四川高考英语写作分类训练：申请信

这是一份四川高考英语写作分类训练：申请信，共21页。试卷主要包含了表示你希望被录用，假定你是攀枝花中学学生李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
申请信
1．假设你是李华，你校的Daily English要招聘英语播音员三名，分别在星期一、三、五中午时段进行英语播音。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一封自荐信。要点包括：
1.介绍自己；
2.说明英语能力；
3.选择播音时间；
4.表示感激。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头已给出，不计入词数；
3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你得知故宫正在招聘假期义务英文讲解员，请你给相关部门负责人写一封申请信，内容包括：
1．介绍你的基本信息；
2．说明你的优势；
3．表示你希望被录用。
注意：
1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：故宫the Forbidden City
Dear Sir or Madam,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely,
Li Hua
3．假设你是李华，从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家教（tutor）的广告，欢迎中国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
1. 写信的目的；
2. 个人优势；
3. 能做的事。
注意：
1. 词数100词左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
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4．假定你是李华，得知成都 2021 年第 31 届世界大学生夏季运动会（Chengdu 2021FISU World University Games）正在招募英语服务志愿者，请写一封申请信，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.自身优势；
3.希望获准。
注意：1.词数 120 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．2021年第31届世界大学生夏季运动会将于2021年8月16日-27日在成都举行，届时预计将有来自约170个国家和地区的1万余名运动员前来参赛。假设你是李华，获悉组委会正在全国范围内招聘英语志愿者，以满足大赛接待工作的需求，请用英语写一封自荐信。信的内容包括：
1．表明自己的意愿，希望在大运会期间当一名志愿者，参与接待工作；
2．提供至少三条自荐理由（例如：扎实的英语功底）；
3．恳请获准。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：世界大学生运动会 Universiade 或者 International Universities' Games
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’ve read the news on the Internet that the International Universities' Games will be held in Chengdu in August 2021.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely,
Li Hua
6．假如你是李华，在红星中学校报上看到一则面对所有国家征集北京冬奥会志愿者的消息，你喜爱冰雪活动，想去担任志愿者。请根据提示写一封申请信。申请信要求统一用英文书写。内容包括：
1、 你的基本情况；
2、 你的申请理由；
3、 希望或准。
作文的第一段已经写好，请完成剩余部分。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m more than pleased to learn that volunteers are wanted for the Winter Olympic Games, which is to be held in Beijing. I’m writing to apply for the position.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7．假定你是攀枝花中学学生李华。你从校园网上得知,你校本期新来的美国外教Ms. Fiona需要一名学生助手在生活和工作上提供帮助。请你给她写一封电子邮件申请该职位。主要内容如下：
1.写信目的；
2.个人优势；
3.能做的事情；
4.表达期待
注意:1.词数100词左右;
2.开头及结尾均已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:助手— assistant
Dear Ms. Fiona,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
8．假定你是李华， 最近学校各社团招新，你对学校青年志愿者协会（the Young Volunteers Association）的活动感兴趣，请你根据以下内容给青志协负责人 Mrs. Zhou 写一封邮件，申请加入青志协。
内容包括：
1. 对志愿者活动的认识；
2. 介绍自己的性格和特长；
3. 表达期待。
注意：
1. 词数不少于100词；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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9．假设你是李华，阆中将举办国际马拉松赛，届时很多中外选手参加比赛，现招募有英文优势及熟悉本地的志愿者为比赛提供服务，你有意参与。请你用英语给组委会写一封申请信。内容包括：
1.表示感兴趣；   2.个人情况及优势；   3.希望得到回复。
注意：1.词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.马拉松Marathon
Dear Sir or Madam,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
10．假定你是李华，正在英国做交换生，你在当地一家报纸上看到某俱乐部招聘一名中国象棋（chess）老师。请你用英语给负责人Mr Smith写一封自荐信，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.个人优势；
3.希望得到答复。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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1．Dear Sir/Madam,
Knowing that you need three announcers, I’m writing to apply for a position.
I'm Li Hua, a boy from Class 19, Senior Two. I'm outgoing and I can get along well with others. I have a sweet voice, which is one of my strengths.
I'm excellent in English, especially spoken English. I often stand out in English classes when it comes to having conversations. Besides, I have won the first prize in English speech contests for three times till now. Any day is convenient for me. But, if possible, I'd like you to make it on Friday.
I'd appreciate it if you could offer me the chance. I do believe I'm your best choice.
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语写一封自荐信，申请成为学校的英语播音员。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.介绍自己；
2.说明英语能力；
3.选择播音时间；
4.表示感激。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
announcers; apply for; position; outgoing; get along well with; one of; be excellent in; spoken English; stand out; English speech contest; be convenient for; appreciate; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. Knowing that you need three announcers, I’m writing to apply for a position.
2. I'm outgoing and I can get along well with others.
3. I have a sweet voice, which is one of my strengths.
4. I'm excellent in English, especially spoken English.
5. I often stand out in English classes when it comes to having conversations.
6. Besides, I have won the first prize in English speech contests for three times till now.
7. Any day is convenient for me.
8. But, if possible, I'd like you to make it on Friday.
9. I'd appreciate it if you could offer me the chance.
10. I do believe I'm your best choice.
11. Looking forward to hearing from you!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：Besides
2.表转折对比关系：but
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you need three announcers, I’m writing to apply for a position. (运用了that引导宾语从句和现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] I have a sweet voice, which is one of my strengths. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
2．Dear Sir or Madam,
I have learned that English volunteer guides for the Forbidden City are wanted in the winter vacation. I am writing to apply for this position.
I’m a Senior 3 student in Hongxing Middle School, and I believe I am qualified for the position. These years, I have been on several exchange programs in America, so I am confident with my communication skills in English. What’s more, as a fan of Chinese ancient history, I am sure my knowledge will prove helpful when I introduce the Forbidden City to foreign guests.
I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封申请信，申请故宫假期义务英文讲解员的工作。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时，少量一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍你的基本信息；
2. 说明你的优势;
3. 表示你希望被录用。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
apply for; be qualified for; be confident with; communication skills; Chinese ancient history; introduce sth. to sb.
第三步：连词成句
1. I have learned that English volunteer guides for the Forbidden City are wanted in the winter vacation.
2. I’m a Senior 3 student in Hongxing Middle School, and I believe I am qualified for the position.
3. These years, I have been on several exchange programs in America, so I am confident with my communication skills in English.
4. I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity.
5. Thank you for your consideration.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：what’s more, and
2.表因果关系：so
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I have learned that English volunteer guides for the Forbidden City are wanted in the winter vacation. （由that引导的宾语从句作learned的宾语）
[高分句型2]. What’s more, as a fan of Chinese ancient history, I am sure my knowledge will prove helpful when I introduce the Forbidden City to foreign guests. （由when引导的时间状语从句）
3．Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a senior middle school student from China. I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet, employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language. I am interested in it.  I know that you welcome students from China and I'd like to get this job.
For me, Chinese is my native tongue and I'm excellent at it. Besides, I've been learning English for 9 years with a good command of spoken and written English. I'm willing to help foreigners learn Chinese well and introduce Chinese culture to the world as well.
I hope I will be accepted as a member of yours. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封电子邮件，申请成为一个国际中学生家教组织的兼职中文家教。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 写信的目的；
2. 个人优势；
3. 能做的事。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
happen to; advertisement; part-time tutor; be interested in; welcome; native tongue; excellent; a good command of; be willing to; as well; be accepted as; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet, employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language.
2. I am interested in it.
3. I know that you welcome students from China and I'd like to get this job.
4. For me, Chinese is my native tongue and I'm excellent at it.
5. Besides, I've been learning English for 9 years with a good command of spoken and written English.
6. I'm willing to help foreigners learn Chinese well and introduce Chinese culture to the world as well.
7. I hope I will be accepted as a member of yours.
8.Looking forward to your reply!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表并列补充关系：Besides
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet, employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language. (运用了that引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] I know that you welcome students from China and I'd like to get this job. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
4．Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m LiHua, a senior student presently studying in high school. I am keen to do some voluntary work for the Chengdu 2021FISU World University Games. So I am writing to apply to be a volunteer.
In terms of my personality, I am active and outgoing, which can be of great benefit for voluntary work. In addition, I have a good command of English. Most important of all, I’ve worked as a volunteer in a wide range of sports meetings before, so I am familiar with how to perform my duty well. I believe I am qualified /fit for this job.
I would appreciate it if you could give me a chance and I do hope I can be accepted as a member of volunteers.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封申请信，申请成为成都 2021 年第 31 届世界大学生夏季运动会的英语服务志愿者。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.写信目的；
2.自身优势；
3.希望获准。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
senior student; do some voluntary work; the Chengdu 2021FISU World University Games; apply to; in terms of; have a good command of; a wide range of; be qualified /fit for; a member of; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m LiHua, a senior student presently studying in high school.
2. I am keen to do some voluntary work for the Chengdu 2021FISU World University Games.
3. So I am writing to apply to be a volunteer.
4. In terms of my personality, I am active and outgoing, which can be of great benefit for voluntary work.
5. In addition, I have a good command of English.
6. Most important of all, I’ve worked as a volunteer in a wide range of sports meetings before, so I am familiar with how to perform my duty well.
7. I believe I am qualified /fit for this job.
8. I would appreciate it if you could give me a chance and I do hope I can be accepted as a member of volunteers.
9. Looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：In addition
2.表因果关系：So
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] In terms of my personality, I am active and outgoing, which can be of great benefit for voluntary work. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I would appreciate it if you could give me a chance and I do hope I can be accepted as a member of volunteers. (运用了省略了关系词that的宾语从句)
5．Dear Sir or Madam,
I’ve read the news on the Internet that the International Universities' Games will be held in Chengdu in August 2021. My name is Li Hua. I'm writing to apply for a role to be a volunteer and take part in the reception in the International Universities' Games.
I believe that I will do a good job and I can manage to finish my work successfully. Firstly, I'm keen on sport and art. I've got a lot of prizes in some competitions about drawing and singing. I can exchange the ideas with foreign friends. Secondly, I have many friends and all of them think that I'm a warm-hearted and helpful person. I'm going to try my best and help the people who are in trouble with all of my knowledge and my wisdom. Thirdly, I am good at English, especially spoken English, so there will be no difficulty for me to communicate with foreign tourists and athletes.
I'll be the one who is one of the most standing-out volunteers. Hope I will be chosen to be one.
Sincerely,
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇应聘信，应聘大学生夏季运动会的志愿者，参与接待工作。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1．表明自己的意愿，希望在大运会期间当一名志愿者，参与接待工作；
2．提供至少三条自荐理由（例如：扎实的英语功底）；
3．恳请获准。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
Write to（给……写信）；apply for（申请）；take part in （参与）；manage to （设法去做……）；exchange…with…（和……交换……）；try one’s best（尽某人最大的努力）；be good at（擅长）。
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm writing to apply for a role to be a volunteer and take part in the reception in the International Universities' Games.
2. I believe that I will do a good job and I can manage to finish my work successfully.
3. I can exchange the ideas with foreign friends.
4. I am good at English, especially spoken English, so there will be no difficulty for me to communicate with foreign tourists and athletes.
5. Hope I will be chosen to be one.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly, secondly, thirdly;
2.表并列补充关系：Besides, And, Moreover;
3.表转折对比关系：However, though, although, yet;
4.表因果关系：So.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I have many friends and all of them think that I'm a warm-hearted and helpful person. 我有很多朋友，他们都认为我是一个热心肠和乐于助人的人。（宾语从句的运用）；
[高分句型2] I'm going to try my best and help the people who are in trouble with all of my knowledge and my wisdom. 我将尽我最大的努力，用我所有的知识和智慧去帮助那些有困难的人。（定语从句的运用）；
[高分句型3] I am good at English, especially spoken English, so there will be no difficulty for me to communicate with foreign tourists and athletes. 我擅长英语，尤其是口语，所以和外国游客和运动员交流不会有任何困难。（并列句，so表因果关系）。
6．Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m more than pleased to learn that volunteers are wanted for the Winter Olympic Games, which is to be held in Beijing. I’m writing to apply for the position.
I’m Li Hua, presently studying in Hongxing High School and I’m convinced that I’m qualified to be the required volunteer. First of all, I’m outgoing, which makes it possible for me to get along well with others. Besides, I regularly go skiing with friends, equipping me with enough knowledge to be a qualified volunteer. In addition, I normally participate in a variety of beneficial voluntary activities, which makes me more experienced than others. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以李华的名义写一封申请信，申请成为北京冬季奥运的志愿者。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1、 你的基本情况；
2、 你的申请理由；
3、 希望或准。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be convinced that…; get along well with; equip sb. with; a variety of; I’d appreciate it if…; take…into consideration; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1.I’m Li Hua, presently studying in Hongxing High School and I’m convinced that I’m qualified to be the required volunteer.
2.I’m outgoing, which makes it possible for me to get along well with others.
3.I regularly go skiing with friends, equipping me with enough knowledge to be a qualified volunteer.
4.I normally participate in a variety of beneficial voluntary activities, which makes me more experienced than others.
5.I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
6.Looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all
2.表并列补充关系：Besides, In addition
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m Li Hua, presently studying in Hongxing High School and I’m convinced that I’m qualified to be the required volunteer.句中that引导宾语从句。
[高分句型2] First of all, I’m outgoing, which makes it possible for me to get along well with others.句中which引导非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型3] Besides, I regularly go skiing with friends, equipping me with enough knowledge to be a qualified volunteer.句中使用了现在分词作状语。
7．Dear Ms. Fiona,
Having learned that you need a student assistant to help you in your life and work, I’m writing this letter to apply for this job as your assistant.
First of all, my English is so good that I can communicate with you fluently. If you have any difficulty in communicating with others, I can help you in time. Secondly, being familiar with the school and its surroundings, I can show you around the school and the surrounding area to help you get familiar with the school and surrounding environment, which will help you adapt to the life and work here as soon as possible.
I would be very grateful if you would accept my application. I will certainly be an assistant to your satisfaction. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Ms. Fiona写封邮件，申请成为她在生活和工作上的助手。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时为主，少量使用一般将来时。
结构：三段式结构。第一段提出写信背景和写信目的；第二段讲述个人优势和能够给与的帮助；第三段表达期待。
要求：
1. 介绍写信目的；
2. 讲述个人优势和能做的事情
3. 表达期待。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
apply for; so…that; communicate with sb.; have difficulty in doing; in time; be familiar with; show sb. around; adapt to; as soon as possible; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. Having learned that you need a student assistant to help you in your life and work, I’m writing this letter to apply for this job as your assistant.
2. First of all, my English is so good that I can communicate with you fluently.
3. If you have any difficulty in communicating with others, I can help you in time.
4. Secondly, being familiar with the school and its surroundings, I can show you around the school and the surrounding area to help you get familiar with the school and surrounding environment, which will help you adapt to the life and work here as soon as possible.
5.Looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表文章结构顺序：first of all,secondly
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Having learned that you need a student assistant to help you in your life and work, I’m writing this letter to apply for this job as your assistant.(了解到你需要一个学生助理来帮助你的生活和工作，我写这封信申请这个工作作为你的助理。)
本句使用了“having learned…”现在分词结构作为原因状语，同时，“that you need a student assistant to help you in your life and work”为宾语从句。
[高分句型2]
First of all, my English is so good that I can communicate with you fluently.(首先，我的英语很好，可以和你流利地交流。)
本句使用了“so…that”结果状语从句。
[高分句型3]
Secondly, being familiar with the school and its surroundings, I can show you around the school and the surrounding area to help you get familiar with the school and surrounding environment, which will help you adapt to the life and work here as soon as possible. (其次，熟悉学校和周围的环境，我可以带你参观学校和周边地区，帮助你熟悉学校和周围的环境，以便尽快融入这里的生活。)
本句中“being familiar with the school and its surroundings”为现在分词形式作状语，“which will help you adapt to the life and work here as soon as possible”为非限制性定语从句。
8．Dear Mrs. Zhou,
    Learning that the Young Volunteers Association are recruiting new members. I’m interested in it.
    As modern students, we should get actively involved in volunteering activities. Volunteering actions are of tremendous benefits to both those in need and the society.
    I can do everything with great patience. Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I’m outgoing and energetic, which benefits me in communicating with strangers. More importantly, I would like to take the opportunity to serve our society and put my knowledge into good use.
    Everything taken into account, I think I’m a good fit for the position. I would appreciate it if you could consider my application and offer me the opportunity at your convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华， 最近学校各社团招新，你对学校青年志愿者协会（the Young Volunteers Association）的活动感兴趣，请你根据以下内容给青志协负责人 Mrs. Zhou 写一封邮件，申请加入青志协。内容包括：1. 对志愿者活动的认识；2. 介绍自己的性格和特长；3. 表达期待。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：the Young Volunteers Association (青年志愿者协会)；recruit(招募)；get actively involved in(积极参与)；be of tremendous benefits(大有裨益)；with great patience(以极大的耐心)；organize(组织)；energetic(精力充沛的)；communicate with(交流)；importantly(重要的是)；would like to do sth.(想要做某事)；take the opportunity to(借此机会……)；put knowledge into good use(学以致用)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如 Volunteering actions are of tremendous benefits to both those in need and the society.运用“be of+抽象名词”结构；Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I’m outgoing and energetic, which benefits me in communicating with strangers.运用非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
9．Dear Sir Madam,
I’m glad to learn that you need some volunteers for the International Marathon. I’m quite interested in it.
I am a girl of 18. As a high school student, I have a deep interest in running and I have always been looking forward to the race to be held here. Besides, I have a good command of English and I am considered to be outgoing, reliable and helpful by my friends. What's more, I am familiar with the local conditions. I promise I will offer the best service to whoever takes part in the race.
Thanks for considering my application. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语给组委写一封申请信，参加志愿者招募，为比赛提供服务。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
人称：第一人称为主
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分总法
要点：
1.表示感兴趣；   2.个人情况及优势；   3.希望得到回复。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
volunteers；the International Marathon；be interested in；look forward to；have a good command of English；outgoing；reliable；be familiar with；local conditions；take part in；application
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m glad to learn that you need some volunteers for the International Marathon.
2. I’m quite interested in it.
3. As a high school student, I have a deep interest in running and I have always been looking forward to the race to be held here.
4. I have a good command of English and I am considered to be outgoing, reliable and helpful by my friends.
5. I am familiar with the local conditions.
6. I promise I will offer the best service to whoever takes part in the race.
7. I’m looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：Besides；What’s more；and
2.表因果关系：for
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：I’m glad to learn that you need some volunteers for the International Marathon. 使用了由that引导的宾语从句；I promise I will offer the best service to whoever takes part in the race.使用了省略that的宾语从句和由whoever引导的宾语从句等。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
10．Dear Mr. Smith,
I learned from the newspaper that you want a Chinese chess teacher. I’m quite interested in the job.
I’m an exchange student from China. I started to learn chess at the age of seven and I play it very well. Moreover, I worked as a chess instructor in a youth club in China before I came here. So I have some experience in teaching chess. Last but not least, I’m very friendly and I can get on well with others, so I believe I’m fit for the job.
Thanks for your consideration and I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生用英语写一封自荐信，申请在当地某俱乐部做一名中国象棋老师。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：提纲类作文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
要求：包含写信目的；个人优势；希望得到答复。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
quite；exchange student；instructor；experience；get on well with；fit
第三步：连词成句
1. I learned from the newspaper that you want a Chinese chess teacher.  
2. I’m quite interested in the job.
3. I’m an exchange student from China.
4. I started to learn chess at the age of seven and I play it very well.
5. Moreover, I worked as a chess instructor in a youth club in China before I came here.
6. So I have some experience in teaching chess.
7. Last but not least, I’m very friendly and I can get on well with others, so I believe I’m fit for the job.
8. Thanks for your consideration and I’m looking forward to your reply.
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】文章结构合理，思路清晰，使用了恰当的连接词及词组使行文连贯，如“that，moreover，So”，也运用了一些高级词汇和表达，如“quite；exchange student；instructor；experience；get on well with；fit”以及宾语从句“I learned from the newspaper that you want a Chinese chess teacher. ”等，增加了文章的亮点，体现了学生较高的英语学科素养。