四川高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份四川高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共16页。
建议信1．假定你是李华, 你的英国好友Peter准备参加“元旦汉语诗歌朗诵比赛”, 向你咨询建议。请你根据提示给他回复邮件。内容包括：1. 朗诵选材;2. 朗诵技巧;3. 其他注意事项。注意：1. 词数100左右;；2. 可以运当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。Dear Peter, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua2．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mark发电子邮件告诉你，他最近容易发脾气，严重影响学习和生活，请你用英语给他回复，内容如下：1．表示理解并给予安慰；2．提出建议并说明理由。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mark,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua3．假设你是李华，你的英国网友David来信说他最近因经常感冒而苦恼，请你给他回一封信，包括以下要点：1、表示关心。2、提出防感冒的建议(至少两条)。3、表达祝愿。注意：1、词数100词左右。2、可适当添加细节，使行文连贯。Dear David, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours. Li Hua4．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 最近给你来信，请根据下面信中所提的问题予以回信并提供相关建议。Dear Li Hua,How’s everything? Do you remember last time you asked me to visit your hometown in the future? I was so thrilled at the idea that I signed up for a Chinese course at school.However, it is not as easy as I thought. Chinese uses a writing system that is unfamiliar to English speakers. Chinese doesn’t have an alphabet (字母) like we do. There are thousands of characters. That means have a lot of memorizing to do. And characters are just part of the learning. I suddenly feel at a loss.I was wondering if you could offer me some practical advice about this.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Tom注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假定你是李华，最近有很多关于溺水事件的报道，请你向校英文报投稿呼吁同学们珍爱生命，远离溺水。内容包括：1.陈述现象；2.提出建议；3.发出呼吁。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear fellow students,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua6．假定你叫李华，是西北师范大学附属中学的一名高中生。你发现你校校门口在上学放学高峰期交通堵塞特别严重。请你就此向二十一世纪学生英文报Teens专栏写信，内容包括：1. 校门口的交通现状;2. 改变该现状的建议。注意：1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir/Madam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter刚来中国上高中，他写信告诉你他还不太适应新学校，感到很孤单。请你给他回信，要点如下:1. 表示理解；2. 提出建议。注意: 1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。Dear Peter,I am sorry to know that you are having a hard time now. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua8．假设你是校英语报编辑李华，收到一封来自学生小明的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：进入高二后，由于学习压力增大，逐渐产生了焦虑的情绪。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下:1. 表示理解；2. 提出建议并说明理由；3. 表示祝福。注意：1. 词数 120 左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Xiaoming,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua9．假设你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Sam给你发来邮件说对中国文化很感兴趣，尤其喜欢唐诗(Tang poetry)。请你给他回复一封邮件，分享你对唐诗的了解，提出学习建议并表达祝愿。具体内容包括：1. 唐诗地位及影响；2. 列举著名诗人；3. 欢迎来中国交流文化。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sam,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom最近来中国某中学交换学习，他来信告诉你她不知道如何学好中文，请你给他回一封信，内容包括以下要点：1. 写信的目的；2. 具体建议：多用中文交流，提高口语和听力水平；大量阅读，增加词汇量；写中文日记，学以致用；3. 表达个人期待。注意：词数80词左右；可适当增加细节，使行文流畅。Dear Tom,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________         1．Dear Peter,I am delighted to hear that you are going to participate in the Chinese poetry recitation contest to be held in our school on New Year’s Day. I am writing to offer some advice, which I hope may be of great help to you.Considering that the coming contest is related to New Year, you’d better choose some Chinese poetry with the theme of bidding farewell to the old year and welcoming the new year. When it comes to recitation techniques, you are supposed to speak standard Mandarin and pay attention to using proper pronunciation, stress, intonation and speed. In addition, practice makes perfect. Therefore, you can’t practice too many times in advance. By the way, I have collected some classic poems that feature blessings for the new year and attached them to the mail.If there is any problem, don’t hesitate to contact me. Hope you can take my advice into consideration and look forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国将准备参加“元旦汉语诗歌朗诵比赛”好友Peter写一封邮件给出建议，其内容包括朗诵选材、朗诵技巧和其他注意事项。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：advice→suggestion  期待：hope→expect  帮助：help→assistance  而且：In addition→what's more  2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： In addition, practice makes perfect. 拓展句： In addition, it is known to us all that practice makes perfect. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I am delighted to hear that you are going to participate in the Chinese poetry recitation contest to be held in our school on New Year’s Day. （运用了that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】 I am writing to offer some advice, which I hope may be of great help to you.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）2．Dear Mark,I am sorry to know that you are having such a bad time at the moment. Actually, it is common for people to have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong. So you don’t have to worry so much. Here I’d like to give you some useful tips.First, you can talk to someone you trust about how you feel. It is a good way to let your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play games with your friends, for physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of bad feelings. Third, keep optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Mark发电子邮件就他最近的情绪问题表示理解、给予安慰并提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：tips →suggestions摆脱：get rid of→ remove提高：lift →improve继续：carry on→ go on2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：It is a good way to let your anger out without hurting others or yourself.拓展句：It is a good way that you can let your anger out without hurting others or yourself.【点睛】【高分句型1】Actually, it is common for people to have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong. （运用了it做形式主语以及关系副词when引导的定语从句）【高分句型2】Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.（运用了动名词短语做宾语）3．Dear David,I am so sorry to learn from your letter that your study suffers due to your constant colds. And I’m quite concerned about that and hope you are feeling better now. I have some suggestions for you to prevent colds. First of all, have a balanced diet, which is vital for your body to function well. The better your body functions, the less likely you are to catch a cold. Besides, keep a positive mind and take regular exercise to guarantee a strong body. And you know a strong body really matters even when exposed to viruses. I hope my suggestions are helpful to you. Wish you a speedy recovery. Yours, Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国网友David回信，对他经常感冒的苦恼表达关心，并提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累担心：be concerned about→ worried about首先：First of all→ To begin with对……是至关重要的：be vital for→ be essential to另外：Besides → Additionally2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I have some suggestions for you to prevent colds.拓展句：I have some suggestions that can prevent you from colds.【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, have a balanced diet, which is vital for your body to function well.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】 And you know a strong body really matters even when exposed to viruses.(运用了时间状语从句的省略)4．Dear Tom,     I am glad to know that you signed up for a Chinese course. As for how to learn Chinese well, I’d like to give you some suggestions.     First, prounciation and listening. You can listen to more news programs and watch Chinese movies. Second, keeping a Chinese diary is good for your Chinese writing. You will learn to think in Chinese instead of translating everything into English. Third, try to speak in Chinese in your daily life, which is vital to your Chinese study.     I hope the suggestions will be helpful for you. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【导语】这是一封建议信。要求考生给英国笔友Tom 写一封信，就如何学习汉语向其提供一些建议。【详解】1. 词汇积累了解：know → learn课程：course → lesson建议：suggestion → advice重要：vital → important2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： As for how to learn Chinese well, I’d like to give you some suggestions..拓展句： As for how to learn Chinese well, I’d like to give you some suggestions which I hope will be helpful. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, keeping a Chinese diary is good for your Chinese writing. (运用了动名词短语作主语)【高分句型2】 Third, try to speak in Chinese in your daily life, which is vital to your Chinese study. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)5．Dear fellow students,Recently, there are many reports about drowning. It happened not only to children but also to adults, which is really heartbreaking. So I feel we all should learn to protect ourselves when in or around water.Here is my advice: First of all, don’t swim in strange rivers or lakes. Besides, we shouldn’t go swimming alone. We must find a companion. At the same time,we can’t swim without parents’ permission. What’s more, if we can’t swim,we mustn’t get into the water to save a person. Cry out for help immediately.Life is precious. We must value our lives and keep away from drowning.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向校英文报投稿，陈述最近有很多关于溺水事件报道的现象，向同学们提出建议，呼吁同学们珍爱生命，远离溺水。【详解】1.词汇积累学习：learn→study建议：advice→suggestion此外：besides→in addition立刻：immediately→right away2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：First of all, don’t swim in strange rivers or lakes. 拓展句：First of all, don’t swim in rivers or lakes which are strange.【点睛】【高分句型1】 It happened not only to children but also to adults, which is really heartbreaking.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】What’s more, if we can’t swim,we mustn’t get into the water to save a person.（运用了if引导条件状语从句）6．Dear Sir/Madam,   I’m Li Hua, a student from Northwest Normal University High School. I’m writing to tell you the traffic problem with the neighborhood of our school gate.   A strange phenomenon always occurs near our school gate during the rush hour that a mass of vehicles is congested on the road, causing much trouble for students and teachers to enter the school. As far as I am concerned, measures taken, the traffic congestion should be relieved. First, traffic signal time needs increasing, and in that case, more pedestrians and vehicles are allowed to pass respectively. What’s more, during the rush hour, set the limitation of car numbers, for which the number of cars is reduced.Hopefully, traffic conditions could be improved, which brings much convenience for students and teachers.                                                                                                                                                             Yours，                                                                                                                                                           LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生就校门口在上学放学高峰期交通堵塞情况，向英语报刊Teens专栏写一封信，提出改变现状的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累：发生：occur→happen/take place大量的：a mass of→vast/a good deal of/plenty of 措施：measures→actions/steps减少：reduce→decrease2.句式拓展：简单句变成复合句原句： a mass of vehicles is congested on the road, causing much trouble for students and teachers to enter the school. 拓展句： a mass of vehicles is congested on the road,which causes much trouble for students and teachers to enter the school. 【点睛】【高分句型1】A strange phenomenon always occurs near our school gate during the rush hour that a mass of vehicle is congested on the road, causing much trouble for students and teachers to enter the school. (运用了that引导同位语从句，以及现在分词作结果状语)【高分句型2】Also, during the rush hour, set the limitation of car numbers, for which the number of cars is surely reduced. (运用了介词+ which引导非限制性定语从句)7．Dear Peter,I am sorry to know that you are having a hard time now. I completely relate to your situation as it takes time for everyone to fit into a new environment. Here are some of my hints.To begin with, take a positive attitude to your senior life. If you are stuck, don’t be upset. Your teachers are always ready to give you a hand. Furthermore, it is a great idea to join some sports clubs and get actively involved in various after-school activities, where you can enrich your school life and make more friends.Hopefully you will get used to your school life soon.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Peter写封信，对他还不能适应新学校表示理解，并提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累困难的：hard→difficult完全：completely→totally另外：furthermore→moreover首先：to begin with→in the first place2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Hopefully you will get used to your school life soon.拓展句：I hope you will get used to your school life soon.【点睛】[高分句型1] I completely relate to your situation as it takes time for everyone to fit into a new environment. (运用了as引导的原因状语从句)[高分句型2] Furthermore, it is a great idea to join some sports clubs and get actively involved in various after-school activities, where you can enrich your school life and make more friends. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)8．Dear Xiaoming,I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment, but there is no need to worry as nobody can avoid such troubles in life and what matters most is how we deal with them. My suggestions are as follows.First, you need to reflect on your study to identify the problems. Second, it’s better to turn to your teachers who would help you analyze the problems rationally and give you some professional guidance. Last but not the least, stay in a good state. Talk to the ones you trust to relieve your stress and always believe that all the setbacks are temporary. Only through self-belief, hard work and perseverance can we achieve our final goal.I hope my suggestions will help you out. Wish you a happy life and a good performance in your study.【导语】本篇书面表达为应用文。要求考生给小明同学的求助信写一封回信。 【详解】1.词汇积累建议：suggestions→proposal/recommendation/offer/advise处理：deal with→dispose/manage/ handle指导：guidance→direction实现： achieve→realize/come true2.句式拓展原句变同义句原句：Talk to the ones you trust to relieve your stress and always believe that all the setbacks are temporary.拓展句：Talk to the ones who you trust and you will  relieve your stress and find out that all the setbacks are temporary.【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment,but there is no need to worry as nobody can avoid such troubles in life and what matters most is how we deal with them. （运用了there be句型和what及how引导的名词性从句）【高分句型2】Only through self-belief, hard work and perseverance can we achieve our final goal. （运用了only引导的部分倒装句）9．Dear Sam,I’m very glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese culture, especially Tang poetry. As you know, Tang poetry is a very important literary form which enjoys great popularity in China. They represent the traditional Chinese culture and are popular all over the world.As the golden age of poems, the Tang Dynasty produced many outstanding poets, among whom Li Bai, Du Fu, and Bai Juyi were the most well-known in history. When it comes to poems, you’d better grasp the meaning firstly, then try to recite the whole poem. If you choose the right method and work hard, your learning ability can be improved. Welcome to China and I’m looking forward to your view about the Tang poems.Yours, Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给喜欢唐诗的新西兰笔友写一封信介绍唐诗和学习建议。【详解】1.词汇积累流行： popularity→ prevalence/ in vogue代表：represent→be on behalf of杰出的：outstanding→splendid/ excellent掌握： grasp→ master2.句式升级从句变祈使句原句：If you choose the right method and work hard, your learning ability can be improved.拓展句： Choose the right method and work hard, and you will improve your learning ability.【点睛】【高分句型1】As you know, Tang poetry is a very important literary form which enjoys great popularity in China. （运用了which引导的定语从句）【高分句型2】When it comes to poems, you’d better grasp the meaning firstly, then try to recite the whole poem. （运用了固定句式When it comes to...）10．Dear Tom,Learning that you have no idea how to study Chinese well in China as an exchange student here,I am writing to share my suggestions with you.It is important for you to talk with your classmates in Chinese as much as possible. It is an effective way to improve your oral Chinese and listening ability. Besides, spending much time reading Chinese newspapers and magazines will be helpful, which can enlarge your vocabulary. In addition, I strongly recommend you keep an Chinese diary every day. Only by putting what you have learned into use will your Chinese be improved. Hopefully, you can find my advice useful.I’m looking forward to your reply.                                                                                                                                    Yours                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Tom写信，告知他如何学好中文。内容包括：写信的目的；具体建议；个人期待。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：suggestion→ advice此外：besides → what’s more有益处的：helpful→ beneficial增加：enlarge→ increase2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Learning that you have no idea how to study Chinese well in China as an exchange student here, I am writing to share my suggestions with you.拓展句：Because I learn that you have no idea how to study Chinese well in China as an exchange student here, I am writing to share my suggestions with you.【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, spending much time reading Chinese newspapers and magazines will be helpful, which can enlarge your vocabulary. （运用了动名词作主语以及which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Only by putting what you have learned into use will your Chinese improved.（运用了only+介词短语引导的倒装句）