安徽高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

这是一份安徽高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信，共15页。
邀请信1．假定你是李华，你市将举行中国民族乐器展演，你打算邀请你的美国朋友Peter参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.展演的时间地点；2.展演内容。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假定你是李华,目前在美国某中学作交换生.春节将至,你和其他中国同学将举办一场CHINA NIGHT的活动,向大家介绍中国传统文化.请你发email邀请校长MAX参加，100词左右______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假如你是李华,你校外教Mr. Johnson打算在中国过春节。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1．邀请他与你共度佳节;2．介绍当地传统文化景点;3．表达期待和祝愿。注意:1．词数:100左右;2．可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3．开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Mr. Johnson,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua5．假定你是李华,你校将举行“读书节”,请你写封邮件邀请在你校学习的Tony参加。内容包括:1.目的和时间:2.内容:交换书籍、西方文学讲座、中国诗歌朗诵比赛等。注意:1.词数100左右；信的开头已经写好。2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．假定你是李华，学校英语俱乐部负责人。俱乐部计划举行经典英文电影赏析会( Classical English Film Night)，请你给美籍外教Liz写一封电子邮件邀请她参加。内容包括：1．赏析会时间、地点；2．活动内容介绍；3．邀请Liz并请她推荐电影。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假如你叫李华，你所在学校的英语俱乐部（English club）将举行一个英语晚会，你准备邀请你的外国朋友John一同参加。请根据以下内容要点给John写一封邀请信。要点：1.晚会时间、地点；2.活动内容：英语歌舞表演；英语游戏；3.可以结交新朋友。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear John,How is everything going?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua8．假定你是李华，你校将迎接美国学生代表团。作为学校书法(calligraphy)社团部长，请你写一篇发言稿。内容包括：1.介绍中国书法；2.阐述书法学习的好处；3.邀请美国同学参与。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear friends,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假定你是李华，你校打算成立Fans英语俱乐部，想邀请外教Smith参加，请你给Smith写封邀请函，内容包括：1.成立俱乐部的目的；2.活动时间、地点及安排；3.邀请加入。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．假如你是李华，你们学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化——戏曲进校园”展演活动，你打算邀 请你的美国朋友 Mike 参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。1．时间：7 月 1 日下午 2 点；2．地点：学校操场；3．内容：文化展览、节目表演等。 提示词：戏曲 opera m 表演 performance m 注意：1．词数 100  左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike．____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours．Li Hua 1．Dear Peter,I’m writing to inform you of some good news.My friends and I are going to a display of traditional Chinese music to be held in the city’s museum next weekend and we’d like to invite you to come and join us. Besides feasting our eyes on Erhu, Jinghu, Pipa, Sanxian, Guzheng, Konghou and many other traditional Chinese musical instruments, we can also enjoy wonderful performances by famous Chinese musicians. Moreover, it’s a good chance for you to learn more about Chinese traditional culture.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是邀请信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是邀请信：你市将举行中国民族乐器展演，你打算邀请你的美国朋友Peter参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：展演的时间地点；展演内容。第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如inform you of some good news告知你一些好消息；a display of traditional Chinese music传统的中国音乐展；many other traditional Chinese musical instruments很多其他的传统的中国乐器。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文内容完整，语言规范，鱼片连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。【点睛】[高分句型1]I am pleased to have this opportunity to invite you to the display of traditional Chinese music instruments. 我很高兴有这个机会邀请你参加中国传统乐器的展示。have the opportunity to do sth.有机会做某事。[高分句型2]It promises to be a memorable time for all involved. 对所有相关人员来说，这将是一段难忘的时光。promise to be 有希望成为……2．Dear Henry，I'm very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition，which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week．As is well-known to us all，Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and I'm sure you will be interested in it，so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit．The exhibition is a collection of works created by some famous paper-cutting artists in China．During the activity，I will show you around our school and this is a good chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about Chinese traditional culture．Would you please have a look at the exhibition with me？I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation．I'm looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible．Yours，Li Hua【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。【详解】首先审题，这篇文章要求假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。其次选用正确的人称和时态，用一般将来时、第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【点睛】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的复合句。例如：使用了定语从句I'm very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition，which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week．和宾语从句As is well-known to us all，Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and I'm sure you will be interested in it，so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit．3．Dear Mr. Max,My name is Li Hua. I am a student at your senior high school. Since the Spring Festival is coming soon, my Chinese classmates and I are going to hold an activity called "CHINA NIGHT". What we want to do is to introduce Chinese traditional culture through this activity. I think it will be a perfect communication between those people who have been invited and us. Therefore, I invite you to come to the activity sincerely. We really hope that you can come. As soon as I hear from you, I will get in touch with you in time.Highest regards!Yours,Li Hua【详解】这是一封邀请信。要求你邀请校长MAX参加你和其他中国同学举行的CHINA NIGHT活动。该文属于半开放性作文。除了必要的信息之外，考生在内容上有很大的发挥空间。整体语言应该比较礼貌得体。要点明你写这封信的目的，活动的内容。【范文亮点】所给范文要点齐全，内容明确。清楚地介绍了写信的目的和活动主题。且作者对文章内容进行了适当的扩展，使得内容连贯完整。正确使用了一些高级句式：1. 非谓语动词an activity called "CHINA NIGHT"。2. 定语从句：those people who's been invited and us。3. 名词性从句What we want to do。4．Dear Mr. Johnson,I'm glad to hear that you will celebrate the Spring Festival in China this year.The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China, when people will have a big dinner and set off fireworks to welcome its coming. We'll be honored to have you enjoy our New Year's Eve together. During the festival, you can make a trip to Yangjiabu, which is well worth visiting. Some traditional Chinese artworks like paper－cuttings are displayed there and they are the symbols of our local cultural relics.I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. Best wishes for a happy Spring Festival in China. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【详解】     这是一篇提纲类作文，提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，列出要点，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作，充分发挥自己的想象力，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，这增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。写作时要注意主次分明，详略得当。亮点分析：本文内容完整，结构严谨，句式灵活多变。使用了复句中的宾语从句（I'm glad to hear that you will celebrate the Spring Festival in China this year），定语从句（…，when people will have a big dinner and set off fireworks to welcome its coming.和 you can make a trip to Yangjiabu, which is well worth visiting.）。常用句式（I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.）运用了一些较高级的词汇，如be honored to do，have sb enjoy，best wishes for…，Look forward to…，给文章增添了色彩。5．Dear TonyHow are you doing? Our school will hold the reading Festival on the square from 9: 00 to 11: 00 a. m. next Sunday. It can help broaden our horizons and develop our interest in reading books. I'm writing to invite you to join us.About five hundred students are expected to attend the festival. Many will bring and exchange books with each other. Those fond of literature can attend the lecture on famous western works. After that, they will also have a discussion. Besides, the Chinese poetry reading competition will be held. And there will be extra Chinese opera performances. I sincerely hope you can accept our invitation.Looking forward to your early reply.    Yours,Li Hua【详解】试题分析：本文是一篇提纲式作文。假定你是李华,你校将举行“读书节”,请你写封邮件邀请在你校学习的Tony参加。内容包括:目的和时间；内容:交换书籍、西方文学讲座、中国诗歌朗诵比赛等。写作时我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。并且注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，使文章显得更有档次，特别在选择句式上要赋予变化。【亮点说明】本文是一篇提纲式作文，内容齐全，表达清晰，重点突出，语句过渡自然，文中使用高级词汇和句子。How are you doing?开头用一句问句非常恰当；the Chinese poetry reading competition will be held.句中使用一般将来时态的被动语态；I sincerely hope you can accept our invitation.宾语从句用在句中；另外，nvite you to join us，are expected to attend，After that, Besides,等的运用为文章增色添彩。6．Dear Liz,I'm Li Hua, chairman of the English Club. To arouse students’ interest in learning English, we are going to hold a great activity- Classical English Film Night.The activity will take place in the conference hall of our school library at 7: 00 pm next Friday. The club members will watch a classical English film together, which is to be selected. Then, they are expected to share their feelings and opinions on it. On behalf our club, I sincerely hope you can join us and recommend a film that you think is suitable for our activity. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua.【分析】本文属于应用文，要求写一封邀请信。【详解】根据提示可知，要你邀请美籍外教Liz参加英语俱乐部计划举行的经典英文电影赏析会。以第一人称为主。要点：1. 赏析会时间、地点；2. 活动内容介绍；3. 邀请Liz并请她推荐电影。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态（一般将来时），上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【亮点说明】范文中运用了高级词汇arouse、sincerely、recommend大量的短语expect…to、On behalf of、is suitable for、以及多变句型如：定语从句：The club members will watch a classical English film together which is to be selected.7．Dear John,   How is everything going?I am writing to invite you to attend an English evening party held by our school's English Club.The party will start at 6:30 p.m. this Friday evening in our School Hall.At the party there will be a variety of wonderful activities that you can't miss.Not only will you be able to appreciate brilliant singing and dancing performances,but also you may participate in some interesting English games in person.In addition,this is also a good chance for you to know some new Chinese friends and talk about Chinese culture with them.I bet you will have great fun here! Looking forward to your reply!Yours, Li Hua【分析】 本文是一封邀请信。【详解】邀请信在形式上不如请柬那样正规，具有简短、热情的特点，但也很考究。通常适用于一些平常的事情的邀请，而且邀请人同被邀请人之间很熟悉。一般邀请信格式一般分为：第一， 说明与收信人的相关性与写作意图。第二，写清邀请的时间（年、月、日、钟点）、地点、场合。第三，具体交代情景：包括受邀请的人、邀请朋友干什么、地点以及具体的时间等内容。第四， 表示期待朋友的回复。【点睛】本文开头交代了晚会开始的时间，举办的地点，简明扼要，一目了然。在介邀请时使用了过去分词做后置定语：invite you to attend an English evening party held by our school's English Club。邀请你参加在我们学校举行的英语晚会。在第二段中使用了由that引导 的定语从句… a variety of wonderful activities that you can't miss. 和一个not only…but also引导的部分倒装句：Not only will you be able to appreciate brilliant singing and dancing performances, but also you may participate in some interesting English games in person。再用一个连接词In addition引出了第三句。让文章句子衔接紧凑，条理清晰，最后用一个高级词汇文章同时还做用了一些短语：write to, ,this is also a good chance for you to do sth.，have great fun ，I bet…（我相信…），Look forward to your reply等。使文章充实丰富。总之，本文既有简单句又有复合句，也使用了部分倒装，并列句，非谓语。主动语态和被动语态的交替使用，让文章生动而丰满。而且本文使用了连接词和许多的高级词汇，让整个文章一气呵成，体现了对英语的很强的驾驶能力。8．Dear friends,We’d like to share our culture with you by introducing you to the art of Chinese calligraphy.As you can see, all the Chinese characters hanging here are written with the Four Treasures of the study— writing brush, ink stick, paper and ink slab, which enjoy a long history and a good reputation as well.For Chinese, calligraphy serves the purpose of conveying thoughts and showing the beauty of the lines. Not only is it a practical technique for writing Chinese characters, but also a unique art which can help purify our souls.Afterwards, we’ll break into groups so that you can join us. I promise you can feel the beauty and power of writing. Please enjoy yourselves!【详解】本题考查提纲类作文。假定你是李华，你校将迎接美国学生代表团。作为学校书法(calligraphy)社团部长，请你写一篇发言稿。内容包括：1.介绍中国书法；2.阐述书法学习的好处；3.邀请美国同学参与。其次要确定时态，介绍中国书法以及阐述书法学习的好处是描述一个客观事实，所以用一般现在时。邀请美国同学参与，是发生在将来的事情，所以用一般将来时。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。正确使用写信的格式。【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。例如As you can see, all the Chinese characters hanging here are written with the Four Treasures of the study— writing brush, ink stick, paper and ink slab, which enjoy a long history and a good reputation as well.这里含有一个非限制性定语从句。Not only is it a practical technique for writing Chinese characters, but also a unique art which can help purify our souls.这里含有一个定语从句。9．Dear Smith,I'm Li Hua,a student in Class 1 Grade 3.To arouse our interest in English learning and provide a platform for us to practice English,our grade has decided to set up Fans English Club.We'll gather in the meeting room after school every Friday afternoon,when various activities will be organized and performed,like singing English songs and having debates in English.I'm very honored to invite you to join us representing our grade.I hold the firm belief that your appearance in our club will certainly inspire us all to become more interested in English and therefore work harder at English.Hoping to see you every Friday afternoon.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华，你校打算成立Fans英语俱乐部，想邀请外教Smith参加，请你给Smith写封邀请函【详解】1. 词汇积累提供：offer→ provide激励：motivate→ inspire决定做某事：determine to do sth→ decide to do sth确定地：surely→ certainly2. 句式拓展变化句式原句：I'm very honored to invite you to join us representing our grade.拓展句：It is my honor to invite you to join us representing our grade.【点睛】[高分句型1] I hold the firm belief that your appearance in our club will certainly inspire us all to become more interested in English and therefore work harder at English.（that引导的同位语从句）[高分句型2] We'll gather in the meeting room after school every Friday afternoon,when various activities will be organized and performed,like singing English songs and having debates in English.（when引导的定语从句）10．Dear Mike,I know you are interested in Clunese traditional culture.Now, I have a piece of good news to share with you. There is an activity about Chinese traditional operas at 2:00 p. m.   on July 1.It will be held on the playground in our school and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, a culture show and many wonderful opera performances will be put on. It's a chance for you to learn more about Chinese traditional culture. Come and join us!I think we'll have a great time. I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【详解】试题分析：本次作文要求写一封邀请信。你打算邀请你的美国朋友 Mike 参加学校举行的“弘扬中华传统文化——戏曲进校园”展演活动：1.时间：7 月 1 日下午 2 点；2.地点：学校操场；3.内容：文化展览、节目表演等。注意写作时信中内容要点要全面，层次要清晰，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。要注意书写，认真查验是否有漏写情况等。写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章恰当地运用了被动语态It will be held on the playground in our school和On that day, a culture show and many wonderful opera performances will be put on.