重庆高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信

这是一份重庆高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信，共19页。试卷主要包含了参考词汇，假定你是李华，是某国际学校学生等内容，欢迎下载使用。
感谢信/祝贺信
1．假定你是李华，你和你校学生在英国某中学参加了为期一个月的交流，在回国前夕，该校举行了欢送会，你受邀在欢送会上发言。
内容包括：1. 回顾一个月以来的学习和生活；
2. 谈谈你的收获和感想；
3. 表达感谢和祝愿。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．假如你是校报记者李华，你校上周举行了英语演讲大赛，你为其撰写了一篇英语新闻报道。请给外教Ms Andrew 写信，请她帮你修改润色稿件。内容包括：
1．求助事由；2.求助内容：检查语法、修改用词、丰富句型等；3.表达感谢。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3．参考词汇：polish vt.润色
173．假定你是李华，你所在的国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信，以致谢奋战在抗击新冠肺炎一线的医护人员，请你根据下列要点写一封信投稿：
1. 表达谢意; 2. 个人感受; 3. 表达信心。
注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：流行病epidemic    疫情epidemic situation    新型冠状病毒COVID-19
Dear Medical workers,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
4．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Steve在今年2月举行的线上中文演讲比赛中获得第二名，请写一封邮件给他，要点如下：
1.表示祝贺；2.鼓励他继续进步；3.表示愿意提供学习帮助。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Steve,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
5．假定你是李华，是某国际学校学生。你校将进行地震应急演练（ drill），需要设计一张英文版的宣传海报（poster），请写封邮件给你的英国朋友Olivia，请她帮忙设计。内容包括：
(1)请求帮忙的原因；(2)需要的帮助；(3)表示感谢。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．假如你是李华，在美国某中学做交换生，你不慎将手提包落在了学校图书馆里，包中的物品极为重要。请写一篇寻物启事，张贴在校园公告栏处，内容如下：
1. 对手提包的描述（形状、大小、颜色及内含物品）；
2. 丢失时间、地点及联系方式；
3. 对关注者及帮助者表达感谢。
注意：1. 词数100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter得知你寒假在家每天通过网络课程进行学习，对此很感兴趣．请给他写一封邮件介绍相关情况，内容包括：
1.通过网络进行授课的原因；
2.网络课程的授课方式和内容；
3.你对网络课程的感受．
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．假定你是重庆红星中学的李华，你校英语社团将举行征文比赛，致敬援助湖北武汉奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的重庆医护人员。请你用英语写一封感谢信参赛，内容如下：
1.表达你的敬意与谢意；  2.个人感受；   3.表达决心。
注意：（1）词数不少于100；  
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：新冠肺炎Novel Coronavirus pneumonia; 流行病epidemic
Dear medical workers,
I’m Li Hua, a student in Hongxing High School._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9．假定你是李华，你的日本笔友Amanda得知中国的新冠状病毒疫情严重，你也在家学习备战高考，因此
她在二月初写信鼓励你，给你加油打气，并给你寄了一些口罩，请你写一封感谢的回信。内容包括：
1 .感谢她的鼓励和帮助；
2. 分享在家隔离的感受和平时的卫生注意事项
注意：1. 词数100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Amanda,
How is everything going？
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
10．假如你是李华，你刚刚结束赴美国的交流活动，归国后，你发现自己的相机遗忘在接待家庭史密斯夫人家中。请写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.向史密斯夫人一家表示感谢；
2.告知相机遗忘并希望来访时将其带回；
3.表达对他们即将来访的期待。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mrs.smith,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua














1．Dear teachers and friends,
I feel greatly honored to give a speech here on behalf of all the exchange students. The first thing I want to say is that living and studying here make us very fulfilled. During our stay, we have a better understanding of the British life, culture society and so on, which have not only enriched our knowledge but also broadened our horizons. Without your help, we couldn’t have achieved so much. True friendship never ends, so I hope we can keep in touch with each other even after we go back home. And I also sincerely hope that you can come to China for a visit some day.
That's all! Thank you
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇英文演讲稿，代表交流生在欢送会上发言。
【详解】1.词汇积累
代表：on behalf of→present

充实的：fulfilled→rich
真诚地：sincerely→genuinely
返回：go back→return
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I feel greatly honored to give a speech here on behalf of all the exchange students.
拓展句：It's my great honor to speak here on behalf of all the exchange students.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The first thing I want to say is that living and studying here make us very fulfilled.这句话运用了省略关系代词的定语从句。
[高分句型2] During our stay, we have a better understanding of the British life, culture society and so on, which have not only enriched our knowledge but also broadened our horizons.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
2．Dear Ms Andrew,
I'm writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor. As you know, an English speech contest was held last week, and I am asked to write a news report in English about it. However, only when I put the idea into practice did I find that my English is far from satisfaction.
As far as I'm concerned, you have a good command of written English, which impresses me a lot. Would you like to do me a favor to have my draft polished? First of all, please check the grammar to see if it is used correctly. Then, please modify the words that are improper; At last, please enrich the sentence patterns if necessary. I will pay you a visit at your earliest convenience.
I would appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Ms Andrew写封信，请她帮忙修改润色你写的英文新闻报道。
【详解】词汇积累
帮助某人：help sb.→do sb. a favor
比赛：match→contest
掌握：master→have a good command of
优化：modify→polish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Would you like to do me a favor to have my draft polished?
拓展句：Although it is a lot to ask, would you like to do me a favor to have my draft polished?
【点睛】[高分句型1] However, only when I put the idea into practice did I find that my English is far from satisfaction. (运用了部分倒装)
[高分句型2] As far as I'm concerned, you have a good command of written English, which impresses me a lot. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3．One possible version:
Dear Medical workers,
I am Li Hua, a high middle school student. I m writing to express sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in this battle against COVID-19.
In this epidemic, it is you who, despite the lack of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but striving for life. It is also you who have shed new light on(阐明; 解释) the virus with expertise(专业知识) to build up our confidence to defeat it. It is you who deserve all the admiration and love!
I can never express our thankfulness too much for your selfless contribution. It’s widely believed that with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.
Good luck and stay well!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写封感谢信，致谢奋战在抗击新冠肺炎一线的医护人员。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢：thanks→appreciation/gratitude
阐明、解释：explain →shed new light on
可能：possibility→potential
挽救：save= rescue
尽管，虽然：in spite of=despite=regardless of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I can never express our thankfulness too much for your selfless contribution.
拓展句：The contribution you make is so great that I can't fully convey our thankfulness too much.
【点睛】[高分句型1] it is you who, despite the lack of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but striving for life. (运用了 强调句型）
[高分句型2] It’s widely believed that with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery. (运用了主语从句)
4．Dear Steve,
    I have heard that you won the second place in an online Chinese speech contest held in February this year. I am so glad for you. As we know, learning a foreign language is always hard. You need to practice it every single day. By doing this, you can make progress. If you have any difficulty in learning Chinese, I am willing to help you with your study. Besides, I hope that you can come to China and pay a visit to us. I’ll be so happy to see you in China.
                                                                       Sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友Steve写封信，对他在今年2月举行的线上中文演讲比赛中获得第二名表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴：glad→pleased
困难的：hard→difficult
练习：practice→exercise
愿意做某事：be willing to do sth.→would like to do sth.
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：You need to practice it every single day. By doing this, you can make progress.
拓展句：You need to practice it every single day so that you can make progress.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I have heard that you won the second place in an online Chinese speech contest held in February this year. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] If you have any difficulty in learning Chinese, I am willing to help you with your study. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
5．Dear Olivia,
I need to design a poster for an earthquake drill to be held at our school next Friday. I wonder if you would have time to help me with the design.
I know you are good at computer drawing. Would you please design some pictures for me? I’m also having difficulty writing the drill-related words for the poster,so I would be thankful if you could correct my version.
Thank you very much for any help you can provide. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Olivia写封邮件，请她帮忙给学校地震应急演练设计一张英文版的宣传海报。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总-分-总法
要点：
(1)请求帮忙的原因；
(2)需要的帮助；
(3)表示感谢。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
design a poster；help sb. with sth.；be good at；have difficulty (in) doing sth.；look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I need to design a poster for an earthquake drill to be held at our school next Friday.
2. I wonder if you would have time to help me with the design.
3. I know you are good at computer drawing.
4. Would you please design some pictures for me?
5. I’m also having difficulty writing the drill-related words for the poster, so I would be thankful if you could correct my version.
6. Thank you very much for any help you can provide.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：also；and；What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore（供参考）
2.表因果关系：so；Thus, Therefore（供参考）
3.表条件关系：if
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I wonder if you would have time to help me with the design. （使用了由if 引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] I know you are good at computer drawing.（使用了省略that的宾语从句）
[高分句型3] I’m also having difficulty writing the drill-related words for the poster, so I would be thankful if you could correct my version. （使用了由so连接的并列句和if 引导条件状语从句）
6．One possible version
Lost
A light blue handbag with a silver key chain attached was left on a long desk beside the door in the school library on the evening of Mar.11.
The handbag, containing some cash, a piece of document as well as a family photo, is of vital importance to the owner, especially the document. If anyone finds it, please contact Li Hua at 0182-12345678 at any time from 7：00 a.m. to 11：00 p.m. I will be delighted to pick it up at your convenience. In addition, anyone who finds it is guaranteed to be rewarded with $50 the moment he/she returns the handbag.
I would like to express my deepest gratitude and most sincere thanks to your concern and kind deed. I'm looking forward to your call.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生根据提示写一篇寻物启事张贴在校园公告栏。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1. 对手提包的描述（形状、大小、颜色及内含物品）；
2. 丢失时间、地点及联系方式；
3. 对关注者及帮助者表达感谢。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
attached/ contain/ as well as/ of great importance/ contact/ be delighted to do sth./ pick up/ at one’s convenience/ in addition / look forward to/ express
第三步：连词成句
1.A light blue handbag with a silver key chain attached was left on a long desk beside the door in the school library on the evening of Mar.11.
2.The handbag, containing some cash, a piece of document as well as a family photo, is of vital importance to the owner, especially the document.
3.If anyone finds it, please contact Li Hua at 0182-12345678 at any time from 7：00 a.m. to 11：00 p.m.
4.I will be delighted to pick it up at your convenience.
5.In addition, anyone who finds it is guaranteed to be rewarded with $50 the moment he/she returns the handbag.
6.I would like to express my deepest gratitude and most sincere thanks to your concern and kind deed.
7.I'm looking forward to your call.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高分句型，例如：In addition, anyone who finds it is guaranteed to be rewarded with $50 the moment he/she returns the handbag.中who引导定语从句；The handbag, containing some cash, a piece of document as well as a family photo, is of vital importance to the owner, especially the document.中使用了现在分词作定语。
7．Dear Peter，
It's nice to hear from you! I am occupied in taking online courses these days as a result of the outbreak of the covid﹣19 virus． It is a challenge for us students as well as teachers． In our school， teachers are giving online lessons with the help of an app DingDing． It is so convenient that we can attend classes anywhere through a cell phone or a computer． As for me， the online teaching method can not only ensure the safety of teachers and students， but also further arouse the students' interest in learning， which in return will improve the efficiency of learning．I hope everything goes well with your study．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回复询问信，介绍利用网络课程进行学习相关情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.表达感谢
2.相关介绍情况
   1）通过网络进行授课的原因；
   2）网络课程的授课方式和内容；
   3) 你对网络课程的感受．
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
hear from. taking online courses. as a result of . with the help of. not only…but also…. in return.look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. It’s nice to hear from you!
2.I am occupied in taking online courses these days as a result of the outbreak of the covid﹣19 virus.
3.It is so convenient that we can attend classes anywhere through a cell phone or a computer．
4.the online teaching method can not only ensure the safety of teachers and students，but also further arouse the students' interest in learning，which in return will improve the efficiency of learning．
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last.
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including.
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result .
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：As for me，the online teaching method can not only ensure the safety of teachers and students，but also further arouse the students' interest in learning, which in return will improve the efficiency of learning.关系词which引导非限制性定语从句。so...that引导的结果状语从句 It is so convenient that we can attend classes anywhere through a cell phone or a computer．全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8．Dear medical workers,
I’m Li Hua, a student in Hongxing High School. I’d like to express my sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in the battle against Novel Coronavirus pneumonia.
The past few months have witnessed the outbreak of this epidemic. During the outbreak, you were sent to Wuhan, Hubei, working under unusual conditions and unimaginable stress. You devoted yourselves to treating patients, regardless of the potential danger of getting infected. Medical workers are just ordinary people and I believe you all have fears, but to win the battle against the epidemic, parents have left their children and couples have got separated. And it is you who deserve all admiration and love from people across our country. You build up our confidence to defeat it and provide us with a safe environment to study, for which we are really grateful. Words can’t fully convey our thanks for your great contributions. As a student, I am determined to study harder and one day I want to become a medical worker like you.
Thanks again—my angels in white.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封感谢信，致敬援助湖北武汉奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的重庆医护人员。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态需用到一般过去时、现在完成时和一般现在时。
结构：三段式作文：首先自我介绍并说明写信缘由；第二段表达自己的敬意与谢意，描述个人感受及表达像这些医护人员学习的决心；结尾部分再次表示感谢。
要求：1.表达自己的的敬意与谢意；2.描述个人感受；3.表达自己的决心。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
express one’s gratitude to sb for sth、the battle against Novel Coronavirus pneumonia、the outbreak of the epidemic、build up confidence、be grateful for、be determined to do
第三步：连词成句
1. I’d like to express my sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice.
2. You’ve made great sacrifice in the battle against Novel Coronavirus pneumonia.
3. You were sent to Wuhan, Hubei during the outbreak of the epidemic.
4. You build up our confidence to defeat it.
5. We are really grateful for your great contributions.
6. I am determined to study harder .
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：使用长句和复合句进行句式升级，使长短句错落有致，然后连句成篇。
1.将第三步中的一二两句组合成一句：I’d like to express my sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in the battle against Novel Coronavirus pneumonia.
2.给第三步中的第三句添加非谓语动词结构，使句意更丰满：During the outbreak, you were sent to Wuhan, Hubei, working under unusual conditions and unimaginable stress.
3.运用定语从句，将第四、五两句稍作修改组成主从复合句：You build up our confidence to defeat it and provide us with a safe environment to study, for which we are really grateful.
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高级句式，如：The past few months have witnessed the outbreak of this epidemic.这句话运用了拟人的方式，The past few months作句子的主语，使句子显得生动；使用了强调句式And it is you who deserve all admiration and love from people across our country.表达简洁有力。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
9．Dear Amanda,
How is everything going？I am eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your encouragement and face masks.
In order to prevent and control  the Novel Coronavirus, the students in China have to study at home on computers instead of going to school. As a senior three student, I am engaged in preparing my college entrance examination. Although I am worried about the serious epidemic, it is your encouragement that reminds me study is my priority. Besides, I have a balanced diet and always keep my body clean, which guarantees me a healthy body. It is believed that we will beat the Novel Coronavirus soon.
Thanks again for your generous help.
                                                                 Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，表达对朋友的感谢以及告知在家学习的相关情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表达感谢
      2.告知相关情况
      1）介绍学习模式。（introduction to the study model）
      2）自身的感受。（feelings）
      3) 如何保持良好的身体。（how to keep a healthy body）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be eagerly to; heartfelt gratitude; In order to; instead of; be engaged in; remind; priority; a balanced diet; guarantee;
第三步：连词成句
1. I am eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you.
2. In order to prevent and control of the epidemic.
3. The students in China have to study at home on computers instead of going to school.
4. I am engaged in preparing my college entrance examination.
5. Study is my priority.
6. I have a balanced diet 7. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result .
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Besides, I have a balanced diet and always keep my body clean, which guarantees me a healthy body. 这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；文中也使用了强调句，如：it is your encouragement that reminds me study is my priority. 全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
10．Dear Mrs. Smith，
I'd like to express my utmost gratitude for your kindness and hospitality during my visit to America.I'm extremely blessed to have you as my host family. It's your considerate care and warm reception that make my journey a most unforgettable experience.
I hate to mention it, but I have one personal matter to bother you. The moment I opened my suitcase when I arrived home ,I realized my camera had been left behind or misplaced somewhere in the guestroom . It is a black Canon EOS and I could have placed it in the drawer near the bed. All the memorable moments were captured and recorded with that camera, which meant a lot to me. I'm wondering if it is convenient for you to bring it to me on your next visit to China.
I can't wait to meet you and I am sure your stay in China will definitely live up to your expectations!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，写一封信。
【详解】第一步：
审题: 信件
人称：第一、二人称
时态：一般现在时、一般过去时
结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分表达感谢，第二部分告知相机遗忘并希望来访时将其带回，第三部分表达对他们即将来访的期待。
要点：
1. 向史密斯夫人一家表示感谢；
2．告知相机遗忘并希望来访时将其带回；
①离开时相机遗忘；
②相机可能存放的地方；
③ 希望他们下次来中国时将其带回；
3．期待他们的即将到来；
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语  ）
express my utmost gratitude for；kindness；hospitality；host family；unforgettable experience；camera；leave behind；misplace；memorable moment；capture；record； definitely；live up to one’s expectations
第三步：连词成句
1.I'd like to express my utmost gratitude for your kindness and hospitality during my visit to America.
2.It's your considerate care and warm reception that make my journey a most unforgettable experience
3.My camera had been left behind in the guestroom .
4. I could have placed it in the drawer near the bed.
5.All the memorable moments were captured and recorded with that camera.
6. Please bring it to me on your next visit to China.
7.Your stay in China will live up to your expectations!
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇
用强调句型表达下面的句子
Your considerate care and warm reception make my journey a most unforgettable experience.
→It's your considerate care and warm reception that make my journey a most unforgettable experience.
用多种方式表达“我一打开行李箱就意识到我的相机落在客厅了。”
As soon as I opened my suitcase, I realized my camera had been left behind in the guestroom.
On opening my suitcase, I realized my camera had been left behind in the guestroom .
The moment I opened my suitcase, I realized my camera had been left behind in the guestroom .
Hardly had I opened my suitcase when I realized my camera had been left behind in the guestroom .
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。
【点睛】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 express my utmost gratitude for表达我对……的感激之情；kindness好意；hospitality好客；host family寄宿家庭；a most unforgettable experience非常难忘的经历；camera相机；leave behind留下，忘带；misplace放错地方；memorable moment 值得记忆的时刻；capture捕捉；record记录；definitely肯定地；live up to one’s expectations不辜负某人的期望；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如运用强调句型It's your considerate care and warm reception that make my journey a most unforgettable experience；时间状语从句The moment I opened my suitcase …；定语从句 which meant a lot to me；宾语从句I'm wondering if it is convenient for you to bring it to me on our next visit to China.等。