浙江高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信

这是一份浙江高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信，共17页。试卷主要包含了假设你是李华，假如你是李明等内容，欢迎下载使用。
感谢信/祝贺信1．假定你是李华，你所在的福州国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信，以致意奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的医护人员，请你根据下列要点写一封信用于投稿。1. 表达谢意； 2. 个人感受； 3. 表达信心。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。参考词汇：疫情epidemic situation  新型冠状病毒 novel corona virusDear Medical workers，I am Li Hua from an international school in Fuzhou.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Good luck and stay well!Yours sincerely,Li Hua2．假定你是李华，在感恩节来临之际，请你给任教期满已回国的外教Peter写一封感谢信。要点如下：1.老师在学习和生活上对你的帮助；2.表达感激之情及祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假定你是李华，英国高中生Peter在中国研学时曾暂住你家。他回国后给你寄来礼物感谢你的招待，并在信中委婉表示对你家三世同堂感到惊讶。请你写一封回信，内容包括：（1）感谢对方赠送的礼物；（2）简要介绍中国人三世同堂的现象。注意：1.词数120左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假设你是李华。在刚结束的中学生英语演讲比赛中获得了第一名。准备比赛期间， 你得到了外教James的指导和帮助。请你根据以下要点提示给外教James写一封邮件。内容 包括：1. 获奖的消息2. 外教的帮助3. 感恩的心情 注意：1. 词数 80 左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假定你是李华，去年是一名交换生去美国学习，得到布朗（Brown）一家的照顾，回国后写一封感谢信给布朗夫妇。主要内容包括：1.感谢生活上的关心，克服了思乡病；2感谢学习上的帮助，口语进步很大；3. 欢迎到中国做客。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假定你是李华，在美国旅游时，不小心把护照遗落在出租车上。司机William发现后在互联网上发布了消息，最后与你取得联系。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信。内容包括：1. 简述事件经过；2. 表达谢意。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假定你是李华，你参加了外教Tommy一个学期的英语口语课，收获很大。在此学期结束之际，请用英语给他写封e-mail，内容包括：1.表达感谢；2.谈谈收获；3.送上祝福。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加内容，使内容充实，行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．杭外社团周活动将在两周后举行，届时每个社团都将组织一场活动，你需要为你所在的社团的活动筹款。请给某个公司或个人写一封120-150字的信件寻求他们的帮助。内容请包括：1.你们的活动计划；2.对于对方的要求；3.对方能够获得的回报；4.对对方的感谢以及你们的期待；5.至少一句将来进行时态或将来完成时态的句子；并用下划线标出。信件的并头和结尾已经给出。文中请勿出现你的真实个人信息。参考词汇：School Club WeekDear Sir or Madam,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours truly, XXX9．假如你是李明。前几天，你在打篮球时伤了脚，目前正在住院。昨天，你的外籍教师Peter前来探望，你非常感动。请用英语写给Peter写一封信表示谢意，并告诉他：1. 非常喜欢他赠送的书籍；2. 张华每天放学后，都来给你补课；3. 两周内就可康复出院。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．假如你是李华，你的朋友外籍访问生Jack在学校的新年晚会(New Year Gala)上演唱了两首歌曲，他的表演很受欢迎，请你用英文给他写一封信表达祝贺。内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.对其演出的评价；3.对其未来的期待。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________                 1．Dear Medical workers，I am Li Hua from an international school in Fuzhou. On behalf of my school, I would like to express sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in the battle against the novel corona virus.In this epidemic situation, it is you who, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but struggling for life. It is also you who have shed new light on the virus with expertise to build up our confidence to defeat it. It is you who deserve all admiration and love!Such few words can't fully convey our thankfulness for your irreplaceable contribution. I believe with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.Good luck and stay well!Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封感谢信：假定你是李华，你所在的福州国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信，以致意奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的医护人员，请你根据下列要点写一封信用于投稿。要点包括：1. 表达谢意； 2. 个人感受； 3. 表达信心。时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； gratitude（感激），devotion（奉献），sacrifice（牺牲），epidemic situation（疫情）， novel corona virus（新冠病毒），shortage（短缺），rescue （抢救），potential（可能性），irreplaceable（不可替代的），contribution（贡献），deserve （值得），desperately（拼命地），recovery（恢复）及infect（感染）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有on behalf of（代表），regardless of（不顾），shed new light on (有新的认识、进一步揭示)，build up（树立）以及struggle for（为……斗争），而且还使用了强调句型“It is also you who have shed new light on the virus with expertise to build up our confidence to defeat it.”及“It is you who deserve all admiration and love!”，宾语从句“I believe with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.”，非谓语动词“In this epidemic situation, it is you who, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but struggling for life.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。2．Dear Peter,Thanksgiving is drawing near! I am writing to express my thanks to you.Without your help, I would not have achieved much in learning English last year. Moreover, you offered so much encouragement while I was in low spirits. Thanks to your help, I became more confident and spent more time reading English books. The efforts have paid off and now English is my favorite subject. Thank you for entering my world and I will always remember what you have done for me.Wish you all the best.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给外教Peter写一封感谢信，感谢他对你在学习和生活上的帮助。【详解】体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主结构：总分总 要求：1. 表明写信目的2.老师在学习和生活上对你的帮助；3. 表达感激之情及祝愿。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）express/ offer sb sth./ in low spirits/ thanks to/ owing to/ confident/ spend time in doing sth./ pay off/ do sb a favor/ around the corner第三步：连词成句1. Thanksgiving is around the corner! 2. I am writing to express my thanks to you.3. Without your help, I would not have achieved so much in learning English last year. 4. Besides, you offered me so much encouragement while I was in low spirits.5. Thanks to your help, I became more confident and spent more time reading English books.6. The efforts have paid off and now English is my favorite. 7. Thank you for entering my world and I will never forget what you have done for me.8. Best wishes for you.第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，例如，Without your help, I would not have achieved much in learning English last year.中使用了虚拟语气；Thank you for entering my world and I will always remember what you have done for me.中what引导宾语从句。3．Dear Peter,I'm so delighted to receive your letter and know you are safe back. Thank you for sending me the book, which is really a feast of western culture. I enjoy reading it very much. Since you seem to be surprised at the fact that in China, three generations—grandparents, parents and children, often live together, it will be my pleasure to explain this phenomenon to you.  As our living conditions improve, it's unnecessary for several generations to live to get her any more. However, many Chinese still tend to live together because they can help and care for each other. Besides, by living together, all family members can develop a strong sense of belonging, as well as strengthen their emotional bonds. Hope to see you in China again. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生回一封感谢信，并介绍中国人三世同堂的现象。【详解】第一步：审题　　　　结构：三段式　　　　时态：一般现在时第二步：列提纲　　　　第一段：问候并表达感谢　　　　第二段：介绍三世同堂　　　　第三段：祝福并期待下次见面第三步：列举重点短语和句型receive your letter；a feast of western culture；be surprised at ；a strong sense of belonging；as well as；strengthen their emotional bonds第四步：连句成篇I'm so delighted to receive your letter and know you are safe back. Thank you for sending me the book, which is really a feast of western culture.Since you seem to be surprised at the fact that in China, three generations—grandparents, parents and children, often live together.As our living conditions improve, it's unnecessary for several generations to live to get her any more. Many Chinese still tend to live together because they can help and care for each other. All family members can develop a strong sense of belonging, as well as strengthen their emotional bonds. 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如however, besides等，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Thank you for sending me the book, which is really a feast of western culture. 此句为非限制性定语从句；However, many Chinese still tend to live together because they can help and care for each other.这句话运用了because引导的状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。4．Dear James,I’m eagerly writing to inform you of my success in the English speech contest.It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to rank first among so many excellent contestants. But without your patient guidance, I couldn’t have made so great an achievement. You helped me polish the draft and improve my pronunciation. You trained me in simulated question and answer sessions (问答环节), which turned out really helpful in the real competition. No words are strong enough to express my heartfelt gratitude to you.Thank you very much and wish you all the best.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达考查书信的写作。要求考生给外教James写信，告诉他自英语演讲比赛中获一等奖的消息，并向他表示感谢。【详解】体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主结构：总分总 内容要求：1. 获奖的消息2. 外教的帮助3. 感恩的心情第二步：列提纲（重点词组）be eager to do sth./ inform sb. of sth./ win the first prize/ thank sb. for sth./ offer sb. sth./ appreciate sb. doing sth./ help sb. do sth./ encourage sb. to do sth.第三步：连词成句I’m eagerly writing to tell you my success in the English speech contest.It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to win the first prize in the contest.But for your patient guidance, I couldn’t have made such a great achievement.You helped me polish the draft and improve my pronunciation.You trained me in simulated question and answer sessions, which turned out really helpful in the real competition.No words are strong enough to express my heartfelt gratitude to you.Thank you very much and wish you all the best.第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）【高分句型1】It was you that helped me to perfect the draft and correct my pronunciation.是你帮助我完善草稿，和纠正发音。句中使用了强调句it was…that…【高分句型2】What I am eager to inform you is that I win the first prize in the English speech contest.我迫切想告诉你的是我在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。本句使用了what引导主语从句，和that引导表语从句。5．Dear Mr. And Mrs. Brown,How are things going with you recently? Many thanks for giving me so much help during my stay in your home in America as an exchange student. Without you, I couldn't have achieved so much. Your warm heart helped me overcome my homesickness. What's more, you spent much time communicating with me every day, which contributed to the progress in my spoken English.It has been a long time since I left America. I miss you very much. If there is a chance, welcome to China to visit. I'm looking forward to your coming. Yours，Li Hua【分析】本篇考查感谢信的写作，要求考生给Brown夫妇写信，对他们的照顾表示感谢，并欢迎他们到中国来。【详解】体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主结构：分总 要求：1.感谢生活上的关心，克服了思乡病；2感谢学习上的帮助，口语进步很大；3. 欢迎到中国做客。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）Thanks for/ get over/ an exchange student/ make progress in/ spend time in doing sth/contribute to/ welcome to第三步：连词成句How are things going with you recently? Thank you for giving me so much help when I stayed in your home in America as an exchange student. Without you, I couldn't have achieved so much. It was your warm heart that helped me overcome my homesickness. What's more, you spent much time communicating with me every day, which contributed to the progress in my spoken English.It has been a long time since I left America. I miss you very much. There being a chance, welcome to China to visit. I'm looking forward to your coming. 第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）【点睛】[高分句型一]It was your warm heart that helped me to overcome my homesickness.是你们的热心帮助我克服了思乡病。句中使用了强调句型it was + 强调部分 + that…。[高分句型二]There being a chance, welcome to China to visit. 有机会的话，欢迎来中国参观。句中there being a chance独立主格结构。6．Dear William,I am writing to express my appreciation for your kindness.Yesterday I left my passport in your taxi because of my carelessness. Luckily, you found it and spread the message on the Internet. Then one of my friends saw it and helped me contact you to get my passport back. Without your timely assistance, I would be in trouble now. If I lose my passport, I will have trouble going on traveling here and going home.Thank you again for your kindness and I do hope to have the opportunity to see you again.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封感谢信。【详解】根据提示信息。假定你是李华，在美国旅游时，不小心把护照遗落在出租车上。司机William发现后在互联网上发布了消息，最后与你取得联系。要求你用英语给他写一封感谢信。1. 首先注意时态以一般过去式为主，其次人称使用第二人称。2. 根据文章的写作要求，可以分为两大部分：第一部分简述事件经过，第二部分表达你的感谢。3. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。高分句型：1. Without your timely assistance, I would be in trouble now. Without your timely assistance (没有你的及时帮助)此处是介词短语作状语。2. If I lose my passport, I will have trouble going on traveling here and going home. if引导的条件状语从句，使用主将从现。3. Thank you again for your kindness and I do hope to have the opportunity to see you again. and连接的两个并列句，hope前的助词do强调了真诚的希望。7．Dear Tommy,How time flies! It has been a term since you taught me English.Recalling the days we spent together, I am deeply impressed with your energy, humor and devotion. I am grateful for your help in my spoken English. As a result, I made much progress and gained great confidence in communicating with foreigners. Last week, I was lucky enough to have served as a volunteer in an International Photography Festival held in my hometown.By the way, it's my sincere hope that you can enjoy yourself in the following days in China.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你参加了外教Tommy一个学期的英语口语课，收获很大。在此学期结束之际，请用英语给他写封e-mail，内容包括：1.表达感谢；2.谈谈收获；3.送上祝福。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：recall(回想起)；be deeply impressed with (留下深刻印象)；humor (幽默)；be grateful for(感激)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般过去时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】【高分句型一】It is your energy, humor and devotion that I am deeply impressed with. 是你的活力、幽默和奉献精神给我留下了深刻的印象。运用强调句。                                                                                                                                          【高分句型二】Last week, I was so lucky that I have served as a volunteer in an International Photography Festival held in my hometown. 上周，我很幸运地成为了家乡举办的国际摄影节的志愿者。运用结果状语从句。8．Dear Sir or Madam,  The School Club Week will be held in two weeks and each club will organize an event. I need to seek investment funds for my club's activities. I’m asking for your generous help. Our schedule is as follows:  We are a painting club, and the activity will be held on April 8th. At nine o 'clock on the morning of the 8th, we will be showing the paintings to the members and by five o 'clock in the afternoon, we shall have visited our studio. I hope you can provide us with some tables, chairs and banners for the exhibition. In return, we will write a thank-you note on the banner and the artwork on display.  We would appreciate it very much if you could help us. We are looking forward to your help.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇考察的作文类型是应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，杭外社团周活动将在两周后举行，届时每个社团都将组织一场活动，你需要为你所在的社团的活动筹款。请给某个公司或个人写一封120-150字的信件寻求他们的帮助。内容请包括：1.你们的活动计划；2.对于对方的要求；3.对方能够获得的回报；4.对对方的感谢以及你们的期待；5.至少一句将来进行时态或将来完成时态的句子；并用下划线标出。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：organize(组织)；funds (资金)；ask for (请求)；schedule (安排)；provide with(提供)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【高分句型一】I’m asking for your generous help because I need to seek investment funds for my club's activities. 我请求您的慷慨帮助，因为我需要为我的俱乐部活动寻求投资资金。运用because引导原因状语从句。【高分句型二】What we need is that you can provide us with some tables, chairs and banners for the exhibition. 我们需要的是你能提供一些桌子，椅子和横幅给我们做展览。运用what引导主语从句。9．Dear Peter，     I'm writing here to express my sincere gratitude to you for coming to see me in hospital yesterday. I really like the books which you have brought to me, and I think they will be very helpful in my English learning. You needn't worry about the lessons during my absence from school, for my classmate Wang Ming said he would come after school every day to help me make up. By the way, the doctor told me this morning that I could recover and go back to school within two weeks. That's really good news for me. Then I will go and show my thanks again.Best wishes to you！Yours,Li Ming【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李明。前几天，你在打篮球时伤了脚，目前正在住院。昨天，你的外籍教师Peter前来探望，你非常感动。请用英语写给Peter写一封信表示谢意，并告诉他：1.非常喜欢他赠送的书籍；2.张华每天放学后，都来给你补课；3.两周内就可康复出院。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：sincere gratitude (诚挚的感谢)；helpful (有帮助的)；worry about (担心)；make up (补课)等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【高分句型一】The reason why I'm writing to you is that I’d like to express my sincere gratitude to you. 我写信给你的原因是我想对你表达我真诚的感谢。运用表语从句。【高分句型二】I will go back to school shortly because the doctor told me this morning I could recover within two weeks. 我很快就要回学校了，因为今天早上医生告诉我，我可以在两周内康复。运用because引导的原因状语从句。10．Dear Jack,I’m glad to learn that you’ve just performed two English songs in New Year Gala. The performance was very popular among students.Here I would like to express my sincere congratulations on your success in the performance. The English song you performed is my favorite, and I appreciate the emotion you put into it. You have a gift for singing. Maybe you should learn more about it.I hope to hear more of your songs in the future.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是祝贺信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，你的朋友外籍访问生Jack在学校的新年晚会(New Year Gala)上演唱了两首歌曲，他的表演很受欢迎，请你用英文给他写一封信表达祝贺。内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.对其演出的评价；3.对其未来的期待。第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）：be glad to（高兴）；New Year Gala（新年晚会）；would like（想要）；sincere congratulations（诚挚的祝贺）；have a gift for（对……有天赋）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时和一般现在时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】[高分句型一]I’m glad to learn that you’ve just performed two English songs in New Year Gala, which was very popular among students. 我很高兴得知你刚刚在新年晚会上表演了两首英文歌曲，表演很受学生欢迎。运用which引导的非限定性定语从句。[高分句型二]Maybe you should learn more about singing because you have a gift for it. 也许你应该多学学唱歌，因为你有唱歌的天赋。运用because引导的原因状语从句。