陕西高考英语写作分类训练：告知信

告知信/通知

1．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友John对中医很感兴趣，打算暑假来你市学习针灸（acupuncture）。请你给他写一封邮件，向他介绍针灸并推荐一位针灸老师，内容包括：

1. 简介针灸；

2. 推荐老师；

3. 表达祝福。

注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear John,

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Yours,

Li Hua

2．假定你是李华。这个星期日你校将组织去动物园游玩。请你就相关事项给在校交流生发一个书面通知。要点包括：

1. 具体时间、地点；

2. 具体活动：团队活动、观鸟、自由活动等等；

3. 游玩时注意安全。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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3．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter偶然看到你校的“红色文化”研学之旅照片，写信向你询问有关情况。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1.研学地点;

2.主要研学活动;

3.你的体会。

注意：

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯;

参考词汇：红色文化red culture   研学study trip

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4．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tony给你发电子邮件，说他最近喜欢打网球，并询问你最喜欢的运动项目。请你根据以下要点，给他回一封电子邮件，介绍你最喜欢的运动，内容包括：

1. 何时开始喜欢此项运动；

2. 现在练习的情况；

3. 给你带来的益处。

提示：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2. 词数不少于70（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。

Dear Tony,

Nice to receive your e-mail.

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Yours,

Li hua

5．假如你在英国留学，当地社区为了使更多的人参加体育运动以增强体质，决定在市体育场举行体育比赛。请你根据以下相关事宜，为社区写一则英文通知。

时间：2021年10月20日。

地点：市体育场。

要求：任何人均可参加；面对竞争对手要友好。

规则：1.当场公布比赛结果；2.无论是否获胜，均有礼品；3.冠军奖金为1000美元。

注意：

1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2.词数100左右。

Notice

Ladies and gentlemen,

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                                                                                                                              Harley Street

                                                                                                                            October 20, 2021

6．假定你是李华，你校拟在本周五举办“名著读书会”。请你写一则留言邀请交流生Lucy参加。内容包括：

1. 活动的时间和地点；

2. 活动内容。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Lucy,

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Yours,

Li Hua

7．新年即将来临，学生会将于星期五晚上8：00—10：00在学校五楼报告厅举办一场英语晚会，现请你以学生会的名义发一份英语书面通知，欢迎全校师生参加，通知包含以下要点：

1. 晚会主题：“迎新春，享受英语”；

2. 节目内容；

3. 参会要求。

注意：1. 80词左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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8．假定你是李华。你的外国笔友Tom对你班开展的课外活动（extracurricular activities）非常感兴趣，希望你介绍这方面的有关情况。请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：

1. 课外活动介绍；

2. 你最喜欢的活动；

3. 喜欢的原因。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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9．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Jim对中国文学很感兴趣，请你写一封邮件给他，分享一下自己对中国古代某一则民间故事、神话传说或智慧故事（Cao Chong Weighs the Elephant，Sima Guang Breaks the Jar，King Yu Tames the Flood...）的阅读心得，并推荐相关的文学故事或作品。

要求：

1．词数100左右。

2．可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯，开头已为你写好，不计入总数。

参考词汇：智慧wisdom；勇气 courage

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

10．为展示春季校园的魅力和风采，你校学生会将举办校园微视频大赛，现向全校学生征集微视频作品。作为学生会主席，请你写一则作品征集通知发布于校英语专栏。要点如下：

1．活动目的；

2．作品要求；

3．截止日期和作品提交方式。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：微视频 micro-video

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1．Dear John,

I’m more than glad to hear you’ll come to China to study acupuncture this summer vacation. As is known to all, acupuncture is a cultural heritage unique to China, which dates back to more than 2,000 years ago. Besides, acupuncture is much greener and simpler compared to Western medicine as it uses no drugs. When it comes to acupuncture teachers, I recommend my uncle Mr Zhang, who is a college teacher and an expert in this field. By the way, you can stay at my home during your stay here if you like.

Wish you a wonderful experience!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给对中医很感兴趣并打算暑假来你市学习针灸的外国朋友John写一封邮件，向他介绍针灸并推荐一位针灸老师，并表达祝福。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad → delighted

追溯到：date back to → date from

此外：besides → what’s more

超过：more than→ over

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：As is known to all, acupuncture is a cultural heritage unique to China, which dates back to more than 2,000 years ago.

拓展句：It is known to all that acupuncture, dating back to more than 2,000 years ago, is a cultural heritage unique to China.

【点睛】【高分句型1】As is known to all, acupuncture is a cultural heritage unique to China, which dates back to more than 2,000 years ago.（运用了as和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】When it comes to acupuncture teachers, I recommend my uncle Mr Zhang, who is a college teacher and an expert in this field.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）

2．                                                                                                           Notice

We are going to the amusement park this Sunday. We will gather at the gate of our school at 8 a.m., and then take a bus to the zoo and arrive at the park at about 9 a.m.

First of all, we will have a series of games and activities to encourage teamwork. Those who perform well will receive rich prizes. At 11 o’clock, we will take boats to the island for bird watching. After lunch, we are free to choose our favourite activities. At four o’clock in the afternoon, we will go back to the school by bus.

Please pay attention to your safety when playing.

【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生给在校交流生发一个书面通知，告知星期日学校将组织去动物园游玩的情况。

【详解】1.词汇积累

打算：be going to do→be about to do

聚集：gather→get together

到达：arrive at→reach

当……时候：when→while

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：First of all, we will have a series of games and activities to encourage teamwork.

拓展句：First of all, we will have a series of games and activities so that teamwork could be encouraged.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Those who perform well will receive rich prizes.（由who引导的定语从句）

【高分句型2】Please pay attention to your safety when playing.（由when引导的时间状语从句的省略结构）

3．Dear Peter,

In your last letter, you wanted to know about the photos of our “Red Culture” study trip. I want to tell you that it was truly an educational and unforgettable experience.

The destination of our “red culture” study tour is Yan’an, the holy land of revolution, where we visited some of the great historical meeting sites and some of the former homes of revolutionaries. In addition, an old Red Army explained historical stories to us. Also, we took pictures with the old Red Army to express our respect for the revolutionary predecessors.

This “red culture” study trip has not only enriched our knowledge of history and culture but also strengthened our awareness of patriotism.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Peter写封回信，告诉他的“红色文化”研学之旅的情况，内容包括研学地点、主要研学活动以及个人体会。

【详解】1.词汇积累

真正地：truly →really

参观，拜访：visit →pay a visit to

此外：in addition →besides

表达：express →convey

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：In addition, an old Red Army explained historical stories to us.

拓展句：In addition, an old Red Army explained historical stories to us, which left a deep impression on me.

【点睛】【高分句型1】The destination of our “red culture” study tour is Yan’an, the holy land of revolution, where we visited some of the great historical meeting sites and some of the former homes of revolutionaries.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】This “red culture” study trip has not only enriched our knowledge of history and culture but also strengthened our awareness of patriotism.（运用了not only…but also…连接两个并列结构）

4．One possible version:

Dear Tony,

Nice to receive your e-mail. I’d like to tell you about my favorite sport, table tennis, which is one of the most popular sports in China.

At the age of six, I began to learn to play tennis from my parents, who are good at it. Since then, I’ve fallen in love with it and spent most of my free time learning to play it. Now I often practice playing table tennis with my friends and coach in my spare time. With time going on, I have learned many practical skills and won the first place in my school.

In my opinion, not only does the sport help me build up my body, train my brain and keep me confident, but it also helps me make a lot of friends. Therefore, I like it best among all the sports.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生回复笔友Tony的来信，介绍自己最喜爱的运用，需说明开始喜欢的时间和目前练习的情况，并谈谈这项运动带来的益处。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

擅长：be good at→do well in, be expert in

喜欢：fall in love with→fall for, be taken with

实用的：practical→useful, utilitarian

在我看来：in my opinion→from my point of view, from my perspective, as far as I am concerned

训练：train→exercise, practice

2. 句式拓展

同义句

原句：With time going on, I have learned many practical skills and won the first place in my school.

拓展句：As time goes on, I have learned many practical skills and won the first place in my school.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I’d like to tell you about my favorite sport, table tennis, which is one of the most popular sports in China.（运用了关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】At the age of six, I began to learn to play tennis from my parents, who are good at it.（运用了关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型3】In my opinion, not only does the sport help me build up my body, train my brain and keep me confident, but it also helps me make a lot of friends.（运用了部分倒装）

5．Notice

Ladies and gentlemen,

As the number of the people who like sports is on the increase, we will hold a sports game, aiming at making people take an active part in sports to build them up. We will hold it in the City Stadium on October 20,2021.

Whoever comes will be welcome. But you must be friendly to your competitors. The result will be announced on the spot. And whether you win or not, you will get a gift. The person who can carry off the champion will get 1,000 dollars as a prize. And we really hope that more and more people pay attention to our health and join us!

That’s all. Thank you!

Harley Street

October 20, 2021

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给社区写一则通知，呼吁更多的人参加体育运动以增强体质，内容同时需要包括体育比赛的地点、要求和比赛规则。

【详解】1.词汇积累

增加：on the increase → increasing

目的在于：aim at → for the purpose of

参加：take part in → join in/attend

友好的：friendly→nice

2.句式拓展

合并句子

原句：Whoever comes will be welcome. But you must be friendly to your competitors.

拓展句：Whoever comes will be welcome as long as you must be friendly to your competitors.

【点睛】【高分句型1】As the number of the people who like sports is on the increase, we will hold a sports game, aiming at making people take an active part in sports to build them up.（运用了who引导定语从句和现在分词结构做状语）

【高分句型2】And whether you win or not, you will get a gift.（运用了whether引导状语从句）

6．Dear Lucy,

I am more than glad to tell you that our school will hold an interesting activity this week. I wonder whether you can join us.

The activity, to be held at 5:00 pm this Friday in our school meeting hall, is called Classic Reading. The students who take part in the activity will make a public speech on the classic that they have read recently. The classics include novels, plays and poems. I do believe that we can benefit a lot from the activity.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你校拟在本周五举办“名著读书会”。请你写一则留言邀请交流生Lucy参加。

【详解】1.词汇积累

参加：take part in→join in

举行：hold→host

高兴的：glad→happy

有趣的：interesting→amazing

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：The activity, to be held at 5:00 pm this Friday in our school meeting hall, is called Classic Reading.

拓展句：The activity, which will be held at 5:00 pm this Friday in our school meeting hall, is called Classic Reading.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I am more than glad to tell you that our school will hold an interesting activity this week. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] I do believe that we can benefit a lot from the activity. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

7．One possible version:

NOTICE

In order to celebrate the coming new year, an English Evening party with a theme of “Welcome new year and Enjoy your English” is going to be held by our Students’ Union from 8 pm to 10 pm on Friday, in the lecture hall on the fifth floor. There will be many activities from the students, such as English short-play performances, English story-telling and English songs. What’s more, some foreign students will be invited to sing Chinese songs for us at the party. All students as well as the faculty and staff are expected to attend it on time and not to litter. At last, you are welcome to our English party and we are sure you will enjoy yourself.

The Students’ Union

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生发布一则关于英语晚会的书面通知，告知晚会主题，分享节目内容，说明参会要求，表达欢迎大家参加。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

为了：in order to→ in an effort to

即将到来的：coming→approaching/ nearing

许多：many→a large number of/plentiful/various

此外：what’s more→in addition/additionally/ moreover/ besides

玩得开心：enjoy oneself→have fun/ have a good time

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：In order to celebrate the coming new year, an English Evening party with a theme of “Welcome new year and Enjoy your English” is going to be held by our Students’ Union from 8 pm to 10 pm on Friday, in the lecture hall on the fifth floor.

拓展句：In order to celebrate the coming new year, an English Evening party whose theme is “Welcome new year and Enjoy your English” is going to be held by our Students’ Union from 8 pm to 10 pm on Friday, in the lecture hall on the fifth floor.

【点睛】【高分句型1】All students as well as the faculty and staff are expected to attend it on time and not to litter.（运用了as well as连接并列主语）

【高分句型2】At last, you are welcome to our English party and we are sure you will enjoy yourself.（运用了宾语从句且省略了引导词that）

8．Dear Tom,

This year, our class has organized a variety of extracurricular activities, such as planting trees, learning to cook and visiting local museums.

My favorite activity is to visit the museums. Such kinds of trips have not only helped me better understand the history and geography textbooks, but also improved my research skills, since we were always asked to get prepared by searching online or finding useful information in the library before the field trips. I really hope that you can go on a field trip with us in the future.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华。你的外国笔友Tom对你班开展的课外活动（extracurricular activities）非常感兴趣，希望你介绍这方面的有关情况。请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：课外活动介绍；你最喜欢的活动；喜欢的原因。

【详解】1.词汇积累

当地的：local→native

为……做准备：get prepared → be ready for

寻找：search→look for

有用的：useful→ be of use

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：This year, our class has organized a variety of extracurricular activities, such as planting trees, learning to cook and visiting local museums.

拓展句：This year, our class has organized a variety of extracurricular activities, which include planting trees, learning to cook and visiting local museums.

【点睛】【高分句型1】My favorite activity is to visit the museums.（运用了动词不定式作表语）

【高分句型2】Such kinds of trips have not only helped me better understand the history and geography textbooks, but also improved my research skills, since we were always asked to get prepared by searching online or finding useful information in the library before the field trips.（运用了since引导原因状语从句）

9．Dear Jim,

How are you doing? I’m glad to know you are interested in Chinese literature. So I’d like to share one of my favourite stories with you.

Cao Chong Weighs the Elephant is a story I like best. It tells how Cao Chong, a smart young boy, used a simple method to find out the weight of the heaviest animal on land. At that time, it was almost a task impossible for grown-ups to do, you know. How fascinating to read it!

Other stories about Cao Chong were written in the well-known novel Three Kingdoms. I strongly recommend you (should) take time to read it. I’m sure you can learn more useful life wisdom from the book.

Wish to hear from you early.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友Jim写封邮件，分享一下自己对中国古代某一则民间故事、神话传说或智慧故事（Cao Chong Weighs the Elephant，Sima Guang Breaks the Jar，King Yu Tames the Flood...）的阅读心得，并推荐相关的文学故事或作品。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad→delighted

任务：task→assignment

极有吸引力的：fascinating→attractive

肯定的：sure→certain

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：At that time, it was almost a task impossible for grown-ups to do, you know.

拓展句：At that time, it was almost a task that was impossible for grown-ups, you know.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m glad to know you are interested in Chinese literature. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略了that)

[高分句型2] Cao Chong Weighs the Elephant is a story I like best. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句，省略了that)

10．参考范文

Notice

Good news for you all! The Students’ Union is going to hold a micro-video contest in order to present the charm and beauty of our campus. Everyone is welcome to take part in the contest and make your contributions.

We are delighted to receive works with various themes of people, life and scenery on campus, which may leave a deep impression on you. Also, the length of the video should be no more than 10 minutes and the images clear. Most importantly, all the works must be original so as to protect each student’s intellectual property.

Please send your works to Students Union@qq.com before next Friday. Your contributions will certainly make the event a huge success. Come on, everybody!

Students’ Union

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一则作品征集通知发布于校英语专栏，向全校学生征集微视频作品。

【详解】1.词汇积累

比赛：contest→competition

高兴的：delighted→happy

各种各样的：various→varieties of

参加：take part in→participate in

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：The Students’ Union is going to hold a micro-video contest in order to present the charm and beauty of our campus.

拓展句：The Students’ Union is going to hold a micro-video contest, the purpose of which is to present the charm and beauty of our campus.

【点睛】[高分句型1] We are delighted to receive works with various themes of people, life and scenery on campus, which may leave a deep impression on you. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Most importantly, all the works must be original so as to protect each student’s intellectual property. (运用了副词作状语，修饰整个句子)