天津高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你所喜爱的英语杂志 Teens’ Space 创刊五周年在此之际，该杂志向读者征集对杂志的意见或给出建议，请你根据以下内容给杂志主编写一封信。内容：① 说明你是该杂志的忠实读者；② 说明你喜欢该杂志的原因；③ 提出你的建议。

注意：① 词数不少于 100；② 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；③ 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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2．假定你是高中学生李华，你的美国朋友John刚刚升入中国的一所高中学习，想让你给他一些学习建议。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1.与老师交流，征求老师意见；

2.上课积极参与讨论，专心听讲，做好笔记；

3.课后积极完成作业，巩固知识。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear John,

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Yours,

Li Hua

3．假定你是晨光中学高二学生李津，最近感觉压力很大，请给一个你经常关注的心理杂志的编辑写一封信，表达你的烦恼，请求对方给你一些减压的建议。内容应包括：

1. 各方面压力（学业压力，父母施加的压力，交友压力等）

2. 身体状况

3. 心里状况及希望

参考词汇：put pressure on...给……施压；expectation期望

注意：1. 字数不少于100词；2. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Editor,

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Yours,

Li Jin

4．假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:  

⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；

⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；

⑶希望从中有何收获。

注意：

⑴词数不少于100；

⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。

Dear Chris,

I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.

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Thank you for your time.

Yours,

Li Jin

5．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写封回信。

1．参加中文学习班；

2．看中文书刊、电视；

3．学唱中文歌曲；

4．交中国朋友。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

I'm glad to receive your letter in which you asked for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

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Best wishes

Yours,

Li Hua

6．假设你是李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于某国际学校。他熟悉中国文化，特别是戏曲文化。8月5日下午2：00在新落成的某大剧院将上演越剧《梁山伯与祝英台》。请你根据以下提示，用英语给Chris写一封电子邮件，邀请他一起观看演出。

*提出邀请并简述原因；

*提出观剧后活动建议（如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等）

*请求对方回复

注意：

1.请使用规范英语，词数不少于100；

2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：

越剧：Shaoxing Opera 《梁山伯与祝英台》 Butterfly Lovers

大剧院Tianjin Grand Theater

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7．假如你是明华。你收到你的朋友子悠用微信发来的一段信息。

I have something to tell you. I feel very upset recently. I failed in the national English speaking contest. Before the contest, I competed against a girl at school. I won, but it was because I was lucky. Now, I do believe the girl should have gone to the national competition instead. If she had, the school would have won the first prize. Now, I can not focus myself in class. I can not sleep well at night. I am such a failure!

看完后，你决定编辑一段信息发给子悠，包括以下要点：

1. 表示关心；

2. 给予安慰；

3. 正面开导。

注意：1. 开头已经给出；

2. 词数 100 左右

3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Hi，Ziyou. After reading your message, I...

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8．假定你是李津。你校外籍交换生Henry 给你发了一份邮件，想让你为他推荐一种字典，用来学习汉语，请你用英语给他回复。内容包括：

1. 字典名称；

2. 推荐理由；

3. 表达祝愿。

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Henry,

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Yours,

Li Jin

9．假设你是晨光中学高一学生李津。现有“旅行中：文明出行/朋友谐行/地球先行”主题征文活动，你打算就三个话题中的一个写一封倡议书，给国外来津旅行的朋友提出一些倡议。内容包括：

（1）倡议书的主题；

（2）提出此倡议的原因；

（3）具体的建议。

注意：

（1）词数不少于100；

（2）可适当加入相关细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Friends,

I am writing this letter to

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With best wishes,

Li Jin

10．假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。最近收到了你的英国朋友Chris的一封电子邮件，得知他已被剑桥大学（the University of Cambridge）录取。请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：

（1）向Chris表示祝贺；

（2）谈谈你在大学专业（major）选择上的困惑；

（3）向对方征求意见和建议。

注意：

（1）词数不少于100；

（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Chris,

How is everything going?

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Yours,

Li Jin

1．Dear Editor-in-chief,

Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Teens’ Space!

I’m a regular reader of your magazine. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things that happened in the world. Second, Teens’ Space carries articles to guide me in our English learning, which is helpful to me.

As a student, I am looking forward to reading the success stories of famous people in the world, which is of great benefit to me to understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place. Meanwhile, I hope Teens’ Space will become better and better.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给杂志主编写一封信，对英语杂志 Teens’ Space发表意见或给出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

喜欢：like →love/enjoy

主要地：mainly → mostly

对……有帮助：be helpful to →be of help to

希望：hope → wish

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：I’m a regular reader of your magazine. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons.

拓展句：I’m a regular reader of your magazine, which I like very much mainly for the following two reasons.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, Teens’ Space carries articles to guide me in our English learning, which is helpful to me.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】First, it covers both national and international news so that I can learn all important things that happened in the world.（运用了so that引导的目的状语从句）

2．Dear John,

Having learned that you'll be a senior high school student, I am delighted. In your last email you mentioned that you were confused about how to study well in your senior high school. Now, I'd like to share my study tips with you.

First, you'd better communicate with your teachers regularly. In this way, they may offer some great advice on both your study and life. Second, why not involve yourself in each class actively, listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review later? Third, it's a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school, which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.

I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life. Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友John写一封电子邮件，给他一些学习建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：suggestion→tip/ advice

提供：provide→offer

开心的：happy→delighted

有用的：useful→helpful

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Having learned that you'll be a senior high school student, I am delighted. Now, I'd like to share my study tips with you.

拓展句：Since I have learned that you'll be a senior high school student, I am delighted and I'd like to share my study tips with you.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Having learned that you'll be a senior high school student, I am delighted. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] Third, it's a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school, which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)

3．Dear Editor,

As far as we know, your magazine provide some useful tips for students. I have read this psychological magazine since I entered the senior high school. Because of the huge pressure, I hope you can offer me some advice.

When entering senior 2, the stress of study increased quickly. In order to fulfill these tasks which are complex and puzzling, I had to spare no efforts to use every minute. I always stayed up. Hence, I can’t sleep well so that my grades decreased a lot. Feeling stressful, I failed to live up to my parents’ expectations. Not only did I suffer from mental problems, but I often caught colds.

So, I really want to improve my scores and have a healthy body. I sincerely hope you can give me some effective suggestions which can realize my expectation.

Yours,

Li Jin

【分析】本文是一篇应用文，在进入高二之后压力巨大，需要向心理杂志的编辑表达烦恼，并从中获得帮助。

【详解】1.词汇积累

完成：fulfill→accomplish

巨大的：huge→tremendous

复杂的：complex→complicated

提高：improve→strengthen

2.句式拓展

同义句改写

原句：Because of the huge pressure, I hope you can offer me some advice.

拓展句：It is because of the huge pressure that I hope you can offer me some advice.

【点睛】[高分句型1] When entering senior 2, the stress of study increased quickly. (运用了状语从句的省略)

[高分句型2] In order to fulfill these tasks which are complex and puzzling, I had to spare no efforts to use every minute. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)

4．Dear Chris,

  I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.It’s our great pleasure to have you visit our school and give a lecture on western art during the coming summer vacation.

When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic. Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties.

I would appreciate it if you could take my advice, and I hope that I can gain more knowledge through the lecture. Looking forward to your early reply.

Thank you for your time.

Yours,

Li Jin

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris写信，就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出意见。

【详解】1.词汇积累

做演讲：give a lecture→make a speech

提供：provide sb. with sth.→refer sb. sth.

机会：opportunity→chance

采纳建议：take one’s advice→follow one’s advice

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities.

拓展句：Western music，which is served as a bridge ，provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities.

【点睛】【高分句型1】When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）

5．One possible version:

Dear Peter.

I'm glad to receive your letter in which you asked for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions.

First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch Chinese TV programs and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.

Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will help you learn Chinese

Try and write to me in Chinese next time.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友 Peter写封信，就如何才能学好中文给予他建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad →happy

建议：advice →suggestion

学习：learn → study

此外：Besides =Moreover

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.

拓展句：First, the reason why it is important to take a Chinese course is that you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm glad to receive your letter in which you asked for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. (运用了介词+which引导的定语从句)

[高分句型2] Then, it also helps to watch Chinese TV programs and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. (运用了不定式作主语)

6．Dear Chris,

I have good news to tell you. A world famous Shaoxing Opera play,　Butterfly Lovers, will be put on in the newly built Tianjin Grand Theater at 2:00 p.m. on 5th, August.

As far as I know, you are very familiar with Chinese culture, especially Chinese Opera. So you are sure to know well about the play, which is about a touching love story between a young man, Liang Shanbo, and a young girl, Zhu Yingtai. It’s said that it is performed by some famous Shaoxing Opera actresses. As a result, not only can you enjoy the beautiful story but also their attractive voices.

Are you interested in it? If so, I can book tickets for you in advance and let’s go and appreciate it together, will you?

In addition, there is a museum near the theater. Therefore, after the play, we can go there for a visit as well.

Yours,

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　Li Jin

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于某国际学校。他熟悉中国文化，特别是戏曲文化。8月5日下午2：00在新落成的某大剧院将上演越剧《梁山伯与祝英台》。请你根据以下提示，用英语给Chris写一封电子邮件，邀请他一起观看演出。

【详解】1.词汇积累

上演：put on→perform

依我看来：as far as I know→as far as I’m concerned→in my view

令人受感动的：touching→moving→striking

另外，此外：in addition→what’s more→besides

2.句式拓展【下列两种方式任意一种即可】简单句变复合句

原句：So you are sure to know well about the play. It is about a touching love story between a young man, Liang Shanbo, and a young girl, Zhu Yingtai.

拓展句：So you are sure to know well about the play, which is about a touching love story between a young man, Liang Shanbo, and a young girl, Zhu Yingtai.

【点睛】[高分句型1] So you are sure to know well about the play, which is about a touching love story between a young man, Liang Shanbo, and a young girl, Zhu Yingtai.  (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] It’s said that it is performed by some famous Shaoxing Opera actresses.  (句中it是形式主语，that引导的主语从句是真正的主语)

7．Hi, Ziyou.

 After reading your message, I’m sorry you are having such trouble in your life. I understand quite well how uncomfortable you are feeling now because I also had a similar experience. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.

To start with, it’s not your fault-you have nothing to reproach yourself with. Then, be confident in yourself as you won the contest previously, which meant you had the ability to go further. Besides, as the saying goes, failure is the mother of success.You can take the failure as a chance to improve yourself. By doing this you are letting people know how successful you are.

Hopefully, my advice is of benefit to you. I’m looking forward to hearing your good news.

 Yours,

 Ming Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友子悠在微信里提到的问题，发信息给予关心和慰问，同时给出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

比赛：competition→contest

自责：blame yourself→reproach yourself with

自信的：assured→confident

提升：promote→improve

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：You can take the failure as a chance to improve yourself.

拓展句：You can take the failure as a chance to improve yourself, which to some extent will give you much motivation to win next time.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

 I understand quite well how uncomfortable you are feeling now because I also had a similar experience.（运用了how引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2]

Then, be confident in yourself as you won the contest previously, which meant you had the ability to go further.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

8．Dear Henry,

Pleased to know your passion for learning Chinese, I’m writing to recommend Xinhua Dictionary to you. As a native speaker, I believe it is a helpful tool, especially for the beginners.

Firstly, it’s one of the most widely used dictionaries in China, not only for its wide range of vocabulary but also for its precise explanation of each word. Besides, its reasonable price is undoubtedly an appealing factor.

I hope my suggestion helpful and wish you great progress in learning Chinese.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外籍交换生Henry回一份邮件，为他推荐一种字典，用来学习汉语。

【详解】词汇积累

高兴的：pleased →glad

建议：suggestion → advice

此外：besides →moreover

学习：learn → study

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Pleased to know your passion for learning Chinese, I’m writing to recommend Xinhua Dictionary to you.

拓展句：I am very glad to know that you are enthusiastic about learning Chinese, so I am writing to recommend Xinhua Dictionary to you.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Pleased to know your passion for learning Chinese, I’m writing to recommend Xinhua Dictionary to you. (运用了省略结构)

[高分句型2] Firstly, it’s one of the most widely used dictionaries in China, not only for its wide range of vocabulary but also for its precise explanation of each word. (运用了短语not only … but also …连接句子)

9．Dear Friends,

I am writing this letter to appeal to every foreigner to take civilized travel while traveling. A civilized travel can make you travel happily and keep us a beautiful and pleasant environment.

In fact, there are some immoral behaviors in public places. Some foreign friends spit at will wherever they went while some scratched their names on the street walls or other scenic spots.

In my opinion, it’s high time we should take action to help improve the situation. The first thing we need take into consideration is that we must respect and follow local customs. Second, don’t throw rubbish or paper everywhere. Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others. Finally, we travelers should learn to be more responsible for what we did. Every effort matters. Take action right now!

With best wishes,

Li Jin

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就“旅行中：文明出行/朋友谐行/地球先行” 三个话题中的一个写一封倡议书，给国外来津旅行的朋友提出一些倡议。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

呼吁：call on→ appeal to

不礼貌的：impolite→ immoral

考虑：think of→ take into consideration

算数：count→ matter

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：A civilized travel can make you travel happily and keep us a beautiful and pleasant environment.

拓展句：Not only can a civilized travel make you travel happily but also keep us a beautiful and pleasant environment.

【点睛】[高分句型1]. Some foreign friends spit at will wherever they went while some scratched their names on the street walls or other scenic spots.（运用了由wherever和while连接的让步状语从句）

[高分句型2]. The first thing we need take into consideration is that we must respect and follow local customs.（运用了省略that引导的定语从句，先行词是thing和由that引导的表语从句）

[高分句型3]. In my opinion, it’s high time we should take action to help improve the situation. （运用了it’s high time (that)连接的主语从句，it是形式主语）

10．Dear Chris,

How is everything going? I’m glad to receive your letter and know you’ve been admitted to the University of Cambridge. I’m writing to offer my warmest congratulations.

I am now in the process of university application, struggling with which major to choose. I’m a science student in high school, so I am supposed to choose majors related to science and engineering. But the problems are that I’m not sure where my interest lies and which majors have a bright prospect that can ensure me a good job. Do you have any suggestions on the choice of a major?

I would appreciate it if you could share your opinions with me.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Chris写封电子邮件，对他被剑桥大学录取一事表示祝贺，并就你在大学专业上的困惑向他征求意见。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

选择：choose→select

建议：suggestion→advice

观点：opinion→viewpoint

与……有关：(be) related to…=(be) relative to…

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I’m a science student in high school, so I am supposed to choose majors related to science and engineering.

拓展句：I’m a science student in high school, who is supposed to choose majors related to science and engineering.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m glad to receive your letter and know you’ve been admitted to the University of Cambridge. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] But the problems are that I’m not sure where my interest lies and which majors have a bright prospect that can ensure me a good job.  (第一个运用了that引导的表语从句，第二个运用了that引导的定语从句)