安徽高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信

这是一份安徽高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信，共21页。试卷主要包含了假定你是李华，来自武汉光明中学等内容，欢迎下载使用。
感谢信/祝贺信
1．假定你是李华，你校的外教Ms. Green即将回国。你将代表学生们在欢送会上发言并赠送她礼物。请你用英语写一篇发言稿。
内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.介绍赠送的礼物—汉服(Hanfu)；
3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数100左右，发言稿开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Ms. Green,
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2．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Jim 得知你想提高英文写作能力，给你寄来一本《英 文写作手册》(A Handbook of Writing)。请你回一封信。内容包括：
1. 感谢对方； 2. 书很有用，会认真研读； 3. 你的回赠。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
How is everything going with you?
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华，你所在的学校英语报征稿一封英文感谢信，以致意奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的   医护人员，请你根据下列要点写一封信用于投稿。
内容包括：
1. 表达敬意；
2. 你如何抗疫；
3. 发出学习倡议。
4. 词汇：新冠状病毒：COVID-19
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4．假定你是李华，疫情得到控制，现在你已经回校上课了。请你给你的外教Mrs. Smith写封感谢信，感谢疫情期间她对你的教导和帮助，内容包括：
1.感谢疫情期间老师对自己英语学习的帮助和信心上的鼓励；
2.表达对老师的想念以及衷心祝愿。
参考词汇：新冠病毒：the novel corona-virus.
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5．假定你是李华，来自武汉光明中学。在新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情期间，你新西兰的笔友Andy通过组织募捐活动援助了你的城市，请你写封邮件表示感谢。内容包括：
1.表达感谢；
2.介绍情况；
3.你的期望。
注意词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已'为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：新型冠状病毒肺炎COVID-19;疫情epidemic
Dear Andy，
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Best wishes to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，是北方某城市一所中学的学生。你的美国网友Peter听说你校冬季由于雾霾严重经常放假，非常担心你的学习和健康。请你根据以下内容给他发一封电子邮件：
1. 感谢他的关心；
2. 说明在家学习情况；
3. 政府采取措施减少雾霾。
注意：1. 词数100左右。
2. 开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：雾霾haze
Dear Peter，
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Your,
Li Hua
7．假定你是校学生会主席李华，上周末学生会举办了中国诗词翻译大赛，得到了外教Thomas的大力帮助，请你给Thomas写一封邮件，表示感谢，内容包括：
1.感谢外教的帮助；
2.同学们的收获；
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
中国诗词翻译大赛 Chinese Poem Translation Competition
Dear Thomas，
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8．假如你是李华，你的好友 Tom 来信想了解你新冠疫情以来在家的学习生活情况，请你按照以下要点，给他回信：
1. 你的日常学习生活概况；
2. 你在学习中遇到的困难及解决方法。
3. 你在这个特殊时期的收获。
参考词汇：新冠肺炎 COVID-19
注意：1.  可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
2. 词数 100 左右。
Dear Tom,
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Yours
Li Hua
9．假定你是李华，China Daily正在征集一封英文感谢信，以致敬奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的医护人员，请你代表学校写一封信投稿，要点如下：
1.表达感激；
2.个人感受；
3.表达信心。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。
参考词汇：流行病epidemic新型冠状病毒novel coronavirus
Dear Medical workers,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
10．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Michael在学校举办的“中国诗词大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。
1. 祝贺他获奖；
2. 肯定他付出的努力；
3. 询问何时方便，一起交流一下中国古诗词学习心得。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
中国诗词大会 Chinese Poetry Contest
Dear Michael,
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Yours,
Li Hua










1．Dear Ms. Green,
I' m extremely honored to stand here to express our sincere gratitude to you. Without your guidance and instruction, we couldn’t have made such great progress in the past two years. Your devotion and kindness have impressed us greatly and we can't bear the idea that you will leave.
Knowing that you are fascinated by traditional Chinese costume culture, we've bought you a set of Hanfu, which is made of silk and comes in different colors. No matter where we go, we firmly believe it can also bring us together.
Thanks again for your help and hope to meet you again in the near future.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，代表学生们在欢送会上发言并赠送外教礼物。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应主要为一般现在时。
结构：三段式
要求：1. 表示感谢。（gratitude）
2. 介绍赠送的礼物—汉服。（gift）
3.表达祝愿。（wishes）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be honored to; extremely; gratitude; made progress; impressed; be fascinated by; a set of; be made of; firmly
第三步：连词成句
1. I' m extremely honored to stand here to express our sincere gratitude to you.
2. we couldn’t have made such great progress in the past two years.
3. Your devotion and kindness have impressed us greatly and we can't bear the idea that you will leave.
4. Knowing that you are fascinated by traditional Chinese costume culture,
5. we've bought you a set of Hanfu,
6. which is made of silk and comes in different colors.
7. we firmly believe it can also bring us together.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Knowing that you are fascinated by traditional Chinese costume culture, we've bought you a set of Hanfu, which is made of silk and comes in different colors.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；也使用了一些固定词组，如be            honored to; made progress; be made of等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2．Dear Jim,
How is everything going with you? I’m so excited to have received the book A Handbook of Writing you sent to me, which is the very book that I have been looking forward to. Thanks sincerely for your considerate thought.
As you know, I am working at improving my English writing ability recently, and the book will be very useful, and will be a great help. Actually, I have made a plan to study and read the book intensively and carefully. In this way, I’m fully convinced that I can achieve my goal.
In return for your favor, I mail a book named The History Of China to you, since you are eager to know something about Chinese culture. Hopefully, you will like it.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，表达对朋友的感谢以及介绍回赠的礼物。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表达感谢
      2.说明写信的原因
      1）表明书很有用，会认真研读
      2）介绍回赠的礼物
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be excited to do sth;  received;  look forward to;  sincerely;  considerate;  improve;  make a plan to do sth;  intensively;  be convinced that;  In return for;  favor;  be eager to do sth
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m so excited to have received the book A Handbook of Writing you sent to me, which is the very book that I have been looking forward to.
2 Thanks sincerely for your considerate thought.
3. I am working at improving my English writing ability recently, and the book will be very useful, and will be a great help.
4. I have made a plan to study and read the book intensively and carefully.
5. I mail a book named The History of China to you, since you are eager to know something about Chinese culture.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：I’m so excited to have received the book A Handbook of Writing you sent to me, which is the very book that I have been looking forward to.这句话运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如be excited to do sth，look forward to，be eager to do sth等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear medical workers,
I’m LiHua, a student in a senior high school. I would like to express my sincere gratitude and admiration to you all for your selfless dedication and sacrifice in the battle against the novel coronavirus /COVID-19 on behalf of my school. In this epidemic, you risk your lives to desperately rescue those infected but struggling for life, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential of infection. I cannot show more awe and respect for you all from the bottom of my heart.
Following your tips, I have been sparing no efforts to fight against the virus by staying indoors and  paying due attention to personal hygiene in support of your hard work. Meanwhile, since this coronavirus is extremely contagious, we students have to take courses online. Undoubtedly, self-discipline and capacity of proper time management are highly required. It is crucial that we keep up our school work and not be left behind.
As a student, though unable to involve myself in a war against the epidemic, I pledge I will  concentrate my mind on study, hoping that one day I can be powerful enough to fulfill my commitment. You, along with thousands of ordinary people, rise to the occasion and make contributions which deserve our admiration.
Yours sincerely,
LiHua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写封感谢信，以致意奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的医护人员，用以给英语报投稿。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
要求：
1.表达敬意；
2 你如何抗疫；
3.发出学习倡议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
express my sincere gratitude and admiration to；on behalf of；risk your lives；from the bottom of my heart.；spare no efforts；fight against the virus；personal hygiene；contagious；pledge；fulfill my commitment；
第三步：连词成句
1.I would like to express my sincere gratitude and admiration to you all.
2.You risk your lives to desperately rescue those infected but struggling for life
3.I cannot show more awe and respect for you all from the bottom of my heart.
4.I have been sparing no efforts to fight against the virus.
5.This coronavirus is extremely contagious.
6.I pledge I will concentrate my mind on study, hoping that one day I can be powerful enough to fulfill my commitment.
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but,  Although+clause(从句),  regardless of +n/doing, On the one hand…；on the other hand…, as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：since this coronavirus is extremely contagious, we students have to take courses online.这句话运用了since引导的状语从句；在It is crucial that we keep up our school work and not be left behind.句中使用了it作形式主语，真正的主语是that从句的主语从句。还有现在分词作状语:Following your tips, I have been sparing no efforts to fight against the virus by staying indoors and paying due attention to personal hygiene in support of your hard work.等；还有一些高级词汇的使用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．Dear Mrs. Smith,
Due to great efforts of all the people, the novel corona-virus has been under control in China.
I’m glad to write to share with you my happiness of coming back to school and extend my gratitude for your generous help.
Firstly, I’d like to express my thanks for your excellent teaching and your care as well as love for me during the outbreak of the novel corona-virus! You not only comforted and encouraged me, but also recommended a good many ways of learning English. Thank you for your encouraging words, which never fall to brighten my way ahead. It’s you who cheer me up. Never will I forget what you said-doors open to the very man with full confidence. Hadn’t been for your help, I couldn’t have made such rapid progress in English and I could never have enjoyed such a joyful harvest.
Words fail to convey my endless appreciation to you. I sincerely hope that you can have a good health and stay happy. How I miss you, my beloved teacher! Wish you all the best.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，属于感谢信。要求你给外教Mrs. Smith写封感谢信，感谢疫情期间她对你的教导和帮助。
【详解】本篇书面表达属于感谢信，本文要点提示已给出，属于提纲性作文。内容包括1.感谢疫情期间老师对自己英语学习的帮助和信心上的鼓励；2.表达对老师的想念以及衷心祝愿。
写作时，内容的安排应该是：首先对老师对你的帮助和教导表示感谢。本段书写简单描述即可。其次，表明老师对自己的具体帮助和教导。本段内容在安排上要详细描述，要有理有据，论据充分能够证明老师的帮助是有益的；第三，表达对老师的想念以及衷心祝愿。完成书面表达时要①注意时态、语态的合理运用；②详略得当，突出重点；③恰当地使用连接过渡词,以使行文连贯。
【点睛】本文段落层次清晰,行文连贯,要点齐全,言简意赅,目的明确,较具有说服力。还使用一些连词, 让文章条理清楚。使用了一些复杂句和复合句,使文章更加生动而流畅,这些都体现了较强的驾驭语言的能力。具体如下: Due to great efforts of all the people, the novel corona-virus has been under control in China.运用了due to的句式表示原因状语；You not only comforted and encouraged me, but also recommended a good many ways of learning English.运用了not only…but also…的并列结构；Thank you for your encouraging words, which never fall to brighten my way ahead. It’s you who cheer me up.运用了非限制性定语从句，强调句式；Never will I forget what you said-doors open to the very man with full confidence.运用了倒装句；Hadn’t been for your help, I couldn’t have made such rapid progress in English and I could never have enjoyed such a joyful harvest.运用了虚拟语气。
5．Dear Andy,
Glad to hear that you’re collected large sums of money for our city. I’m writing to extend our sincere gratitude for your genuine act of kindness. It is what many people like you have done that lets us feel we’re not alone. We can’t thank you too much!
Currently, everything is improving. China has taken a series of powerful measures to contain the spread of COVID-19 since its outbreak. The lockdown of our city is a most effective way and our citizens are going all out to do our parts. Touchingly, more and more volunteers are flooding in from across China to help us out.
Honestly, I'm praying that the epidemic will disappear soon and everything will return to normal. I believe so!
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封感谢信，感谢你新西兰的笔友Andy通过组织募捐活动援助你的城市。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表达感谢
      2.介绍情况  
      3.你的期望
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
sums of；take measures t；do one’ parts；flood in；help sb. out
第三步：连词成句
1. Glad to hear that you’re collected large sums of money for our city.
2. I’m writing to extend our sincere gratitude for your genuine act of kindness.
3. It is what many people like you have done that lets us feel we’re not alone.
4. We can’t thank you too much!
5. Currently, everything is improving.
6. China has taken a series of powerful measures to contain the spread of COVID-19 since its outbreak.
7. The lockdown of our city is a most effective way and our citizens are going all out to do our parts. 8. Touchingly, more and more volunteers are flooding in from across China to help us out.
9. Honestly, I'm praying that the epidemic will disappear soon and everything will return to normal. 10. I believe so!
11. Best wishes to you!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高级句式，如：It is what many people like you have done that lets us feel we’re not alone.这句话运用了强调句；使用了一些固定词组，如sums of；take measures t；do one’ parts；flood in；help sb. out等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Dear Peter,
Thank you for your concern about my health and studies.
This winter, because of heavy haze, we didn’t go to school for about 15 days, which affected our studies to some degree. However, our school did something to make up for that. We learnt lessons on the Internet and did our homework at home. If we had any problems, we would communicate with our classmates and teachers by WeChat or QQ.
To our joy, the local government has taken some measures to prevent haze. The situation has been improving. I’m sure we’ll have a blue sky in the future. Thank you again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，是北方某城市一所中学的学生。你的美国网友Peter听说你校冬季由于雾霾严重经常放假，非常担心你的学习和健康。请你根据以下内容给他发一封电子邮件：1. 感谢他的关心；2. 说明在家学习情况；3. 政府采取措施减少雾霾。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：concern(关心)；because of (因为)；haze (雾霾)；to some degree (在某种程度上)；make up for (弥补)；communicate with (与……沟通)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如This winter, because of heavy haze, we didn’t go to school for about 15 days, which affected our studies to some degree.运用了非限制性定语从句；If we had any problems, we would communicate with our classmates and teachers by WeChat or QQ.运用了条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7．Dear Thomas,
I'm writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude to you for your enormous help in the Chinese Poem Translation Competition, in which we have gained quite a lot.
It's so kind of you to have taught us some basic translation skills and techniques before the competition. Under your professional guidance, the participants presented many brilliant translated poems. Meanwhile, we not only realized the beauty of translation but also improved our ability of appreciating poems. Most importantly, this activity has stimulated our passion for learning poems from different various perspectives.
Many thanks for your valuable time and support!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是校学生会主席李华，上周末学生会举办了中国诗词翻译大赛，得到了外教Thomas的大力帮助，请你给Thomas写一封邮件，表示感谢，内容包括：1.感谢外教的帮助；2.同学们的收获。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：Chinese Poem Translation Competition (中国诗词翻译大赛)；sincere gratitude (诚挚的感谢)；translation skills and techniques (翻译技能技巧)；professional guidance(专业指导)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时和现在完成时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I'm writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude to you for your enormous help in the Chinese Poem Translation Competition, in which we have gained quite a lot.运用了非限定性定语从句；Meanwhile, we not only realized the beauty of translation but also improved our ability of appreciating poems.运用了not only…but also…结构。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8．Dear Tom,
Glad to receive your letter and thank you for your concern about my study during the outbreak of the COVID-19. Everything is fine with me.
Every day, we are occupied with 6 online lessons given by the excellent teachers in our province,from which we benefit a lot. The evening is our free study time. As I often have some difficulty understanding certain parts in the lessons, I will make use of this period to consult my teachers through QQ or refer to some books.
Aside from this, after class, I often do some jogging on my treadmill for half an hour to relax and keep fit as well. And being a good assistant in the kitchen when Mom and Dad are busy with the dinner is also enjoyable.
For me, this period is unique and unforgettable, for not only have I improved my time management ability and study efficiency, but also developed a even closer relationship with my parents.
Hoping you are going well! Looking forward to hearing from you again.
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求写一封回信，告知新冠疫情以来在家的学习生活情况。
【详解】第一步：
审题: 回信   告知新冠疫情以来在家的学习生活情况
人称：第一、三人称
时态： 一般现在时
结构： 总分法，分三部分，第一部分表示对对方关心的感谢，第二部分说明疫情以来在家的学习生活情况、在学习中遇到的困难及解决方法以及收获，第三部分希望对方一切安好。
要点：
1. 表示对对方关心的感谢
2．说明疫情以来在家的学习生活情况、在学习中遇到的困难及解决方法及收获
①学习情况：白天上网课，晚上自由学习时间
②遇到的困难及解决方法：在课程中有一些部分难以理解，通过QQ咨询老师或参考一些书籍。
③生活情况：每天慢跑半小时锻炼，在厨房给爸妈当帮手
④收获：提高了时间管理能力和学习效率，与父母建立了更密切的关系。
3．希望对方一切安好
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语  ）
the outbreak of ；be occupied with ；benefit ；have some difficulty doing…；make use of ；consult；refer to ；do some jogging；relax；keep fit；be busy with ；enjoyable；unique； unforgettable； improve；time management；efficiency；closer relationship

第三步：连词成句
( 1) Thank you for your concern about my study during the outbreak of the COVID-19.  
(2) We are occupied with 6 online lessons given by the excellent teachers in our province.
(3)We benefit a lot.
(4) The evening is our free study time.
(5) I have some difficulty understanding certain parts in the lessons.
(6) I will make use of this period to consult my teachers through QQ or refer to some books.
(7) I often do some jogging on my treadmill for half an hour to relax and keep fit .
(8) Being a good assistant in the kitchen is also enjoyable.
(9) This period is unique and unforgettable.
(10 ) I not only have improved my time management ability and study efficiency, but also developed a even closer relationship with my parents.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)
用定语从句连接下面两个句子
(2) We are occupied with 6 online lessons given by the excellent teachers in our province.
(3)We benefit a lot.
→We are occupied with 6 online lessons given by the excellent teachers in our province，from which we benefit a lot .
用倒装句式改写下面的句子
(10 ) I not only have improved my time management ability and study efficiency, but also developed a even closer relationship with my parents.
→Not only have I improved my time management ability and study efficiency, but also developed a even closer relationship with my parents.
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次 ，增加文章的可读性。
【点睛】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 the outbreak of；be occupied with；benefit；have some difficulty doing…；make use of；consult；refer to；do some jogging；relax；keep fit；enjoyable；unforgettable；improve；time management；efficiency；close relationship 等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如非限制性定语从句的运用we are occupied with 6 online lessons given by the excellent teachers in our province, from which we benefit a lot；原因状语从句的运用 As I often have some difficulty understanding certain parts in the lessons, I will make use of this period to consult my teachers through QQ or refer to some books；倒装句式的运用not only have I improved my time management ability and study efficiency, but also a even closer relationship with my parents have also been developed等。
9．Dear Medical workers,
On behalf of my school, I would like to express sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in the battle against the novel coronavirus.
In this epidemic, it is you who, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but struggling for life. It is also you who have shed new light on the virus with expertise to build up our confidence to defeat it. It is you who deserve all admiration and love!
Such few words can’t fully convey our thankfulness for your irreplaceable contribution. I believe with our joint efforts China will undoubtedly win the battle and make a quick recovery.
Good luck and stay well!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。China Daily正在征集一封英文感谢信，以致敬奋战在抗击新型冠状 病毒肺炎第一线的医护人员，代表学校写一封信投稿。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分法
要点如下：
1. 表达感激；
2. 个人感受；
3. 表达信心。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）on behalf of；regardless of；desperately；struggle for；shed light on；build up；deserve；irreplaceable contribution；make a quick recovery；stay well
第三步：连词成句。根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题
1. On behalf of my school, I would like to express sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in the battle against the novel coronavirus.
2. In this epidemic, it is you who, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but struggling for life.
3. Such few words can’t fully convey our thankfulness for your irreplaceable contribution.
4. I believe with our joint efforts China will undoubtedly win the battle and make a quick recovery.
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）。连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了强调句型：例如：In this epidemic, it is you who, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but struggling for life. It is also you who have shed new light on the virus with expertise to build up our confidence to defeat it. It is you who deserve all admiration and love!为文章增色不少。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
10．Dear Michael,
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations on your winning the first prize of your group in the Chinese Poetry Contest. As your friend, I just want you to know how delighted I am at your success.
For these years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese poetry and kept on reciting poems every day. Not only have you accumulated much knowledge about Chinese poetry, but also you have formed a deep understanding of it. Your appreciation towards those poems are sometimes beyond our reach. You deserve to win this prize.
At last, I hope to have a talk with you as to exchanging our understanding towards learning Chinese poetry. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Michael在学校举办的“中国诗词大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。请你根据所给要点写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提供：offer→ provide
真诚的：sincere→ genuine
开心的：delighted→ happy
回复：reply→ response
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Your appreciation towards those poems are sometimes beyond our reach. You deserve to win this prize.
拓展句：Although your appreciation towards those poems are sometimes beyond our reach, you deserve to win this prize.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As your friend, I just want you to know how delighted I am at your success.（运用了宾语从句）
[高分句型2] Not only have you accumulated much knowledge about Chinese poetry, but also you have formed a deep understanding of it.（运用了not only…but also以及部分倒装）