够学好英语的方法：如扩大词汇量，多用英语与人交流等；

3.劝他不要轻易放弃，只要坚持就能取得进步。

注意：

1.词数100词左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Li Hua,

I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble in learning senior English.

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Yours,

Mr. Wang

3．假设你是李华，你班交换生John发来邮件说他想在抖音(TikTok)上注册一个号并分享自己的学校生活，他想听听你的意见。请你给他回复，内容包括：

1. 你的观点；

2. 说明理由；

3. 提出注意事项。

注意：1. 写作词数为80词左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear John,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

4．假定你是李华，你校交换生Lucy准备参加所在城市组织的汉语演讲比赛，特征求你的意见。请你回复一封邮件， 内容如下：

1. 表示鼓励；

2. 注意事项。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80词左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Lucy,

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Yours,

Li Hua

5．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom想要学习中国书法（Chinese Calligraphy），向你咨询有关信息。请你根据下面提示，给他写一封回信。内容包括：

1 对Tom学习中国书法的想法表示肯定；

2 学习书法的建议；

3 表达希望。

注意：

1. 开头和结尾已经给出；

2. 词数80左右；

3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

6．假设你是李华，你的朋友Jack打算利用圣诞假期在中国旅行，给你发来电子邮件请求帮忙制订一个旅行计划，请你给他进行回信。要点如下：

1. 目的地；

2. 交通工具；

3. 景点、食物等。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

It’s a good idea to spend your Christmas holiday touring China.

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Yours,

Li Hua

7．假定你是李华，曾经在海外留学，你的朋友李蕾即将出国学习，来信向你请教。请你给她写一封回信，内容包括：

1.和寄宿家庭一起生活；

2.做一个自主学习者（an autonomous learner）；

3.平衡学习和社交活动。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，内容丰富。

Dear Li Lei,

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Yours,

Li Hua

8．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jeff来信说他痴迷于刷短视频，对学习失去了兴趣，很苦恼。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1.肯定短视频在某些方面的好处；

2.你的建议；

3.表达祝愿。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Jeff,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

9．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校交换生Jim打算今年暑假回英国，想送给他的妈妈一件具有中国特色的礼物，特发来邮件就准备什么礼物向你咨询。请你用英文给他回复一封电子邮件。内容包括：

1. 建议的礼物；

2. 说明选择该礼物的原因；

3. 表达祝福。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

10．假定你是李华，最近收到了你的美国笔友Mike的来信。他在信中说他一直没能适应高中的学习生活，希望你能结合你自身的经验给他一些建议。请你给他写一封回信。

注意：

1.至少写出三条建议；

2.词数100词左右。

Dear Mike,

I’m delighted to receive your letter.

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Yours,

Li Hua

1．范文

Good afternoon, everyone!

These days watching Tik Tok Short Video becomes popular among teenagers who spend their free time watching and making comments on it.

Some teenagers are obsessed with Tik Tok Short Video, which makes them lag behind. In addition, watching Tik Tok Short Video does harm to their development both physically and mentally. Some videos shown on Tik Tok Short Video can’t help them form a good outlook for, which strongly influences full development of them.

From my point of view, they should take up beneficial hobbies, which are good for them. For example, they can go fishing to become more patient and focused. Doing sports is a pretty good way to make full use of their free time.

Thank you for your listening!

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。近来抖音视频在青少年中间颇为流行，有些青少午甚至看抖音视频着迷，耽误了学习，荒废了学业。假定你是某国际高中的学生会主席，请你准备一篇发言稿，在学生会的例会上致辞。

【详解】1.词汇积累

在我看来：from my point of view→in my opinion

充分利用：make full use of→take advantage of

闲暇时间：free time→leisure time

有害：do harm to→be harmful to

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Doing sports is a pretty good way to make full use of their free time.

拓展句：If they want to make full use of their free time, they can do sports.

【点睛】[高分句型1] These days watching Tik Tok Short Video becomes popular among teenagers who spend their free time watching and making comments on it. (运用了who引导定语从句)

[高分句型2] Doing sports is a pretty good way to make full use of their free time. (运用了动名词作主语)

2．Dear Li Hua,

I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble in learning senior English. So I am writing to share my opinions on how to learn it well with you.

As far as I am concerned, first you should try your best to enrich your vocabulary, such as by changing forms of words and doing more reading. Second, you’d better make full use of what you’ve learned to communicate with others in English. Third, it’s good for you to watch English programs on TV or join in some English clubs.  Last but not least, never give up easily.

As long as you follow the above advice and keep on practicing, I am sure you will make progress sooner or later. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Mr. Wang

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求考生给曾经的学生李华提供一些学习英语的建议，指明学习英语的必要性以及如何学习英语。

【详解】1.词汇积累

做某事有困难：have trouble in→ have difficulty in

就我看来：as far as I am concerned → in my opinion

充分利用：make full use of → make the most of

最后：last but not least→ finally/ lastly

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：So I am writing to share my opinions on how to learn it well with you.

拓展句：So I am writing to share my opinions on how you can learn it well with you.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, you’d better make full use of what you’ve learned to communicate with others in English.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】As long as you follow the above advice and keep on practicing, I am sure you will make progress sooner or later.（运用了as long as引导的状语从句和省略that的宾语从句）

3．Dear John,

I’m glad to receive your email. Knowing that you want to share your school life on TikTok, I’m all in favor of it.

As far as I am concerned, it is a good way to communicate with other people as TikTok is growing in popularity in China. In addition, it will also bring you great pleasure. However, I still have some suggestions for you. First of all, pay much attention to your privacy when you use TikTok. In addition, you’d better manage your time reasonably, in case TikTok affects your study.

I hope my response will be helpful to you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是李华，你班交换生John发来邮件说他想在抖音(TikTok)上注册一个号并分享自己的学校生活，他想听听你的意见。请你给他回复，内容包括：1. 你的观点；2. 说明理由；3. 提出注意事项。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad→pleased

建议：suggestion→advice

此外：In addition→Besides

就我而言：As far as I am concerned =Personally speaking

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：In addition, it will also bring you great pleasure. However, I still have some suggestions for you.

拓展句：In addition, it will also bring you great pleasure, but I still have some suggestions for you.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you want to share your school life on TikTok, I’m all in favor of it. (运用了现在分词作状语及that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] First of all, pay much attention to your privacy when you use TikTok. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)

4．One possible version:

Dear Lucy,

I’m delighted to know that you will participate in the City’s Chinese Speech Contest. I firmly believe you will win a prize.

Firstly, you should choose a topic that you’re familiar with. It would be better for you to choose impressive examples to gain the recognition of the judges. In addition, you must be well prepared for it. For example, you have to practise your spoken Chinese to express yourself more clearly and fluently.

I really hope that my advice will be of help to you. Wish you a great success.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求考生给校交换生Lucy写一封建议信，以帮助其更好地参加所在城市组织的汉语演讲比赛。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：delighted → happy/glad/joyful

首先：firstly→ first of all/initially

此外：in addition→ what’s more/besides

有帮助的：be of help→ be helpful

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：For example, you have to practise your spoken Chinese to express yourself more clearly and fluently.

拓展句：For example, you have to practise your spoken Chinese so that you can express yourself more clearly and fluently.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m delighted to know that you will participate in the City’s Chinese Speech Contest.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)

【高分句型2】Firstly, you should choose a topic that you’re familiar with.(运用了that引导的定语从句)

5．Dear Tom,

Delighted to learn that you are interested in Chinese Calligraphy, I’m writing to share my ideas with you.

First, you’d better see exhibitions of Chinese brush calligraphy where you can appreciate many excellent works. Besides, you are supposed to select an excellent Chinese brush calligraphy training course and follow what the teacher tells you and practice hard. The more you practice, the better your writing will be. What’s more, you can make new friends in the training, who will help you with learning. I’m convinced that you’ll make rapid progress.

Hope my suggestions be helpful to you and you’ll have a good command of Chinese calligraphy.

Best wishes.

Yours, Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Tom写封信，提出学习中国书法的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：delighted→glad

展览：exhibition→display

另外：besides→moreover

另外：what’s more→in addition

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：The more you practice, the better your writing will be.

拓展句：If you practice more, your writing will be better.

【点睛】[高分句型1] First, you’d better see exhibitions of Chinese brush calligraphy where you can appreciate many excellent works. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Besides, you are supposed to select an excellent Chinese brush calligraphy training course and follow what the teacher tells you and practice hard. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)

6．One possible version:

Dear Jack,

It’s a good idea to spend your Christmas holiday touring China. As for me, I’d recommend a three-day trip to Beijing. Here are the details.

First, you can take a train there, which enables you not only to enjoy the beautiful scenery but to save money as well. During the first two days, you can visit some historical relics, such as the Great Wall and the Forbidden City to learn the rich history of my country. Meanwhile, one cannot miss the charm of hutongs, which reflect the real life in ancient Beijing. Besides, it will be great if you have a taste of the unique and delicious food with local flavor, including the world-famous Beijing Roast Duck.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生写信帮助好友制订旅行计划，需要说明旅行的目的地、交通工具，以及景点和食物等信息。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

就我而言：as for me→in my opinion, from my perspective, as far as I am concerned

首先：first→to begin with, in the first place, at first

使能够：enable→allow

美丽的：beautiful→attractive, magnificent, splendid

丰富的：rich→abundant, plentiful, copious

了解：learn→familiarize oneself with, be acquainted with, become familiar with

同时：meanwhile→meantime, at the same time

显示：reflect→represent, display, exhibit, demonstrate

此外：besides→in addition, additionally, moreover, furthermore

美味的：delicious→tasty, flavorsome, appetizing, mouthwatering

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：During the first two days, you can visit some historical relics, such as the Great Wall and the Forbidden City to learn the rich history of my country.

拓展句：During the first two days, you can visit some historical relics, such as the Great Wall and the Forbidden City so that you can learn the rich history of my country.

【点睛】【高分句型1】First, you can take a train there, which enables you not only to enjoy the beautiful scenery but to save money as well.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Besides, it will be great if you have a taste of the unique and delicious food with local flavor, including the world-famous Beijing Roast Duck.（运用了if引导条件状语从句）

7．Dear Li Lei,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for some advice on studying abroad. The following is highly recommended to you.

First, live with a host family. Every foreign student acknowledges missing his family, but it’s a great comfort to have a substitute family to be with. Second try to be an autonomous learner. You should adjust yourself to the new academic requirements of a western university. You may even contradict the teachers with abundant evidence. Third, balance your study and social activities. While occupied in learning, it’s important to join a few clubs and make some new friends.

I hope my suggestions will be beneficial to you. Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友李蕾写封信，给她一些在国外学习的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad→delighted

建议：advice→suggestion

重要的：important→vital

有益的：beneficial→salutary

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I’m glad to receive your letter asking for some advice on studying abroad.

拓展句：I’m glad to receive your letter, in which you asked for some advice on studying abroad.

【点睛】[高分句型1] While occupied in learning, it’s important to join a few clubs and make some new friends. (运用了while引导的时间状语从句和省略)

[高分句型2] I hope my suggestions will be beneficial to you. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略了that)

8．Dear Jeff,

I’m sorry to hear that you are addicted to short videos and lack interest in learning. I’m writing to offer you some suggestions.

Short videos do have some benefits. We can release pressure, share good times, cherish memories, etc. However, in my opinion, firstly, you should strike a balance between leisure activities and learning. Only on the premise of self-consciousness can we benefit from modern technologies rather than being slaves of such new technologies. You should focus on study, and don’t waste your time on distractions. Secondly, you can join your friends in playing various sports activities, such as running, cycling or playing basketball, etc.

I hope my suggestions will be of some help for you. I believe you can make it.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Jeff写封信，肯定短视频在某些方面的好处，对他沉迷刷短视频提点建议，并表达祝愿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

提供：offer→provide

建议：suggestion→advice

然而：however→nevertheless

各种各样的：various→a variety of

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Secondly, you can join your friends in playing various sports activities, such as running, cycling or playing basketball, etc.

拓展句：Secondly, you can join your friends in playing various sports activities, which include running, cycling or playing basketball, etc.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you are addicted to short videos and lack interest in learning. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] Only on the premise of self-consciousness can we benefit from modern technologies rather than being slaves of such new technologies. (运用了部分倒装句)

9．Dear Jim,

It’s great to hear from you! As you want to give a gift with Chinese characteristics to your mom, I would suggest a Chinese silk scarf.

Chinese silk scarf is an excellent choice to showcase the beauty of Chinese culture. It is not only sophisticated in pattern and design, but also comfortable to wear. Besides, there are many patterns with rich cultural meanings to choose from. For instance, peony, lotus, and phoenix all represent happiness, prosperity, and good luck in Chinese culture.

I hope this gift will impress your mom and bring her joy. Please convey my best regards and best wishes to her. Looking forward to seeing you soon!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校交换生Jim打算今年暑假回英国，想送给他的妈妈一件具有中国特色的礼物，特发来邮件就准备什么礼物向你咨询。请你用英文给他回复一封电子邮件。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：suggest→recommend

表达：convey→express

快乐：joy→happiness

选择：choice→option

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：It is not only sophisticated in pattern and design, but also comfortable to wear.

拓展句：Not only is it sophisticated in pattern and design, but also it is comfortable to wear.

【点睛】[高分句型1] As you want to give a gift with Chinese characteristics to your mom, I would suggest a Chinese silk scarf. (运用了as引导原因状语从句)

[高分句型2] I hope this gift will impress your mom and bring her joy. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)

10．Dear Mike,

     I’m delighted to receive your letter. I don’t think it unusual for you to have such worries. The same things happened to me. Here is how I have got myself on an easy way to the new school life.

Firstly, make every day a regular day. I make it a rule when to bed, when to rise, and when to exercise. While in class, I listen attentively and take down where I can’t understand. After class, I turn to the teacher with it until I’ve got it. A regular day has made a regular me. Secondly, make every day a full day. Apart from attendance at lessons required for graduation, I join as many clubs as I can, such as drama club and music club, which allow me chances to release myself from a day of stressful study. A full day brings me a full enjoyment. Thirdly, make every day a meaningful day. I am a member of the volunteer club. After school, my fellows and I offer help to those in need. A meaningful day teaches me what a meaningful life is.

If my experience helps, that will be a pleasure for me.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Mike写一封回信，结合自身的经验给他一些关于如何适应高中的学习生活的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：delighted→pleased

担心：worry→concern

写下：take down→write down

向某人求助：turn to sb→ask sb for help

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：After school, my fellows and I offer help to those in need.

拓展句：After school, my fellows and I offer help to those who are in need.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Here is how I have got myself on an easy way to the new school life.（运用了how引导的表语从句）

【高分句型2】Apart from attendance at lessons required for graduation, I join as many clubs as I can, such as drama club and music club, which allow me chances to release myself from a day of stressful study.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型3】A meaningful day teaches me what a meaningful life is.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）