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    这是一份山东高考英语写作分类训练:建议信,共17页。试卷主要包含了假定你是高三学生李华,假设你是李华等内容,欢迎下载使用。


    建议信

    1.假定你是李华,在外教 Peter的帮助下,英语取得了很大的进步。你想请他到家里吃饭,以表示感谢。请写一封邮件邀请他。

    要点:

    1. 时间和地点;

    2. 建议交通方式;

    3. 询问对食物的喜好。

    注意:1. 词数100左右;

    2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

    Dear Peter,

    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    Yours,

    Li Hua

    2.假定你是高三学生李华。你感到新作文题型——读后续写(extended writing)很具挑战性。请给外教 Mike 写一封信,咨询他的建议。

    内容包括:

    1. 写信原因;

    2. 题型简介;

    3. 你的困难。

    注意:

    1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;

    2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。

    ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    3.假设你是李华。你的英国朋友Peter在发给你的电子邮件中提到他对汉语对联很感兴趣,并请你给出学习对联的建议,请你给Peter回复一封电子邮件

    内容包括:1.对联的来历;2.主要含义3.学习建议

    注意:词数100左右

    2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词。参考词汇:对联couplet

    ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    4.假设你是李华,正在你校学习汉语的英国交换生Mike对中国古诗词很感兴趣。请用英语给他写一封邮件,邀请他到学校报告厅与我们一同观看CCTV 3频道《经典咏流传》中的一期节目。

    1. 节目播放时间;

    2. 节目内容;

    3. 观看建议。

    注意:

    1.词数80左右;

    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

    3.《经典咏流传》 Everlasting Classics 咏唱 chant

    ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    5.假如你是李华,学校最近要组织一次英语演讲比赛,主题为垃圾分类益处多。请你根据此 话题写一篇演讲稿。要点如下:

    1.你的观点;2.你的建议。

    注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头与结尾已为你写好。

    参考词汇:垃圾分类garbage classification

    Hello everyone!

    __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    Thank you!

    6.假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Henry 来信说由于最近很多人患了新冠病毒肺炎(COVID-19),他很是担心,询问你的情况并请教一些预防建议。请你给他写 封回信,内容包括:

    1.你的情况;

    2.你的预防建议(如勤洗手、保持房间通风、加强锻炼等)

    3.其他。

    注意:

    1.词数100左右;

    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

    3.信的格式已为你写好。

    Dear Henry,

    _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    Yours,

    Lihua

    7.假如你是李华,你想在班里组织一个英语阅读社团(Club)。你的英国朋友Jack非常喜 欢文学,请你给Jack写一封邮件,内容包括:

    1.征求他的建议;

    2.请他介绍英文阅读经验;

    3.邀请他通过网络参加社团活动。

    注意 1.词数100左右;格式已给出,不计入总词数;

    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

    Dear Jack,

    ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    Yours,

    Li Hua

    8.假定你是李华,你所在学校要举办英语戏剧节(The English Drama Festival)。你们想邀请外教John参加。请你给他写一封信,要点如下:

    1. 介绍活动内容;

    2. 邀请他表演节目;

    3. 请他提出活动建议。

    注意:1. 词数100左右;

    2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

    Dear John,

    ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    Yours sincerely,

    Li Hua

    9.假如你是李华,今年暑假你和你的父母在美国旅行期间,在当地一家知名酒店住了一晚,你对住宿条件和服务都非常不满意。请你给酒店经理写一封投诉信,内容包括:

    1. 写信目的;

    2. 反映存在问题;

    3. 提出改进建议。

    注意:1. 词 数 80 左右;   2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

    Dear manager,

    __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    Yours,

    Li Hua

    10.假定你是李华,你班来自英国的交换生Jack 上周回到中国,现处于隔离期,请给他发封邮件,建议他调整好心情,做好返校准备,内容包括:1.表示关心;2.提出建议;3.期待重逢。

    注意:1.词数80左右;

    2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

    参考词汇:隔离期 quarantine

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    1Dear Peter,

    Thanks for your help, I have made great progress in my English learning in recent months. So I want to express my great gratitude. I am writing to invite you to have dinner at my home this Saturday.

    My address is Room 0103, Unit 1, No. 5 Building, Renming Road No. 39 and it’s not far from our school. You can take No. 25 bus and get off at the Post Office. By the way, do you like spicy food? Let me know if you don’t like it so that we can make certain adjustments to the dishes.

    My family and I all expect you can come. Looking forward to your reply.

    Yours,

    Li Hua

    【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,为表达对外教的感谢邀请他到家里吃饭。

    【详解】第一步:审题

    体裁:应用文

    时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时为主。

    结构:三段式结构。第一段表达感谢和提出邀请;第二段提讲述具体细节;第三段表达期待。

    要求:1.表达感谢(thanks for; make great progressinvite sb. to do

          2.讲述具体细节

          1)时间和地点(this Saturday; address

          2)建议交通方式(take bus

          3) 询问对食物的喜好(do you like spicy food

          3.表达期待(My family and I all expect you can come.

    第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)

    thanks for; make great progress; express gratitude; invite sb. to; by the way; make adjustments

    第三步:连词成句

    1. Thanks for your help, I have made great progress in my English learning in recent months.

    2. So I want to express my great gratitude.

    3. I am writing to invite you to have dinner at my home this Saturday.

    4. By the way, do you like spicy food?

    5. Let me know if you don’t like it so that we can make certain adjustments to the dishes.

    根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。

    第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)

    连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。

    第五步:润色修改

    【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。

    1.作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如:

    Let me know if you don’t like it so that we can make certain adjustments to the dishes.这句话运用了if引导的宾语从句以及so that引导的目的状语从句。

    My family and I all expect you can come.这句话运用了省略that的宾语从句。

    2.使用了一些固定词组,如thanks for; make great progress; express gratitude; invite sb. to; by the way; make adjustments等。

    全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。

    2Dear Mike,

    I’d like your advice on my English study.

    Our new writing task, called “extended writing”, requires us to write a reasonable ending to an incomplete story we’re given. Obviously, this is a very open-ended task with multiple possibilities. While I enjoy the creativity of this task, I find it challenging to identify the plot points of interest and to give my version the best possible ending. I also have trouble expressing my ideas accurately due to my limited vocabulary.

    Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Looking forward to your reply.

    Yours,

    Li Hua

    【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生用英语给外教写一封信,咨询他对于作文题型——读后续写的建议。

    【详解】第一步:审题

    体裁:提纲类作文

    时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。

    结构:总分法

    要求:包含写信原因;题型简介;你的困难。

    第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)

    advicerequirereasonableincompletemultiplecreativityplotaccurately

    第三步:连词成句

    1. I’d like your advice on my English study.

    2. Our new writing task, called “extended writing”, requires us to write a reasonable ending to an incomplete story we’re given.

    3. Obviously, this is a very open-ended task with multiple possibilities.

    4.While I enjoy the creativity of this task, I find it challenging to identify the plot points of interest and to give my version the best possible ending.

    5. I also have trouble expressing my ideas accurately due to my limited vocabulary.

    6. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

    7. Looking forward to your reply.

    第四步:连句成篇

    1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

    2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

    3.表转折对比关系:while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

    4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

    连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。

    第五步:润色修改

    【点睛】文章结构合理,思路清晰,使用了恰当的连接词及词组使行文连贯,如“Whileand”,也运用了一些高级词汇和表达,如“advicerequirereasonableincompletemultiplecreativityplotaccurately”以及状语从句“While I enjoy the creativity of this task, I find it challenging to identify the plot points of interest and to give my version the best possible ending.”等,增加了文章的亮点,体现了学生较高的英语学科素养。

    3Dear Peter,

    It's great to hear from you. I am glad to tell you something about Chinese couplets.

    Couplets are posted on front doors to warn off evil spirits and welcome peace and harvest. The contents of couplets vary from house owners' wishes for a bright future to good luck for the year. They have matching words. Nowadays, few people write their own couplets with plenty of choices offered in shops.

    If you want to learn about them, I suggest you buy some books about couplets, read aloud and pay attention to their matching words.

    I am looking forward to your reply.

    Yours sincerely,

    Li Hua

    【详解】第一步:审题

    体裁:应用文

    时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。

    结构:总分法

       总分总法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,最后再总说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。

    要求1.表达欣喜

          2.学习对联的建议

          1)对联的来历。(origin of couplets

          2)主要含义。(main meaning of couplets

          3. 学习建议(advice for learning

    第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)

    hear from; am glad to; warn off; good luck; plenty of; pay attention to; looking forward to

    第三步:连词成句

    1. It's great to hear from you.

    2. I am glad to tell you something about Chinese couplets.

    3. Couplets are posted on front doors to warn off evil spirits and welcome peace and harvest.

    4. The contents of couplets vary from house owners' wishes for a bright future to good luck for the year.

    5. few people write their own couplets with plenty of choices offered in shops.

    6. I suggest you buy some books about couplets, read aloud and pay attention to their matching words.

    7. I am looking forward to your reply.

    根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。

    第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)

    1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

    2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

    3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

    4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

    连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,

    第五步:润色修改

    【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如:If you want to learn about them, I suggest you buy some books about couplets, read aloud and pay attention to their matching words.这句话运用了If引导的条件状语从句,并且本文使用了一些固定词组,如hear from; am glad to; warn off等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。

    4Dear Mike,

    How is everything? Hearing that you are interested in classical Chinese poetry, I’m writing to invite you to join us in watching an attractive show, Everlasting Classics, at 9: 30 a. m. on March 17 in the school lecture hall.

    It is a hit program on CCTV3, in which a number of classic Chinese poems are chanted in beautiful tunes. To understand the beauty of Chinese poetry, I suggest you should learn in advance some poems to be shown and their background.

    Looking forward to your participation and I believe you will enjoy it and learn a lot.

    Yours,

    Li Hua

    【分析】这是一篇应用文,正在你校学习汉语的英国交换生Mike对中国古诗词很感兴趣,要求用英语给他写一封邮件,邀请他到学校报告厅与我们一同观看CCTV 3频道《经典咏流传》中的一期节目。

    【详解】第一步:审题

    体裁:应用文

    时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。

    人称:第一人称和第三人称

    结构:总分法

       总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。

    要求1. 节目播放时间;2. 节目内容;3. 观看建议。

    第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)

    be interested in; join sb. in; a number of ; in advance; look forward to

    第三步:连词成句

    1.Hearing that you are interested in classical Chinese poetry, I’m writing to invite you to join us in watching an attractive show, Everlasting Classics, at 9: 30 a. m. on March 17 in the school lecture hall.

    2.It is a hit program on CCTV3, in which a number of classic Chinese poems are chanted in beautiful tunes.

    3.To understand the beauty of Chinese poetry, I suggest you should learn in advance some poems to be shown and their background.

    4.Looking forward to your participation and I believe you will enjoy it and learn a lot.

    根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。

    第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)

    1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

    2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

    3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

    4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

    连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,

    第五步:润色修改

    【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高级句型,如:It is a hit program on CCTV3, in which a number of classic Chinese poems are chanted in beautiful tunes.这句话运用了in which引导的非限制性定语从句;To understand the beauty of Chinese poetry, I suggest you should learn in advance some poems to be shown and their background.这句话运用了动词不定式作目的状语,suggest“建议后接宾语从句需用虚拟语气;文章也使用了一些固定词组,如join sb. in; a number of ; in advance; look forward to 等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。

    5Hello everyone! I'm glad to share some ideas about garbage classification with you.

    To my understanding, the earth is home to every individual, and it's our duty to protect it voluntarily. By sorting the waste, we can not only reduce pollution but also conserve energy, which will recycle valuable resources.

    For the sake of our environment and life, we should learn to sort the rubbish and make it a habit. Everyone can make a difference and let's bring a brighter future for the planet!

    Thank you!

    【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。

    【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假如你是李华,学校最近要组织一次英语演讲比赛,主题为垃圾分类益处多。请你根据此 话题写一篇演讲稿。要点如下:1.你的观点;2.你的建议。

    2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):garbage classification (垃圾分类)individual(个人)pollution (污染)等。

    3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。

    4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

    【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如By sorting the waste, we can not only reduce pollution but also conserve energy, which will recycle valuable resources.运用非谓语动词和非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。

    6Dear Henry,

      With sincere thanks, I’m writing to extend my  appreciation for all your care and concern.

      Since the outbreak of COVID-19 in Wuhan in December 2019, I have been staying at home. Thanks to the online communication apps, I interact with our teacher through live-streaming classes. So, on the one hand, I suggest that you wash your hands frequently and keep the room ventilated; on the other hand, you can insist on studying and exercising.

      I’m definitely convinced that with joint efforts of the whole nation, China will win the battle. At the same time, I’m looking forward to going to school early.

      Yours,

    Li Hua

    【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。

    【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Henry 来信说由于最近很多人患了新冠病毒肺炎(COVID-19),他很是担心,询问你的情况并请教一些预防建议。请你给他写 封回信,内容包括:1.你的情况;2.你的预防建议(如勤洗手、保持房间通风、加强锻炼等)3.其他。

    2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):outbreak (爆发)Thanks to (多亏了)interact with (相互沟通)joint efforts (共同努力)等。

    3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。

    4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

    【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如I’m definitely convinced that with joint efforts of the whole nation, China will win the battle.运用宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。

    7Dear Jack,

    I would like to organize an English reading club in my class, which I think will make our spare time colorful. I know that you like literature very much, and I’d like you to do me a favor. Do you get any ideas about the club? I would like you to share with us your English learning experiencewhich I think will be greatly helpful to us. It would be nice if you join the club through the Internet.

    We’ll be thankful for your kind help and we’re looking forward to your early reply.

    Yours,

    Li Hua

    【分析】本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李华的名义用英语给英国朋友Jack写一封信。

    【详解】这是一篇书信类作文。假如你是李华,你想在班里组织一个英语阅读社团(Club)。你的英国朋友Jack非常喜 欢文学,请你给Jack写一封邮件,要点有:1.征求他的建议;2.请他介绍英文阅读经验;3.邀请他通过网络参加社团活动。我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要自由发挥的地方较多。需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合整个文章,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

    【点睛】本文内容齐全,结构严谨,层次分明,布局合理,语言精练,同时运用高级句子。如I would like to organize an English reading club in my class, which I think will make our spare time colorful.使用了定语从句;It would be nice if you join the club through the Internet.运用了条件状语从句等。

    8Dear John,

    The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week. Knowing that you are interested in English drama, I am writing to invite you to participate in it.

    A variety of activities will be included in the festival, such as singing, crosstalk and so on. You are expected to put on a performance with us. Besides, since it is the first time that we have organized the English Drama Festival, we really hope you can give us some valuable advice.

    Looking forward to your coming.

    Sincerely Yours,

    Li Hua

    【分析】这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。假定你是李华,你所在学校要举办英语戏剧节(The English Drama Festival)。你们想邀请外教John参加。请你给他写一封信。

    【详解】假定你是李华,你所在学校要举办英语戏剧节(The English Drama Festival)。你们想邀请外教John参加。请你给他写一封信,要点如下:1. 介绍活动内容;2. 邀请他表演节目;3. 请他提出活动建议。分析可知,应该以第一人称和第二人称为主,一般将来时和一般现在时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来,这样文章显得更连贯。

    【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述,同时注意谋篇布局的顺序,运用合适的连接词连接全文,同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。Knowing that you are interested in English drama, I am writing to invite you to participate in it.宾语从句的运用;Besides, since it is the first time that we have organized the English Drama Festival, we really hope you can give us some valuable advice.原因状语从句和宾语从句的运用。

    9Dear manager,

    I’m writing to complain about the poor service your hotel provided. After my family checked in on August 5th, we were annoyed to find there was no access to the Internet and no hot water available after 10 p.m. Worse still, the room attendant was rude when we reported these problems to him.

    I know your hotel enjoys a high reputation, but it was disappointing that your hotel didn’t offer high-quality service. I think it’s necessary to improve the room service and get your employees well trained so that it won’t fail other customers.

    Yours,

    Li Hua

    【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封酒店的投诉信。

    【详解】第一步:审题

    体裁:应用文

    时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。

    结构:总分法   

    总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。

    要求:1.表明目的

     2.讲述相关情况

     1)反映存在问题。(problems

     2)提出改进建议。(advice

     第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)

    complain about; check in; be annoyed to do; available; enjoy a high reputation; disappointing; offer; room service; fail

    第三步:连词成句

    1. I’m writing to complain about the poor service your hotel provided.

    2. After my family checked in on August 5th,

    3. we were annoyed to find there was no access to the Internet and no hot water available after 10 p.m.

    4. I know your hotel enjoys a high reputation,

    5. but it was disappointing that your hotel didn’t offer high-quality service.

    6. I think it’s necessary to improve the room service and get your employees well trained so that it won’t fail other customers.

    根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。

    第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)

    1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

    2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

    3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

    4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

    连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。

    第五步:润色修改

    【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如:Worse still, the room attendant was rude when we reported these problems to him.这句话运用了when引导的状语从句;也使用了一些固定词组,如complain about; check in; be annoyed to do等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。

    10Dear Jack,

    Welcome back to China! Learning that you’re anxious because you have to be in quarantine for fortnight, I’m writing to offer you some suggestions.

    Don’t panic as you are required to be isolated temporarily for your safety. Instead, you’re supposed to live positively, like exercising regularly indoors and having a balanced diet. Besides, contact frequently with your family and classmates on line so that you’ll feel their company and relieve your anxiety.

    Looking forward to our reunion soon!

    Yours,

    Li Hua

    【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。

    【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华,你班来自英国的交换生Jack 上周回到中国,现处于隔离期,请给他发封邮件,建议他调整好心情,做好返校准备,内容包括:1.表示关心;2.提出建议;3.期待重逢。

    2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):quarantine (隔离期)panic (恐慌)be supposed to (应该)have a balanced diet (饮食均衡)等。

    3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。

    4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

    【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Learning that you’re anxious because you have to be in quarantine for fortnight, I’m writing to offer you some suggestions.运用了原因状语从句;Besides, contact frequently with your family and classmates on line so that you’ll feel their company and relieve your anxiety.运用了目的状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。

     

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