浙江高考英语写作分类训练：推荐信

这是一份浙江高考英语写作分类训练：推荐信，共15页。试卷主要包含了假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，假设你是王平，书面表达等内容，欢迎下载使用。
推荐信1．假如你是李华，目前在英国一所学校交流学习。你的老师请你就中国饮食给同学们做口头交流。内容要点如下:1.中国人对饮食的理解；2.经典中国美食推荐。注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假定你是李华，Wilson High School学生代表团将于5月8号来你校进行文化交流访问活动，请你代表学校用英语给负责人Christina写一封邮件。主要内容包括:1. 表示欢迎；2. 活动内容；3. 征求意见。注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假设你是李华，正在新西兰学习，你计划暑假期间在当地旅行，请写一封e-mail向旅行社询问相关的旅行信息。内容包括：1. 旅行信息(如景点等)；2. 当地特色(如食品等)；3. 注意事项。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假定你是某国际学校的学生李华。你校最近正在举行“最美学生”评选活动,请按下列要求 给组委会写一封信,推荐你身边的一位同学参选。内容主要包括:1.你认为“最美学生”应具有的品质;2.你推荐这位同学的理由。注意: 1.词数 80 左右 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假设你的同学Mike想要提高英语成绩，写信问你如何利用网络工具学习英语。现请你根据以下要点给他回信向他推荐一个学习英语的网站。1. 网站名:沪江英语网。2. 推荐理由:a. 资料丰富，寓教于乐；b. 满足不同人群的不同需求；c. 高质量的博客文章。3. 可适当增加内容以使文章流畅。4. 参考词汇:博客:blog。5. 字数:80左右。Dear Mike,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours truly，Li Ming6．假如你是高中生李华，你的美国笔友Jack热爱中国传统文化，最近打算来中国工作生活一段时间，但是不确定应该去往哪个城市，写信向你咨询。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括:1. 你推荐的城市；2. 推荐的理由(不少于两条)；3. 美好祝愿。注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假设你是王平。上周你刚买了一台电视机，但你发现电视机有问题，请你用英文给商店经理写一封信反馈问题。内容包括：1. 电视机的问题所在；2. 你希望的解决方法及联系方式。注意：1.词数：80词左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信件开头和结束已经给出，不计入总字数。Dear Sir or Madam:I bought a 37-inch TV set for $ 400 in your store on 15th of this month. A sales girl named Mary served me and recommended this brand._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours Sincerely,Wang Ping8．书面表达你的美国笔友Lucy来信告知她寒假期间将来京旅游，打算买几个风筝作为纪念品(souvenir)带回美国。请你根据以下提示给Lucy写回信。1. 表示欢迎；2. 就她购买纪念品的计划说说你的看法；3. 推荐一个你认为最值得参观的古迹，并说明原因。注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Lucy，I learned about your plan from your mail.  ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours，Li Hua9．假设你校学生会要评选年度风云人物，现在请你根据以下要点向你校学生会主席(Mark)写一封推荐信。1. 被推荐人姓名:你班学生李华。2. 推荐理由:a. 学习刻苦成绩优良；b. 尊敬老师，团结同学；c. 上周在上学途中他将一位突发重病的老人送往医院。3. 可适当增加内容以使文章流畅。4. 参考词汇:评选年度风云人物choose the person of the year。5. 字数:80左右。Dear Mark,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours truly,Li Ming10．假如你是李华，你们学校要在11月20日举办英语配音比赛，要求主题是关于友谊，时间限定在4到5分钟。你想参赛，但是不知道该选什么电影。你给笔友Peter写封邮件，请他推荐。注意:1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.参考词汇:配音比赛:dubbing contest；要求:requirement_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________              1．Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China. Knowing you are interested in Chinese food, I’m very glad to tell you something about it.For Chinese, eating is not only a way of surviving but also reveals your attitude towards life. Having a good meal, tasty and healthy, means happiness. And I’d like to recommend some delicious Chinese food to you. The first is hot pot, which originates from Sichuan. When eating hotpot, you can put everything you like in the boiling water in the oven. It's very spicy but delicious. And the next is Zong zi. It is a kind of food made by rice wrapped in bamboo leaves. And I prefer sweet Zongzi.That’s all. Hope this can help you better understand Chinese food.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生介绍一下中国饮食，包括中国人对饮食的理解和介绍一些美食。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 中国人对饮食的理解；      2. 经典中国美食推荐。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）Exchange student; Chinese food ; attitude towards life;  tasty and healthy; recommend; hotpot,; originates from; Zongzi; be wrapped in; bamboo leaves第三步：连词成句1. I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China.2. eating is not only a way of surviving but also reveals your attitude towards life. 3. Having a good meal, tasty and healthy, means happiness. 4. I’d like to recommend some delicious Chinese food to you. 5. The first is hotpot, which originates from Sichuan.6.It's very spicy but delicious.7. It is a kind of food made by rice wrapped in bamboo leaves. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，如：The first is hotpot, which originates from Sichuan.这句话运用了which引导的定语从句；还是用了现在分词作状语，比如Knowing you are interested in Chinese food, I’m very glad to tell you something about it.使用了一些固定词组，如be wrapped in ; be made of; originate from等。全文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。2．Dear Christina,I’m writing on behalf of my school to extend our warmest welcome and keep you informed of the arrangements.The cultural trip will begin with a firsthand exploration of the native diverse culture with an all-day sightseeing adventure of the city museum and an ancient architectural complex. The best part will be your stay with us on campus, enjoying and learning various Chinese arts, making and tasting Chinese food, which will give you access to traditional cultural life.If you have any suggestions, don't hesitate to let us know. Looking forward to seeing you.Yours,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1. 表示欢迎；2. 活动内容；3. 征求意见。第二，人称为第三人称，兼用第一和第二人称。第三，时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，表示欢迎。第二段，活动内容。第三段，征求意见。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: arrangements，on behalf of ，begin with ，extend our warmest welcome， firsthand exploration of the native diverse culture， access to ，ancient architectural complex，Chinese arts，Chinese food，traditional cultural life，hesitate to do sth。第四步：确定较为高级的句子:现在分词作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句The best part will be your stay with us on campus, enjoying and learning various Chinese arts, making and tasting Chinese food, which will give you access to traditional cultural life. if引导的条件状语从句If you have any suggestions, don't hesitate to let us know。第五步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:现在分词作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句The best part will be your stay with us on campus, enjoying and learning various Chinese arts, making and tasting Chinese food, which will give you access to traditional cultural life. If引导的条件状语从句If you have any suggestions, don't hesitate to let us know。高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。3．Dear Sir or Madam,I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student studying in New Zealand. I’m writing to ask for some information about traveling in New Zealand since I plan to spend my summer vacation here.Could you recommend some popular traveling routes to me? As we know, New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details. Besides,  I’m also interested in the local food, which is spoken highly of among us Chinese students. At last, what else should I prepare for the travelling?I’d be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；假设你是李华，正在新西兰学习，你计划暑假期间在当地旅行，请写一封e-mail向旅行社询问相关的旅行信息。内容包括：1. 旅行信息(如景点等)；2. 当地特色(如食品等)；3. 注意事项。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：ask for（询问），plan to（计划），recommend（推荐）；traveling routes（旅游路线），Besides（此外）；be interested in（感兴趣），local food（当地食物）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I’m writing to ask for some information about traveling in New Zealand since I plan to spend my summer vacation here.运用了原因状语从句；Besides, I’m also interested in the local food, which is spoken highly of among us Chinese students.运用了定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。4．Dear Sir or Madam,It is a great idea to hold “the most beautiful student” activity. In my opinion, the candidate should set a good example to others and have the following good qualities such as selflessness, bravery and honesty.My classmate Li Lei is such a person. Not only is Li Lei always ready to help others, but he is hard-working and intelligent as well. Therefore, I strongly recommend Li Lei as “the most beautiful student”.Yours faithfully【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1.你认为“最美学生”应具有的品质;2.你推荐这位同学的理由。第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为两段。第一段，你认为“最美学生”应具有的品质。第二段，你推荐这位同学的理由。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: candidate，qualities， recommend，selflessness, bravery and honesty, hard-working and intelligent ,set a good example to others， not only...... but also, be ready to do sth。第四步：确定较为高级的句子:it作形式主语It is a great idea to hold “the most beautiful student” activity.  not only...... but also引导的并列句Not only is Li Lei always ready to help others, but he is hard-working and intelligent as well。第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:In my opinion，Therefore。第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:it作形式主语It is a great idea to hold “the most beautiful student” activity. not only...... but also引导的并列句Not only is Li Lei always ready to help others, but he is hard-working and intelligent as well。高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。5．Dear Mike，You asked for my opinion on how to use internet tools to study English. I’m writing to recommend Hujiang English website to you.The reasons are as follows. To begin with, the website contains rich materials, which can make you learn and laugh. Besides, it serves various needs of different groups and you can always find the materials you need. You’ll also be impressed by its high-quality blogs. The advantages above are just a start.I do hope you benefit from this website. I’m looking forward to your good news.Yours truly,Li Ming【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：①如何利用网络工具学习英语；②网站名:沪江英语网；③推荐理由: 资料丰富，寓教于乐；④满足不同人群的不同需求；⑤高质量的博客文章。第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：internet tools（网络工具），rich materials（丰富的材料），high-quality blogs（高质量的博客），Hujiang English website（沪江英语网）等。第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。【点睛】本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合书信的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。特殊疑问词+不定式的使用You asked for my opinion on how to use internet tools to study English.非限制性定语从句的使用To begin with, the website contains rich materials, which can make you learn and laugh.6．Dear Jack,I am so pleased to learn that you are to spend some time in China.I recommend you stay in Beijing, the capital and cultural center of China. The city enjoys a high reputation for its abundance of ancient architecture, which represents the traditional local lifestyles. And there are also plenty of museums where precious relics of historical interest are waiting for you to explore. Besides, the exceptional Peking Opera performances there are also what you can’t miss.I wish you a very happy and meaningful time in China!Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】考查应用文中的书信写作。【详解】题目要求假如你是高中生李华，你的美国笔友Jack热爱中国传统文化，最近打算来中国工作生活一段时间，但是不确定应该去往哪个城市，写信向你咨询。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括:1. 你推荐的城市；2. 推荐的理由(不少于两条)；3. 美好祝愿。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。【点睛】这篇明信片短文的关键在于要点的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。I am so pleased to learn that you are to spend some time in China. 宾语从句的运用；The city enjoys a high reputation for its abundance of ancient architecture, which represents the traditional local lifestyles. 定语从句的运用。7．Dear Sir or Madam:I bought a 37-inch TV set for $ 400 in your store on 15th of this month. A sales girl named Mary served me and recommended this brand. She said its quality is good.But only three days after I bought the TV, I began to find something wrong with it. First, the images is not good and sometimes, there is no image at all. Then, only after turning it on for about half an hour do I find the TV set very hot.I want to exchange this one for another or have my money back. Here is the copy of the receipt and you can call me. My phone number is: 571-8642.Yours Sincerely,Wang Ping【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封反馈信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假设你是王平。上周你刚买了一台电视机，但你发现电视机有问题，请你用英文给商店经理写一封信反馈问题。内容包括：电视机的问题所在； 你希望的解决方法及联系方式。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：A sales girl named Mary（一个叫玛丽的销售女孩）；recommended this brand.（推荐这种牌子）；exchange this one for another（把这一个交换成另一个）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时句中使用高级句子。A sales girl named Mary served me and recommended this brand.过去分词作后置定语；But only three days after I bought the TV, I began to find something wrong with it.句中使用after引导的时间状语从句；only after turning it on for about half an hour do I find the TV set very hot.句中使用部分倒装。8．Dear Lucy,I learned about your plan from your mail. Welcome to Beijing! I’m so happy that I can see you soon. You said you’re going to buy several kites as souvenir. I think that’s a good idea. Kites were invented in China. They represent Chinese culture. As for your tour in Beijing, I suggest you pay a visit to the Forbidden City, which used to be the Palace while the emperors ruled China. I believe you will be amazed by the ancient buildings there.I hope you’ll have a good time during your stay in Beijing. Looking forward to seeing you soon!Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【导语】这是一篇应用文。考生的美国笔友Lucy来信告知她寒假期间将来京旅游，打算买几个风筝作为纪念品(souvenir)带回美国。请你根据以下提示给Lucy写回信。【详解】1. 词汇积累代表：represent→ stand for快乐的：pleased→ happy惊讶的： surprised→ amazed建议：advise→ suggest2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Kites were invented in China. They represent Chinese culture. 拓展句：Kites were invented in China，which represent Chinese culture.【点睛】[高分句型1]  As for your tour in Beijing, I suggest you pay a visit to the Forbidden City, which used to be the Palace while the emperors ruled China.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2] I’m so happy that I can see you soon.（so…that引导的结果状语从句）。9．Dear Mark,Learning the Students’ Union will choose the person of the year, I can’t wait to write to recommend Li Hua, a student in our class, to you.The reasons are as follows. To begin with, he studies hard and always gets good results. Besides, he respects teachers and unites students. Most importantly, last week, on his way to school he sent an old man to hospital who fell on the road with a sudden illness. In short, he deserves the title.I do hope Li Hua will be named the person of the year.Yours truly,Li Ming【分析】这篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1. 被推荐人姓名:你班学生李华。2. 推荐理由:a. 学习刻苦成绩优良；b. 尊敬老师，团结同学；c. 上周在上学途中他将一位突发重病的老人送往医院。第二，人称以第三人称为主，第一人称兼用。第三，时态以一般现在时为主，兼有一般过去时和一般将来时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段,被推荐人姓名:你班学生李华。第二段， 推荐理由:a. 学习刻苦成绩优良；b. 尊敬老师，团结同学；c. 上周在上学途中他将一位突发重病的老人送往医院。第三段，表达希望。其中第二段为重点段。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语:recommend， respect,unite,deserve,choose the person of the year，study hard ,gets good results,send an old man to hospital .第四步：确定较为高级的句子:Most importantly, last week, on his way to school he sent an old man to hospital who fell on the road with a sudden illness.I do hope Li Hua will be named the person of the year.第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:To begin with, Besides,Most importantly, In short.第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式如:定语从句Most importantly, last week, on his way to school he sent an old man to hospital who fell on the road with a sudden illness.宾语从句I do hope Li Hua will be named the person of the year.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。10．Dear Peter,How is everything going? I’m writing to you in the hope of seeking for help.Our school will hold an English dubbing contest on November 20th. I’m eager to have a try but have no idea which film is suitable. So I’m wondering if you’d give me some recommendations. According to the requirements, the theme should be about friendship. And each video may last 4 to 5 minutes.I’d appreciate it if you could do me the favor. Looking forward to your reply.YoursLi Hua【分析】学校要在11月20日举办英语配音比赛，要求主题是关于友谊，时间限定在4到5分钟。李华想参赛，但是不知道该选什么电影。要求给笔友Peter写封邮件，请他推荐。【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。第一步：根据提示可知，本文是一封求助信。第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：I’m writing to you in the hope of seeking for help.be eager to, I’m wondering if you’d give me some recommendations. I’d appreciate it if you could do me the favor.第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句which film is suitable.和if you’d give me some recommendations.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。